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A Fresh Start
richardgloucester218 Reviews | 6.18/10 (218 Ratings, 0 Likes, 225 Favorites )
Summary:Neville, Snape and Hermione return to Hogwarts after the summer. Some things have changed in the post-Voldemort world – how do they cope? (Response to prompt 12 on the Potter Place Fall Challenge Prompt List.)
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RichardGloucester is now also a published author, under the name Jae Eynon, with stories in a new anthology, "IMMANENCE" (Story Spring Publishing, 2016) and "Thoroughly Modern Monsters" (Story Spring Publishing, 2013). She still loves the world of Harry Potter and sails the SSHG ship!
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I really enjoyed that chapter, hopefully there will be more.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you! Yes, there's more.
Yay, it's great to see your most wonderful story posted here!!! *adds you to faves*
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you very much! And I'm flattered to be a favourite. I've just submitted two more chapters.
Okay, for Septima to make such cutting remarks when Severus helped her the previous year in such a manner ... that's so hypocritical! What a #$&@*!!!
I do love the metaphor of Neville being a butterfly. He isn't the only one in this story, but using him as the catalyst for events to come was inspired.
What a fabulous opening chapter! Yay you!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thanks, Keladry. Neville always had it in him to be a butterfly. Even JKR saw that....
Well written and thoroughly enjoyable. Looking forward to reading more.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you very much!
Hi - What a happy story! I rather expected Severus & Hermione to end up together, but what a surprise to have Ron & Neville. sweet :D
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
Wonerful,wonderful story.
Ahhh, it's so sweet that Neville doesn't know that he is now a hunk.
A grown up sexy Neville, is a wonderful surprise. Severus' return a little sad, that he still is not trusted after all he suffered is appalling. Am I alone or does anyone else want to give Vector a slap, After Severus saved her sorry arse from Amycus Carrow, she copes an attitude.
I'm so glad that Ron and Neville got together, they make a cute couple. Now Hermione has her very own " knitting Pattern Man"
I'm sure Hermione will bring him around, and not leave him to drown in his nobility.
Beware, hell hath no fury, like a Slytherin scorned,
Because pretending nothing has happened always works so well.
Hermione Granger melting cauldrons! I wonder how long she has wanted to do that. At last the scales have begun to fall from female eyes all over the castle, and about time to. P. S. " Severus Snape teddy bear extraordinaire " now I want a Severus Snape teddy bear * she whines loudly *
Thank you for another wonderfull story. Your characterisations never fail to bring a smile to my face =)
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
Looking forward to the next chapter, this is a truly lovely story. Congratulations.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
Go, Hermione! Go after what you want! That was a lovely chapter, and Severus is right not to be chasing a student.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you! And yes - it's a very awkward position for them both to be in.
Definately a sad chapter, but I'm sure Hermione will turn his head to her way of thinking!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
A sad chapter, but not the last....
I like the way you are manuvering the story and shifting the feel of it.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
Good chapter, and a bit more serious in tone.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you.
I don't know if you intended for this to be humerous or not, but Severus's dry scarcasm really makes this story! Well done.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
I do intend quite a bit of humour. I just hope you're not finding too much that's unintentional!!!
Thank you!
I had to chuckle at Severus's responce to the tailor. He is really trying to behave!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Yes, he is. I think he really wanted to use Crucio...
hmmm a Snape make over in the works? I'm really surprised he would bother.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
He's thinking of a Fresh Start.....
But not a complete makeover.
Oh well, Hermione blew her cover.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Very nearly...
Too funny, she must be 'setting her cap' for an unwary professor!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Not yet!
I loved the almost last line 'It beggard belief.' it just strck me as funny.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
I'm glad I made you laugh!