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Dazed Detachment

1: Use Your Illusion 1

2: Use Your Illusion 2

3: Use Your Illusion 3

4: Lucidity

Dazed Detachment

Southern_Witch_69

145 Reviews   |   145 Ratings, 0 Likes, 73 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Angst Romance Erotica Horror Potions Under Duress 9,785 Words 4 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Spared a horrible fate, Hermione is spirted off to a safehouse, but is everything as it seems? Sometimes the mind can be one's worst enemy... or savior.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Use Your Illusion 1

Chapter 2: Use Your Illusion 2

Chapter 3: Use Your Illusion 3

Chapter 4: Lucidity


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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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http://www.livejournal.com/users/southernwitch69/
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Reviews for Dazed Detachment

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10/10

septentrion

That was very confusing indeed. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Smile. I hope the next bit helps out some.

10/10

septentrion

That was very confusing indeed. I can't wait to read thenext chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Thanks for reading! Hope the next helps.

10/10

Maddie

I don't know what to think.  On one hand, she was rescued and is living in a seemingly secure location.  On the other hand, she made an assumption the person freeing her was Harry. Whoever this person is, he has placed her in a better situation than she was in as a prisoner of Voldemort.  Granted she is not free and she is not sure who she is with.  Perhaps she is too traumatized to have hope and has lost her will to live.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Right. She is safe from physical injury, no matter who her rescuer is. Definitely traumatized. More up. Hope you like it.

0/10

wilder0511

Uh, I thought there wasn't going to be a suicide. Sheesh a little on the angsty side, but really has me eager for tomorrows chapter. Terrific writing as always, can't wait for the next chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

It's not suicide, doll. That's why I made sure to point it out. I just had her falling, but not actually hitting. Teehee. More up this evening. xxooxox

10/10

cocoachristy

Oh. No. You. DID. NOT. End. It. Here! Just wait until I find my wand! I have got to have MORE--Now! Please?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

You can always sit on the cliff with Harry... er... Snape, or is it Harry? and wait to see what happens next. LOL

0/10

gah_meep

I wish I knew wtf was going on. I'm completely confused...and I don't like it...

 But I shall live...and wait for the next parts to be posted :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Sorry about the confusion, but I do hope the next clears things up some. :)

10/10

karelia

*sigh* How do you do it? One brilliant chapter after another. And there I was, promising myself I won't read any more WIPs... Can't wait for the next one!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

You're too kind, sweets.  Thank you for reading and trusting that I'd update. :)

0/10

princess marie

i want more!!!! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

More up for you! :)

10/10

Corazon

Hi darling,Normally I avoid WIP but you are so true to your word when up dating that I am reading it.  And I am quite intrigued with this story.  Now just as long as I don't lose my mind and forget to read your updates.  And your comment about losing you mind...yeah, me too.Hugs,

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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Hope you liked the next set, and thank you for reading! :)

10/10

CharmedForce

Ooh! You have me hooked. What's next??

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

~waves~ Hope you like the next bit.

10/10

averygoodun

Ooh.  Evil cliffhanger.  Is it all a dream?  Has she gone mental from trauma? 

Looking forward to the next clue. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Uhhuh... all that. :) T hank you!

0/10

pagge1962

What is truly amazing is you are a woman with a great imagination !

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Hey, thanks! Fanfiction is a great outlet for me (getting all mah crazy ideas out). :)

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Quite amazing!  That was one of the most gripping first chapters--etch that, chapters period--that I have ever read.  Wow.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Thanks for reading. I hope the second chapter is as interesting for you. :)

10/10

Sevariger

I love this story.  So much confusion but I love it.  can't wait to see the story updated.:  )Cassandra *

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Thanks! I should have more up this evening.

10/10

notsosaintly

Oh, my.  I'm as confused as Hermione is.  I'm glad there will be a fourth chapter.  If there weren't, I'd nag you until there was one.  *lol*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

Grin. :) xooxxo

0/10

maegwen

I'm so confused. I suppose I'm meant to be. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

~nod~ hope you like the ending!

10/10

amsev

Wow.  Pretty powerful stuff.  Very well done!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

I'm very happy you liked it. Sometimes I get very odd/naughty plot bunnies  that must come out! :)

0/10

MollysSister

So it was a hex induced fever of sorts that made her crazy. Very sneaky of you. I like the way you ended it while still leaving it somewhat open to determination. Thanks again SW!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

~grin~ Thank you, doll.

10/10

pookah

original plot sure kept me guessing!  I'm  really impressed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

I'm happy you liked it. :)

10/10

pookah

Woo!   Just discovered this one and will be hurrying on to the next chapter now!  Thanks for sharing!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Dazed Detachment)

~grin~:)

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