Chapter Nineteen
Chapter 19 of 28
kodiakRespected psychiatrist Samuel Crane has a comfortable life and a firm hold on his own sanity. Can he maintain that hold when his past comes knocking on his door? Includes characters living under assumed names and HBP spoilers.
ReviewedChapter Nineteen
Sweat dripped from Samuel's chin, he had dirt buried under his fingernails, and his clothes were filthy. "This one's sprouted too, John. It was a stupid idea."
"Samuel, that man keeps raising his prices. You said yourself that once the tubers begin to grow, they're useless." John was digging with a fierce determination that reminded Samuel of Amanda's new companion.
"And these are just as useless as his." Samuel stared at the green buds peeking out from the brown root.
"I just wanted to be certain. I'm not looking forward to returning to the Valerian version."
"John, I am sorry. Next month..."
"We may need to rely on Miller for a few months more, but this little guy is going to make us proud." John held up a tuber as he wrapped it in his handkerchief. Perhaps John has finally gone round the bend.
Samuel shrugged as he tucked his jacket and water back into his pack. At least now the wolf might be ready to return to the Bronco. John, however, opened his battered map and traced the trail for a few moments before asking, "Would you walk with me, just little bit farther?"
Half an hour later, Samuel swore at the map in his hand. The elevation lines were so close together that they nearly combined; the next rise would re-define steep. Rocky mountain caps glinted in the merciless July sun, close enough now to pelt with a rock, had Samuel indulged that particularly juvenile impulse. Sweat stung his eyes with nearly the same ferocity as the blinding light, his leather boot had come un-tied yet again, and his lungs were screaming for oxygen, even if he would admit none of it to the wolf.
Finally they reached the narrow pass between mountain peaks and the top of the rise...likely the very top of the world. Samuel reached through layers of clothing and supplies searching for the water bottle. "Selective gravitation."
"What?" John was staring as though Samuel was daft.
"Sorry. Robert says that in backpacking, one must always remember the 'Primary Law of Selective Gravitation' which states that whatever item you want, regardless of weight or mass, will be at the bottom of your pack."
"Ever the pessimist. Samuel, look."
Water in hand, Samuel lifted his eyes from the dirt to see Eden stretching out before them. The sky arched overhead like a giant dome of azure.
The highest peaks stabbed upward, craggy and grey with small patches of white snow and ice bound to the sides as if by magic, but below, highland meadows sprawled across the bits of soil that clung stubbornly to barren granite, forming a verdant green hallway that would lead on to other wonders of form and dream in the high mountain air. A dizzying drop further, the tree line swiftly enclosed the land, wrapping the valley floor in mystery.
A veil of water dashed from high ground to the green garden below and John pointed to a herd of goats, grazing on a nearby slope. Then Samuel felt the wind lifting his hat; in less than a heartbeat, it was gone. His mate was drawing wand from sleeve when he stilled John's hand. "Let it go." A hat was a small offering to leave for those who guarded such a place.
You did not come here to stare at the scenery. "John, I think we should keep moving. That hill is the last that may hold lilies."
"Lilies, right."
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They were halfway up the driveway when Samuel realized what was wrong with his house. "Let me out here, John. I need to do something at the clinic."
"It's Saturday."
"There's always something I can do at the clinic."
"This wouldn't have anything to do with the Firebolt leaning against the garage, would it?"
"Oh, is Potter here?"
Whatever John might have said was lost forever as the green-eyed monster bolted across the driveway, placing himself firmly between Samuel and freedom. "I need to speak with Malfoy. Or is it Troy Phelps, now?" The arrogant tilt of Potter's chin sealed the decision as Samuel slipped the graceful length of willow from his sleeve. Potter's eyes flashed with raw, angry power as the famous holly and phoenix feather wand flashed toward Samuel in a high arc.
Samuel smirked as the brat's face erupted in green boils even as he felt the impact of the blast to the chest lift him off his feet. Falling backwards, Samuel formed the thought, Levi..., before he could complete it, though, he felt his wand slide from his fingers in the same moment that Potter lost his own with a look of shocked bewilderment.
Pain exploded through his lungs as Samuel slammed into the ground and darkness closed in from all sides. He held on to consciousness though pure force of will, gasping for each breath as one drowning, deliberately ignoring John's offered hand and dragging himself to his hands and knees. Potter certainly wasn't pulling punches. "It's nice to know where I stand with you, John."
"Quite the show for your Muggle neighbors, Samuel." John's tone was deceptively calm, and Samuel tilted his head sideways to assess the dark glare that was turning toward the Darling Hero. Thankfully, John's expression darkened further as he locked eyes with Potter.
Green eyes widened as the boy recognized the peril of further angering the man. "Remus... " He closed his mouth with a snap at John's sharp look of reproach. Interesting. It was not John's life and livelihood that the alias protected. He was a bona fide hero, with medals and titles to attest. Samuel had seen them, too, at the bottom of the sock drawer.
The hero in question had turned away from both of them and stalked into the house. Samuel sneered at Potter until the boy looked at his shoes. Then he pushed to his feet and made for the basement.
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"Thought I'd find you down here," John said, as rounded the corner.
"Is Potter gone?"
"You've built quite a life here." John's voice was soft.
"And I have no wish to place it in jeopardy."
"I expected you to turn us away, you know. Standing at your door, with no other options, I thought you would say, 'No.'"
Samuel stared at the dried chunks of Valerian root. He would need an exceedingly sharp blade or they would crumble as he chopped. "John, can you hand me that knife?"
The knife clattered to the floor as John let out a howl of pain. "Merlin, Samuel, that's silver."
Crap! Samuel could see at a glance that the burn was only minor. "I keep the burn paste on the top shelf. Do you need help applying it?"
"No, I'm fine." John's shoulders were shaking. A tense moment passed before Samuel realized the man was laughing.
"I had forgotten. Are you certain you're all right?" Samuel forced himself to retrieve the blade and began working quickly and precisely.
"My fault. I should have looked where I was grabbing."
Samuel risked looking up as he whispered, "You, Troy, and Amanda."
John blinked twice in confusion before he answered. "Loyal as a badger? I would never have guessed. Harry won't say much, but reading between the lines, this is about Yaxley and Macnair. Can we at least find out what he needs?"
Samuel didn't answer other than securing knives and potion ingredients before walking to the den.
Standing in the doorway, Samuel forced himself to watch objectively while Amanda and Potter tossed a tennis ball to Reggie. While the terror rarely emerged in the presence of the dog, she carried herself with a new watchfulness. Perhaps it was for the best that she remain wary. Reggie, however, had thrown himself into the moment, enjoying the taste of doggie freedom and wagging his tail frantically between tosses.
As Samuel stepped into the room, Potter stepped over to Amanda and murmured quietly. She scowled at Potter for a moment, but turned a softer expression to Samuel. "There are some letters I've been meaning to write. I'll be in my room." Then with a sad smile she left.
The man before him swayed with the frayed look of emotional exhaustion, as though his drive to find Draco was the only thing keeping him upright. Samuel felt something sharp twist behind his ribs. He pulled his mind back to an image from the dungeons, and the heat of anger that followed helped ease the pain. "Potter, I'm appalled. Macnair is a fugitive from Azkaban. Surely even your powers of reason can generate an argument sufficient to return him there."
"Macnair isn't the problem, Prof..., I don't even know what to call you anymore. Setting Yaxley free for lack of evidence is unacceptable. Unless Amanda can testify..."
"Absolutely not!"
Potter held his hands up, conceding. "I get that. So, I need to prove he was a willing Death Eater. I find I'm short of witnesses to that."
"Draco can't help you with that, and even if he could, I doubt that Narcissa would consider my handing him over to you as 'protecting her son'."
"Unbreakable Vow, right. I don't need Draco to testify, finding him was one of the conditions for Narcissa to..."
"Are you simple, Potter? You will not make a deal with Narcissa."
"She's harmless."
"She forced me to kill Albus!" Shut up now. Seeing the tremble of his hands only increased his distress. Samuel had no well of anger large enough to drown his grief. He turned to the bookshelves to buy himself a ragged breath without this particular audience. "There is nothing I won't do to ensure that her punishment stands. If you see me as a vengeful bastard, so be it." The break in his voice exposed far too much. Samuel bit his lip to keep the rest inside.
"I don't like it either, but I'm out of Death Eaters. Who do you propose I offer the deal to?"
Samuel turned to the coffee table were Amanda had left her book. 'Silas Marner' Bloody perfect. He drew a shaky breath. "Me."
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28 Reviews | 5.46/10 Average
well done! i thought that story was brilliant!
I finally got caught up on all the chapters I missed reading. Still a strong story. I look forward to your next submission, JoAnne
It's not often that one comes across such a well written slash Remus/Severus story. This one is full of intriguing characterization, great story telling, and a pace that's neither too fast nor too slow. It certainly kept my attention all the way from the first to last chapter. I should have been reviewing the previous chapters as well, but since I only started to read it this evening, the story just gripped me too much to have me write a review.
So I'll just give you loads of kuddos and a big compliment for writing such a fantastic story.
(One nitpicky: Chapter 17: Much later, after the moon had set and the light was extigushed with a whisper,...) should that have been 'extinguished'?
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for catching that. I'm so flattered that you wanted to read straight through, and I'm glad that you like it so far.
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
I know I should have been reviewing each chapter as I read it but I was enjoying the story too much to stop. I'm not usually into slash fics as most of them tht I've encountered are PWP/slash for slash's sake but in this tale there is so much more. The characterizations, the plot, the relationships (Remus being the Alpha male really intrigues me as so many write him as a subordinate), the mysteries, the hints at what was in the past, it all comes together in something much greater than the arithmetical sum of its parts. I look forward to reading more. Excellent writing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm writing this because it literally won't leave me alone, but feedback truly makes the process much more meaningful.
More to come soon, I promise!
Kodiak
Oh my life's little ups and downs. Does this mean John got the job? Love the way it is moving along. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Poor John... I'm sure he didn't want to 'fall off the wagon'. The next chapter will offer more clarity sbout the job, but yes, it's John's.
Thanks for you thoughts... more coming soon.
Kodiak
"Stuffy much?" "Are you offering a reward for that missing verb?" "Touche. I'll think about it." And she gave a tiny smile.
Brilliant!!!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks, so much.Now I'm blushing. I need to give props to Annie and Pattie who have waded through my less polished drafts and helped me keep each charater on track.Thanks again for sharing your thoughts. Reviews feed the Muse, and mine was getting hungry.Love from Montana,Kodiak
Dr. Crane? As in, the Scarecrow? As in, Cillian Murphy? Hehe. Sorry, I loves me some CM, and everything seems like it links back to him. And Snape. *squee*
Very interesting story!! I really enjoy it. Your writing is very clear and concise, and that's so refreshing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Hi
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
,Thanks for your kind thoughts. I'll have to check out Cillian Murphy (I must admit that my little brain took such a twisted path before arriving at the alias 'Samuel Crane' that I really couldn't pinpoint where it came from).Thanks again for reading!Kodiak
WAIT but who was the mole? You can't just start that and then leave it there. That's just cruel!Good couple of chapters. Thanks so much. Still having a great ride. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm so sorry... that little tid-bit is tied-up in Moody's story. And I'm not quite ready to dig into that just yet. I will make certain that I don't leave that information on the cutting room floor, okay? *ducks for cover*But I will get Chapter Eight up as soon as I can (darn commas).Love from Montana,Kodiak
Interesting chapter, left me wanting more!
Enthralling! Have just read all 25 chapters..............I'm hooked!
Complex plot, brilliant character portrayals - more please.
I'm am enjoying the story very much. Such complexity in characters!
Thanks for the very different yet enjoyable story. I really liked it hugely. Well done.
This is engaging! To just see little bits of their lives before is intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. The thought of the greasy git being a psychiatrist had me chuckling at first but it really works!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for taking the time to review. It does mean a lot to me to hear the good, the bad, and the could'a been better from readers.
Just for you, I'll give Chapter Twenty a last edit, and send it in.
Love from (Smokey) Montana,
Kodiak
Just getting caught up on the last few chapters. Still going strong I am glad to see. Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm putting chapter thirteen in queue today. Hopefully, it will be ready to post with only minor revisions.
Enjoy!
Kodiak
I've been reading this and it's quite interesting. It's well written and while at first confusing, it opens up to reveal more each chapter. Keep on it!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for staying with me. It is my evil plan to lure you along with breadcrumbs from their past. More will be shared in the next chapter.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts. They really do feed the muse!
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
Very nice so far. I usually don't like stories that are set outside the ususal book settings but this one grabbed me. You write well and I look forward to seeing what happens with resolving the past and present for all our known characters. I also like your new characters. Thanks for sharing. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for your kind words. It's nice to hear what readers are thinking. I knew that I was taking a risk with the setting and the aliases, but this story litterally won't leave me alone. I'm going to put chapter six in queue today, hopefully it will be ready to post in a few days.Cheers! Kodiak
this was so cool. so cool. I've not read snape/lupin before, and I have to say, you fleshed out the story so well I don't know if I want to read any more of this pairing ever again because I can't imagine anyone else doing anywhere near as good a job as you did. I love complexity, I love mystery, I LOVE they way you wrapped this story up (total surprise to me! i didn't think of greyback! and revenge, omg...). it is all so well done. fantastic. and I love the way you set the story in montana. creative, fresh, and still relevant...I'm from california so I am always interested in seeing a stateside story done well :) keep up the excellent work!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you for your kind words. It makes me very happy to hear that my tale resonated with someone else. Even though they aren't really my characters they've set up housekeeping in my heart and bringing this story to completion has been bittersweet. I'm pleased with the way it turned out but in a sence I already miss it, so you may see follow up stories.Kodiak
this is so multi-layered. you are both brilliant and well-read.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Awww, thanks. I'm blushing.
I love your backstory. love it. funny, I never even considered that dumbledore would give the school vacation when voldemort was defeated for the first time. silly me.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Why thank you. I figured that no one would go to class anyway so why not?K
this is so good. so complex.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you. Potions Masters are like onions, IMHO.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
but you must NOT cut the onions with a dagger...
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
*Rolling on the floor and gasping for air*
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
honestly, that was one of my favorite scenes, when he was chopping the onions and John refers to the knife as Crane's Binky. I couldn't stop giggling. it was just ridiculously funny.
I really, really like what you've done with this story, and these characters. it's very intriguing. almost like a mystery novel, trying to divine who each of these people were to each other 5 years previously. I thought it was hilarious that crane likes "green eggs and ham"--how appropriate!! and I really like the understatement in the discussion about "intent".
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think of Potomac. Intent felt like the dinosaur in the living room with those two.Hope you enjoy the rest of Potomac as much I've enjoied writing it.Kodiak
Very enjoyable story. I like your take on the characters, flaws and all. I know there was a large time gap between the last few chapters, so sorry if I can't remember exactly, but do we know what happened to Harry and Draco? I remember Harry going West to help a high profile client of Samuel's, but is he still there? And I know Draco left under less than ideal circumstances -- did he and Samuel make up? I hope so, but some hurts take a long time to heal. Thanks for sharing your special writing gift. I look forward to your next submission. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and for reading the conclusion after the long delay.I am considering telling about Draco and perhaps Harry in a follow up story. I just need to lay out the plot and iron out a few kinks.I hope I can tempt you to read it when it's ready for posting.Kodiak
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story.