New Chapter for Coming Back to You
Coming Back to You
michmak89 Reviews | 7.4/10 (89 Ratings, 0 Likes, 63 Favorites )
When next he wakes up, Hermione is there. Her bushy mass of hair covers her face and he can tell she is sleeping, sitting there in the chair next to his bed. He studies her sleepily, and can’t even muster any anger when he realizes he must be her new pet cause – like the house elves with SPEW.
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Mother of three, working out of the house in the field of public relations. I have a very understanding husband and lots of quirks, which probably make me more irritiating than interesting. I used to write lots of fanfiction, but have fallen away from it the past little while, mostly due to personal issues (although some fandom issues surfaced as well). Snape/Hermione is still my 'ship of choice, and that won't change despite what Rowling presents in the last book.
Reviews for Coming Back to You
It works beautifully.
I've been enjoying your story very much and am looking forward to more. Some drabble series are unsatisfying because the author tries to cram too much into each little scene and makes it read more like a book summary than an independent unit. Yours are quite good. Thanks for your work!
another wonderful chapter. i started tearing up when hermione, harry, and ginny went and sat at the slytherin table, started crying for real when you have snape crying in his chambers. and haven't really stopped yet. very moving. and when hermione says she's safer with him than anywhere else - well, yes, of course.
i really enjoy the song lyrics that you include at the end of the chapters - they add to the moodiness. poor lonely, insecure, doubt-filled snape. thank heavens there is a hermione who will undoubtedly help get him over it. i do kind of want to hunt ron down and kick his ass for causing trouble. but i guess there has to be some conflict or there wouldn't be a story!
More more more more more!~Lotm
Wow! Talk about packing alot of punch into a few words! Well done! I cannot wait for the next installment. Irishredlass
Wow! Talk about packing alot of punch into a few words! Well done! I cannot wait for the next installment. Irishredlass
The simple way you described Snape breaking down and crying made me cry. Love these drabbles.
This great story is full of items that happen to be on my personal Things That Really Should Have Happened After the Final Battle Checklist(TM). Especially the Welcoming Feast in this chapter. Poor Snape, he hardly knows what to do with a life once he's got one, does he? I love the way the drabble format captures the pace of his emotional ups and downs.
Yay Hermione! Go get your man!! And yay for Harry, Ginny, and Hermione coming to the defense of Slytherin at the Sorting Feast - now that's House unity. Thanks for the great chapter!
I really liked it.
You got Ron's character down: stubborn, gloating when he gets his way, and as Hermione said (a major) prat.
I think you had just the right amount of Hermione in it, for what you were trying to say this time.
Harry, Ginny and Hermione's behavior at the feast was perfect.
The only thing I noticed that might be a mistake was the "Albus" in ths line: “Should have been more forgiving.” Albus interrupts. “The blame isn’t solely yours.”
I'm looking forward to your next update!
I really liked it.
You got Ron's character down: stubborn, gloating when he gets his way, and as Hermione said (a major) prat.
I think you had just the right amount of Hermione in it, for what you were trying to say this time.
Harry, Ginny and Hermione's behavior at the feast was perfect.
The only thing I noticed that might be a mistake was the "Albus" in ths line: “Should have been more forgiving.” Albus interrupts. “The blame isn’t solely yours.”
I'm looking forward to your next update!
I do hope he'll reconsider! :-D
I liked the way the Slytherins were included. One could only wish that had happened in canon!
Hermione could not have been fooled for long, couldn't she?
This story is so kind. That sounds funny, but I think you can guess what I mean. You say a great deal in a small space and your characters have compassion. Thank you.
Just lovely.
Oh I just discovered these, and am enjoying them very much. I like how you have written both Severus and Hermione, very IC for me. While I do like to pretend that DH never happened, people usually guess the wrong reasons as to why. This is one of them - your writing is much more realistic, in the sense of Hermy not rushing off to marriage etc. Thank you!
Lovely. The last drabble fits Snape and Hermione's characters perfectly. Thank you.
I like having a sensible Hermione around (i.e. one who doesn't rush headlong into marrying Ron! ;-)).
oo where's part two??
Nice! Am looking forward to more!Pyro
Lovely!
Yes! Happy Dance! A new story by michmak! Very nice beginning. I look forward to reading more.
this is Wonderful! can't wait for more!
Beautiful!