ahhh, Harry is scaring me. I hope all of this parceltongue stuff doesn't lure him to becoming what Snape feared he would.

fantastic, can't wait for the next chapter. i do hope bella gets hers in the end

Oh I can't wait to see what happens.

Great chapter.  I really like Luna & Lucius little scenes. I also love the binding cermony

Oh things are starting to get edgier can't wait to see what happens

Just read from the beginning. Great fic! Very much fun. Have quite a few questions hanging around that a sequel will hopefully answer ...eventually... Am still shaking my head a bit over Viktor being so dumb to trust a succubs, granted you did say that the things she said to him weren't exactly what he heard, but he seems obssesive (to say the least) about Hermione to go to such lengths for a chance at winning her eventually sometime down the road... Love just about anything you write. Looking forward to the sequel.

Wow.  You certainly fit a lot into this chapter!  Mystery, intrigue, romance, sex...good job!  Looking forward to more!!

That was the best duel... quick-paced and lots of action. I loved it. Heck, I loved this entire chapter. And you write Bellatrix so well.

I have read all 32 chapters and I must say that I really did love this story, and though I am known for always doing each chapters reviews, I just couldn't pull myself away long enough to do that, so I am sorry for that. This was a WONDERFUL story, and I really do hope that you will continue on with it, but for now, i have your story, and yourself, as an author, saved to my favorites so that I can continue to watch what you do, and see when you finally continue on with this.. This was a perfect story, it really was. And I enjoyed it more then you will ever know. Julianna

[Quote] "There is no way in hell I would be attracted to that Potter Groupie!!!!" [EndQuote] Looks like with just that sentence alone, you have me from hello!!!I LOVE this chapter dear.. And I shall deff be reading the rest of this story!And I must add, you did a really great job protraying Hermione, Ron, Harry, Snape and Dumble's.. Good indeed!!!

This is an intriguing story.Can't wait to see what happens,

Bloody Brilliant!

Sorry I haven't reviewed each chapter but have totally been caught up in the story. 

Oh! that was evil - Evil (amazing story and chapter tho) I actually started to blubber when Snape came out and shook his head and fell to his knees.

First I love your pen name! Second I love your writing!  I have wondered if you have ever considered publishing your creative genius.  I do not say this lightly as I am a literacy teacher.  That is the best profession for those of us that love the written word yet, lack the imagination to create.  We just enjoy the fruits of others' labor!

I have only read one chapter and I have to say i absolutley love your style of writing. You rock!!!

Dude!!!! That was intense. I thought there would be twins from Severus' reading. Is Harry the next Dark Lord? It would make sense. I hope he doesn't go that far. 

We aren't going to find out if the Succubus is successful in this story?!!!!!! That's the point of the story isn't it?

I'm very worried about Harry. I don't like the way he has used Ginny at all. He has exploited her loyalty, manipulated her, he has used her to cover for his lies and taken advantage of her trust and love. If Ginny found out that he had lied to her and even given Bellatrix permission to start a fight with her; not to mention that he had planned to stun her; I would dump him on his ass! I can't imagine how hurt she would be. He doesn't even see how he has mistreated the woman that loves him for who he is even before he was a hero, the woman he claims to love.  What he is doing insn't loving. She can't really trust him.  I'm surprised Hermione hasn't been concerned about the way he has used Ginny.  I can tell that Severus and Albus are somewhat humoring him to keep him close and keep an eye on him. He is dangerous and a loose cannon. He may mean well but he rationalizes his bad behavior because of his power. Now Bellatrix has fairly unlimited access to use her manipulation and dark powers of persuasion to sway him to become the next Dark Lord. Bellatrix has to die and Harry needs a reality check. I don't even know what to do about Krum. Hermione is too naive. I would have been the same at her age. 

Higgs and Bradly are a peice of work!  I hope they have to pay for their evil intent and Higg's Dad needs to meet his own demise while your at it.  If Severus knew Nagini was alive and reproducing I'd bet he'd have that put to a stop.  Now that Severus is working so hard on being a good example for Harry I feel guilty wanting him to Kill those evil gits. Maybe they will end up killing each other. For some reason I have a feeling you may let them get as far as actually capturing Hermione before they are stopped, but won't actually have the chance to hurt her.  I do hope I'm wrong.  I'm really enjoying, this story Ms. 69 my darling.  

Damn! This is getting scary! How can these people be so evil? Just when they thought everything was good because Voldi was gone too!  I don't know if I trust Stuart.  What's up with him?  And who is Albus going to hire to teach the DDA class? 

I guess my ass is just too fat and buoyant to make that whole sex in the bath tub/hot tub thing work. It's in all the sexy stories but I sometimes wonder if the author has ever really tried it.  It's like trying to run in water up to your waist except with a flotation device around your middle.  Maybe you need to add some tips for fat girls in the story line for making it work. Well, then you'd need to add tips for making the lazy old man want to work that hard. It just wouldn't work in a Snape story at all unless it was a nightmare episode where Snape or Hermione have a nightmare that little Severus is broken and he doesn't care enough to figure out if there's a potion and tell me how Hermione gets the bastard to take it when he doesn't give a fat rat's ass if she grows together down there.  I guess I'll just pretend I know how hot sex in the tub is and go with it. 

Did this Severus actually really enjoy killing and raping people before Lilly ws killed, or was that just the thing he was afraid of being? 

I know how enraged I would be if I were Severus in this situation. I'm glad for the part where Hermione got Harry to help and I would be so furious, but that part seems the only way to handle this since Severus is too afaid of hurting Hermione to do this willingly. I really don't think Hermione should have shared what happened with Ron and Ginny. This is really personal private stuff and those people may be her friends but they aren't his friends.  Severus is a proud man and she betrayed his confidence. She should have only spoken to Harry and Albus. I hope Severus never finds out she told his personal informaion to the whole group. If I were Severus it would also take me a while to get over being forced to do this against my will even if it is for the best. There is a trust that has been broken that Hermione could go behind his back, involve her friends in their personal life and force him to do what she thinks is right any time she didn't agree with him.  It would be hard for Hermione to win back the complete trust from me after this, even if I still loved her and even if I understand why she did it. Things between us just wouldn't ever be exactly the same. I wonder how she can gain back his complete trust. 

That was certainly a surprising twist! The injury from the succubus caused that? Damn! How many more hours till that potion is finished?  I hope Severus forgives himself and realizes it wasn't the real him with those hateful thoughts it was the effects of the evil magic in the wound.  I guess things were going too well.  I figured that the situation with her parents would eventually work out. She seemed to know her parents to be generally understanding and respectful of her choices and good sense. Hell, they have no idea all the things they should have been worried about during the war. That was really mean of the twins to pull that stunt. It wasn't funny at all.  Is it because they hate Severus and want to cause problems for Hermione and Severus? 

This was a very interesting means of getting them together, and for the most part, the story was entertaining. Yet, it seemed to go on forever. This tale felt as if it could have been split into 2 or 3 separate stories easily.

Again, the storyline is intriguing and entertaining.