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Becoming Whole
Southern_Witch_69377 Reviews | 6.21/10 (377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )
Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.
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A wonderful ending to a very entertaining story. My favorite part remains to be where Hermione blasts the door down at Severus's friend's flat and the passionate aftermath.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Bwahahahaha
Nothing wrong with a little heated shag against the wall, eh?!
Thanks for reading! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Bwahahahaha
Nothing wrong with a little heated shag against the wall, eh?!
Thanks for reading! :)
*sniff* Awwww...such an Awwww ending.
I enjoyed this story, from beginning to end. Thanks for taking the time to write it.
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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much, doll! Glad you enjoyed. :)
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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much, doll! Glad you enjoyed. :)
I enjoyed this story completely. I will be on the lookout for the next one!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Great! thank you very much! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Great! thank you very much! :)
awwww...happily ever after. :-)
If only RL was that way. Guess why that puts me here reading all your lovely, hopeful, creative, suspenseful, beautiful stories...please continue!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I'm with you and wish RL would be as smooth! :) Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. oxox
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I'm with you and wish RL would be as smooth! :) Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. oxox
Love the happy ending :)
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Thanks,
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
! I'm glad you liked it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks,
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
! I'm glad you liked it.
I loved this! Really great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much for following along. I appreciate it and the comments.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much for following along. I appreciate it and the comments.
I am glad that everything turned out well for everyone. I never expected Hermione to open up a preparatory school, though it makes sense. Is Severus involved in the school at all? I am happy that they were able to continue with their research. With two brilliant minds like theirs, one never knows what they could develop.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yep, he helps out and lives there with her. Thanks for following the story! I appreciate it and glad you liked it. Cheers
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yep, he helps out and lives there with her. Thanks for following the story! I appreciate it and glad you liked it. Cheers
That was sweet. I rather enjoyed it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.
I liked the whole flashback thing. It allowed the reader to get the jist of the trial w/o having to hear every word spoken.
HEY this isnt the end is it?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
No, there is one more chapter. :) Glad you liked it so far.
I am glad Hermione was able to shut off her brain and go with Severus. A lovely note to end the chapter with.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~smile~ Thank you very much.
Great chapter! The flashbacks/reflections really worked. I was so worried there when she returned home alone - and then when I read what happened in court - and it was such a relief to realise her dream wasn't a dream at all.
So good to see that Severus is finally able to open up and admit to having feelings, and not just stick to his pride.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you very much. Yeah, I'm such a tease and try to put some suspense in. LOL Cheers!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you very much. Yeah, I'm such a tease and try to put some suspense in. LOL Cheers!!
When she returned home without him, I had my doubts - what a great way to throw the readers off but what a present suprise for her to wake up with him holding her - I loved it this way. Great idea and more impact to show how he really feels
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much! I'm glad it worked.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks so much! I'm glad it worked.
Well - I am glad that Ginny might be improving - I loved how he held out his hand in invitation - this version of him is so sensual and so wonderful to read
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I liked that as well. Someone said, "That was OOC of him in this story," but I have to disagree. Seemed like a thing to do for someone who was kind of uncertain as to how to go about an encore. Hahaha :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I liked that as well. Someone said, "That was OOC of him in this story," but I have to disagree. Seemed like a thing to do for someone who was kind of uncertain as to how to go about an encore. Hahaha :)
Wow - the sex scene was too hot - I loved the overwhelming need that seemed to poor off of them. It was fantastic... good for both of them - great chapter
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Not good - 1st rule of logic - do not take potential women to wait on you while you go to a brothel for services rendered. Hermione is a smart woman and she will figure that one out and he will be stuck with friendship because that is what she will judge he wants - this is going to be an up and down fic - I love those especially.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Agree! His plan wasn't the brightest. LOL
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Agree! His plan wasn't the brightest. LOL
Well at least they made some peace by the end of the chapter but peace is always tenative. I am glad that Hermione is not falling back to Ron in this one - I really never thought they were good together. Loved this chapter and cannot wait to see what all is going to happen.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yeah, I don't like Hermione and Ron too much either. They just don't do it for me. :(
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yeah, I don't like Hermione and Ron too much either. They just don't do it for me. :(
More fur flying - now even the cats. I love how Hermione is handling all of them - she shows compassion - friendship, but she can still put them in their place. When Severus is mad, he gets mad at the world... poor Hermione has to deal with the backlash but Severus will soon realize that Hermione is no doormat.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying my Hermione.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying my Hermione.
Loved this chapter - it was great throwing in early that Severus had been working on notes all along to help Ginny. I was so sad by the Spinster End visit - I do not think Severus at this point knows Hermione well enough and he is misreading her as she is him. I loved the ending where Harry is going to try to make things right or better.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I thought that would be a nice touch, him already doing what was right. It's how I'd like to think of the real Snape, too. Thanks :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I thought that would be a nice touch, him already doing what was right. It's how I'd like to think of the real Snape, too. Thanks :)
LMAO - this was a great chapter. I loved it when she snapped on him... the piss off was priceless. I was laughing so hard when she tossed his dinner into the trash that I had to slow down reading just to process it all - then she told him to stay in his room if he did not like it and I find myself saying outloud - "Tell him girlfriend!!!"
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Sometimes a girl's got to blow off steam!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! Sometimes a girl's got to blow off steam!
Right then - the glare between Hermione and Snape in the courtroom says that some fur is going to fly. I so love tension between them - it makes a great start to a fic to see where they go. I liked how you had Harry do what was right - even if it was not easy for him. This should be very interesting.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Gotta have the little glare. Hehehe. I always think of Harry as sometimes mucking things up, but trying to do what's right. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Gotta have the little glare. Hehehe. I always think of Harry as sometimes mucking things up, but trying to do what's right. :)
Well - first I am glad this is a Severus lived beyond the final conflict. Second, your fics are always terrific so I am looking forward to this one. Third, the fur is going to fly already in this one - I cannot wait too see which way it lands....
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Glad you started reading the story! whoot
Great chapter, I loved Severus's admition that he made a mistake too....
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks very much.
Aww. that's so sweet. By going to the end of the day and using flashbacks, you really upped the tension of the story and spared us the boring details. I'm so glad you took us all the way to the next morning so we knew that her worries were unneeded.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks, I appreciate the comments. Yeah, I'm not into the long boring part of the trials. Just the goods. Hahhaa My beta tried to get me to leave that part out (the end). I was like nah... not today. :)
I think you did a great job with the reflection/flashback concept. It had a really easy flow to it, that wouldn't cause the reader any confusion. That is a difficult task to accomplish, and you did it gracefully. Fantastic update! ~*
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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks. I'd hoped it would work. ~grin~
yay! another chapter! i was just thinking about this story on the weekend, and wondering when we would get more, and then here it was! and what a meaty chapter, full of emotional highs and lows. i was so happy that hermione turned out to have jumped the gun with her assumption that it was over, even though i totally understand why she would think that. and i loved that scene at the end, when he has come back, and says the line about how there's something between them and he's not ready to give up on it. the whole scene really, i thought struck such a nice chord. and the flashbacks worked very well, so i'm glad you made that choice.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you vey much. I appreciate the comments. It's always nice to know when something turns out as I'd hoped. :)