Chapter Twenty-four
Chapter 24 of 28
kodiakRespected psychiatrist Samuel Crane has a comfortable life and a firm hold on his own sanity. Can he maintain that hold when his past comes knocking on his door? Includes characters living under assumed names and HBP spoilers.
ReviewedA/N: This chapter was made possible through the kind help of excessivelyperky. The spelling is better as a result, and any mistakes that remain are entirely my own.
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Chapter twenty-four
Samuel's entire world was focused in his left ear, defined by the pop and hiss of static interrupted by a distant tinny ring. Then his breath caught in his throat as a far-away voice whispered his name like a plea. "Samuel?"
"John." Just as plaintive, just as desperate. "Merlin."
"I was worried all night when you didn't call." The relief in John's voice soothed Samuel's soul until he realized that he wasn't truly a free man.
"About that..."
"Bloody hell, what's gone wrong?"
Samuel found a warm satisfaction in telling of Yaxley's clumsy machinations in the idiot's bid for dominance. He savored the memory of the man's easy acceptance of the bait. He decided that John didn't need to know that the struggle took a violently physical turn, nor that the boy wonder's sidekick had almost tipped his hand. Before John could ask, he distracted the man with a careful description of Potter's mastery of politics and brilliance in the courtroom.
He tried to avoid scoffing or snorting when John expressed real pride in the boy's success, but before he could turn the topic, John was pressing for details of Samuel's own performance. He didn't concern himself with the number of follow up questions that John asked about each of them (two about Potter and four about Samuel), nor the fact that he could hear John smiling as he offered congratulations on outwitting the move to charge him again as a Death Eater. The sweetest moment was sharing the shocked silence in the chamber, when he threatened to reveal the greedy and the gullible who had bent to bribery, the true fear in the eyes of weak men in power. Fear of him and what he knew. All that remained to tell was Moody's treachery, but that made him think of John's own subterfuge.
"Clever charm you placed on Potter, John. " It would have been more satisfying had he not seen Mrs. Potter fawning all over her husband's phantom hurts. Of course, Kingsley claimed that the link was responsible for summoning help so quickly--Samuel thought, unkindly, that he wouldn't like to know how long it would have taken slow help to arrive.
The man was deeply upset by hearing of that betrayal, and John didn't deserve his anger, so he tried to allay his fear. "Shacklebolt tells me I have nothing to worry about when he challenges the charges tomorrow."
"Kingsley's a smart man, Samuel. You should listen to him." John's conviction drew Samuel's thoughts to his last conversation with the Minister of Magic.
He'd stopped the Minister on his way out of Hogwarts. Even as he turned, Kingsley was trying to tuck that bloody bottle of potion into his robes. Samuel cursed himself for a fool as words he'd sworn he wouldn't speak slid smoothly past his lips. "I gave you two days warning on your house. I told you about Thicknesse. All I've asked until now is to be left alone. I need to go home. Please."
"I do understand the risk you took in returning. I promise you, I will sway them to our way of thinking. I just need a little more time," the Minister assured him.
"Kingsley, look at the moon. I'm almost out of time."
Samuel sighed as he admitted, "I would have more faith in him if I had not seen Slughorn slipping him a vial of Felix Felicis."
"Maybe it only looked like--"
"John."
"Sorry. What about Minerva?"
"That old bat will never forgive me, and perhaps she shouldn't. Albus was like a father to her, and I did escape the worst of the fighting."
"And if you'd died in June, no one would have guessed that Penelope Clearwater was selling us out, one at a time, to Bellatrix." John's words were becoming increasingly clipped as he leveled his anger at the wizarding world at large.
"John, reason doesn't factor into the grieving process. " Samuel cringed as he realized that he'd also given Minerva a piece of his mind.
"...strange that no one, not even Albus, wondered what it cost me to kill my friend," Samuel had calmly intoned before turning his back on the Headmistress.
"Are you still there, Samuel?"
"I'm still here, sitting on the floor of the Shrieking Shack, hoping they don't think to look here so they can drag me back to that thrice damned infirmary." He knew he'd made a grave error before he'd even closed his mouth.
"Twenty-four hours in the hospital wing?" John was clearly alarmed. "What aren't you telling me, Samuel?"
He thought of the uncomfortable conversation while Kingsley tried to asses his frame of mind, of how he'd chastised the man for over-dramatizing the situation, and of how he'd fled to the relative safety of Slughorn's dungeon lab, the healing that brewing had offered his wounded pride and shattered nerves. The tremor in his hand was hardly noticeable after a day of slicing and simmering.
"Pomfrey's just determined to punish me for escaping her clutches this afternoon. They seem to forget that I have more experience evaluating Acute Stress Disorder than all of them combined."
Of course, John could cut to the bleeding heart of the matter. "What did Jack have to say?"
"You would be over here by the first available Portkey, if I had called Jack before calling you. I know which side of my bread is buttered, John."
There was a terrifying moment of silence. Then a resigned sigh. "Samuel, out of concern for you, I'm putting you on notice. I won't be your enabler." Another pause. This time there was the faintest sound of rustling papers. "I'm looking through your office. You'd better pray that you can reach Jack before I find the number..."
"You win, I'll call him now. Just do me a favor and tell Troy--"
"I can't tell him anything if he keeps hanging up whenever I answer."
Samuel was shocked by that thought. "That's completely cowardly and rude. Troy wouldn't do that."
"Well, it has happened five times, and you've only been away for two days." John sounded so certain that Samuel took a few moments to ponder an appropriate threat that would marshal the brat back to civilized behavior. "Tell Kingsley to call me if his liquid luck runs out."
"Are you certain they won't throw you in a holding cell to wait out the full moon?"
"You're worth at least a week in lock-up, if it comes to that. Besides, this is more my fault than yours. Now I wish I'd been more interested in why she would betray us."
Samuel held his breath for a moment before admitting, "I never concerned myself with her motivation. Would a good reason save the Creeveys, or Granger's parents..."
"I suppose not. There is still the issue of how she gathered her information. I do hope that we can save Percy and Arthur the embarrassment of full disclosure."
"That was harsh, John. More in character for me than you."
"I already warned Harry, I have claws, every day of the month, if I need them. Don't threaten my--" Oh, Merlin, don't say it. "Someone I care about."
"I miss you too, Keats." He thought of the difference it made, having just one person believe the best of him. Maybe he could make that difference...
"Don't worry about the Wolfsbane. Bill helped me reinforce the root cellar under the barn. It will hold an angry werewolf."
"There is still time. I'll be home soon."
With the battery warning light flashing, Samuel called through to New York. "Jack, I think I need your help... I'm looking for the name of a good attorney in California... Right, family law..."
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28 Reviews | 5.46/10 Average
well done! i thought that story was brilliant!
I finally got caught up on all the chapters I missed reading. Still a strong story. I look forward to your next submission, JoAnne
It's not often that one comes across such a well written slash Remus/Severus story. This one is full of intriguing characterization, great story telling, and a pace that's neither too fast nor too slow. It certainly kept my attention all the way from the first to last chapter. I should have been reviewing the previous chapters as well, but since I only started to read it this evening, the story just gripped me too much to have me write a review.
So I'll just give you loads of kuddos and a big compliment for writing such a fantastic story.
(One nitpicky: Chapter 17: Much later, after the moon had set and the light was extigushed with a whisper,...) should that have been 'extinguished'?
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for catching that. I'm so flattered that you wanted to read straight through, and I'm glad that you like it so far.
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
I know I should have been reviewing each chapter as I read it but I was enjoying the story too much to stop. I'm not usually into slash fics as most of them tht I've encountered are PWP/slash for slash's sake but in this tale there is so much more. The characterizations, the plot, the relationships (Remus being the Alpha male really intrigues me as so many write him as a subordinate), the mysteries, the hints at what was in the past, it all comes together in something much greater than the arithmetical sum of its parts. I look forward to reading more. Excellent writing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm writing this because it literally won't leave me alone, but feedback truly makes the process much more meaningful.
More to come soon, I promise!
Kodiak
Oh my life's little ups and downs. Does this mean John got the job? Love the way it is moving along. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Poor John... I'm sure he didn't want to 'fall off the wagon'. The next chapter will offer more clarity sbout the job, but yes, it's John's.
Thanks for you thoughts... more coming soon.
Kodiak
"Stuffy much?" "Are you offering a reward for that missing verb?" "Touche. I'll think about it." And she gave a tiny smile.
Brilliant!!!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks, so much.Now I'm blushing. I need to give props to Annie and Pattie who have waded through my less polished drafts and helped me keep each charater on track.Thanks again for sharing your thoughts. Reviews feed the Muse, and mine was getting hungry.Love from Montana,Kodiak
Dr. Crane? As in, the Scarecrow? As in, Cillian Murphy? Hehe. Sorry, I loves me some CM, and everything seems like it links back to him. And Snape. *squee*
Very interesting story!! I really enjoy it. Your writing is very clear and concise, and that's so refreshing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Hi
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
,Thanks for your kind thoughts. I'll have to check out Cillian Murphy (I must admit that my little brain took such a twisted path before arriving at the alias 'Samuel Crane' that I really couldn't pinpoint where it came from).Thanks again for reading!Kodiak
WAIT but who was the mole? You can't just start that and then leave it there. That's just cruel!Good couple of chapters. Thanks so much. Still having a great ride. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm so sorry... that little tid-bit is tied-up in Moody's story. And I'm not quite ready to dig into that just yet. I will make certain that I don't leave that information on the cutting room floor, okay? *ducks for cover*But I will get Chapter Eight up as soon as I can (darn commas).Love from Montana,Kodiak
Interesting chapter, left me wanting more!
Enthralling! Have just read all 25 chapters..............I'm hooked!
Complex plot, brilliant character portrayals - more please.
I'm am enjoying the story very much. Such complexity in characters!
Thanks for the very different yet enjoyable story. I really liked it hugely. Well done.
This is engaging! To just see little bits of their lives before is intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. The thought of the greasy git being a psychiatrist had me chuckling at first but it really works!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for taking the time to review. It does mean a lot to me to hear the good, the bad, and the could'a been better from readers.
Just for you, I'll give Chapter Twenty a last edit, and send it in.
Love from (Smokey) Montana,
Kodiak
Just getting caught up on the last few chapters. Still going strong I am glad to see. Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm putting chapter thirteen in queue today. Hopefully, it will be ready to post with only minor revisions.
Enjoy!
Kodiak
I've been reading this and it's quite interesting. It's well written and while at first confusing, it opens up to reveal more each chapter. Keep on it!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for staying with me. It is my evil plan to lure you along with breadcrumbs from their past. More will be shared in the next chapter.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts. They really do feed the muse!
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
Very nice so far. I usually don't like stories that are set outside the ususal book settings but this one grabbed me. You write well and I look forward to seeing what happens with resolving the past and present for all our known characters. I also like your new characters. Thanks for sharing. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for your kind words. It's nice to hear what readers are thinking. I knew that I was taking a risk with the setting and the aliases, but this story litterally won't leave me alone. I'm going to put chapter six in queue today, hopefully it will be ready to post in a few days.Cheers! Kodiak
this was so cool. so cool. I've not read snape/lupin before, and I have to say, you fleshed out the story so well I don't know if I want to read any more of this pairing ever again because I can't imagine anyone else doing anywhere near as good a job as you did. I love complexity, I love mystery, I LOVE they way you wrapped this story up (total surprise to me! i didn't think of greyback! and revenge, omg...). it is all so well done. fantastic. and I love the way you set the story in montana. creative, fresh, and still relevant...I'm from california so I am always interested in seeing a stateside story done well :) keep up the excellent work!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you for your kind words. It makes me very happy to hear that my tale resonated with someone else. Even though they aren't really my characters they've set up housekeeping in my heart and bringing this story to completion has been bittersweet. I'm pleased with the way it turned out but in a sence I already miss it, so you may see follow up stories.Kodiak
this is so multi-layered. you are both brilliant and well-read.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Awww, thanks. I'm blushing.
I love your backstory. love it. funny, I never even considered that dumbledore would give the school vacation when voldemort was defeated for the first time. silly me.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Why thank you. I figured that no one would go to class anyway so why not?K
this is so good. so complex.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you. Potions Masters are like onions, IMHO.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
but you must NOT cut the onions with a dagger...
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
*Rolling on the floor and gasping for air*
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
honestly, that was one of my favorite scenes, when he was chopping the onions and John refers to the knife as Crane's Binky. I couldn't stop giggling. it was just ridiculously funny.
I really, really like what you've done with this story, and these characters. it's very intriguing. almost like a mystery novel, trying to divine who each of these people were to each other 5 years previously. I thought it was hilarious that crane likes "green eggs and ham"--how appropriate!! and I really like the understatement in the discussion about "intent".
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think of Potomac. Intent felt like the dinosaur in the living room with those two.Hope you enjoy the rest of Potomac as much I've enjoied writing it.Kodiak
Very enjoyable story. I like your take on the characters, flaws and all. I know there was a large time gap between the last few chapters, so sorry if I can't remember exactly, but do we know what happened to Harry and Draco? I remember Harry going West to help a high profile client of Samuel's, but is he still there? And I know Draco left under less than ideal circumstances -- did he and Samuel make up? I hope so, but some hurts take a long time to heal. Thanks for sharing your special writing gift. I look forward to your next submission. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and for reading the conclusion after the long delay.I am considering telling about Draco and perhaps Harry in a follow up story. I just need to lay out the plot and iron out a few kinks.I hope I can tempt you to read it when it's ready for posting.Kodiak
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story.