Chapter Twenty-eight
Chapter 28 of 28
kodiakRespected psychiatrist Samuel Crane has a comfortable life and a firm hold on his own sanity. Can he maintain that hold when his past comes knocking on his door? Includes characters living under assumed names and HBP spoilers.
ReviewedChapter Twenty-eight
Fenrir: wolf of the Fin, bringer of Ragnarök, the one who would devour Odin, the one who would devour the sun. "I'm a bloody fool!" he cursed himself as he ran through the night. Amanda had meant Fenrir in a more literal sense, though the werewolf himself liked to think he really was the Norse wolf god reborn.
The only sound Samuel could make out in the darkening night was the sound of his own feet on the gravel. The house and barn were dark, and the moon’s light was glowing over the tops of the mountains. The full moon itself would rise any second.
A moment of intense relief overtook his heart as John stepped out of the barn and waved to Samuel in the gloom. It was fine. He’d merely panicked at the name Amanda had spoken. They would go inside and John would laugh heartily at Samuel’s silliness.
Then John crumpled as the shadow stepped around the corner and swung a plank of rotting wood into the back of the man’s head.
“Greyback,” Samuel whispered as he fumbled for his phone. He had to summon help. Alone, he was no match for the violent werewolf. Greyback seemed to know that too, as he charged at Samuel with feral ferocity, knocking him onto his back with the force of the blow and sending the phone flying out of his hand.
As he lay on the ground, reminding his lungs how to draw in air, it all began to fall into place. Nymphadora had not been the target at all. She had merely been an easy way for Greyback to punish Remus, his errant pup. Hermione had been in the wrong place at the wrong time, but with her death the werewolf had successfully flushed Remus from the safety of Hogwarts and slowly hunted his prey in the Muggle world.
When his quarry showed a skill he hadn’t known the man to posses, he used Yaxley and Macnair to call Remus in from the cold. He had known that losing and recovering the girl would bring him home. Remus was human to the core and cared about people. Remus John Lupin would do the honorable thing and try to offer all the help he could. And when he did, all Greyback needed to do was follow him.
Then he ran headlong into the Fidelius Charm protecting Samuel and his new life. He had even tried to smoke them out with the small bunches of blue lupine flowers, but they had missed the threat that was implied and failed to panic as he had hoped they would. They would still have been safe, if John had not ended the charm and let the wolf in the door. He could see every one of their glaring mistakes clearly in the light of the moon as he tried to roll to his feet before either werewolf finished making the piteous sounds of their painful transformation.
He staggered to his feet and rushed toward the feral werewolf, summoning all the dark anger in his soul. Samuel had people he cared for too, people who had no way to defend themselves against a creature they believed lived only in fairy tales. Blade in hand he heard the crunch of shifting bones as he covered the last three feet in a flying leap. He visualized how he would drive the blade in deep enough to hit Greyback’s blackened, twisted heart, even as the hairy arm swung out and batted him away.
The blow ripped like fire through his flesh, and Samuel fell to the ground hard. Snorts from the huge demented wolf rounded behind him as he lifted his body in sickening slow motion. John was out of reach, and Samuel was outmatched. He was making a mad grab for the shiny blade as two things happened almost at once. Greyback staggered once in his forward charge and a large dark shape bounded into the werewolf’s path.
In the game of canine chicken, it was Reggie who prevailed; hackles high and snarling in the moonlight, he forced Greyback to swerve just a few feet in front of Samuel. The sound of the gunfire registered late in Samuel's brain. As the giant werewolf rounded, another shot rang out in the still air. Robert was standing at the corner of the house, shotgun resting on his shoulder. The beast’s angry yellow eyes shifted to Samuel’s nosy annoying friend. He’d had few real friends in his life, to the point he’d expected that he would die alone. Now they were all here, and they would die with him.
John, a crumpled mass of unconscious werewolf, now lay ten feet to his left.
“Reggie,” Samuel commanded in a firm clear voice. “Get John.”
Amazingly the dog obeyed, leaving an open path from the dark creature straight to Samuel. He remembered another werewolf, with glowing eyes, charging him all those years ago. Remus, bringing fear and death as he closed the distance, blurred with Greyback, bringing animal retribution to his rivals. He remembered the deafening roar as Remus collided with the giant stag, how he had been turned aside. Greyback, instead, kept charging.
Another round of buckshot paused the monster in his final stride as Samuel made a last desperate lunge with the tiny silver dagger. Between the ribs and drive upward, stab the silver into its heart. He felt the skin torn from his back, even as warm blood surged over his hand and chest. Samuel watched the light of life dim from Greyback’s eyes even as the world grew dark around him and the pain began to abate.
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Samuel sat in the warm glow of the late afternoon sun, watching Amanda and Ron Weasley take turns tossing a Frisbee for Amanda's companion dog, Reggie. The beast in question applied himself to the occupation of play with the same intensity that he applied to reading Amanda's moods and guiding her back from the dark corners of her mind.
He sipped at the mint lemonade that John had mixed for him and continued reading through the notes that Dr. West had written about the happenings at the clinic. He'd needed a pair of functional hands as his own body began the slow process of mending the torn muscle and nerves from his late night fight with the large alpha wolf. It had nothing to do with anything as sappy as gratitude to the man who had left the clinic at a dead run to tend to his wounds as he lay in a bloody tangle with the cooling body of the beast.
A warm hand tangled in the hair at the base of his neck, and Samuel tipped his chin up to receive the lips that were coming down to meet his own. Success for Samuel Crane was measured in small steps these days; lifting his right hand higher than his shoulder, lifting his left higher than the table, John walking past the liquor aisle in the market with nary a longing glance, and, maybe the best of all, Amanda introducing her boyfriend Ron to the bravest dog in the world.
NOX
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A/N Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read through to the end. Just a small request because you got this far, sign my 'guest book' by clicking that little button that says review and say something as simple as, "Hi."
If you want to tell me where you're from that always makes me smile. Either way, it's been a pleasure. Kodiak
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28 Reviews | 5.46/10 Average
well done! i thought that story was brilliant!
I finally got caught up on all the chapters I missed reading. Still a strong story. I look forward to your next submission, JoAnne
It's not often that one comes across such a well written slash Remus/Severus story. This one is full of intriguing characterization, great story telling, and a pace that's neither too fast nor too slow. It certainly kept my attention all the way from the first to last chapter. I should have been reviewing the previous chapters as well, but since I only started to read it this evening, the story just gripped me too much to have me write a review.
So I'll just give you loads of kuddos and a big compliment for writing such a fantastic story.
(One nitpicky: Chapter 17: Much later, after the moon had set and the light was extigushed with a whisper,...) should that have been 'extinguished'?
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for catching that. I'm so flattered that you wanted to read straight through, and I'm glad that you like it so far.
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
I know I should have been reviewing each chapter as I read it but I was enjoying the story too much to stop. I'm not usually into slash fics as most of them tht I've encountered are PWP/slash for slash's sake but in this tale there is so much more. The characterizations, the plot, the relationships (Remus being the Alpha male really intrigues me as so many write him as a subordinate), the mysteries, the hints at what was in the past, it all comes together in something much greater than the arithmetical sum of its parts. I look forward to reading more. Excellent writing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm writing this because it literally won't leave me alone, but feedback truly makes the process much more meaningful.
More to come soon, I promise!
Kodiak
Oh my life's little ups and downs. Does this mean John got the job? Love the way it is moving along. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Poor John... I'm sure he didn't want to 'fall off the wagon'. The next chapter will offer more clarity sbout the job, but yes, it's John's.
Thanks for you thoughts... more coming soon.
Kodiak
"Stuffy much?" "Are you offering a reward for that missing verb?" "Touche. I'll think about it." And she gave a tiny smile.
Brilliant!!!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks, so much.Now I'm blushing. I need to give props to Annie and Pattie who have waded through my less polished drafts and helped me keep each charater on track.Thanks again for sharing your thoughts. Reviews feed the Muse, and mine was getting hungry.Love from Montana,Kodiak
Dr. Crane? As in, the Scarecrow? As in, Cillian Murphy? Hehe. Sorry, I loves me some CM, and everything seems like it links back to him. And Snape. *squee*
Very interesting story!! I really enjoy it. Your writing is very clear and concise, and that's so refreshing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Hi
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
,Thanks for your kind thoughts. I'll have to check out Cillian Murphy (I must admit that my little brain took such a twisted path before arriving at the alias 'Samuel Crane' that I really couldn't pinpoint where it came from).Thanks again for reading!Kodiak
WAIT but who was the mole? You can't just start that and then leave it there. That's just cruel!Good couple of chapters. Thanks so much. Still having a great ride. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm so sorry... that little tid-bit is tied-up in Moody's story. And I'm not quite ready to dig into that just yet. I will make certain that I don't leave that information on the cutting room floor, okay? *ducks for cover*But I will get Chapter Eight up as soon as I can (darn commas).Love from Montana,Kodiak
Interesting chapter, left me wanting more!
Enthralling! Have just read all 25 chapters..............I'm hooked!
Complex plot, brilliant character portrayals - more please.
I'm am enjoying the story very much. Such complexity in characters!
Thanks for the very different yet enjoyable story. I really liked it hugely. Well done.
This is engaging! To just see little bits of their lives before is intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. The thought of the greasy git being a psychiatrist had me chuckling at first but it really works!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for taking the time to review. It does mean a lot to me to hear the good, the bad, and the could'a been better from readers.
Just for you, I'll give Chapter Twenty a last edit, and send it in.
Love from (Smokey) Montana,
Kodiak
Just getting caught up on the last few chapters. Still going strong I am glad to see. Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm putting chapter thirteen in queue today. Hopefully, it will be ready to post with only minor revisions.
Enjoy!
Kodiak
I've been reading this and it's quite interesting. It's well written and while at first confusing, it opens up to reveal more each chapter. Keep on it!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for staying with me. It is my evil plan to lure you along with breadcrumbs from their past. More will be shared in the next chapter.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts. They really do feed the muse!
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
Very nice so far. I usually don't like stories that are set outside the ususal book settings but this one grabbed me. You write well and I look forward to seeing what happens with resolving the past and present for all our known characters. I also like your new characters. Thanks for sharing. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for your kind words. It's nice to hear what readers are thinking. I knew that I was taking a risk with the setting and the aliases, but this story litterally won't leave me alone. I'm going to put chapter six in queue today, hopefully it will be ready to post in a few days.Cheers! Kodiak
this was so cool. so cool. I've not read snape/lupin before, and I have to say, you fleshed out the story so well I don't know if I want to read any more of this pairing ever again because I can't imagine anyone else doing anywhere near as good a job as you did. I love complexity, I love mystery, I LOVE they way you wrapped this story up (total surprise to me! i didn't think of greyback! and revenge, omg...). it is all so well done. fantastic. and I love the way you set the story in montana. creative, fresh, and still relevant...I'm from california so I am always interested in seeing a stateside story done well :) keep up the excellent work!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you for your kind words. It makes me very happy to hear that my tale resonated with someone else. Even though they aren't really my characters they've set up housekeeping in my heart and bringing this story to completion has been bittersweet. I'm pleased with the way it turned out but in a sence I already miss it, so you may see follow up stories.Kodiak
this is so multi-layered. you are both brilliant and well-read.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Awww, thanks. I'm blushing.
I love your backstory. love it. funny, I never even considered that dumbledore would give the school vacation when voldemort was defeated for the first time. silly me.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Why thank you. I figured that no one would go to class anyway so why not?K
this is so good. so complex.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you. Potions Masters are like onions, IMHO.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
but you must NOT cut the onions with a dagger...
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
*Rolling on the floor and gasping for air*
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
honestly, that was one of my favorite scenes, when he was chopping the onions and John refers to the knife as Crane's Binky. I couldn't stop giggling. it was just ridiculously funny.
I really, really like what you've done with this story, and these characters. it's very intriguing. almost like a mystery novel, trying to divine who each of these people were to each other 5 years previously. I thought it was hilarious that crane likes "green eggs and ham"--how appropriate!! and I really like the understatement in the discussion about "intent".
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think of Potomac. Intent felt like the dinosaur in the living room with those two.Hope you enjoy the rest of Potomac as much I've enjoied writing it.Kodiak
Very enjoyable story. I like your take on the characters, flaws and all. I know there was a large time gap between the last few chapters, so sorry if I can't remember exactly, but do we know what happened to Harry and Draco? I remember Harry going West to help a high profile client of Samuel's, but is he still there? And I know Draco left under less than ideal circumstances -- did he and Samuel make up? I hope so, but some hurts take a long time to heal. Thanks for sharing your special writing gift. I look forward to your next submission. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and for reading the conclusion after the long delay.I am considering telling about Draco and perhaps Harry in a follow up story. I just need to lay out the plot and iron out a few kinks.I hope I can tempt you to read it when it's ready for posting.Kodiak
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story.