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Potions Under Duress Coming Back to You
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Coming Back to You

1: Coming Back to You

2: In the Gloaming

3: Pas des Deux

4: Reaching for the Moon

5: Changes

6: Unloved

7: Choices

Coming Back to You

michmak

89 Reviews   |   89 Ratings, 0 Likes, 63 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 8,139 Words 7 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

When next he wakes up, Hermione is there. Her bushy mass of hair covers her face and he can tell she is sleeping, sitting there in the chair next to his bed. He studies her sleepily, and can’t even muster any anger when he realizes he must be her new pet cause – like the house elves with SPEW.

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: Coming Back to You

Chapter 2: In the Gloaming

Chapter 3: Pas des Deux

Chapter 4: Reaching for the Moon

Chapter 5: Changes

Chapter 6: Unloved

Chapter 7: Choices


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michmak

Member Since 2005  |  12 Stories  |  Favorited by 112  |  0 Reviews Written  |  3 Review Responses

Mother of three, working out of the house in the field of public relations.  I have a very understanding husband and lots of quirks, which probably make me more irritiating than interesting.  I used to write lots of fanfiction, but have fallen away from it the past little while, mostly due to personal issues (although some fandom issues surfaced as well).  Snape/Hermione is still my 'ship of choice, and that won't change despite what Rowling presents in the last book.

Reviews for Coming Back to You

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10/10

enchanter

*sigh* Perfect.

10/10

aura

Yea! A kiss! I really thought you were going to make us wait longer for that.

I'm glad that Harry's finally growing up, and choosing the right side of the fights realizing that he can stay friends with both parties even if they fight. Also, that Harry and Severus are finally talking about Lily. It's good for Harry, but I think it'll be thereputic for Severus as well.

Looking forward to the next.

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, tha twas sweet, and so good of Harry, too.  I really enjoyed it. 

10/10

pickles

Welcome back.

I've been missing your stories.

Another wonderful story written by you.

Waiting for more.

Patty 

10/10

Elisabeth

Just... awwww.

 One thing I like about the drabble format is how it allows the writer to fine-tune the overall mood from paragraph to paragraph. So (to me, anyway) Harry's conversation with Snape is part of a gradual sense of acceptance and peace that is the perfect run-up to the final scene. Don't know if I'm making sense here but anyway, love the chapter.

10/10

like_queen

light-handed and beautiful

10/10

snitchette

It's always a pleasure when I check my mail box and see that there's an update to one of my favourite stories. And yours is definetely one. Now for the chapter I would say : YES finally. It was time she let him know how she feels about him. And thanks to Harry who seems to have matured enough NOT to come to a romantic walk around the lake with these two.

10/10

Maddie

Maybe things will sort themselves out after all. I love the late Eva Cassidy's work. Especially her version of Sting's Fields of Gold, have you heard it?

10/10

veronica28

Just beautiful.

0/10

Mint Stick

*does a happy little dance*

I'm so glad she asked him that, yay! And go Harry - I do like to see a non-stupid Harry sometimes.

10/10

like_queen

how could you leave us THERE! The cruelty of it all...

10/10

carley9

This is the first time I've reviewed, but I would like to say that I've enjoyed reading this.

10/10

kittylefish

what an emotional roller coaster this chapter was!  i may have said this before, but it's remarkable how much story you can cram into so few words.  and such emotional impact!  the ups!  the downs!  and the saddest down of all - the spark of hope dying in severus's chest.  i trust that you will give it reason to rekindle before too long.

9/10

purelush

Ridiculously good chapter.

10/10

veronica28

I love these drabbles, they have such a beautiful, sad, wistful tone to them.  Thank you for getting Ron out of the picture...now if Severus could only see clearly! 

10/10

MeMs

Oh, very nice. I really like how you depict Snape, not really out of character and still making it possible for him to like Hermione. I think you did a great job of using the insight DH gives us into Snape. Can't wait for more :D  

10/10

snitchette

Nooooooo.  I want them together. For ever. You can't let poor Snape in that horrible state of loneliness. He deserves so much more. Pleeeeaaaase.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Ron is an idiot and needs his bottom paddling.  Severus is totally oblivious to Hermiones feelings, who is a little insecure that they might be reciprocated.  Gosh all this angst is killing me!

Loving it! 

Response from Merlinsbeard (Reviewer)

Ooops should have put

might not be reciprocated

10/10

Elisabeth

Very sad, although it does seem like the light's slowly dawning somewhere there on the horizon. (I hope.) And thank you for the song-lyric endings, they're always a bit thought-provoking!

10/10

Maddie

Hermione's actions show her love for Severus. Why did she say that to him after Ron left? Was she just embarrassed? Now Severus is going to feel so sad and rejected.

0/10

Mint Stick

Ron's being an idiot... nothing new there then! ;-)

Poor Severus. I have a feeling he misinterpreted Hermione's embarrassed reaction - if only Hermione knew her affection might not be all that unwelcome to him.

10/10

June W

ARGH!!!!  Evil cliffhanger!  I hope this is the last we'll see of Won-Won... grrr...

10/10

aura

Dang it!    Hermione just had to get all embarrassed and insecure in that last one!    Now Severus might make her wait until she makes the first move before admitting his feelings!    Grr!    Stupid Ron.    I blame the rest of the delay, however long you make it, entirely on him. 

Love this drabble series!    Hope to see more soon. 

10/10

blue artemis

I am enjoying these, but Severus is really insecure, isn't he?  And Ron, boy, that boy deserves a smack down.  

10/10

like_queen

These drabbles are brilliant. It was nice to have some optimism at the end.

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