I wonder who will reach Bellatrix first, Harry or Severus and Lucius? Harry has a big heart but Bella does not. She only loves him for what he can give her. I do surprisingly understand how she could feel like a pet. Maybe he'll realize that he is behaving in a selfish way. His pity for Bella is because she adores him it is not for her own good but for how she makes him feel. That is a weakness. Keeping a person as a pet is despicable. He must realize that on some level. He needs to remember how truly evil she is. 

All of the characters are making perfect sense, even with all of their individual internal struggles. Harry's the most in danger, what with his kind heart and pity for Bellatrix. I do wish Hermione and Severus were going to have more time together without a baby.  

It's so sad when loved ones only have part of the story and draw the worst conclusions. Maybe Hermione should share a little bit more about the magical circumstances of their relationship and that she was given a healing potion that nullified the contraceptive she was taking, and that they hadn't intended to conceive so soon but now that it has happened; what else can one do but go with it and be happy?  

I think you did a great job describing early pregnancy. It's been 33 yrs and I still remember it vividly. I do wish they had more time to themselves before they had to add the chaos that comes with a new baby. At least Hermione is young. That is when she can handle the missed sleep the best. And, I guess for this couple chaos is the norm anyway. 

If I was Harry and Hermione I would be worried as hell about the possibility of Tom being in Harry and about what the Succubus told Hermione. There is way more than a SS/HG plot going here.  Great job!

That damned Succubus hasn't given up. I hope Hermione remembers and tells Severus. I hope Poppy remembers to tell Severus that Hermione's healing would nullify any contraceptive they have been using. I don't think Hermione caught that subtle hint that Poppy made about medications she's currently taking.  I do so hope that insane witch comes up with a counter curse for Luna.  Then, she should be put out of her misery like a rabid dog.  

This chapter is totally awesome! I'm in a hurry or I would tell you more reasons I love this chapter. WoooHooo! 

Severus does have a soft side, but only Hermione can bring it out.

I've had this bookmarked for a while now, I don't know why I haven't read it before. I'm a fan of your writing, and usualy read things right away. Now I'm thinking "what took you so long?"My favourite line has to be " There is no way in HELL I would be attracted to that Potter groupie!!!""Me thinks the gentelman doth protest to much" {Shakespear knew everything. I think he must have been a wizard. }

Wow, what a wonderful journey!  I enjoyed watching the characters struggle and grow.

This chapter made me cry...I am not sure why. Very good read, very different story! You are a talented writer!!!

Resistance is futile...are you sure she is not Borg? Sorry it just hit me being a Trekkie and all!! I love this story!!!

I love the story. So, when are you going to post the sequel?

I really enjoyed this story, but I'm disappointed that you didn't tie up the loose ends with a sequel.  Is it posted somewhere else?

please please please continue with this story.  Your writing style is fantastic.  I'd buy your books!  I cant wait to see what you have planned for the future with these characters.  Particularly enjoying the way you have treated harry here!

Awesome story SW!

This was an awesome story.  (I loved it so much that I just had to read the entire thing instead of working on my distinction project...whoops!)  What is the title of the sequel?  I'm definitely looking forward to reading it! :D

Rolanda and Stuart?

Severus has come a long way.  Trusting Harry and Draco TOGETHER to take charge of the class!

Oh dear, are we heading for a Luna/Ron /Draco threesome, then?

And everyone watches for their crystal to glow? *blush*

It's all getting very convuluted. Poor Draco is all mixed up, Ron is equally confused, Harry is having an identity crisis and Ginny is possessive!  And Sev and Hermione are under some vague threat from the demon.

What, more torturing the characters? Evil wench!

Yay! Harry IS the new Boss!

Aha Harry is the new Dark Lord... or A Little Bit Dark Lord... or Gets Dark When Aggravated So Watch What You Say Lord!