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Anthem
emmeline33211 Reviews | 6.79/10 (211 Ratings, 0 Likes, 206 Favorites )
After rescuing Severus from what should have been a fatal snakebite, Hermione throws herself headlong into managing his care and finishing her schooling. As she discovers, however, helping another person heal is infinitely easier than healing herself. As the Golden Trio—and Severus—move toward the one-year mark of post-Voldemort life, it becomes painfully obvious that there is no way to go back to normal. New feelings are confusing to all involved, and lives careen from carefully planned paths.
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I came to the Potterverse late, devouring all 7 books over the summer when DH came out. I came to fanfic even later, and have been gluttonously consuming HG/SS love stories since December. I really enjoy the slow-building, tension-ridden love stories that the pairing seems to inspire. The quality of writing I come across in the fanfic world never ceases to astound me, and I am well and truly addicted!
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I found this chapter to be incredibly satistfying. I loved how you put the screws to Rita.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, it was very satisfying to write! I am glad to know you found it so, as well! That beetle's had it coming for years. Thanks so much! You must be a wicked fast reader. I've really enjoyed all your reviews. It's been wonderful to meet a new reader!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
My brain is wired a bit differently then most, so I naturally do a form of speed reading. My thoughts often 'race' which I managed to adapt into faster reading and talking. But it's a pain when I write because my mind moves faster than I type, so it does have drawlbacks lol.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, it was very satisfying to write! I am glad to know you found it so, as well! That beetle's had it coming for years. Thanks so much! You must be a wicked fast reader. I've really enjoyed all your reviews. It's been wonderful to meet a new reader!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
My brain is wired a bit differently then most, so I naturally do a form of speed reading. My thoughts often 'race' which I managed to adapt into faster reading and talking. But it's a pain when I write because my mind moves faster than I type, so it does have drawlbacks lol.
I suspect there is some political pull being used to get Severus evicted from the hospital. Very tense chapter.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Again with the intuition! :) There is more to be said on the topic of his release, as you have correctly picked out. Thanks for reading and leaving such thoughtful reviews! I've enjoyed all of them.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Again with the intuition! :) There is more to be said on the topic of his release, as you have correctly picked out. Thanks for reading and leaving such thoughtful reviews! I've enjoyed all of them.
It's good to know that his magic is Ok even if he can't use it. I kind of wondered when he couldn't get his water, but I was afraid to ask.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
You are the first person to have picked up on him not being able to get his water! Well, the first person to mention it, anyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing! You have made a sleepless, sniffly woman very happy.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Don't feel bad, I was having a sleepless night too. I finally crashed 6 am. I hope you (and I for that matter have a better night tonight).
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
LOL, good luck! Wish Muggles had an analog to Dreamless Sleep... I managed to crash around 5 am, then hubby woke me up as he got ready for work. Hope you get some well-deserved rest tonight! Thanks for turning to Anthem in your time of insomnia! :)
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
You are the first person to have picked up on him not being able to get his water! Well, the first person to mention it, anyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing! You have made a sleepless, sniffly woman very happy.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Don't feel bad, I was having a sleepless night too. I finally crashed 6 am. I hope you (and I for that matter have a better night tonight).
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
LOL, good luck! Wish Muggles had an analog to Dreamless Sleep... I managed to crash around 5 am, then hubby woke me up as he got ready for work. Hope you get some well-deserved rest tonight! Thanks for turning to Anthem in your time of insomnia! :)
I had a feeling that Healer was trouble. Nice touch with Hermione finally crying. She needs to let some emotion out before she bursts.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Yes, she is trouble! But Hermione is on the trail...Hermione has a lot of emotion to let out, you are very right. Thank you for reading and taking the time to respond!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Yes, she is trouble! But Hermione is on the trail...Hermione has a lot of emotion to let out, you are very right. Thank you for reading and taking the time to respond!
Well I hope Calliope meant well, I have a feeling she's trouble though.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
That's some fine intuition you have there! ;) That's all I'll say for now...Thanks so much for continuing to read and review!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
That's some fine intuition you have there! ;) That's all I'll say for now...Thanks so much for continuing to read and review!
I suspect all four of them are a hairs breath of having a nervous breakdown. The last year was positively awful. War is not fun and I wouldn't be surprised if they had PTSD.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
You are definitely on the right track. They went through unspeakable trials on the Horcrux hunt, and they all lost so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing! It's super of you to take the time!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
You are definitely on the right track. They went through unspeakable trials on the Horcrux hunt, and they all lost so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing! It's super of you to take the time!
Hermione does seem to have a talent for stretching herself thin. I love how you made her so caring for Severus.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Yes, she does have a talent for that! I am glad you appreciate the way she cares for Severus. Thanks ever so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Yes, she does have a talent for that! I am glad you appreciate the way she cares for Severus. Thanks ever so much for reading and reviewing!
Nice description of how death may be percieved. Thank Merlin for Hermione though!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks for reading, Sinbad! I am so glad you liked the description of death. It's how I imagine it might be... I appreciate your review!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks for reading, Sinbad! I am so glad you liked the description of death. It's how I imagine it might be... I appreciate your review!
I think the Healer has the right idea about those letters, sending them to the Auror's
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
It seemed to be the most responsible course of action, given the sentiments they expressed. Thank you, thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot that you took the time.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
It seemed to be the most responsible course of action, given the sentiments they expressed. Thank you, thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot that you took the time.
I suspect the only thing wrong with Hermione is she is stressed out to the max and it's effecting her thinking and emotions.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, yes. She is definitely stressed way out, and she's not thinking very clearly because of that. Thank you for sticking with the story and leaving a review!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, yes. She is definitely stressed way out, and she's not thinking very clearly because of that. Thank you for sticking with the story and leaving a review!
I absolutely LOVE that you have written Kinglsey as the take charge, do-whats-right sort of minister that a member of the Order should be. One of the things I hated the most about the HP series was the corruption and lack of interest in ending it. Could never understand how this entire magical world was so complacent about those that controlled their law system. I'm glad, actually, that Rita will only get a fine ... but if they can determine how long she's been able to change and make the fine retroactive! She deserves that much.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I couldn't understand the complacence (complacency?) regarding the government, either. Yes, she will have a retroactive fine. Tiffington is going to question her under Veritaserum so they can exact the appropriate fine. You're a doll to keep reading. I appreciate your review enormously!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I couldn't understand the complacence (complacency?) regarding the government, either. Yes, she will have a retroactive fine. Tiffington is going to question her under Veritaserum so they can exact the appropriate fine. You're a doll to keep reading. I appreciate your review enormously!
Gah! Severus' employment records – what a treasure trove of information! Birth date, birth place, the Spinner's End residence, possible disciplinary actions he recieved while working (surely he was written up at least once for the harsh teaching style he employed on the youngins?), wages... Wonder if he ever got a raise? Maybe AD thought it might be nice to bump him up a pay grade once Harry started school at Hogwarts?
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Wow, thanks so much for the review and the rating! I imagine there's plenty in his employment records he'd like to keep private! :) You make a good point about him deserving a pay raise when Harry started school. Perhaps AD threw in a hefty amount of Ogdens?
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Wow, thanks so much for the review and the rating! I imagine there's plenty in his employment records he'd like to keep private! :) You make a good point about him deserving a pay raise when Harry started school. Perhaps AD threw in a hefty amount of Ogdens?
Oh, brava! Revenge is so very sweet.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
And lots of fun to write! Thanks so for the review and the rating--and congrats!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
And lots of fun to write! Thanks so for the review and the rating--and congrats!
can't wait till the next chapter!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, thanks,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! You're great to read and leave such a nice review and rating--it's very appreciated!
Response from keske (Reviewer)
I was too into the story to leave anything more than a can't wait! lol!>.< I do that sometimes, get too into a tale ^.^
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Wait. The Twins read fanfics? i'm amazed! I didn't know they could read! ~smirks at the pot-shot taken then runnnnnnns away!~
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, thanks,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! You're great to read and leave such a nice review and rating--it's very appreciated!
Response from keske (Reviewer)
I was too into the story to leave anything more than a can't wait! lol!>.< I do that sometimes, get too into a tale ^.^
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Wait. The Twins read fanfics? i'm amazed! I didn't know they could read! ~smirks at the pot-shot taken then runnnnnnns away!~
Take that Skeeter! I loved the way you portrayed Kingsley. He's so cool.
I am so excited about this story and can't wait until the next update!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, thanks! Glad you liked Kingsley. I'm super flattered that you are reading, because I love The Magic of Wands! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Oh, thanks! Glad you liked Kingsley. I'm super flattered that you are reading, because I love The Magic of Wands! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
My! that dream sequence was amazing--it seems Severus' subconcious knows exactly what demons lie within Hermione's--better than she does herself. Now if he could only bring himself to help her...
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hi,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! Glad to meet you! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an insightful review. If only he (or she) could be so unfettered in waking life! But they'll come to many understandings on their journey together.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hi,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! Glad to meet you! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an insightful review. If only he (or she) could be so unfettered in waking life! But they'll come to many understandings on their journey together.
I have just read this story for the first time. I thought it was very beautiful.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thank you, Jessica, for reading and reviewing! I am humbled that you found it beautiful. More is coming, and I hope you will enjoy that as well. Thanks again--I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thank you, Jessica, for reading and reviewing! I am humbled that you found it beautiful. More is coming, and I hope you will enjoy that as well. Thanks again--I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Oh, I can't wait to see how things go on with Severus and Hermione.At least there's some progress re: the political/legal end of things. *gasps with relief*
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hey! Thanks so much for reading! I thought of you as I was writing the legal/political stuff, actually! I appreciate you popping by and reviewing!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hey! Thanks so much for reading! I thought of you as I was writing the legal/political stuff, actually! I appreciate you popping by and reviewing!
Pleased to see the evil beetle get her just desserts!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Glad to have pleased you! She did deserve a little something, no?:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Glad to have pleased you! She did deserve a little something, no?:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Yay! So nice to finally see that nasty beetle get what's coming to her! I like the way you wrote the hearing - it's so nice to see a Minister for Magic actually take charge and be effective, for once! I am enjoying your story and read it through in one go yesterday, and was happy to see this new chapter today. Nicely done.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
It's nice to meet you, Lyn! I'm very excited to encounter a new reader! I couldn't write a story where Skeeter didn't get some justice. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you for reading and for reviewing.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
It's nice to meet you, Lyn! I'm very excited to encounter a new reader! I couldn't write a story where Skeeter didn't get some justice. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you for reading and for reviewing.
Ah, take that, Skeeter!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
LOL! I couldn't resist! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Septentrion!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
LOL! I couldn't resist! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Septentrion!
Yay for Skeeter finally getting caught and punished! About time, really. I love how Kingsley handled all that, and he does have a point about Hermione having been under-age at the time.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Ooh, I'm thrilled that you liked Kingsley's handling of things! Skeeter's had it coming to her for a long time. Of course, in a perfect world, Smythwyck would've got more justice than he did. Oh, well. So happy you enjoyed the chapter! I'm always deligted to find your reviews. Thanks so much!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Ooh, I'm thrilled that you liked Kingsley's handling of things! Skeeter's had it coming to her for a long time. Of course, in a perfect world, Smythwyck would've got more justice than he did. Oh, well. So happy you enjoyed the chapter! I'm always deligted to find your reviews. Thanks so much!
I love your take-charge Kingsley. It is about time someone competent is Minister!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hi,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! It's so nice to meet you! I am glad you liked Kingsley! I thought Wizarding Britain could use a competent Minister for once! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hi,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! It's so nice to meet you! I am glad you liked Kingsley! I thought Wizarding Britain could use a competent Minister for once! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Well! Ms. Skeeter finally gets what's coming to her! Good show, Hermione!Excellant chapter!Livvy
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
What a terrifying experience for Hermione! She had no clue what Kingsley was about, and Rita could have done anything. It will be interesting to see public reaction.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Ah, thank you! I thought it would be really terrifying for Hermione under the circumstances. We shall see a bit of the public's reaction in an upcoming chapter (bwahaha!). Thanks so much for continuing to read and review! It means a lot!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Ah, thank you! I thought it would be really terrifying for Hermione under the circumstances. We shall see a bit of the public's reaction in an upcoming chapter (bwahaha!). Thanks so much for continuing to read and review! It means a lot!