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A Fresh Start
richardgloucester218 Reviews | 6.18/10 (218 Ratings, 0 Likes, 225 Favorites )
Summary:Neville, Snape and Hermione return to Hogwarts after the summer. Some things have changed in the post-Voldemort world – how do they cope? (Response to prompt 12 on the Potter Place Fall Challenge Prompt List.)
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RichardGloucester is now also a published author, under the name Jae Eynon, with stories in a new anthology, "IMMANENCE" (Story Spring Publishing, 2016) and "Thoroughly Modern Monsters" (Story Spring Publishing, 2013). She still loves the world of Harry Potter and sails the SSHG ship!
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Heehee, Hermione 1, Snape 0! I do like bored H :)
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
LOL! Glad to amuse you!
I love the idea of sex on legs Neville! I can see much hilarity in the following chapters with that one! The groundwork for H & S looks interesting. Hopefully you'll be finding them something to occupy all that spare time ;) Glad to see Harry seems to have matured a bit too.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
I'm glad you like the way this has started!
Lovely. Especially Severus being conered by Hooch... Looking forward to them acknowledging their feelings, though.
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Thank you!
I have always seen Hooch as rather sexually aggressive, I don't know why, and I couldn't resist putting Severus in an awkward situation with her! Aren't I mean?
Ok I read this someplace else. I know this. :) still good.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
For two people supposedly quite intelligent they seemed to be very incredibly dense at times. Who will be the most courageous to confess feelings first ? Hope to learn that very soon.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Intellectually but perhaps not emotionally intelligent... Though with a bit more depth than the average teaspoon, happily.
*loves going to ceilidhs*
I'm glad that Hermione and Severus have both decided to set aside their feelings for the moment. I will be interested to see how they handle their jealousies when their plans really do begin to succeed.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate knowing that I have awakened your interest.
Great party!
Now, how are they going to sort out this set of faulty assumptions? Don't torture us too long, please!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
her dress sounded gorgeous!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you! (Phew - taste in clothes is so hard to get right!)
I do hope that Hermione gets to dance with Snape. That would really set tongues wagging!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
It would, and it will!
This is wonderfully funny and, at the same time, sweet. I do love this story! Thank you so much for writing it!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you! - for reading, liking, and reviewing!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you! - for reading, liking, and reviewing!
Hermione melting a cauldron and enjoying the reaction... soo funny !!!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
That was a very good chapter, very natural. I have often thought that that Snape might rather enjoy being gently bullied by a woman who had his best interests at heart. it's rather a motherly thing, but can also be a sisterly or a freindly thing to do. I loved Snape's thoughts about Potter and Wealsey enduring 7 years of Hermione's bossiness.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you very much! I was thinking that Snape, if he could accept the help, would secretly enjoy having some nurturing female attention - he never seems to get any from anyone else, poor man.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you very much! I was thinking that Snape, if he could accept the help, would secretly enjoy having some nurturing female attention - he never seems to get any from anyone else, poor man.
A good chapter as usual and I look forward to more. I suppose people would think that Severus had a 'hidden agenda' if he started washing his hair regularly. Tee hee...
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Thank you!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
I love this story, absolutely love it:-)) Update again soon!!!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you so much!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you so much!
I'm almost disapointed that he can dance. She could have given him lessons. But as he pretends to be a great dancer he could be kind enough to invite her to the halloween ball. Who knows what could happen? You probably ...
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
It's really flattering that my story is making you speculate so much. Thank you!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
It's really flattering that my story is making you speculate so much. Thank you!
"...on the other hand she couldn't help feeling he was either ill or working to a hidden agenda. Why else would he wash his hair?"
ROFLMAO - that was fantastic! And her hysterics after melting the cauldron... finally, she got the check in the block. Too funny!
Is Neville going to shock anybody at the Ball? Inquiring minds are waiting impatiently to find out.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Thank you!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Thank you!
Loved the bit about her melting the cauldron.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Thank you!
great start to a story! LOLing at the female staff all aflutter over Hunky Young Neville.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)
Well, there's no harm in looking, is there?