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Becoming Whole
Southern_Witch_69377 Reviews | 6.21/10 (377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )
Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.
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I adore the world of HP.
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
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very nice start. I like Ron sticking up for Severus and willing to tell Harry so.I have much faith in your ability to do this justice and to bring justice to Severus in the end......thanks, barb
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. It took a lot of guts for him to do that. :) But it's for his sister after all.
I love this premise and I can't wait to read more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! More up later today.
Yep! That is a great prompt and I am looking forward to see what you do with it. Great start by the way...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! More up shortly.
Good first chapter, Southern. Right now I'm panting for SS/HG stories, and re-reading my old favorites - for comfort, you know. Please take us to a Good Place for Severus and Hermione, won't you? Thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I'm right there with ya! They'll be in good hands here. :)
like it so far, will be interesting to see how this turns out, please update soon:)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. More up later today. :)
I loved this, as usual you are giving us a brilliant plot. I look forward to read more of this story, update again soon!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Hey, thanks for reading. I'll have more up later this evening. :)
I really like the premise of this story. The first chapter did feel like we jumped feet first into the story - a little rushed. It was all very well written. I just found myself asking loads of questions before I got to the end. Of course...as a wonderful author you may have planned that. ;)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yep, there are other things going on, but I hope to have those things known little by little. :) Hopefully, your questions will be answered! Thank you
interesting start I can't wait to see how it plays out.Moo
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! More up soon
Love it !Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! More up tonight!
Yay! Very good. I look forward to seeing what you do with this.I'd even hop up and down if it would help, but my doc put me on new meds yesterday and I just feel stoned... lol
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! Stoned, eh? Teehee
You're right--that is a great prompt. And, so far, you're doing it justice. I think that you have a superlative start and I can't wait to read more!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Hopefully I will! More up soon.
Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I have great plans (or so i hope they're great!). LOL
I love stories that throw Hermione and Snape into the same house together. It always allows for such delicious tension!
I can't wait for Snape to make an appearance. I'm sure he will have plenty to say about the matter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I like those as well. Bwahahaha Thank you!
Adding Ginny into the mix is a good angle. One of the things I like about your writing is that you always seem to peg Harry correctly. It's a given that preDH Harry will have an animosity towards Snape, but you always do a credible job of getting him to come around.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! :) I adore Harry.
I love the premise so far, and with Ginny's condition in the mix time is of the absolute essence. Wonderful job pacing; nice intensity. I look forward to reading more of this story, Southern! You've got me on tenterhooks already. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. More up this evening.
Good prologue. It is a prologue, right? *snicker* I'm looking forward to what happens, and I'm happy you are going ahead and posting regardless of DH. (No spoilers intended. To those who haven't yet finished the book, I have a handy set of manacles that should keep you pretty focused on your task. Oh, and 10 points from whatever house you're in for not completing your assignment on time...)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL... Prologue indeed. I decided to label them as chapters now (thanks to your snickering. teeeheee). Speaking of tasks, I need to email you. SW = slacker. lol
I love the start Southern, I think you will do a great job!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! More up soon.
great chapter. Can't wait for the update
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Hope you like the next.
Have just reread this fantastic story.I love it!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! I am so glad to know you liked it enough to read it again. Cheers
This is one of the most touching and exciting HG/SS chapters I've ever read.Needless to say I love this story. I love the way you portrait the characters and their relationship. For me it is very believable.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you very much. I appreciate that.
What a nice happy ending! I loved this story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks!
Oh dear, he went to Rita Skeeter?! Has he not learned anything from the past?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You'd think! Haha
What a jerk! I'm glad she didn't take it. Oh, and I was laughing loudly at the scene with Ron and Harry.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~grin~
I started reading this about a month ago but then it got lost and I never got to finish it. I'm reading it again and so far it's really good. I love the characterization of Harry, Ron, and Hermione. Thank you for not making Harry a saint--he's definitely not perfect in canon. And thanks for not making Ron completely horrible, because he does have some good qualities!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Glad you found it again! :) I agree about Harry and Ron as well and like to see them portrayed that way.
thanks for another wonderful chapter. keep up the good workand update soon please.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Hope you like the next one.