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A Potionful of Trouble
TempestOfDreams121 Reviews | 7.85/10 (121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 225 Favorites )
A response to the Potter_Place Fall prompt challenge: #22. The Weasley twins come across Snape shopping for Potions ingredients. A commotion causes Snape to become distracted, and the twins promptly take advantage of this once-in-a-lifetime golden opportunity to slip Snape one of their "experimental" products.
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I'm a thirtysomething who is taking a hiatus from full-time web development to stay at home with my kid. I still do a bit of contract and/or volunteer web work, as well as other volunteer work. I do a bit of community theater (musicals, I'm not much for straight plays) as well. HGSS is my favorite ship.
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Beeutiful! She's lucky Severus is willing to put up with all the insults from her so call friends. I suppose he's use to being insulted and maybe doesn't care. I suppose he might even like the fact that he is getting the opportunity to aggravate the little twats on such a large scale. Maybe it's sauce for the goose after all.
Well done, TOD! I felt a little anxiety and anticipation as well as enjoying the erotic interplay between our couple. It's difficult to think up a revenge that doesn't make those taking revenge look bad. I have a story in my head that's been there for a couple of years but the revenge part has been difficult to come up with. I congradulate you for coming up with not one but two in the same story. I like the twist where the twins supply the muggle joke shop very much. The Trouble with Tribbles was also great! Now it's The Potency Problem with Pygmy Puffs.
Now that's what I'm talkin' about! Yea for Hermione and Severus! Well done love making scene.
Moving along quite splendidly! Good job Serverus!
Severus! Could you give the girl a break! Floo her or send an owl at the very least. I understand not seeing her publicly if you are concerned that she could be upset with the extra attention. Maybe you just don't know what to do and you are waiting for her to make the next move. You are a dork in the dating department. Has it occurred to you that she might need moral support during this upset?
Slowly but surely they are making their way to a relationship. Come on, Darlings! Get on with it and become romantically involved already!
Get Ron off your mind and think Severus instead, Hermione. Did you already forget the moment in the library? Maybe it was more important to him than for her. She has lots of friends already and it apparently wasn't as novel for her as it was for Severus. Maybe her headache will remind her and give her the idea to pay Severus a visit to see if the powder has worn off yet. For scientific purposes, of course.
Ron is such a git! As if she should wait around for him to finish screwing as many other girls as he can before he settles down with her. F that!
For a couple of bright kids they aren't too smart. Obviously they have not concidered the long term ramafications of playing a prank on the Ex-Death Eater and consumate double spy without the restraining hand of their old head master. Severus Snape answers only to himself these days and do they actually think he won't track it back to them?
It took him 20 patient years to kill Tom Riddle and that was urgent. Without the need for urgency they had better be watching their backs for the rest of their silly assed lives. He will pay them back in spades just when they think he may have forgotten about the whole incident. Snape remembers everything. He's just the type to enjoy revenge as a dish served cold. Be afraid you silly goof heads. Be very afraid. Your mother will be the last of your worries. I'd say that as soon as Severus figures out that they had the nerve to mess with him, it will be war on both their heads. And they will only have themselves to blame.
They don't seem to understand that Severus Snape can be a git because he is Severus Snape, just as God and play god because he is God!
You don't pull on Superman's cape, you doen't piss into the wind, you doen't pull the mask off the old Loan Ranger and you don't mess around with Snape. Da da dooden doot dooden doot da da! I can't wait to see what he does to them.
Pygmy puffs = Tribbles? Roflmao! I love it! I remember that episode.
Great story, loved the can-touch talc, and the Star Trek references.
What a great chapter. Susan seem to have Ron's number. Severus and Hermione, on their way to wedded bliss, and lot's of babies. Now off to find out ,what's happening with the pigmy-puffs.
Wondrful, I'm a Star Trek fan from way back. I'm sure the twins won't know what hit them.
Hot,sweet, and environmentaly friendly, what more could one ask?
Fred and George strike again! So glad Severus and Hermione have Minerva on their side.
Yes! you TELL his Hermione, first Harry, next Ron.
The relationship is building nicely, with a side order of revenge.
Looking forward to warped fun,with Severus.
Severus and Hermione, seem to be headed for some reseach. Ron is Ron, he will never change.
This was a wonderful story ... good romance and humor!
You are really talented at writing those love/kissing scenes ... I got all fluttery (good job!)
Anyways, I'll be reading more of your work! Thank you for your time and good writing!
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I simply loved this story. Great job on writing it!
Hot damn! The first part of the chapter was sinfully delicious. I loved how Sev proposed to Hermione! It was incredibly sweet!
Tee hee... the twins are going to be up to their ears in Pygmy Puffs.
Very nice. The lemon was just as I like it: sweet and spicy--very good combination.
I am glad that Minerva turned out to be the ally that Hermione and Sev thought she would be. I am really enjoying this story.
Sev coming to Hermione's rescue with Ron was admirable. BTW, I loved their first kiss, It was delightful and plainly full of promises without going overboard. Lovely chapter as always!