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Potions Under Duress Coming Back to You
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Coming Back to You

1: Coming Back to You

2: In the Gloaming

3: Pas des Deux

4: Reaching for the Moon

5: Changes

6: Unloved

7: Choices

Coming Back to You

michmak

89 Reviews   |   89 Ratings, 0 Likes, 63 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 8,139 Words 7 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

When next he wakes up, Hermione is there. Her bushy mass of hair covers her face and he can tell she is sleeping, sitting there in the chair next to his bed. He studies her sleepily, and can’t even muster any anger when he realizes he must be her new pet cause – like the house elves with SPEW.

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: Coming Back to You

Chapter 2: In the Gloaming

Chapter 3: Pas des Deux

Chapter 4: Reaching for the Moon

Chapter 5: Changes

Chapter 6: Unloved

Chapter 7: Choices


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michmak

Member Since 2005  |  12 Stories  |  Favorited by 112  |  0 Reviews Written  |  3 Review Responses

Mother of three, working out of the house in the field of public relations.  I have a very understanding husband and lots of quirks, which probably make me more irritiating than interesting.  I used to write lots of fanfiction, but have fallen away from it the past little while, mostly due to personal issues (although some fandom issues surfaced as well).  Snape/Hermione is still my 'ship of choice, and that won't change despite what Rowling presents in the last book.

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10/10

deedeebug95

Very, very sweet!

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Ljpjcg

This seems done to me. It's perfect!  Love the inclusion of "Songbird"

0/10

tenoh27

That was a poignant and endlessly lovely tale. I am really glad that Severus managed to enjoy his second chance at life. Thank you!

9/10

cabooklover

I adore this series, it is beautiful, but it is marked an incomplete and it makes me wonder if there was more to be told.  

9/10

tenoh27

Such a wonderful and bittersweet (the first few chapters) story! You write Snape so well. Thank you.

9/10

ylang_two

Ronniekins still doesn't like Snape.  Fine.  I still don't like him, the red-headed, dunderhead git.  The only Weasleys I really like are the twins.  Will all the chappies be rather short? 

9/10

ylang_two

fan Snape usually always cuts a rug well, and I'm sure yours is no exception.  Good to see Snape and Lupin chilling after all the drama in DH.  They're survivors, outsiders with plenty in common and got to make the best of what's left. 

9/10

ylang_two

nice to see at least one of poor Teddy's parents alive.  I always thought that killing off the both of them was too cheap and abrupt. 

10/10

ylang_two

Yay!  This is making DH palatable for me.  Write on.

0/10

Mint Stick

Oh dear. Poor Severus - I can understand his thinking, but I don't think Hermione will like it! And surely she can take care of herself.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Oh No, he can't send her away.  She won't care that she may be a target, she will screw her courage to the sticking place and they will get through this together.........................or at least I hope they do.

Your drabbles are wonderful, so expressive and descriptive. 

10/10

Sampdoria

A great update, thank you!!!

10/10

missblue

You don't waste a word, do you? Perfectly done.

10/10

jenonymous

Delightful series.  I am truly a sucker for Snape in Love.  And the Cohen song at the end is wonderful.  I don't think I've ever seen it before.

0/10

Angie_Scarlet

This is such a wonderful story! Sweet, but not too sweet. I´m eagerly waiting for more.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Beautiful

10/10

shefa

This is just beautiful, all of it.  Your stories are always so beautifully crafted.  And the choice of Leonard Cohen song just clinched it for me, the tone mirrors the tone in your writing.  Perfect :)

0/10

Bentwaters

Oh this is all so wonderful.  I'm enjoying every bit of it.  Please bless us with more as soon as you can. ^.^

0/10

septentrion

I enjoy very much Severus's thought process, and how his feelings for Hermione develop.

10/10

amsev

Very nice.  I'm glad she asked Severus to dance.  I love Leonard Cohen.  Excellent choice for the chapter closer.

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Mint Stick

Oh, this is still absolutely wonderful! I love the way this story is sweet without being sugary. Telling it from Snape's point of view helps with that, I suppose.

I'm eagerly looking forward to more!

0/10

ladyofthemasque

*purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*More, more more...~Lotm

10/10

Merlinsbeard

*sigh* at last they admit their feelings.

Excellent song choice. 

10/10

June W

perfect song for this chapter!  I'm so glad Hermione and Harry took the initiative with Severus; no need for them to pander to the sulking Ron.  I wonder if she will ever explain to him those other comments from the end of the previous chapter.  Thanks for the new chapter!

10/10

kittylefish

sweet!  i really enjoyed the conversation between snape and harry.  and that hermione finally got up her gryffindor courage and went out on a limb.  after all, somebody had to, and if she waited for him - well - thank heavens it didn't come to that!  i've enjoyed your pacing in this story, and after your a/n i thought we'd have to wait longer for something to happen.  but i'm glad we didn't have to wait!

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