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Becoming Whole
Southern_Witch_69377 Reviews | 6.21/10 (377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )
Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.
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I adore the world of HP.
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
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Ooh, complex and intriguing. Great chapter, but I gotta get back to work now. Boooo! Hopefully there will be another update to brighten my lunch hour soon. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
:) Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the next one.
Mhhhh jummy, I love this storie, great work!!!!!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks!
nice chapter. the flashbacks worked so don't be too worried. i enjoyed them. keep up the good work and update soon please.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
cool, thank you very much! :) hope you like the next one
Yay. How lovely to wake up with Severus there! I'm enjoying the cosiness. Thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much
great chapter so what os next for our courages couples i am sure it will be goodthank you for the story
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Hope you like what's next. Thank you very much!
Yay! All is well with Severus and Hermione... for now anyway LOL I was a bit worried there. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I love your writing SW! Great story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you so much!!! I appreciate that. :)
Well, it is a snowy, blustery day and the arctic blast is coming upon us. So, I have a major case of the "f-its" and decided to take the day off and check out this story. I'm liking it! I love the arse-hole comments from Snape and the fact that Hermione is giving it back. The tension (emotional and sexual) has been wonderful so far. I look forward to your updates.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL Glad you're like it! Whoot! :) I didn't want a "too nice Hermione" so I gave her a bit of mouth. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL Glad you're like it! Whoot! :) I didn't want a "too nice Hermione" so I gave her a bit of mouth. :)
Okay... I'm finally all caught up with this story. Now I'm going absolutely crazy. I need more!! I demand you to stop whatever it is you are doing right now and upload the rest of this fantastic story, or I will be forced to hex you!! Good enough threat? That do?~
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
lol Glad you caught up with it! :) Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
lol Glad you caught up with it! :) Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Adorei a forma como você escreve. Eu o li de um "tiro". Woderfull.
Eu normalmente só leio no fanfiction.net porque é mais fácil de traduzir. É muito complicado aqui, mas sua história valeu a pena.
Parabéns!
Abraços
Nina
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Gracias, Nina! :)
The morning after worked well!
I'm intrigued by the Ministry letter. I wonder what they expect from Hermione!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Cool! thank you. The Ministry... grrr... That will be fun to write though. :) More to come soon
I like it (the morning after) very much! I love it when body conquers mind (especially in Hermione's case ;).I wonder how the succed with Ginny! And please tell more of Ron! :)Merry Christmas to you, too!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Glad you like it! I'll have more up about Ron and Ginny in the next chapter. oxoxox
I'm loving it, Southern. You do write romance so well. I like to see Severus a bit relaxed and pleasant (although the letter from the Ministry bodes no good, there's still time for a lovely evening between the two of them).
Nice descriptions, very visual. Thanks for getting the chapter up before Christmas - an early present for the readers!
Good job.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You are definitely right about the Ministry, the berks. :) Cheers and happy holidays
clapclapclap! I really enjoyed the easy slide into coupledom. Excellent. Now my birthday is 12/31, see that you have another chapter up by then.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~starts writing~:)
I wanted to name our daughter Rain but it was vetoed. I liked the tender scene in the bedroom. Can they wake up together happy and content??
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I like that name, too. I'd considered Rainie. :)
I cant wait for the fireworks when Hermione finds out she took him to visit a whore. Snerk. I am all sorts of curious about what Harry is up to. Hermione is letting him do his thinking on his own. This is bound to lead to trouble.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
You know how Harry and trouble go hand in hand! :)
great idea for a morning after (or rather an afternoon after!) i am continuing to enjoy. thanks so much
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much! :)
I see you sucessfully avoided calling the store Nagini's Nighties. Strong Sunshine! Im feeling a bit of sympathy for Daphne hummmm
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL That would be so fun in a parody, wouldn't it? ON SALE NOW:
SNAKESKIN LINGERIE
Didnt the trio agree in chapter 2 to be more forth coming with eachother? Hermione and Harry have no one to blame but eachother for this Rita debacle. Crooks is a naughty cat. I like that Hermione swears. I swear too. Cursing is a good thing.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
'Hell yeah, damn it,' says SW who swears too.
I tell you my heart just broke when Severus was ranting at Hermione, that he had done everything asked of him and still it wasnt enough to gain his freedom. ((sniffle)) I am glad the trio plans to set it to rights.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yeah, poor bloke. That was pitiful. :)
i was in the midst of reviewing this chapter last night when the electricity went out in my apartment building, and all was lost. : ( so here's the short version: i thought this chapter was perfection. i loved your morning after, and the scene at the weasleys, and your night after, too. and everything in between.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Ugh, I hate when that happens, especially when you lose unsaved work! Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you like the chapter. I'll have more up soon. :)
It was a very nice 'morning after'. Just because they are both intellectually gifted does not mean they know how to talk to each other after the fact. It felt very natural. Good show.Happy Holidays.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you. Happy holidays to you as well. More up soon. :)
Brilliant chapter. Perfect morning after.
Merry Christmas!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Merry Christmas to you too! :) Thank you for reading.
A great update, I really liked your version of the "morning after". Very well written!!!Update again soon.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you very much! More up soon, but not till after the holiday! ;)
Since you mentioned it in your AN's... I really like the way you portrayed the 'morning after'. There is still the questions and suspense of 'will they get together or won't they' without having some kind of fight, or crying fit from Hermione (I know... sometimes she just cries, and we (the wriiter) have to just go with it) :) And Sev's seeming comfort with it all - but still not knowing what he thinks about it as far as after his imprisonment is over just adds to that suspense/drama of the story.Really enjoyed it!!Merry Christmas & Happy Yule!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! I'd hoped to still leave it a little in the air. Bwahahaha... :) Happy Christmas!
I found it a very charming morning after. Severus certainly isn't a git when he opens up to someone. As always I'm looking forward to reading more! I am a tad worried about the trial to come. Hope Severus doesn't end up back in the slammer!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks, mate. :) Not a git at all. And the trial. yes... shudder. :)