Chapter Twenty-two
Chapter 22 of 28
kodiakRespected psychiatrist Samuel Crane has a comfortable life and a firm hold on his own sanity. Can he maintain that hold when his past comes knocking on his door? Includes characters living under assumed names and HBP spoilers.
ReviewedA/N: I'm going to post an extra warning. This chapter will contain violence and mention of past violence. I worked very hard to keep it mild, but if you find the thought of Severus (Samuel) being hurt, you'll want to skip the next two chapters.
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Chapter Twenty-two
Yaxley glared through the bars at Samuel before saying, "Heard you were dead." The tone was flat, matching the lifeless eyes.
"Shut up, both of you." Potter shifted his wand to cover Yaxley. "Lay on the floor, hands behind your head." When the man complied, Samuel was jostled into the cell. Potter raised his wand to release the shackles as Samuel decided a change of tactics was necessary. He shook his head quickly.
"Going to leave me in irons, Potter, like the coward that you are?" The half-wit seemed to understand because not only did he leave the bindings in place, Samuel was instantly doused in slime. Yaxley crowed at Samuel's misfortune until Potter hexed him as well. Then they were alone. How do you break a Death Eater?
Understand his motivation. Staring at the man, it was clear. Macnair's deviant appetites aside, Yaxley was not the backbone of the operation. He was a little man craving power and authority.
Play to his weakness. Unable to fight back with his hands bound, Samuel was not surprised by the kick. Ribs that were already bruised screamed in agony as he gasped again for breath. He allowed himself one glance through the bars at Ron Weasley's stark white face and trembling wand hand. The barest shake of his head kept Weasley from intervening, but it looked to cost the boy greatly. Gryffindor fools. Every advantage comes at a price.
Destroy his security. "Big man, Ruben? Remember that I know things. Things you'd rather I not share." Yaxley thought for a moment, then crashed his knuckles into Samuel's ear. The room was blindingly white for several heartbeats until the pain receded. Weasley was pointing his wand again. The stupid fool was going to foil the ruse. "Weasley. Run along and tell Potter that I think I'll take his deal. Yaxley's hardly worth life in Azkaban."
Samuel watched Yaxley's courage falter as Weasley walked away. "Think you're the big man, then? Gonna sell me down the river?"
Re-define the relationship. "I believe I'll simply sell you out, and clearly they want you badly enough that I can buy myself a few concessions." Yaxley looked confused. Not the sharpest tool in the barn. "You don't think I can cut a deal with what I know about you?"
"They want you too badly for killing their 'Guard-guy.'" Vanguard? Yaxley has been swimming in some new circles.
"True, they want me to suffer for... that, but I think grabbing Weasley's girlfriend makes them hate you even more. What did you want with the girl, anyway?" Samuel stared at Yaxley, waiting for the man to spill what he needed to know.
After a moment, Yaxley looked away, dismissing the threat. "You wouldn't turn on me. We're on the same side."
"That didn't save Clearwater."
The fool's mouth fell open. Clearly, they hadn't guessed at his deception. "That was you? What'd that bint ever do to you?"
Cultivate the subject's dependence. Now he had currency. He needed for Yaxley to believe he'd gained the upper hand. "I refuse to shelter the weak. Why should I believe that you can offer protection from anyone?"
Yaxley hinted at several former colleagues in Azkaban, holding the tacit promise of protection from harm. Samuel continued to bait him, sure that man would slip soon and tell him something that would help Amanda.
After several rounds with no success, he heard boots on the stone floor. Almost out of time, he pressed the last button. "Takes a lot of courage to grab a little girl."
"You don't get it, Snape. We were after the traitor."
"What? You aren't making any sense." The steps were louder in the corridor. Just a little more time... please. No one heard his internal plea because, only moments later, the Aurors stood outside the cell. Weasley grabbed Samuel, leaving Yaxley to Moody's tender mercies. He didn't have to feign the anger as he tried for one more glimpse of Yaxley as he was shoved down the hall.
"Where's Potter? Couldn't you wait one more minute? I needed to know what he meant about 'the traitor'." Samuel scowled through his bruises.
Weasley stepped back and pointed his wand at Samuel's face. He ignored the question about Potter. The brat likely needs help pinning medals on his robes. "Wasn't going to let him hit you any more. Let's heal those up." Samuel fought against his own irrational fear. Weasley's wand work was clearly improved from his school years. His ribs set nicely, and the pain and swelling left his face. He found he could easily keep pace with Weasley down the long hall to Potter's office.
He was pleasantly surprised to find his own shoes and his robes folded neatly on a chair. Samuel snatched a framed photo off Potter's desk in a bid to level the playing field. Ginny Weas--Potter, blew kisses toward her husband before dragging him out of the frame. Samuel grimaced. While he was distracted, Potter stepped closer to look at Samuel's face. "Good job, Ron, but you missed the ear." Potter incanted his own healing charm before handing eleven inches of willow to a very irate Samuel.
"Give me that. I'm not a baby, and I can decide what needs healing. Merlin!" Fortunately they left him to his own grooming, and soon he was slipping into Courtroom One right behind Potter. The hearing itself was the expected quibbling over facts, Yaxley trying to argue that he was not a Death Eater, Potter dredging up every random reference he could find tying Yaxley to other convicted Death Eaters. The problem was, there simply wasn't any proof.
Last step: leave the subject adrift. With a quick glance around Weasley's body, Samuel snarled at the relaxed smirk on Yaxley's face. His hand twitched against his will. Was this how Potter felt when he glimpsed the Golden Snitch through hazy light across the pitch? He cleared his throat and scraped his chair as he stood, interrupting Potter mid-sentence. "That's fine, Mr. Potter. You had very little to work with." Samuel paused to savor Yaxley's condescending smirk, and an ancient wizard in the front row filled the vacuum.
"If that's all you have to offer, drop the charges, my boy. You haven't proven a thing."
"Forgive me, but I said that was all that Mr. Potter had to work with. I, however, have much more evidence to offer."
"Convenient that you show up now, Snape," Moody barked angrily.
"Mr. Potter and Remus Lupin asked for my help. Was I to turn them away, Alastor? But let's turn back to the matter at hand. Ruben Yaxley, what was the occasion of our first acquaintance?" Samuel paused again, but held a hand up, keeping the entire Wizengamot silent, waiting for Yaxley's answer. The man's eyes flashed pure hatred, but Yaxley said nothing. "That's fine, Ruben, because I am also capable of telling these people that we met at a gathering of Death Eaters, in the presence of Voldemort." He paused again, this time to allow the frantic whispers to die down, "Yes, Voldemort, we can all say his name. And that very night, Ruben, you showed your Mark to me, right before I received my own."
The little wizard was speaking again. "And are you here to answer to the matter of your own Mark, Severus Snape?"
"That matter has already been addressed and closed by this body, twenty-two years ago. My acquittal remains a binding decision. It cannot be reversed."
"And the murder of Albus Dumbledore?" Moody couldn't keep his eye on the Snitch, apparently.
"The particulars of that matter may be discussed with Headmaster Dumbledore's portrait at your leisure, Alastor, but the terms of my appearance here today include amnesty on all charges relating to his death, and all actions taken at his direction. Again, the agreement is binding. For the matter of Ruben Yaxley's crimes, shall I begin by listing the Ministry officials that he was blackmailing in the summer of nineteen-ninety-four?" The room was in an uproar, but Samuel barely heard. His eyes were locked with Yaxley's as their fire dimmed, and the Death Eater slumped until only the shackles on the chair held him up. Checkmate.
The decision took only minutes, and then Samuel stared at the bastard's bent head as Yaxley was sentenced to Azkaban. There was a moment of relieved silence in Courtroom One before Moody's voice carried throughout the chamber. "Severus Snape, you are charged with the murder of Penelope Clearwater."
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28 Reviews | 5.46/10 Average
well done! i thought that story was brilliant!
I finally got caught up on all the chapters I missed reading. Still a strong story. I look forward to your next submission, JoAnne
It's not often that one comes across such a well written slash Remus/Severus story. This one is full of intriguing characterization, great story telling, and a pace that's neither too fast nor too slow. It certainly kept my attention all the way from the first to last chapter. I should have been reviewing the previous chapters as well, but since I only started to read it this evening, the story just gripped me too much to have me write a review.
So I'll just give you loads of kuddos and a big compliment for writing such a fantastic story.
(One nitpicky: Chapter 17: Much later, after the moon had set and the light was extigushed with a whisper,...) should that have been 'extinguished'?
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for catching that. I'm so flattered that you wanted to read straight through, and I'm glad that you like it so far.
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
I know I should have been reviewing each chapter as I read it but I was enjoying the story too much to stop. I'm not usually into slash fics as most of them tht I've encountered are PWP/slash for slash's sake but in this tale there is so much more. The characterizations, the plot, the relationships (Remus being the Alpha male really intrigues me as so many write him as a subordinate), the mysteries, the hints at what was in the past, it all comes together in something much greater than the arithmetical sum of its parts. I look forward to reading more. Excellent writing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm writing this because it literally won't leave me alone, but feedback truly makes the process much more meaningful.
More to come soon, I promise!
Kodiak
Oh my life's little ups and downs. Does this mean John got the job? Love the way it is moving along. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Poor John... I'm sure he didn't want to 'fall off the wagon'. The next chapter will offer more clarity sbout the job, but yes, it's John's.
Thanks for you thoughts... more coming soon.
Kodiak
"Stuffy much?" "Are you offering a reward for that missing verb?" "Touche. I'll think about it." And she gave a tiny smile.
Brilliant!!!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks, so much.Now I'm blushing. I need to give props to Annie and Pattie who have waded through my less polished drafts and helped me keep each charater on track.Thanks again for sharing your thoughts. Reviews feed the Muse, and mine was getting hungry.Love from Montana,Kodiak
Dr. Crane? As in, the Scarecrow? As in, Cillian Murphy? Hehe. Sorry, I loves me some CM, and everything seems like it links back to him. And Snape. *squee*
Very interesting story!! I really enjoy it. Your writing is very clear and concise, and that's so refreshing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Hi
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
,Thanks for your kind thoughts. I'll have to check out Cillian Murphy (I must admit that my little brain took such a twisted path before arriving at the alias 'Samuel Crane' that I really couldn't pinpoint where it came from).Thanks again for reading!Kodiak
WAIT but who was the mole? You can't just start that and then leave it there. That's just cruel!Good couple of chapters. Thanks so much. Still having a great ride. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm so sorry... that little tid-bit is tied-up in Moody's story. And I'm not quite ready to dig into that just yet. I will make certain that I don't leave that information on the cutting room floor, okay? *ducks for cover*But I will get Chapter Eight up as soon as I can (darn commas).Love from Montana,Kodiak
Interesting chapter, left me wanting more!
Enthralling! Have just read all 25 chapters..............I'm hooked!
Complex plot, brilliant character portrayals - more please.
I'm am enjoying the story very much. Such complexity in characters!
Thanks for the very different yet enjoyable story. I really liked it hugely. Well done.
This is engaging! To just see little bits of their lives before is intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. The thought of the greasy git being a psychiatrist had me chuckling at first but it really works!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for taking the time to review. It does mean a lot to me to hear the good, the bad, and the could'a been better from readers.
Just for you, I'll give Chapter Twenty a last edit, and send it in.
Love from (Smokey) Montana,
Kodiak
Just getting caught up on the last few chapters. Still going strong I am glad to see. Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm putting chapter thirteen in queue today. Hopefully, it will be ready to post with only minor revisions.
Enjoy!
Kodiak
I've been reading this and it's quite interesting. It's well written and while at first confusing, it opens up to reveal more each chapter. Keep on it!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for staying with me. It is my evil plan to lure you along with breadcrumbs from their past. More will be shared in the next chapter.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts. They really do feed the muse!
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
Very nice so far. I usually don't like stories that are set outside the ususal book settings but this one grabbed me. You write well and I look forward to seeing what happens with resolving the past and present for all our known characters. I also like your new characters. Thanks for sharing. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for your kind words. It's nice to hear what readers are thinking. I knew that I was taking a risk with the setting and the aliases, but this story litterally won't leave me alone. I'm going to put chapter six in queue today, hopefully it will be ready to post in a few days.Cheers! Kodiak
this was so cool. so cool. I've not read snape/lupin before, and I have to say, you fleshed out the story so well I don't know if I want to read any more of this pairing ever again because I can't imagine anyone else doing anywhere near as good a job as you did. I love complexity, I love mystery, I LOVE they way you wrapped this story up (total surprise to me! i didn't think of greyback! and revenge, omg...). it is all so well done. fantastic. and I love the way you set the story in montana. creative, fresh, and still relevant...I'm from california so I am always interested in seeing a stateside story done well :) keep up the excellent work!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you for your kind words. It makes me very happy to hear that my tale resonated with someone else. Even though they aren't really my characters they've set up housekeeping in my heart and bringing this story to completion has been bittersweet. I'm pleased with the way it turned out but in a sence I already miss it, so you may see follow up stories.Kodiak
this is so multi-layered. you are both brilliant and well-read.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Awww, thanks. I'm blushing.
I love your backstory. love it. funny, I never even considered that dumbledore would give the school vacation when voldemort was defeated for the first time. silly me.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Why thank you. I figured that no one would go to class anyway so why not?K
this is so good. so complex.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you. Potions Masters are like onions, IMHO.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
but you must NOT cut the onions with a dagger...
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
*Rolling on the floor and gasping for air*
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
honestly, that was one of my favorite scenes, when he was chopping the onions and John refers to the knife as Crane's Binky. I couldn't stop giggling. it was just ridiculously funny.
I really, really like what you've done with this story, and these characters. it's very intriguing. almost like a mystery novel, trying to divine who each of these people were to each other 5 years previously. I thought it was hilarious that crane likes "green eggs and ham"--how appropriate!! and I really like the understatement in the discussion about "intent".
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think of Potomac. Intent felt like the dinosaur in the living room with those two.Hope you enjoy the rest of Potomac as much I've enjoied writing it.Kodiak
Very enjoyable story. I like your take on the characters, flaws and all. I know there was a large time gap between the last few chapters, so sorry if I can't remember exactly, but do we know what happened to Harry and Draco? I remember Harry going West to help a high profile client of Samuel's, but is he still there? And I know Draco left under less than ideal circumstances -- did he and Samuel make up? I hope so, but some hurts take a long time to heal. Thanks for sharing your special writing gift. I look forward to your next submission. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and for reading the conclusion after the long delay.I am considering telling about Draco and perhaps Harry in a follow up story. I just need to lay out the plot and iron out a few kinks.I hope I can tempt you to read it when it's ready for posting.Kodiak
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story.