Chapter Eight
Chapter 8 of 28
kodiakRespected psychiatrist Samuel Crane has a comfortable life and a firm hold on his own sanity. Can he maintain that hold when his past comes knocking on his door? Includes characters living under assumed names and HBP spoilers.
ReviewedChapter Eight
Somehow Samuel survived the Saturday morning trek through the farmer's market. He despised crowds and could happily live without fresh food of any kind if it allowed him to avoid this crush of people.
John, however, seemed to thrive on the energy. One minute he was chatting with the beekeeper, selecting chunks of sticky, amber honeycomb; the next he was laughing with the girl from the flower farm; then he spotted a local organic farmer and left with another bag full of produce. The wolf was positively giddy about carrots, beets, and tomatoes, and Samuel smiled at the flush of happiness on John's face, then immediately mastered his expression.
Finally, at the end of the row, he spotted his own herbal contact. A square card table boasted nine bundles of terribly wilted leaves. The herbs looked pathetic and the Muggles were passing the stand quickly, all the while trying to avoid the proprietor's eyes. The wrinkled old man wore filthy blue jeans and an old flannel shirt. A huge straw hat eclipsed more than half of his face.
The bastard was as surly and shrewd as he looked. "My expenses have gone up. Dark herbs you've been wanting from me, not just anyone who could get 'em, you know. Forty should cover though."
"You slimy old blighter. You can't expect me to pay double what you overcharged me last month."
In the end, Samuel accepted that his wallet would have to take the hit. There really was nowhere else to get what he needed. With the full moon approaching and a Potion simmering back at home, he simply couldn't do without.
"Someday, Miller, I will find a reputable supplier, and you will be very sorry for your folly today." Samuel growled at the old man. The cur had the nerve to tip his hat in reply.
"Samuel, you can't pay that much..."
"Close your mouth, Wolfe. We can haggle over costs behind closed doors, but I do believe we have time for coffee before Jack sends out a search party."
Samuel felt the press of humanity ease from his chest as he claimed a table in the back of the coffee house. John's smile was far too wide for Samuel's comfort as he settled in with a mug of something frothy and Samuel's own black coffee. He wanted to ask if the wolf had eaten someone's canary. The question died on his lips, however, as the barista delivered a huge plate piled high with whipped cream covering a crepe that was positively oozing chocolate.
"Chocolate is supposed to have a positive effect on brain chemistry. Even better than sex."
"John, shush. We're in public. Besides, that is a highly simplified explanation of a terribly complex chemical interaction."
"All right, but you're missing out on something truly amazing." John's eyes fluttered closed as he savored the forkful of chocolate decadence. After a moment, the wolf remembered the bone from before. "Samuel, what plant could possibly be worth forty dollars?"
Samuel took a slow breath before responding. This could be a long conversation. "Glacier lily roots. He poaches them from the Northern slopes in Glacier Park. It's a long drive, the bears like them, and the fine for taking them is much more expensive than overpaying him."
"I don't remember you trying to find that herb back home."
"They replace the Valerian root, and thankfully you show no allergic reactions to the Glacier lily."
"I thought that was from my laundry soap."
"No, you should stay away from anything that includes Valerian roots or shoots. They both contain high levels of a specific protein, the leaves, however... never mind. Just be sure to ask me before taking any new potions."
"So when you moved out here, you came across the Glacier lily and recognized its full potential."
"Yes, John. I saw a picture in a book and knew it would work; I tossed some in your next batch of Wolfsbane and sent it off with Fawkes." He could feel the sarcasm dripping from his words. "How irresponsible do you think I am?" He closed his mouth quickly when he realized he was pointing at John with his fork.
"Easy, Samuel." John caught his hand and guided the fork toward the chocolate. "I think you need to eat some of this."
Samuel felt irritation melting away with the chocolate on his tongue. "Just as long as you know that I wouldn't use you as a guinea pig."
"Why didn't you tell me about the Valerian allergy?" John sounded curious, rather than accusatory.
"We were always busy with... other things back then."
"But you noticed."
"Of course I noticed. It would be hard to miss the raised red bumps that showed up a few hours after you swallowed the potion. What took some time was discovering which component was causing the reaction."
"All that time and trouble, spent on me?"
"You can stop preening."
"No, Samuel, I'm serious. Putting all of that effort into a potion for me... I'm just... well, thank you."
"You're welcome. Now do you understand why I'm willing to meet his price?"
John gave a sullen nod before his face brightened with a new idea. "Have you tried growing it in your garden?"
"Wrong climate. They grow in a very narrow range of conditions."
"There has to be a way..."
"Down, Wolfe. I have a more pressing issue to discuss. You intimated to me that you hold the Ministry responsible for Amanda's abduction. Do I understand you correctly?" After John's wary nod, Samuel plowed ahead. "Perhaps the clinic should send them a bill."
"If this is about the money, Samuel, I can..."
"This is most definitely not about money itself. That is simply the most effective motivator for change when dealing with incompetent bureaucrats and politicians. Also, I found the locations of a few high-end knitting shops in town and would dearly love to turn Amanda loose with the Ministry's credit card."
John stared at him with a blank expression until Samuel wondered if he'd pushed the man too far. And then a wicked smile filled his face. "There are several folks I'd like to see fairly compensated in such a manner..."
"And Amanda is the only one with influence over the politicians at this time. Keep your eye on the ball, John. Can you push this through?"
Wolfe closed his eyes for a brief time before pulling out his cell phone. "Harry, it's, uh, John... Yes, that's right, but I can't be more specific right now... That's great, but actually I was wondering if you could do me a favor. I want you to bill Scrimgeour for Amanda's ongoing expenses and treatment... No, the clinic's billing statement should suffice... I'll be sure to pass that along... Okay, thanks."
John's eyes sparkled with mirth as he tucked the phone away. "Harry wants to know if you played Beater for your house, and thinks your plan is 'bloody brilliant'. He's certain that, with the threat of publicity, he can push through what you'd charge an 'A List' client."
Samuel sniffed his disdain. "As long as Potter approves..."
"Oh, stop. Let's go spend the Ministry's money. That alone will be therapeutic for me."
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28 Reviews | 5.46/10 Average
well done! i thought that story was brilliant!
I finally got caught up on all the chapters I missed reading. Still a strong story. I look forward to your next submission, JoAnne
It's not often that one comes across such a well written slash Remus/Severus story. This one is full of intriguing characterization, great story telling, and a pace that's neither too fast nor too slow. It certainly kept my attention all the way from the first to last chapter. I should have been reviewing the previous chapters as well, but since I only started to read it this evening, the story just gripped me too much to have me write a review.
So I'll just give you loads of kuddos and a big compliment for writing such a fantastic story.
(One nitpicky: Chapter 17: Much later, after the moon had set and the light was extigushed with a whisper,...) should that have been 'extinguished'?
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for catching that. I'm so flattered that you wanted to read straight through, and I'm glad that you like it so far.
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
I know I should have been reviewing each chapter as I read it but I was enjoying the story too much to stop. I'm not usually into slash fics as most of them tht I've encountered are PWP/slash for slash's sake but in this tale there is so much more. The characterizations, the plot, the relationships (Remus being the Alpha male really intrigues me as so many write him as a subordinate), the mysteries, the hints at what was in the past, it all comes together in something much greater than the arithmetical sum of its parts. I look forward to reading more. Excellent writing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm writing this because it literally won't leave me alone, but feedback truly makes the process much more meaningful.
More to come soon, I promise!
Kodiak
Oh my life's little ups and downs. Does this mean John got the job? Love the way it is moving along. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Poor John... I'm sure he didn't want to 'fall off the wagon'. The next chapter will offer more clarity sbout the job, but yes, it's John's.
Thanks for you thoughts... more coming soon.
Kodiak
"Stuffy much?" "Are you offering a reward for that missing verb?" "Touche. I'll think about it." And she gave a tiny smile.
Brilliant!!!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks, so much.Now I'm blushing. I need to give props to Annie and Pattie who have waded through my less polished drafts and helped me keep each charater on track.Thanks again for sharing your thoughts. Reviews feed the Muse, and mine was getting hungry.Love from Montana,Kodiak
Dr. Crane? As in, the Scarecrow? As in, Cillian Murphy? Hehe. Sorry, I loves me some CM, and everything seems like it links back to him. And Snape. *squee*
Very interesting story!! I really enjoy it. Your writing is very clear and concise, and that's so refreshing!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Hi
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
,Thanks for your kind thoughts. I'll have to check out Cillian Murphy (I must admit that my little brain took such a twisted path before arriving at the alias 'Samuel Crane' that I really couldn't pinpoint where it came from).Thanks again for reading!Kodiak
WAIT but who was the mole? You can't just start that and then leave it there. That's just cruel!Good couple of chapters. Thanks so much. Still having a great ride. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm so sorry... that little tid-bit is tied-up in Moody's story. And I'm not quite ready to dig into that just yet. I will make certain that I don't leave that information on the cutting room floor, okay? *ducks for cover*But I will get Chapter Eight up as soon as I can (darn commas).Love from Montana,Kodiak
Interesting chapter, left me wanting more!
Enthralling! Have just read all 25 chapters..............I'm hooked!
Complex plot, brilliant character portrayals - more please.
I'm am enjoying the story very much. Such complexity in characters!
Thanks for the very different yet enjoyable story. I really liked it hugely. Well done.
This is engaging! To just see little bits of their lives before is intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. The thought of the greasy git being a psychiatrist had me chuckling at first but it really works!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks for taking the time to review. It does mean a lot to me to hear the good, the bad, and the could'a been better from readers.
Just for you, I'll give Chapter Twenty a last edit, and send it in.
Love from (Smokey) Montana,
Kodiak
Just getting caught up on the last few chapters. Still going strong I am glad to see. Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
I'm putting chapter thirteen in queue today. Hopefully, it will be ready to post with only minor revisions.
Enjoy!
Kodiak
I've been reading this and it's quite interesting. It's well written and while at first confusing, it opens up to reveal more each chapter. Keep on it!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for staying with me. It is my evil plan to lure you along with breadcrumbs from their past. More will be shared in the next chapter.
Thanks also for sharing your thoughts. They really do feed the muse!
Love from Montana,
Kodiak
Very nice so far. I usually don't like stories that are set outside the ususal book settings but this one grabbed me. You write well and I look forward to seeing what happens with resolving the past and present for all our known characters. I also like your new characters. Thanks for sharing. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for your kind words. It's nice to hear what readers are thinking. I knew that I was taking a risk with the setting and the aliases, but this story litterally won't leave me alone. I'm going to put chapter six in queue today, hopefully it will be ready to post in a few days.Cheers! Kodiak
this was so cool. so cool. I've not read snape/lupin before, and I have to say, you fleshed out the story so well I don't know if I want to read any more of this pairing ever again because I can't imagine anyone else doing anywhere near as good a job as you did. I love complexity, I love mystery, I LOVE they way you wrapped this story up (total surprise to me! i didn't think of greyback! and revenge, omg...). it is all so well done. fantastic. and I love the way you set the story in montana. creative, fresh, and still relevant...I'm from california so I am always interested in seeing a stateside story done well :) keep up the excellent work!
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you for your kind words. It makes me very happy to hear that my tale resonated with someone else. Even though they aren't really my characters they've set up housekeeping in my heart and bringing this story to completion has been bittersweet. I'm pleased with the way it turned out but in a sence I already miss it, so you may see follow up stories.Kodiak
this is so multi-layered. you are both brilliant and well-read.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Awww, thanks. I'm blushing.
I love your backstory. love it. funny, I never even considered that dumbledore would give the school vacation when voldemort was defeated for the first time. silly me.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Why thank you. I figured that no one would go to class anyway so why not?K
this is so good. so complex.
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thank you. Potions Masters are like onions, IMHO.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
but you must NOT cut the onions with a dagger...
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
*Rolling on the floor and gasping for air*
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
honestly, that was one of my favorite scenes, when he was chopping the onions and John refers to the knife as Crane's Binky. I couldn't stop giggling. it was just ridiculously funny.
I really, really like what you've done with this story, and these characters. it's very intriguing. almost like a mystery novel, trying to divine who each of these people were to each other 5 years previously. I thought it was hilarious that crane likes "green eggs and ham"--how appropriate!! and I really like the understatement in the discussion about "intent".
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think of Potomac. Intent felt like the dinosaur in the living room with those two.Hope you enjoy the rest of Potomac as much I've enjoied writing it.Kodiak
Very enjoyable story. I like your take on the characters, flaws and all. I know there was a large time gap between the last few chapters, so sorry if I can't remember exactly, but do we know what happened to Harry and Draco? I remember Harry going West to help a high profile client of Samuel's, but is he still there? And I know Draco left under less than ideal circumstances -- did he and Samuel make up? I hope so, but some hurts take a long time to heal. Thanks for sharing your special writing gift. I look forward to your next submission. JoAnne
Response from kodiak (Author of Potomac)
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and for reading the conclusion after the long delay.I am considering telling about Draco and perhaps Harry in a follow up story. I just need to lay out the plot and iron out a few kinks.I hope I can tempt you to read it when it's ready for posting.Kodiak
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story.