New Chapter for Becoming Whole
Becoming Whole
Southern_Witch_69377 Reviews | 6.21/10 (377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )
Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.
Start ReadingChapters (11)
About Southern_Witch_69
Author
Southern_Witch_69
Member Since 2005 | 144 Stories | Favorited by 1,103 | 2,209 Reviews Written | 5,450 Review Responses
I adore the world of HP.
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
Reviews for Becoming Whole
Harry still has a bit of growing up to do, it seems. Poor Hermione, this time it really wasn't her fault - and they were getting on so well (relatively speaking at least) with Severus, too!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
A little. There's a reason he want to Rita. I'll reveal that in the next one. Things will get better for Hermione and Severus soon. :) More progress coming up. Teehee
Still really enjoying this! Snarky Snape and Harrassed Hermione.....hoho.....this is shaping up well. Keep up the excellent work...please?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you! :) More up soon
Still really enjoying this! Snarky Snape and Harrassed Hermione.....hoho.....this is shaping up well. Keep up the excellent work...please?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~grins again~
Awe, maybe they just need a time out living so closely together and all. It's just stress, right?And Harry needs to get his head straight and listen - actually listen to Hermione more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Nod. Stress. Tension. Bwahahaha. More up soon.
Oh, poor Hermione. Snape probably feels like his pride is all he has left, and they've bruised it. Of course things just couldn't go smoothly once they've introduced a physical element -- which was very well done, too.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
That's very true, poor Snape. :) I'll have more up soon. Thank you.
South indeed. Well, they are difficult personalities. And I can't believe Harry would do THAT. That was fairly ridiculous. But really, I don't believe Hermione sees Snape as a project.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Too right. There's more to Harry's story. I'll reveal that in the next chapter. And, no, she doesn't and will have to "prove" it. Hehehe
Typical Snape attitude - wouldn't expect anything less...Harry was doing what he thought was the best way - although it may have been a wrong turn, he did wanted to help and that counts. Poor Hermione she always ends up upset - she really deserve so much more *hint* ahem... Looking forward to more!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~hint taken~ Bwahahahah. Thanks! Yeah, Harry did mean well, and there's more to that story. :)
Poor Harry, he really put his foot in his mouth. Severus may not like the method, but Harry is probably right about the howlers. LOLO things are quite interesting.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Indeed! :) Hehehe Thank you.
she' mad as hell and she's not going put up with it anymore! thanks for the update. looking forward to further developements
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thank you. The next chapter should be up tomorrow. Cheers! I appreciate the comments. :)
What a great story not too angsty and just the right length! Thanks ~ dee
oh my I love this chapter I have read it three times!!! Good for her,sometimes a timid Hermione is good,but not in this story!
I like the moment when she snaps! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
~grin~ Thanks. :)
Will the DEs have some sort of a social club? You know so they can gripe about their assignments? ((snicker))
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Bwahahaha. G ood idea. I shall have to make a reference to this. Teehee
He can't keep his mouth shut. He's Snape! He's certainly giving her the same look he gives the House Elves when he's eating at Hogwarts. So cranky all the time, he doesn't know how to not be. Not that he has a reason not to be cranky yet. She is awfully immature, isn't she? Growing up will be entertaining on all fronts.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Hahaha! I'm snickering here.I asked my beta if she thought Hermione to be immature b/c I figured at least one person would say that she was (not everyone sees things the way I do), but she assured me that, no, even a woman of 38 would toss his shit into the dustbin (lol, self included. I'm 32) if he treated her that way.I think he's being a right prick, and a person can only take so much from someone before exploding. Sure, he's got a right to be bitter, but I think he's laying it on a bit too much in her direction. Tunes will change. They've both got things to learn and think about.Thanks for reading.
Response from Shiverrus (Reviewer)
By immature, I meant that you seem to have accurately kept Hermione's character as someone who believes quite strongly that she knows what is best for others and should try to make it happen. And seems surprised when they don't see it the same way she does. I may be projecting my own view of her personality here.
I'm looking forard to more. (And I was impressed that she threw his shit into the dustbin)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
He's impressed, too. Bwahahaha! Oh, I was thinking immature to mean childish (kind of like a little stomping foot brat). She does think she knows what's best always. LOL. The good thing is that she's going to better understand the situation soon, and then, they will be able to move forward and become friends and maybe more (definitely more hehe).
It goes without saying that Snape and Hermione are going to be a delight to watch -- but I personally am fascinated by the potential of Grimmauld Place. Whoa, that's unexpected! Can't wait for more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! :)
Brilliant story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! More up soon.
Ah, yes, Severus is being quite ungrateful. But then, in his place, I think I'd feel the immediate Wizarding World was exhibiting overwhelming ingratitude to me! He's not one to suffer fools gladly, or for that matter, to suffer in silence. But he really does need to calm down and try to find a cure for Ginny, before Hermione tells him he's not worth his keep and to shift it back to Azkaban!
Another good chapter, Southern.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Yeah, he's being a little too mean to her. She thinks she's doing something great for him and the others, and she's not truly taking his feelings into consideration, but she will realize what he must be feeling soon. On the other hand, he's going to realize what a prick he's being to her as well. :)
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the process Snape and Hermione, et al, will have to go through to find a workable relationship.Not to mention some kinder sentiments toward one another.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks! :) More up soon.
I can see both of them having a point... although I do think Snape's taking his frustration out on the wrong person (even if it was Hermione's idea), but then again, it's not like he has a chance to take it out on anyone else either. Perhaps going hungry will help adjust his attitude somewhat though!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
I agree with you. I don't blame him too much. I mean, he's not really free. LOL However, he's being a bit cruel to her, isn't he? More up soon!
alright hermione....yeah girl power
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Love your username! :)
HA ha ha ha! Snape so deserved having his dinner dumped! Anyone in the household that thinks they can do better are welcome to feed themselves. I've done the same as Hermione and I applaud her actions. The cook needs to be appreciated! Pity the fool that doesn't.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Uhhuh, I'm thinking he'll be cooking up his own food soon. :) Thanks!
LOL! Pure greatness! I loved the end. Hermione will kick Snape´s ass. That annoying man hasn´t got a chance against her. :D
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
LOL Thanks for reading. :)
Thank you so much for the update!!! I loved the way you had Hermione explode at the end. While I can understand Severus bitterness for being held "captive" while he rigthfully should have his full freedom, he is behaving like a child, placing the blame on the wrong person and is so rude one want to jump into the story and smack his head! Go Hermione!!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
He's definitely being a bit rude--even if somewhat justified. Things will clear up before long. ~Grin~
Yipes! Your Severus certainly exceeds expectations in more ways than one. I'm intrigued.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks for reading. I'll have more up soon. :)
Unlike others who reviewed I do not think of Snape as a little asshole here nor do I think he's in the wrong to be honest. I mean I have no idea how you will make this story evolve, but let's face it, all our little preferences aside - he has every right to be an asshole, ie, they did just get him a new master and who cares about the rest. I would be even worse if I were him, they are certainly not doing this for any real noble reason.
After all, they could have asked for his help, after he was released considering everything he'd done. This is the crux of it really.
Hermy here is obviously a kid, at least you are writing her that way, cause honestly, it is not so difficult to understand Snape's point of view. Boys, well they're boys although Ron does pass off as a more mature one, which I like, I am sick of immature prick Ron stories.
I like how you've started it, and am looking forward to the rest, to see which direction you'll take.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)
Thanks, I'm happy you're liking it so far. I definitely agree that Snape has a right to be bitter and frustrated. I do think he shouldn't really strike out so much at Hermione, but the situation has got to be annoying for him. I think they'll come to realize that soon enough. :) More up soon!