Chapter Fourteen
Chapter 14 of 28
kodiakRespected psychiatrist Samuel Crane has a comfortable life and a firm hold on his own sanity. Can he maintain that hold when his past comes knocking on his door? Includes characters living under assumed names and HBP spoilers.
ReviewedChapter Fourteen
Samuel looked at John with a critical eye. The man had always been too thin and a bit worn around the edges. Today, he looked especially tired. Samuel realized that in more than fifteen years 'together', only once had he seen the man on the day after the full moon.
It had been mid-day, and he would have been covering double Potions, except one of the brats had exploded a cauldron, requiring Samuel to march a boil-covered second year to the infirmary. On his way back to his office, he had turned down a side hallway and came face to face with the Defense professor.
He had fought to cover his shock; the man looked a step away from dead. The students had all been cloistered in classrooms. There had been no one around to see him grasp Remus by the elbow, but still the wolf had shaken him off.
"I'm fine, Severus. I just need a little rest." Even worn down to threads, the wolf had infused the words with steel.
Samuel had left that day with the promise to himself that he would haunt that hall, next moon. But try though he might, he had never again surprised Lupin in the corridors.
Ten years later, he hoped he could offer the man more relief. John needed to know that he was functioning at his best when he would meet with the grizzled academics in the afternoon. Not a problem, Dr. Crane dealt regularly with haggard, emaciated bodies; he could easily recognize the effects of dehydration. And he was still a ruthless bastard; if illicit means could aid his lover's recovery, Samuel would do it with no regrets.
"Where did you find out about this technique?" Ever the intellectual, John couldn't let it go without fully understanding the process.
And Samuel realized that he didn't mind explaining to John the subtleties of the international politics of cheating.
"I suppose we're actually cheating too." John was staring at the needle in his arm. Samuel pinched his leg, forcing the wolf to look at something else.
"Gryffindor. You've been cheated out of so many opportunities that I would think you'd be pleased that we can finally level the playing field. No, don't fiddle with it; you're almost done." John actually looked healthier than Samuel had ever seen him look. Even if the rumors had reached this campus, no one looking at John today would believe them. AIDS, indeed.
Thirty minutes later, John was stepping into Samuel's office, asking for the keys to the Bronco. Wearing a tweed sport coat, he looked every bit the British Literature professor. Samuel asked John to show him once more, on a map, the roads he intended to drive to reach Helena, then pressed his own cell phone into the man's hand. "If there are any problems, call the land line." And with a nod, John was off, securing his own destiny. Samuel didn't want to say why he felt threatened by John's self-sufficiency.
At noon, Samuel realized that he would need to do something about lunch. He had pulled out bread, cheese, and a tin of soup, when Amanda took the skillet out of his hand.
"You don't want to heat that yet. We'll need some butter to keep it from sticking to the bottom of the pan. And we should slice the cheese; oh, look, the knives seem to be locked in their drawer." She stared at him expectantly.
"There is no need for sarcasm, young lady. You know very well why I added a lock to that drawer, but I will be happy to let you use a knife while supervised." She was nearly as efficient in the kitchen as John. Regardless, Samuel washed, dried, and returned the knife to the drawer as soon as she set it down. No need to become careless.
"Do you think John will get the position?"
"They're foolish if they don't offer it to him; John knows how to engage a class. We should be hearing from him soon, I would think."
But Samuel's phone was silent all afternoon. When he called the cell, it went straight to voice mail. Samuel scowled. Whatever had happened in the interview, John should have called home by that time. Finally, after five o'clock, John rang through. Amanda snatched the phone off the cradle just before Samuel could.
"John? Are you all right? No, actually I can't, because he's standing right here." She scowled as she handed the phone to Samuel.
His hands were slick as he pressed the receiver to his ear. "John, what's wrong?"
His friend's voice was soft on the other end of the line. "Samuel, don't be angry."
He could feel the heat rising in his face; that opening couldn't mean anything good, and from the very subtle slur and the care John was taking with his words, Samuel was forming a clear picture of the problem. "John, is the Bronco wrapped around a tree?" He wanted to be angry, but just hearing John's voice, alive, filled him with a relief that eclipsed his ire entirely.
"I have not even left the bar. But I'm here with the car. Hee hee hee... How will you get to me?" Oh, God, this wasn't good. Plan 'B', then.
"John, where are you?"
"Men's room. Everybody else went home; I said you'd come get me."
"Are you calling with the cell? Good. I want you to repeat something very carefully. 'Portus'."
"Samuel, why would you want me to say 'Portus'?" A moment later, John was sitting on the floor at Samuel's feet. "Why is your phone a Portkey?"
"Puzzle it out, Professor." He offered his hand to pull John to his feet, but even as he helped balance the man, John kept his eyes on the rug. Samuel forced himself to breathe. Be calm. "It's going to be okay, John."
"Knew I shouldn't go with them, but I wanted to be part of the team. I told myself I wouldn't drink, but once we were there..."
"John, I know, okay?" He settled John onto the couch and stepped back to get a more clinical assessment. Running through his mental checklist, he felt better about John's condition; clearly John hadn't consumed an excessive amount of alcohol. Best to find out what John could tell him. "How much did you drink?"
"One glass. I swear, I didn't think it would make me drunk like this."
Maybe it affected the man differently right after the full moon. Fascinating. Worry about it later. He decided that John wouldn't need formal 'de-tox'. "Amanda, can you bring me a large glass of water?" He'd keep his friend hydrated and watch him carefully for the next few hours.
"Sev'rus, why are you being nice to me. Should be mad as an insulted hippogriff."
"John, to be blunt, I was expecting this to happen sooner. We'll get through it. You'll be fine." He hoped. And once he was certain of that claim, he'd need to figure out how to bring the Bronco home. It was definitely a Monday.
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28 Reviews | 5.46/10 Average
well done! i thought that story was brilliant!
I finally got caught up on all the chapters I missed reading. Still a strong story. I look forward to your next submission, JoAnne
It's not often that one comes across such a well written slash Remus/Severus story. This one is full of intriguing characterization, great story telling, and a pace that's neither too fast nor too slow. It certainly kept my attention all the way from the first to last chapter. I should have been reviewing the previous chapters as well, but since I only started to read it this evening, the story just gripped me too much to have me write a review.
So I'll just give you loads of kuddos and a big compliment for writing such a fantastic story.
(One nitpicky: Chapter 17: Much later, after the moon had set and the light was extigushed with a whisper,...) should that have been 'extinguished'?
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for catching that. I'm so flattered that you wanted to read straight through, and I'm glad that you like it so far.
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
I know I should have been reviewing each chapter as I read it but I was enjoying the story too much to stop. I'm not usually into slash fics as most of them tht I've encountered are PWP/slash for slash's sake but in this tale there is so much more. The characterizations, the plot, the relationships (Remus being the Alpha male really intrigues me as so many write him as a subordinate), the mysteries, the hints at what was in the past, it all comes together in something much greater than the arithmetical sum of its parts. I look forward to reading more. Excellent writing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm writing this because it literally won't leave me alone, but feedback truly makes the process much more meaningful.
More to come soon, I promise!
Kodiak
Oh my life's little ups and downs. Does this mean John got the job? Love the way it is moving along. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Poor John... I'm sure he didn't want to 'fall off the wagon'. The next chapter will offer more clarity sbout the job, but yes, it's John's.
Thanks for you thoughts... more coming soon.
Kodiak
"Stuffy much?" "Are you offering a reward for that missing verb?" "Touche. I'll think about it." And she gave a tiny smile.
Brilliant!!!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks, so much.Now I'm blushing. I need to give props to Annie and Pattie who have waded through my less polished drafts and helped me keep each charater on track.Thanks again for sharing your thoughts. Reviews feed the Muse, and mine was getting hungry.Love from Montana,Kodiak
Dr. Crane? As in, the Scarecrow? As in, Cillian Murphy? Hehe. Sorry, I loves me some CM, and everything seems like it links back to him. And Snape. *squee*
Very interesting story!! I really enjoy it. Your writing is very clear and concise, and that's so refreshing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Hi
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
,Thanks for your kind thoughts. I'll have to check out Cillian Murphy (I must admit that my little brain took such a twisted path before arriving at the alias 'Samuel Crane' that I really couldn't pinpoint where it came from).Thanks again for reading!Kodiak
WAIT but who was the mole? You can't just start that and then leave it there. That's just cruel!Good couple of chapters. Thanks so much. Still having a great ride. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm so sorry... that little tid-bit is tied-up in Moody's story. And I'm not quite ready to dig into that just yet. I will make certain that I don't leave that information on the cutting room floor, okay? *ducks for cover*But I will get Chapter Eight up as soon as I can (darn commas).Love from Montana,Kodiak
Interesting chapter, left me wanting more!
Enthralling! Have just read all 25 chapters..............I'm hooked!
Complex plot, brilliant character portrayals - more please.
I'm am enjoying the story very much. Such complexity in characters!
Thanks for the very different yet enjoyable story. I really liked it hugely. Well done.
This is engaging! To just see little bits of their lives before is intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. The thought of the greasy git being a psychiatrist had me chuckling at first but it really works!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for taking the time to review. It does mean a lot to me to hear the good, the bad, and the could'a been better from readers.
Just for you, I'll give Chapter Twenty a last edit, and send it in.
Love from (Smokey) Montana,
Kodiak
Just getting caught up on the last few chapters. Still going strong I am glad to see. Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm putting chapter thirteen in queue today. Hopefully, it will be ready to post with only minor revisions.
Enjoy!
Kodiak
I've been reading this and it's quite interesting. It's well written and while at first confusing, it opens up to reveal more each chapter. Keep on it!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for staying with me. It is my evil plan to lure you along with breadcrumbs from their past. More will be shared in the next chapter.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts. They really do feed the muse!
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
Very nice so far. I usually don't like stories that are set outside the ususal book settings but this one grabbed me. You write well and I look forward to seeing what happens with resolving the past and present for all our known characters. I also like your new characters. Thanks for sharing. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for your kind words. It's nice to hear what readers are thinking. I knew that I was taking a risk with the setting and the aliases, but this story litterally won't leave me alone. I'm going to put chapter six in queue today, hopefully it will be ready to post in a few days.Cheers! Kodiak
this was so cool. so cool. I've not read snape/lupin before, and I have to say, you fleshed out the story so well I don't know if I want to read any more of this pairing ever again because I can't imagine anyone else doing anywhere near as good a job as you did. I love complexity, I love mystery, I LOVE they way you wrapped this story up (total surprise to me! i didn't think of greyback! and revenge, omg...). it is all so well done. fantastic. and I love the way you set the story in montana. creative, fresh, and still relevant...I'm from california so I am always interested in seeing a stateside story done well :) keep up the excellent work!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you for your kind words. It makes me very happy to hear that my tale resonated with someone else. Even though they aren't really my characters they've set up housekeeping in my heart and bringing this story to completion has been bittersweet. I'm pleased with the way it turned out but in a sence I already miss it, so you may see follow up stories.Kodiak
this is so multi-layered. you are both brilliant and well-read.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Awww, thanks. I'm blushing.
I love your backstory. love it. funny, I never even considered that dumbledore would give the school vacation when voldemort was defeated for the first time. silly me.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Why thank you. I figured that no one would go to class anyway so why not?K
this is so good. so complex.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you. Potions Masters are like onions, IMHO.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
but you must NOT cut the onions with a dagger...
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
*Rolling on the floor and gasping for air*
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
honestly, that was one of my favorite scenes, when he was chopping the onions and John refers to the knife as Crane's Binky. I couldn't stop giggling. it was just ridiculously funny.
I really, really like what you've done with this story, and these characters. it's very intriguing. almost like a mystery novel, trying to divine who each of these people were to each other 5 years previously. I thought it was hilarious that crane likes "green eggs and ham"--how appropriate!! and I really like the understatement in the discussion about "intent".
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think of Potomac. Intent felt like the dinosaur in the living room with those two.Hope you enjoy the rest of Potomac as much I've enjoied writing it.Kodiak
Very enjoyable story. I like your take on the characters, flaws and all. I know there was a large time gap between the last few chapters, so sorry if I can't remember exactly, but do we know what happened to Harry and Draco? I remember Harry going West to help a high profile client of Samuel's, but is he still there? And I know Draco left under less than ideal circumstances -- did he and Samuel make up? I hope so, but some hurts take a long time to heal. Thanks for sharing your special writing gift. I look forward to your next submission. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and for reading the conclusion after the long delay.I am considering telling about Draco and perhaps Harry in a follow up story. I just need to lay out the plot and iron out a few kinks.I hope I can tempt you to read it when it's ready for posting.Kodiak
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story.