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The Succubus
Southern_Witch_69148 Reviews | 6.13/10 (148 Ratings, 0 Likes, 274 Favorites )
Snape starts having nightly visits from a Succubus. Soon after, an Incubus starts visiting Hermione. They will have to come together to beat their nightly visitors and get past their sensual dreams. This is set in Hermione's seventh year at Hogwarts after her 18th birthday.
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I found this and could not pass it up - the story summary was just too interesting. The first chapter was a good as I thought it would be. The whole succubus and incubus was a great concept. I loved that in the first chapter each one had the encounter. Severus realizing it first was a good touch and with him scooting backwards- I have a feeling that he is about to explode. Good set-up of the story - cannot wait to go on to read more.
I love the little terms of endearment that you have wrote in such as little one and love - you can see Severus softening and becoming the man that he did not know he could be. The first time together was so sensually created. I loved it. It was funny to watch the staff kind of badger them - that is to be expected. I loved the whole way that you approached it and made it very believable.
Well - they are back on track - it was low of Hooch to admit to the sex. I am glad that they are content. Good writing - I am truly emjoying this.
Well the parent meeting went well - young man was a cute touch. The injury did do something bad to him. The ending had me setting on the edge of my seat. If she had not gotten through to him, I shutter to think what would have happened. Good ending with her keeping him from going - running will not solve anything.
Viktor is a nut! But why didn't Hermione recognize the sign if she's stuffying Succubuses and Incubuses? I'm not a krum fan - but I feel for the guy.I'm a bit worried still about Bella. I hope Harry's spells hold.I'm happy for Ron - but he's some deciding to do, doesn't he?Really cool chapter!
That spell Bella used on Ginny, I really hope that she didn't send herself into her at all. I hope she is gone for good. Sorry Lucius and Severus didn't get to her, but maybe eaten is a better way. Loved the Quidditch trials and the Valentines. I may have to ask permisson to borrow that salve?
SW69 okay, I know you wrote this over 2 years ago but, hey I am a late bloomer (hee hee). It is one of my favorite fics! I have not been able to locate the prequel or sequel. Where are you hiding them? Irish
That was one of the best stories I have every read. had me in tears and laughing.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
thank you! I'm happy you liked it
"The crazy witch even waved good-bye to him with his own hand before pushing him onto the floor amongst the snakes."So very Bellatrix! Aside from that, I should have reviewed earlier chapters to let you know how fantastic your depiction of Severus in this story is, not to mention Hermione. Hell, all portrayals are spectacular! I know some "hardcore-Snape-fans" who would argue him to be out of character, but this isn't canon now is it? You are a fantastic writer, thank you for gracing us with your talent! I only hope reading your superb work will inspire me to pick up and write something of my own someday soon! Brava! Magnifica!-PMM
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
This was my first published hg/ss story. :) And this was Snape how I wished to see him.After seeing more about him in DH though, I realize he's not as cold as we all thought, so I don't feel so bad for having him like this here. Hehehee.I'm glad you are liking this! :) And yes, by all means, write away! That's how I started out. I just wanted to have something my way. I was frustrated with a book I'd read and wanted to do something better.
I loved it! You must write more long stories <3333!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
thank you!
Wow, Okay I just read the entire story mind it did take three days when most only take two at maximum. It is very long and still very good. I love all the stories I've read of yours thus far and cannot wait for the sequel which I assume is still in the works because I could not find it on your page. Now I'm off to read Luring the Enchantress which also sounds to be promising. I thank you for sharing your talents with those of us who only wish we could put together works of art such as yours.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
I didn't write the sequel yet, but it's in my head. I need to make time for it. Perhaps I shall start on that now. :) I appreciate the comments. Oh! "Luring..." is probably my favorite story of mine so far. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks again!
Another amazing story. I just love the way you write!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. :)
*wipes the tears away* I haven't reviewed any chapters up until now but oh my, this chapter was heart wrenching. I've loved the story so far. Wonderful work.
*wanders of to read more*
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Thanks for reading! I'm so happy that you like it. :)
he was soft, but it was perfect! i'm all giddy after reading it!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it.
Well, I'm reading it again!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
thank you!
Brilliant! I can't say that I love a "soft" Severus, but I like that this story was long enough to accomodate his change. Very refreshing! Will love to read part 2.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
working on part two now :)
YAY! A pregnant Hermione...It's a good thing! I'm glad to see that Draco and Ron are getting along a little better.and I haven't heard a couch referred to as a davenport in years, not since my uncle came to visit when I was 12... I can tell you're definitely from the South!This story just has me so captivated. I've been reading non-stop for two days and I just can't wait to find out the ending!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
I often enjoy pregnant Hermione stories. Glad you liked this one.
Wow...Harry is really... ... Dark in this portion of the story. He'd make a very good Dark Lord.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Yeah, I'm such a sucker for Dark!Harry and wanted to explore him "lording" over some peeps. Hehe. I like that he's still Harry, but some darkness seeped in.
Interesting......... Lord Potter!! Gave me a giggle!! What happens now?? Curious now!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Teehee. So much more ahead for you. I hope you enjoy.
This is one of the best HG/SS in the fandom, the storyline is gripping and the way you direct the twists and turns make it realistic. Its something that I could imagine JKR writing (if she wrote adult fiction!). All the smut was well written and hot. I am really looking forward to the sequel to see where you plan on taking us in this world.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Thanks. I am happy that you liked it. I always try to add some extra crazy stuff in. Teehee. Cheers!
Really great story....I njoyed laughing,crying,and cursing with the many couples..I look forward to the sequel.I also really liked Viktors name for his son..Cute..lolA Fan~~~Kissis
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
I'm glad that you liked the story. I thought his son's name to be fitting, too. Thank you.
I'm so glad that you wrote the epilogue. I've been following this story for several weeks and Chapter 30 left me wanting resolution. The Succubus and Incubus dialog left me hanging. Now, with the epilogue, I have an idea where the story will go when you return to it.By the way, it's a wonderful story. Your creativity is simply exceptional. Thanks for writing it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
I appreciate that. Thank you. I have lots of little things planned for the sequel. I just need to get off my arse and type them up. :)
Very nice; I'm glad you finished it!
Yay you can do the victory dance! :P
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Teehee! Thanks!
It was a great story. Well-worth reading. I'm sure the sequel will be just as good.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Succubus)
Thank you. I'm happy that you liked it.