If Harry would just SHUT UP, Hermione would probably come out of it just fine.  Thanks for the story!

loved the story.....thanks

Excellent twist.  I knew something wasn't right with those mixed up perceptions, but having her, no both of them, inhabit an entirely different "world" is a refreshing surprise.  Thanks for getting the story out so quickly, too :)Mara

Wow, you sure kept me guessing till the end, LOL! I enjoyed the story, and I like how you kept it sort of open, but hopeful. Now that Snape is awake, I'm sure he'll chase Potter out of Hermione's vicinity.

Yup, you pulled the rug out from under me. Now I only hope Hermione wakes up and doesn't fall into a permanent coma due to 'jumping off that cliff', although if she did the same thing after Ron's small talk, then she should be fine.Kept me guessing right to the end!

Now you know why my friends never want to watch certain types of films with me.  I have a bad name for this kind of thing.  I liked the way you didn't tie up every point in the final chapter.

Indeed, things are clear now. Thanks for the story.

Hats off to Selened indeed. It all makes sense, but I never saw it coming. I imagined that her perception was wrong, not the whole universe of the previous chapters. Interesting idea. I'm glad to finished it with hope for all of them.

At least I can wrap my mind around this chapter!!! LOLI certainly never figured out what was going on.Very twisty.Nicely wrapped up and pulled together.

Well, I'm glad Snape is up and about finally.  If any one can help Hermione, he can!

YES!!! A brilliant use a Psychotogenic curse …the effects are uncannily accurate. Very well done – very realistic… and to think that Harry seems to be causing most of her dysmnesia with his inane babble of sex, Snape and such… He's positively thick.  No wonder Snape woke up first!!

You have a brilliant use of both the hallucinations and illusions it’s almost as if she’s under Psychotogenic curse or possibly psychotrophic potions…the effects she seems to exhibit are uncannily accurate.   Very well done – very realistic…

Very good.  It was a truely inventive plot.  You kept it complicated and interesting right through to the end.  Way to go.  Thanks, JoAnne

Wow, what a ride.  I like that you left things right there:  hopeful, but not tied up neatly.

Very interesting that HG being visited and talked to by friends actually is hurting her recovery.  Of course, you have Ron do most of the damage, but Harry is doing so more subtly and more regularly:  sex with Ginny, not trusting Snape, the Narcissa issue.  None of these are things she needs to hear (and the first one - eew - he talks about it regularly!).

Wow, Sun, very nice. Excellent build up while keeping the reader in constant suspense jumping back and forth trying to figure out who was questioning who, and when, and which reality was "real",  and what was really happening. Very satisfying ending, really tied it all together well. Thank you for a most excellent read!

Well done. I really loved it.

I'm glad I waited for it to be complete, I hate TBC mysteries. Really intriguing and engaging story. Well done! (Another Guns N Roses fan I see )

Well I hope you are feeling better. That does clear up the story a bit. I enjoyed this little ficlet. Can't wait for your next endeavor.

Awesome finish!  I'm so glad that it ended hopefully and that Snape is awake.  I get the feeling that it will because easier for Hermione to pull herself out of it if she hears his voice calling to her.

This was a very interesting story, I have to say.  Threw me for a total loop, and the ending pulled everything together so that it made sense.  I think what I liked most about all this is how real it felt, in that that's how the mind works, and that's what dreams feel like -- completely random, yet some things are symbolic and tied together.  Well done! 

Well you had me confunded!

Hmm.  I'm not quite certain who is Hermione's keeper/lover, but I don't see Harry as having the sophistication (or vocabulary) for the entries in that journal.  Also, if the entire thing is in her mind, then what is the point of the narrator showing us the entry she didn't read?  Also, I think the cliff is metaphorical rather than a real place.  My vote is that it's Severus--but his motives and alliegence are still very muddy to me.  Excellent job at confusing us all!

HuminuhWHAT??????? This is brilliantly confusing and  I love every minute of it! Poor Hermione!  What have you done to her?

wow...I'm so confused....but I'm intrigued!!! Don't leave us hanging!

I agree with Ayerf...it seems suspicious that Hermione wasn't upset about the same things that her captor thought she'd be upset about. How the heck did Narcissa come into it?Also, I find it decidedly convenient that Severus "accidentally forgot" to ward his study when he when out "suddenly." I did immediately think it must have been his dark mark burning, and that's what Hermione immediately thought of too. I can only hope that Hermione and I are both wrong about that.~Trusting Severus