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Conversations
KingPig323 Reviews | 6.63/10 (323 Ratings, 0 Likes, 212 Favorites )
***Winner of the Judge's Choice: Best Avada Kedavra in The New Library Awards 2008******** A conversation between two friends ignites a passion, if not an obsession, to uncover Severus Snape's dark and violent past.
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Thank you for the update, I have been waiting (and dreading) this chapter. I love your story, and I liked the chapter, but I admit that I am a bit confused. Everything was easier when I could be angry at Severus for being a git (and a bit annoyed at Hermione for letting him treat her that way). Now I am confused and don't know who to be angry at:-)) At first I was angry at Severus for drugging Hermione, then I get the impression at the end that he did no such thing, but probably saved her by adding beozar in the wine. I could be mad at him for accepting Pancy as an apprentice, but then again, the terms on the contract she had to sign was absolutely in Hermiones favour, not to mention that he obviously handled Hermione the money Lucius bribed him with. Being mad at the Malfoys is always safe, even though Hermione was mature enough (and kind enough) to see them as human beings with feelings too, I reserve the rigth to be totally mad at them, they sure haven't learned to many lessons with regards to their "superiority" after following a mad-man who easily could have cost them their lifes, their presious social standing, and not to mention bringing Bellatrix into the conversation; a woman so crazy they must be dumb and blind for not seeing so them selves, they mention her in a way that implies that Bellatrix should in some way be honored in front of one of her victems, not to mention two, if Bellatrix had something sexual with a elleven year old boy when she was seventeen and considered an adult, pedophilia is another sin to add to her long register. I find it stunning that the Malfoys not only still are so stupid, but they are stupid enough to open their mouths and let the world know they are utter idiots . Well, enough about the Malfoys, I do so look forward for your next update, hoping I will get to know a bit more about what really happened when our two heroes have overcome the potions they have been inflicted with. Update soon!!!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you so much for the wonderful and detailed review! I really appreciate it! Now, I've never seen the Malfoys as being particularly clever, so when I portrayed them, I tried to show the obvious flaws in their logic. That's not to say I'm intentionally writing them as stupid, because I'm not trying to. But I feel that Lucius thought he had the upper hand in this particular situation, as he's been sort of (or, at least, as I imagine it) bullying Severus since the two have met. I think the comment about Bellatrix was solely to Severus, and it was intended to do harm. I think he also meant it to alienate Hermione against Severus, suggesting in such a way that Severus might have enjoyed the attentions of Bellatrix when he was a small child. It's a very Slytherin-like power play between the two men, each trying (subtly, in Snape's case) to humiliate, isolate, and alienate the other in front of present company. And I am, of course, not condoning Bellatrix's behavior, but I thought it very likely she was used to lure young Slytherins "into the fold". Bellatrix is also varying shades of gray, and I think if I had the time, I'd really like to write a story based on what her own childhood was like that created this need in her to ....well, I'm getting off topic. What I mean to say is, Bellatrix's role in Snape's childhood... In this wizarding world, as it is in the muggle world, boys are expected to feel lucky to have the attentions of an older girl, not violated. And to a child that has already had a turbulent past and very few boundaries as it is, this experience cemented Snape's belief that he was more an object (such as a pawn) than a person... And I'm sorry, I completely rambled, and it probably doesn't make sense at all. I'm really sorry... half tempted to delete it, but...
Thank you for the review! Hehe. Next chapter is in queue, should be posted fairly soon.
Why did you want Snape's crotch to make an appearance in this chapter? Though I understand you might be fascinated by it, having it injured does not seem the best way to show your fascination. ;) Did the Malfoys put something in the glasses so both Hermione and Severus were drugged? I hope there are not many serious side affects.I am looking forward to seeing the changes in Hermione and Severus's relationship. You cannot slap and knee someone in the groin without expecting the relationship to change.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you again for the review!!!
I'll address the comment you had about their relationship first: Yes, it definitely has changed. I imagine Slytherins to be very primal, especially in their vicious manipulations of each other for dominance. In this case, Severus has been trying to force Hermione to submit (not sexually, of course, but in everyday reactions) to him. Having always had to fight to place in a pecking order his entire life, and never treated with equality, this is his only instinct. Hermione, however, refuses to be submissive, and this is where we see her establishing her dominance. Only now will the relationship be able to even out, as Hermione has forced Severus to see her as a worthy advisary that cannot be controlled. Eventually, of course, he will see her as an equal.... Okay, saying too much now..
About the Malfoys, one of them has tampered with the drinks, but you'll have to wait for that to be explained further :)
And about the crotch – there wasn't a *need*, per se, for his crotch to be in the chapter, I just wanted it to be ;) And the reason it makes such a grand entrance goes back to my earlier point about Severus' obsession with posession and dominance. Hermione needed to effectively emasculate him in order to prove that she would never submit. If this doesn't make sense, I'm really sorry, this ideology and presence of thinking will make a presence again in the story, and I will do my best to have Hermione explain it... she explains things far better than I.
Why did Severus use that burning paste rather than normal measures for cleaning wounds? Did he not want the Malfoys to know he was injured? I am looking forward to discovering why Severus invited Hermione for the tea. Hopefully she is able to survive the adventure.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you're asking me these questions because I can see when I'm not being clear in my writing!
I believe he used the burning paste to effectively seal/disinfect/heal simultaneously. He did not want the Malfoys to see the wound, not because it concerned them, but because it would more than likely spring up conversations (such as the Bellatrix one) that he'd rather avoid. Also, I image a very primal instinct that plays out between Slytherins, somewhat like a pack of wild animals — so show any weakness, especially in the form of a physical wound, is extremely dangerous. ...I hope that made sense...
Like Hermione, I am curious as to why Severus has a bite mark on his arm, rather than some other portion of his anatomy. Obviously it's not entirely strange, but a better explanation of who the supposed woman was would not be amiss. At first when Hermione realized that Severus had a bite on his arm I thought that perhaps he did have a run-in with little Ted Tonks. :)
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Aw, that's a cute image, little Teddy nimbling on Uncle Sev's arm! (Not being sarcastic, the mental image is really funny, and adorable.) Okay, here's the thing about the bite:
I've had a lot of questions regarding it, and the bite seems to have taken on a life of its own. It's not central to the story, but it will come up again. And there's a pretty simple explanation, and I promise it'll be presented when the time is right. I've hinted in the past that the bite and/or the act in which the bite had taken place wasn't exactly consensual on Snape's part, but the story has changed, and I can definitely say it was between two consenting adults. No real mystery woman, no one important. The reason why it is the arm instead of anywhere else was because it seemed most logical as both a place he would be bitten, and a place Hermione can easily see. I don't see Snape allowing himself to be bitten in a place (such as his neck) that would be viewed by all and become a source of humiliation. So, that's why it is his arm. And the woman has no name, cause I don't think she's important enough to have one. Can't let women who bite our Severus get an inflated ego, now can we?
I don't condemn Hermione's actions one bit. In my mind, it'll help her gain more of Severus's respect, though I was glad of the terms of Pansy's contract. He made the latest addition to the Malfoy family an inferior in rank to Hermione!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you so much for the review! Yes, he did, though she was in no state to truly notice it at the time. Next chapter in queue, so stay tuned!
Wow! What an intense ending to this chapter! Very well done!
The first four paragraphs --- GUH! Fabulous obvservations. More signs of Hermione's developing maturity. Lovely.
*peeks ahead* No more? I'll be on pins and needles for the next chapter! I will be anxiously waiting! :)
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Don't despair! Next chapter is in queue as we speak! I'm realy glad you liked those particular paragraphs, as I came very close (several times) to cutting them.
Response from sshg316 (Reviewer)
In the queue? Lucky me! :D
Oh, I'm so glad you didn't cut them. I really liked those paragraphs quite a lot.
The picture of the Snapes was heart-wrenching. And when she started exploring the house, I could feel the tension and suspense. On the edge of me seat, I was! She certainly showed there why she was sorted into Gryffindor.
"Professor Snape has sex. Professor Snape says 'fuck.' Professor Snape is... human."
Ah, and there it is. A true sign of growing up, right there, in the realization that he's a person.
And what in the world is up with that bite? I'm very curious about that one!
Lovely imagery at the end with the manor a reflection of the family.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
You write such wonderful reviews! You have me glowing!
Yes!! (does happy dance) No one seems to be objecting to the, er, one-two punch she landed Sev. I'm looking forward to the next chapter as well <VEG>.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
LOL! Thank you so, so much for all the help! *hugs* It really wouldn't be possible to write this without you and AM!
I'm with Hermione - a passionate bite on his forearm? Hmm ...
Tea with the Malfoys should be very interesting indeed. She is certainly dressed the part.
I'm more intrigued with each passing chapter!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Yay!
Oh no. Not Pansy! Things are about to get very interesting.
I am really enjoying your characterizations. Everyone is so in-character; it's fabulous!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you! My goodness, you read fast!
OMG! I would say something, but I have to go to the next chapter NOW ...
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
LOL! Thank you for taking the time to post a review!
Hermione had a really good point about Minerva and Remus coming to her rescue. She needs to show him she is not just a schoolgirl anymore.
And I adore the interplay between Minerva and Severus. The passing gas bit had me in giggles.
I have a horrible feeling Hermione is going to bear the brunt of his anger. Poor girl.
Your Severus is very complex ... just how I like him! Yay!
I have to say, you do a fabulous job with dialog. Some writers find dialog difficult, but yours is very well done. It reads like a conversation (*eyes title* - hah!) and appears effortless. LOVELY!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Wow, thank you! I've often had a problem with dialogue in the past, but with this story, I can hear the characters speaking to each other, so it comes much more easily. And yes, I'm crazy. I hear them in my head.
More and more intriguing! Severus' rage at Remus was palpable, and good for Hermione for not backing down. Goodness - I am on the edge of my seat!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
*bounces around happily* I'm so very glad you enjoy it, thank you for the review!
This story has been on my to-read list for a while, and I finally made it over. I am so glad I did! Powerful stuff. I was moved to tears several times, and I feel much like Hermione does - shocked and outraged on behalf of a young boy who was treated so abominably.
I can't wait to get to the next chapter.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Oh, thank you so much for the kind review! I hope I don't disappoint :)
I wrote another review but it's not there (?)Bella and Severus? Eww I'd rather not dwell on that either. Why is Pansy scared of Hermione, please tell me she wasn't the skank who bit Severus.The previous chapter was so awesome but I don't really feel like rewritting my previous review.Anyway, update soon please, too many mysteries.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Lol, don't worry about the missing review. I'm just so happy you have left the ones that you have, as I really appreciate them! The next chapter is in queue, so it shouldn't take too long for it to be posted. And no, Pansy has never been close enough to Snape in any way to bite him.
Wow, I absolutely love your Severus, and the way you described his home... perfect. It almost had the feel of a horror movie, but since this is Snape we are talking about, I think it was brilliant. The shoebox was something intriguing, the family picture- you know, I always did wonder if there was a loop in those magical pictures, nice touch.I'm seriously repulsed that he would sleep with someone who would bite him to the point of infecting him though-brrr. I can`t shake the image of Bellatrix sinking her poison-coated teeth in him, for some reason (She's dead, I know)Okay, I have two other chapters to read, I hope it won`t get any darker.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you so much for the review!! I hope you do stay with it, it will get romantic... eventually. Mwa ha ha! And although you're right, Bella's dead in this story, he did have an interesting encounter with her when he was eleven... Anyway, I hope you stay with me, it'll be a rocky road, but satisfying in the end, I promise! Thanks again!
yikes! was this slapping and groin-kneeing in view from the Malfoy windows? what a scene for the Malfoys to witness. I'm surprised Lucius and Pansy didn't tell Draco in advance of the apprentice contract; not nice to Draco to surprise him with it. so why was Lucius being such a nasty git to Severus - didhe have such confidence in Severus taking the money that he forgot Pansy would still be under Severus' control? what a "tea party"!! looking forward to finding out what drug Lucius sneaked to S&H, and how Severus missed it. thanks for the new chapter.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
I get the impression that Draco would have forbidden Pansy from pursuing an apprenticeship, so she, bein' all Slytherin-like, arranged it behind his back so it would be too late to stop her. Why he would act this way? Would you let your newlywed wife spend most of her days in a dungeon with Snape? Probably not, lol. Not if you're half intelligent, that is. So, in Pansy's shoes, wouldn't you want to make sure things went as smoothy as possible? Lol. Also, I don't think Lucius really cares a whole lot about his daughter-in-law being under Severus' control. I think the relationship may be strained as it is with Narcissa and Pansy both fighting for Draco's attention, so Lucius may just want her out of the house. Yeah, hoped that made sense. I think that's what's going on. I'm not so much a writer as a spectator, like you, so I'm sure the characters will let us know their motivations as time goes on. I really enjoy the review, and I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter. Oh, and, nah, I don't think anyone saw what happened, as the gates to Malfoy Manor are a bit of a ways from the house. Wow, hope that answered your question, lol. I might've given too much away?
Response from June W (Reviewer)
wow! I'm going to make a wild guess here that neither Severus or Hermione will have a lot of patience for "As the Malfoys Turn" soap opera affecting their little corner of Hogwarts. Now Draco is doing to be irked at Lucius for helping Pansy, plus irked at Pansy herself, which will only make Narcissa happy at the newyweds' conflict, which.... No, you didn't give away too much! I'm going to guess that Lucius is the one who drugged S&H, but not sure why or how. Next chapter?
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Unfortunately, not in the next chapter. It didn't make it. But it will surface soon, that particular answer!
Yeeouch! A moment of Sympathy for Snape... *moment* Okay, moment gone. He is being such a jerk right now, I can only sympathize momentarily. What has Snape got up his sleeve, making Pansy an apprentice? Hmm....looking forward to more!
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Lol! Well, he did deserve it, didn't he? Well, the next chapter is in queue, so please stay tuned! Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it!
Anonymous
Great A/N to explain! There shouldn't be any gripes from people this time (or ever, if I had my way!).
Author's Response: LOL! I love you, my very protective beta! *hugs*
Kick his tail, Hermione. You can make up for it later. lol. Or you can make it worst and offer to put ice on his...um parts that hurt. lol
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
LOL, you are very very close to the mark! Next chapter's in cue, so stay tuned! And thank you for the review!
Wow! This story is so truly great! I'm so very happy I found it.
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
And I am so very happy that you enjoy it! Thank you so much for the review, I really, really appreciate it!
This was intense! And being drugged (never mind being delivered news of Pansy's apprenticeship in a relatively shocking way, or having witnessed Snape's outburst with Draco, etc) would certainly help to explain her behaviour.
I rather hope she didn't cause any irrevocable damage though...
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Thank you for the review! Ah, I think Snape'll be okay...
Happy New Year to you and yours as well! I very much enjoyed your chapter and look forward to more. I found Hermione very much in cannon, so I think you did a great job there (I remember the punch, but almost forgot about her sending canaries at Ron LOL).
Response from KingPig (Author of Conversations)
Hehehe. Thank you for the review! I'm so happy to hear you liked it! Yes, Hermione is very formidable when angry, isn't she? The next chapter is in queue, and I think you'll enjoy it immensely!