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A Fresh Start
richardgloucester218 Reviews | 6.18/10 (218 Ratings, 0 Likes, 225 Favorites )
Summary:Neville, Snape and Hermione return to Hogwarts after the summer. Some things have changed in the post-Voldemort world – how do they cope? (Response to prompt 12 on the Potter Place Fall Challenge Prompt List.)
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RichardGloucester is now also a published author, under the name Jae Eynon, with stories in a new anthology, "IMMANENCE" (Story Spring Publishing, 2016) and "Thoroughly Modern Monsters" (Story Spring Publishing, 2013). She still loves the world of Harry Potter and sails the SSHG ship!
Reviews for A Fresh Start
I still love this story dearly. Thank you.
Hah. When I came across a word I didn't know, I immediately googled it. Should have known you would have provided a definition.
How good it was to see the lovely curl of knitting showing up as an important piece in this happy, wise and patient story. I agree with all the reviewers,especiallyLulubelle.WhereisLadyEllhornposted?Mycomputerfrazzled is.
I'm rereading this for the umpteenth time. This will always be my favorite chapter. Hermione's farting cauldron melt is THE BEST THING in all of SSHG fanfiction. I love this story.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Just what I wanted to hear today! Thank you so much!
It's about time Severu got some tender loving care, and as it is comeing from Hermione, so much the better.
Can't wait to see what they buy on thier shopping trip, a Halloween ball sounds like it could be fun. All Neville needed was that little touch of danger, now he will be irresistible.
Is it wrong to be jealous of a mirror?
The lioness has to bait her trap carefully, to catch the serpent. Loving it so far.
I have read this story before and i have to say it was just as delightful as the first reading. I always look forward to reading one of your tales. Thank you!
This was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.
Well done!
This was a super-satisfying read! I loved the pacing and the way you tied the earlier parts of the story (like the sweater) into the ending. Thank you for sharing!
This story is a treasure. I know I will be reading this multiple times in the next year.
A very nice arse, indeed.
Loved this little tale!!!
I love that she lauged at her melted cauldron.
A very lucky girl, eh?
I'd like to see him in jeans, too.
Neville... the next Dark Lord (of Herbology).
Has he forgotten that he's off the scale??
I always knew Ron was gay.
I love the idea of the professors lusting after a hot Neville.
A fresh start sounds good.
Loved it. Thank you!
I've been told I've got a bit o' German from my father's side and I've no doubt, now. It's a word of truth, even if others are too hypocritical admit it. Good for Hermione and Severus. Poor George. I can't see how there's anything that will make up for losing Fred. The rest of Hogwarts can eat their hearts out.
Sigh... what a headache. I'm sure you will find a way to bring them together. I hope.
Snape competing with Longbottom for popularity with the girls... very odd. I understand he wants people to like him, but I don't understand that the measure of his success is being increasingly viewed as a sexual object by the girls or women. Women and girls swoon over Lockheart, but no one really likes him! I think the best way to change his image is to have him rescue a kitten from a tree, a puppy from a well and publically take a lover. Presto! Changeo! He's a nice man with feelings. It's normal to want to be found attractive. Once he's saved helpless animals from peril and taken a lover, he can start showing how hot he is. Oh, and have Hermione force Rita Skeeter to write an article sympathetic to Severus' sacrifices and suffering for all those years. It wouldn't hurt his image to find a cure for something sad, either. Inventing a potion that makes fat dumpy witches skinny with large, firm breasts and shiny hair would make him the most popular wizard in the world forever!
If Hermione isn't careful, she is going to have to beat away the rest of the female population at Hogwarts when they see the new Snape. I have a feeling she won't have to compete with them for his attention though. Neville will be relieved, I'm sure. But if he catches Creevy taking pictures of him I am certain he will break his camera. I really hope that happens.