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Becoming Whole
Southern_Witch_69377 Reviews | 6.21/10 (377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )
Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for Becoming Whole
Argh I feel so sorry for Snape! *hugs him* I'm happy that Hermione was able to convince Harry *pets him* and most of all that Ginny might soon be well *prays to the almighty arthour*... Great chapter! You really got quite a lot of tension and angst in this one, and yet still you managed to put just enough hope in it so I can see a small ray of sunlight! I'll be looking forward to an update! =) (Oh and Snape's 'peace offering' was very sweet - although he would rather die than to be linked with that word, I guess...)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yep, poor guy. Glad you're liking it. I'll have more up soon. The sunlight is indeed trying to shine through the clouds.
Poor Sev. I'm looking forward to updates. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you. More up soon.
I like the way some of the DH details have been woven into the storyline.
Hermione just can't seem to manage to say things the right way, can she? But then, tact has never been one of canon!Hermione's strongest skills!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! She keeps her foot in her mouth in this one. :) Things will come round though. Glad you're enjoying.
oh goody! i can hardly wait to see severus' reaction to these developements. thanks for this update.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You're very welcome. The next chapter is nearly done now. :)
This is a really great promt, and you have done a great job. Loving it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! More up soon. :)
I know I'm being repetative, but I'm still really excited about how mature these characters are shaping up to be without taking away the goofy things that make them themselves. Really looking forward to seeing the Slytherin side of things.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much. The next chapter is full of Snape. :) We shall see his reaction to things. I'm going to try my best to keep the characters "mature." :) More up soon!
Oh, I like this! I really think you're doing Ron justice. I loved that he reminded Harry that they used to copy Hermione's homework, and that his relationship with Hermione looks healthy. (Not that I'll mind when/if she ends up with Snape ;)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much. They are quite close (Ron/Hermione) and will continue to be so (and she will end up with our dear Snape... eventually).
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much. They are quite close (Ron/Hermione) and will continue to be so (and she will end up with our dear Snape... eventually).
This looks like it'll be a lot of fun to read. I look forward to following its development. I really love your writing, so it promises to be a good read. :) Thanks for sharing your talent with us. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks very much! I'm working on the next bit already! I appreciate the comments. :)
I love the idea and am looking forward to Severus' reactions. thanks for writing . love, barb
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I love the idea and am looking forward to Severus' reactions. thanks for writing . love, barb
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The server must have went out for a moment when you sent the review. Oops. No problem though. :)
I love the idea and am looking forward to Severus' reactions. thanks for writing . love, barb
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. :) More up soon.
I'm curious to see what happens next. And hopefully find out what that nasty stare was all about. Update again soon!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
We certainly will find out. Teehee. More up soon! :)
Lovely start and I look forward to reading more :) As always thank you for writing (and for the great beta work you do for others)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You're very welcome. I appreciate that. :)
I like that the trio has renewed their vows to each other so to speak. United we stand, divided we fall. I hooted with laughed when Harry said he would explain himself more. Hell if he would have done that in canon the series would have been 3 books. Who is Ron going to end up with? I vote for Pansy!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You are so right! AhahahahAnd I think you're reading my mind about Pansy, dear.
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
OH HELLO I Have read this. I am a moron. Just ignore me
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOLToo cute. :)
Hellooo - I just found this (weee) - great story so far. It's very promising (I have always enjoyed your stories so this should not be different I think). And it's typically Snape to react that way in the courtroom... I'm looking forward to see how he will react (and adapt) to his new life..Also it's very nice to see a mature Ron.. I hope to see more soon =)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Heya! Long time no see! Glad you're liking it. :) I'm working on the next bit now, so it won't be too long. :)
This will be a good story that one.Hope you will update soon. I am eager to read what Snape has to say, see him fuming....
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! I'll have more up soon, and yep, Snape's not very happy at all! Teehee
Thank you for the update, a very well written chapter. I like the way you have them have sligth doubts about each other, but manage to talk to each other and solve the issues before it becomes a problem. I loved that you had Kingsley and Harry speak up for Severus. I often find Harry to be hotheadded, rash and sometimes downrigth stupid in his tantrums, it is very nice to see a fic where he actually manage to use his brain from the very start of the story. I also found it very interesting that you had Daphne and Pancy in the story, it will be interesting to see how they fit into the puzzle. Update soon
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You're very welcome and thank you for reading. I really like Kingsley and always felt that he's a fair guy, so I thought using him would be cool. :) I have a few puzzles to add into the mix. More up soon.
Hmm... poor boys, having to put up with Slytherin classmates. Although I guess it won't turn up to be all that bad! And I sure hope Hermione manages to be properly prepared for her new houseguest, as I somehow doubt Snape will be overflowing with gratefulness to start with.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
She's going to try to be prepared, but something tells me he's not going to be an easily satisfied guest. Bwahahaha! Thanks!!
Loved it! I am glad to see that Daphne Greengrass will be making an appearance in this fic. I think that she is a highly under-appreciated character, who I would love to read about more often. I am so glad that Harry did the right thing. I, too, feel a bit guilty for having doubted him. I look forward to reading more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! I like using her at times as well. She gives me a much better mental picture that Millicent sometimes. :) LOL
They put those two girls in with Ron and Harry? I'm smelling romances.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Teehee. I'm thinking one of them will get lucky indeed. Bwahahaha... Who knows? Maybe both. Snerk
Wonderful continuation. You handled the court scene beautifully. I'm eagerly anticipating Snape's thoughts on the matter, and especially his reactions to "going home" with Hermione. How will she do up his bedroom, I wonder...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks, doll. I appreciate it. I was worried it'd be too boring. Oh, I guess she'll put some pink sheets on his bed and make sure some kitties are hanging about. LOL Just kidding! More up soon.
Hey Southern! I just started reading this today and wanted to let you know I'm very anxious to see whats next! Especially how our Severus reacts to living with Hermione! Thanks for posting! ~Brena
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Heya! Thanks for reading! I'll have more up soon. Good to see you again.
Let's see, Snape will have a stick up his bum about this..... Ok, I had my fun. Enjoyable chapter and I like the way you show how emotions and interpersonal relationships are changing now that the war is over and it's 'cleanup' time.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
He's not too pleased. Bwahahahaha. More up soon. Thanks for the comments. Things are changing and a bit different for everyone, even the trio.
Yay, another SW fic! :-D<i>“Yeah,” he said with a grin. “Say, you haven’t any of those Pop Tarts?”</i>Was Ron only in it for the food? lol!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Teehee! He's so hungry. bwahahaha
I do hope Hermione and Snape plan to do some research naked!!! I like your mature Ron. I wont mind if you need to kill Ginny off for a plot point. Honest.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Bwahahaha. I'm sure that will come up eventually. Yep, I'm wanting a mature Ron in this story and will keep him that way. LOL about Ginny!