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Becoming Whole
Southern_Witch_69377 Reviews | 6.21/10 (377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )
Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for Becoming Whole
Oh, I had the perfect thought, and then it escaped, darn it! I'll just say that I'm glad that I'm reading the complete story and dont' have to wait for the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL Thanks! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL Thanks! :)
Response to your author's notes:It worked well. Probably much better than if we had experienced it as it happened. It felt much less tedious this way (trials can get tedious after all!)Nicely done
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I appreciate that. Thank you
It was a very satisfying read . Thank you!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
And thank you!
Im glad she told his...well. Most of the time he ends up being an arse and getting away with it! I would have starved him for a week!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
lol He should starve some. :)
This is good. It's already turning into something of more substance than a simple 'Snape and Hermione locked in a house together'. I like it sofar :-)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
lol Thank you. Hope you continue to like it
How lovely! I highly enjoyed this story.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks for reading! :)
I have enjoyed reading this immensely. And it has such a sweet ending.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
thanks, my friend
AWWWWWWW! a great big giant hagrid hud for you! i love this story and it is def going onto a disk so i can read it over and over!!! have i ever told you that i LOVE your work??? lol i think i have. your are an amazing writer and i hope that you continue to inspire us all with your creative abilities . many hugs again~Hogwartsgirl007
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You're such a dear. :) Thanks for reading and following my stuff. Whoot. :)
Blimey, what a hot massage, And Harry really doesn't have a clue...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL
:)
Hmmm, yes one can definately see why she is destined to fall in love with him...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL He's a bit rough sometimes, innit he?
Oh, a what a lovely fluffy ending...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~grin~ Thanks for reading. :)
Thought the flash-back worked well
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I appreciate that. Thanks
loved it! thanks so much.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
thanks for reading!
"If Professor Snape hadn’t stoppered death for a while.” I love that line. Harry manages to be condecending whilst giving Snape the credit. Even Snape would have to respect that!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Teehee
Wow that was hot, wild, tender and beautiful... Made me completely breathless...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you!
I liked the shower thing. Why not? Why should that be so embarassing? He did tell her to do it after all.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Quite bold. Bwahahaha
Thank you for continuing to write wonderful stories. As with all your work, I loved it. I like that it is short enough for a quick re-read and long enough to satisfy my SS/HG fix all in one. And I loved the concept set forth by the challenge prompt, my only regret is that I was not chosen to sponsor snape, although I'm sure that is for the best because I would have said screw Ginny and the rest of the injured, and just tied Snape to my bedposts for the duration of his stay.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate that. :) I thought it would be a good length as well (or hoped). LOL :) Cheers! hahaha
Fun story. Thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You're very welcome and tx!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You're very welcome and tx!
Ni-ii-ice! Very enjoyable story, and I love the ending. Happy-ever-after is my favorite flavor of fiction, and this fills the bill.
Good job!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you for reading! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you for reading! :)
awwwwwwwwwwwww wonderful way to end the story i am such a sap for happy endings thank you
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~grin~ Thanks for reading. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~grin~ Thanks for reading. :)
I really enjoyed this story. Thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you very much. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you very much. :)
S'lovely - a charming proposal. Hermione getting mad at Snape in Knockturn Alley and apparating away with him was terrific - this'll be filed in my (dodgy) memory as 'The One Where Hermione Hit Snape'.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! I'm so happy you liked this. Bwahahahaha!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! I'm so happy you liked this. Bwahahahaha!
What Snape said to Hermione about becoming whole I thought was perfect and true. We really hope to find that person who can make our heart whole. Nice job!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you so much. :) Glad you liked it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you so much. :) Glad you liked it.
First, I had no idea that you were posting the story here (although why I didn't think of it I'll never know). To know it's finished makes me happy!
Second, the flashback/reflection in this chapter, at first I didn't realize what was going on and was a bit confused, but at the end of the second paragraph, I stopped and started the chapter over and it flowed really well. I like that he came back to her. It's something new, this Snape, while not warm and fuzzy, is not a complete jerk either...he seems a shade lighter than canon... a more mature Snape if you will. Anyway, I'm enjoying and off to the next!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. I'm so glad you found it here. LOL I'd emailed you at the link to your name at Ashwinder to let you know, but I didn't want to say publicly "Oh, go to the Poetess to read this," ya know? LOL
I'm happy you liked it. Thank you very much for reading! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. I'm so glad you found it here. LOL I'd emailed you at the link to your name at Ashwinder to let you know, but I didn't want to say publicly "Oh, go to the Poetess to read this," ya know? LOL
I'm happy you liked it. Thank you very much for reading! :)