Chapter 7
Chapter 8 of 13
Clara MinutesHermione?s recovery and Voldemort?s wishes.
ReviewedHermione regained consciousness to find herself in a bed. She had no recollection of getting there, but was almost surprised to find herself alive. The man with the knife was the last thing she remembered well. That, and Voldemort laughing.
"You're awake," Draco said from beside her.
"Yes." When she spoke her voice sounded very rough. "Water?"
He passed a full glass to her.
"I have to go get Severus. Don't get up, Granger," he said as he left the room.
She heard him go down the stairs. The sound of murmuring could be heard wafting back up the stairs. She could distinguish the voices but not the words.
Hermione took a sip of water and tried to put the glass back on the table, but the movement sent waves of pain through her.
"Here," Snape said, striding across the room. He took the glass from her hands and placed it next to the bed.
"I gather there is still pain?"
Hermione nodded cautiously.
"Where? Be as specific as possible."
After a moment's pause, she answered, "Both sides, my left shoulder, my neck, the back of my head, and my right heel."
"Thank you, Miss Granger. Those places were particularly damaged. I will fetch a potion for the pain, then we'll look into why those areas are still bothering you to such a degree."
"Professor, how long have I been asleep?"
"Nine days."
She gasped then cringed.
"Try not to move; I will return."
"Has it really been nine days?" she asked Draco after Snape had left the room.
"Yes. We didn't know if you were going to live through the first three. My father and his 'friends' got overzealous toward the end."
"I'm glad I can't remember it," she stated, shaking her head.
"The Dark Lord wants you back with him in a week."
Hermione looked at him. "Why do you call him that?"
"The Dark Lord? Because I have to."
Hermione's brow furrowed as she tried to figure out his words. She didn't get a chance to comment because Severus came back at that moment.
"Take this. It should dull the pain." He handed a vial of blue potion to her.
"Thank you, sir."
She took the potion and drank it quickly.
"Now, Miss Granger, the Dark Lord wants you healthy in a week for another night of fun. I doubt your body will be able to handle it by then. I'm going to try to tell him that you won't survive another night like that, but that you are willing to give him information in return for his mercy."
"I won't tell him anything to hurt Harry. I couldn't do that."
"I didn't say the information would be truthful. I simply said you would give him information."
Hermione looked up at him. "All right then, what do you suggest I tell him?"
"We will discuss that on another day. Do you agree with this course of action?" he asked, looking at her intently.
"Yes..."
"Good, I have to go inform the Dark Lord of your condition. Draco will stay with you," Severus said as he stood. After a quick look at Draco and a nod to her, he walked out of the room.
Over the next week, Hermione divided her time between rehabilitation and learning to lie convincingly. She was decent at it, but her conscience kept trying to interfere.
She still didn't know what to make of Severus Snape. He seemed sincere enough when he was teaching her or helping her recover, but when he got in front of Voldemort he was a completely different person. The switch in personality was always instantaneous and dramatic.
Hermione couldn't fathom how he could keep his personalities separate to such a degree. He was always sarcastic, and more than not, he was harsh, but he was never cruel unless Voldemort was present. Draco had even stopped calling her Mudblood. In return, she started calling him Draco on occasion outside of her thoughts.
"Well, what do you expect? She's a Gryffindor."
"Draco, you were no better when you first started training," Severus replied, glancing at Draco.
She was waiting patiently for Severus and Draco to stop discussing her. They did this fairly often. Something would trigger a discussion, normally her inability to lie, and they would talk about her without acknowledging her presence in the room.
Hermione sighed. "Will you please stop it? I am sitting right here. You could actually talk to me about my problems with lying."
Her words seemed to make them realize she was in the room. Snape raised an eyebrow, and Draco tried to look indifferent.
"Well then, Miss Granger, what do you suggest we do about your inability to keep up a convincing lie?"
"Isn't there a saying that the best lies are based on truth? Instead of having me fabricate something, why don't I make something inconsequential into a big deal?" Hermione asked.
"What do you have in mind?" Severus asked.
"Harry hates his fame. What if I tell Voldemort that Harry's starting to become overconfident? We both know that isn't the case, but if Voldemort thinks he can easily take him...?"
"That is a sound idea. The only problem I see from that is the Dark Lord may choose to strike sooner rather than later. Potter has been training, but all of the Horcruxes have yet to be destroyed. A confrontation now would not be prudent."
"Does Voldemort hold much stock in tradition?"
"That depends."
"What if we play the angle that he's always attacked at the end of the school year. There is no reason to change that now. He's always been marginally successful in his attacks at those times. If we remind him of that bit and try to keep him from attacking too soon, we may be successful," Hermione tried to explain.
"That sounds acceptable," Severus said with a nod.
"Good evening, pet," Voldemort hissed in greeting.
Hermione stood tall, looking at the ground while Severus held her hands behind her back.
"Release her, Severus."
"Yes, my Lord."
Hermione didn't like the look in Severus's eyes, not at all.
His grip tightened on her wrists, and before she knew what was going on, he had thrown her on the ground before Voldemort's feet. She had to fight back the emotions welling in her. The pain was stronger from his action than the actual fall.
"Oh, dear, Severus. My pet seems to have grown attached to you."
'Damn!' she thought, quickly calling the field into her mind.
"My Lord?" Snape inquired.
"She was taken aback by your treatment of her just then. It seems she has friendly feelings toward you."
Severus simply stood there, looking at her with disdain.
"This displeases you, Severus?"
"Yes, my Lord, I wouldn't think to sully myself with a Mudblood," Snape sneered.
Hermione was submerged in her Occlumency shield, so she effectively hid her reaction to his words.
"Even in the name of fun? Well, we shall see." Voldemort turned his attention back to Hermione.
"What information do you have for me, pet?"
Hermione hesitated until she felt someone kick her. "Speak, Mudblood." Snape's cool voice entered her thoughts.
"Harry will be most vulnerable at the end of the school year," she said, sounding reluctant to speak.
"And why is that?"
"He will be unprepared for your attack. He will think he's ready, but his arrogance will get the better of him."
"So the fool thinks he will be ready to defeat me? Perfect." Voldemort turned his attention to Snape. "Come here, Severus. We shall call a full meeting."
"My Lord, I beg your leave after you've called the others. I must get this piece of filth back. She cannot stand any more fun for a while," Snape said with regret.
"You dare to take my pet from me?"
"No, Master. I don't want the others to think they will get to play when that is out of the question."
Voldemort narrowed his eyes at Snape. "Do not speak against me again, Severus."
He grabbed Snape's arm and pulled the sleeve back, revealing the Dark Mark. A touch of his finger, and the Mark flared black. Snape hissed in pain.
"Take the girl and get out of my sight."
Author's Notes: GinnyW and snarkyroxy deserve many thanks for their beta work. Thank you, ladies!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Deception of the Night
47 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
Loved It!! Wicked!! Amazing!! Fantastic!! Bloody Brilliant!!
awwww, good chapter lets hope Hermione's able to wrap her mind around the realities of the situation soon.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
She is making slow but steady progress, which is only to be expected after the horrors she went through. Thanks for reading and letting me know!
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter...I just hope that Hermione will be able to talk to Severus in the next chapter! I do hope so!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you for reading and letting me know! I can guarantee that they'll talk, but things won't be very easy.
Ach! I've figured out the problem. [Yes, I'm a chronic complainer, but I write this with only the best of intentions.] It's a good story. I like the story. But it is my humble opinion that it lacks passion.
Not sexual passion, but intensity, fervor! It reads more like you are just tickling at the story rathering than shouting it out. Put some oomph in it! Crank up the emotions.
You can be passionate without all the gory details I wrote of in the last chapters review. These people need to express themselves more vividly.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I appreciate your words. Occasionally a bit hard to swallow, but I do ask for any and all feedback! It helps me to know exactly what my readers are thinking. I do realize that my descriptions are a bit nonexistant, and I am working on that. If you've read any of my old stuff you'll notice that.
Again, thank you for your thoughts.
I understand where Hermione is coming from, and I know Snape is not really doing well with her not being able to deal with him, but I really like your Draco.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you so much! I've never really written Draco, but he seemed like a perfect 3rd party for this story.
Since you only wrote about what Severus did to Hermione, we don't know the extent of any other harm that may have been caused... but I have to feel sorry for her. Regardless of the fact that Severus didn't want to hurt her, he chose a permenant, extremely painful way to do what he didn't want.
I've recently seen the results of a hot metal burn on my sons hand and the scaring is deep and forever. Just what a pretty young woman wants to live with. My point is, I can't believe the memories will be that easily assuaged with visible deformities marring her hands and elsewhere to constantly remind her. And, I can understand why she wouldn't want to have Severus around regardless of how 'prepared' she was.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I agree that what Severus chose was overkill for the fact that he didn't want to hurt her, but he also had to think about what the other 30+ people would think and say.
As for the physical scaring, there will be some, yes... but it is my belief that the wizarding world's potions are better at healing than the medicines we know. Keeping that in mind, I think that the scars will be better hidden.
Lovely tid-bits, but it just leaves one aching for more. I understand completely what Draco must be feeling because I am too (thanks to you) I just want to lock them in a room together. I know, I know, Hermione needs to go slow and think her way though all the emotional turmoil. I look forward to your next submission to see how far they can both come and how fast, because you know Voldemort won't wait for too long. Keep up the good work, JoAnne
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Isn't it infuriating? And they were moving along so nicely until Voldemort got in the way. Oh well, there will be progress, and not too far in the future.
Thank you very much for reading.
Wow!
His branding her did that block out the rest of her pain of the DE's play time?
Hopefully she will be able to forgive him of such acts. How is Draco taking all of this?
I can see why this would be a very hard chapter to write.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks for your thoughts. Having so much pain up front probably did block out most if not all of the pain.
As for Draco, he handles it in a slightly odd way, which you'll in the next chapter.
Thanks again!
Oh, I really hate reviewing.....I don't feel like we should have any affect on writers, positively or negatively. I'll just say I'm eager to see the rest of the story. It is very interesting and I look forward to your updates.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I'm glad that you decided to review. I always love hearing that people are reading along. Thank you for letting me know....
I am not sure what to say. I have enjoyed your story and you are an exellent writer, but I am not sure I would like the turn I think this story is taking. I find the situation where Severus, no matter the need for continue spying, is taking a student and someone I think he is responsible for, into a situation where the outcome will be torture and rape. I also find it hard to belive that Hermione willingly, no matter how "necessary", will let her self be tortured and raped by several Death Eaters with no greater wish than to hurt, torture, humiliate and probably kill her. I think that when the next update is submitted, I will have to make a decission on weather or not I want to continue reading this story. I read fanfiction because I love the characters, I want to be entertained, and want the good guys winning at the end. No matter if your intention is to let the "good" side win at the end, the price migth be to high to pay. Rape is a serious situation with ramifications for the futuere way wider the actual time it happens. I can't find it belivable for Hermione to ever forgive Severus for letting this happen to her, even if she would know that he is more or less forced to do so, and I can't imagine Severus being able to forgive him self either (and I am nor sure he should be able to forgive him self). To be honest, for him to do this marks him as the coward he himself hate to be called in my eyes. Well, enough about me ranting, your story still deserves it's five stars, and if I don't like the next turn of the story I will stop reading it without flaming you.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this.... I agree with all the points you've made, and I value your opinion. All I can say is that my intentions are good. I know the road I take is not often an easy one, but in the end, "good" will prevail. I hope to see you reviewing again, if not this story, then something else.
I am at the edge of my seat with this story! I just can't help wondering what's next! Amazing as always!
A.M.B.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I will update soon...
Very intense story. Should Hermione Sleep with Severus or Draco first? It might cause less damage. Update soon!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks for reading and letting me know. I'll say that things will be bad, but the events are pretty set.
Sorry but the entire story doesn't work. You have not shown a convincing reason for her to place herself in this position. Would be better to have kidnapped her to begin and have them save her. Your writting is excellant by the way. It kept me reading. Voldemort is coming across as a bit lame, I think he would revel in excess torture, you could also say Harry is more concerned with the thought the torture is ongoing and finds himself unable to concentrate while she is missing. That or in his arragance- Voldemort hopes to sway her loyalties. Anyway I would scrap or rewrite it cause it could be very good.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I appreciate that you've taken the time to let me know what you think. I value any sort of feedback and do welcome it all. I am sorry to heard that you think this story doesn't work. Having her kidnapped outright would cause an uproar and negate everything that Severus and Draco are trying to accomplish. They need her willing so that she can give information. She is in peril, but trusts that she won't be taken complete advantage of.
wow. This is great I love the way this story is going... I'm a little aprehensive about the next meeting though!Don't wait too long to update please!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you very much for letting me know what you think! The next update won't be nearly so far away, I promise.
Hello,
Happy for the update. It seems Severus will have to do some breaking in with her. Is that what the looks are about? He feels sad it will have to come to that? Or has the Dark Lord told him in advance that they will give a performance for all to see and she must maintain her innocence?
Or do I need to read this over again to recall what is what?
Well I have to get shower fresh off to a meeting tonight. Oh joy. Would rather stay at home and read your story.
Have a great week.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Severus is in a pretty harsh situation. He knows how Voldemort works, and that scares him. It would scare anyone.
Thank you for reading! I always love hearing from you... :)
I'm dreading Hermione's next meeting. I don't think I'll have the stomach if/when that scene comes to pass. I still can't wait for the next chapter though.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I promise that none of my chapters are horribly graphic. I do thank you for taking the time to read and review. It means a lot to use poor authors! :D
A good story. I don't really like the fact that Hermione was tortured so badly. Great plot and characters!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you. It was hard to write, so I'm sure it was even worse to read about Hermione's torture. Unfortunately, I think that is a very feasible course of events for the situation that she's facing.
Again, thanks for letting me know what you think.
Execellent fic!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it.
how many chapters left? *scared look* i want it to keep going on and on and on and yea. :)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
There are a total of 19 chapters and an epilogue. Don't worry, there is still plenty of story left to go.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
YAY!
An interesting story and you write well. However, I have some trouble understanding why Hermione would agree to put herself in this situation in the first place...
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Hermione knows what is required of members of the Order. So, the fact that Draco is there means that there must be some good in him. That's what helps her make the decision to help him. Hermione kind of goes out of the way to believe that there is good in people. That's the aspect of her character I was using.
Intriguing. I can't wait to see who the guy is. My gut says that it's Malfoy, a secret Order member, and he was party Disillusioned... or something. LOL Maybe it's Snape on Polyjuice? Teehee... Mah mind is wandering!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you. I'm glad that people are taking guesses. It's a lot of fun that way.
Since you say the story is already written, I guess there isn't any point in begging for a happy ending (meaning Severus and Hermione, alive, happy, and together), is it? Oh well, I like it so far and will hope for the best! Thanks for your work.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I'm not that cruel. There will be some rough spots, but this story does have a happy ending. :)
I see you've twisted canon a bit in your story, because I don't think Harry would ever tell anyone else than Ron and Hermione about the Horcruxes. Now I wonder what that unexpected place Hermione will find herself might be.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I don't know if I'm necessarily twisting canon. Sooner or later, the Trio is going to get to a point where they just can't do it on their own. Though, I'm glad to see that you're back along for the ride. :)
I like the start and find it interesting that the trio will be at the Dursleys together. I wonder if they'll give Dudley a taste of magic... Muahahaha
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you. They don't use magic, but Hermione gets to bossy them around a bit. ;)
Great beginning! I loved the sassy Hermione..
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks so much for the review. The first chapter will be out next week.