Chapter 1
Chapter 2 of 13
Clara MinutesA trip to the Dursleys?s and Number 12 Grimmauld Place has interesting results.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or anything associated with it. This is purely for my own enjoyment.
Hermione and Ron awoke to find Harry already moving about.
"Morning," Hermione said sleepily.
Harry startled at the sound of her voice.
"Sorry, didn't mean to scare you."
"It's alright. I just didn't expect you guys to be up for a while. Morning, Ron."
Ron grunted in return.
Hermione giggled at Ron's reply. He's definitely not a morning person, she thought.
"So what are your plans for today, Harry?" she asked as she stood to gather clothes to wear.
"Well, I don't know how much we can do. I'm not exactly allowed to leave the house, and we don't have any reference books here." Harry shrugged and moved to sit on his bed.
Instead of sitting in silence, Hermione made her way to the bathroom to change. She came back a few minutes later to find the boys in the same positions she'd left them.
"We could always search our history texts for important artifacts. Hogwarts: A History has sections on each of the founders. It could be helpful."
"What, you don't have it memorized completely? You only quote it all the time."
Hermione rolled her eyes at Ron's comment and went to retrieve the book from her trunk.
"Well, c'mon. Get your own copies and start reading." Hermione flopped down on her makeshift bed and began to read.
The next few days passed in a very similar fashion. Hermione bossed the boys into helping her research historical artifacts that had belonged to the founders. She had taken charge of creating a list of possible objects that Voldemort could have used to make Horcruxes.
The locket was on the list as another Slytherin remnant. It seemed that when Salazar Slytherin left Hogwarts all those years ago, he had taken nothing with him.
Rowena Ravenclaw was going to be the most difficult to find the correct object. She had been a bit of a packrat. She had numerous trinkets and other bits that were considered important.
Helga Hufflepuff was easier. They knew for certain to look for the cup. Her wand seemed to be the only other object of worth that had belonged to her.
Godric Gryffindor was another story. The sword was a possibility, but that had been locked in the Headmaster or Headmistress' office for some time. Finding out whether Voldemort had access to it was going to be difficult, but it was their best guess.
Hermione sighed and went back to reading about Rowena's favorite paperweight.
Three days after they arrived, Remus, Mad-Eye Moody, Tonks and Bill Weasley came to escort them to number twelve, Grimmauld Place. They were all going to walk to Mrs. Figg's house then travel by Floo to number twelve.
As they were leaving, Petunia stopped Harry and asked, "Are you going for good?"
"Yes. Dudley can have his second bedroom back."
Petunia sighed. "Take this, it's not much, but it's something." She shoved a small wad of money into Harry's hands.
He looked down at the money and back up at her, but she was already heading toward the other end of the house. Harry glanced around as if he didn't know what to do. Everyone shrugged, so he pocketed the money and turned to leave.
The entourage moved quickly down the street. Hermione was in between Ron and Harry, who were surrounded by the others. Mad-Eye was behind them, Remus and Tonks were on the left and right respectively, and Bill Weasley was leading. Remus had already Apparated their belongings to Grimmauld Place. Everyone was on edge until they reached Mrs. Figg's house on Wisteria Walk. As soon as they stepped onto the grass, Mrs. Figg opened the door and rushed them all inside.
"Good day, Arabella," said Remus with a slight nod.
"Remus, good to see you!"
"The fire is connected, correct?" growled Mad-Eye, never one for pleasantries.
"Yes, yes. But shan't you stay for tea? The house is quite secure."
"Thank you, but we really must get going," Remus replied kindly.
"Oh, very well. Harry, my dear, I do hope things go well for you. I understand you won't be coming back. Good luck then. Mr. Tibbles will miss looking after you," she rambled.
Harry looked distinctly uncomfortable at becoming the center of attention. "Thanks, Mrs. Figg. I mean thanks for everything, not just the use of your Floo."
"Harry, stop chattering," Hermione whispered.
"Heh, guess we'll be going then."
"All right, Potter and me first," Moody said, stomping over to the fireplace while dragging Harry along.
A whoosh of green, and they had disappeared. Hermione found Tonks taking her arm and leading her to the fireplace next. Before she could say anything to Mrs. Figg, she was swirling through the multiple grates between Surrey and London. Ron and Bill came through a few seconds after Hermione had gotten out of the way, followed closely by Remus.
Seeing that everyone was safe, Remus said, "Your stuff is in your rooms. Everyone has the same rooms as before. If there is anything you need, there is always someone in the kitchen." He smiled at them.
"Thanks." Harry looked at Hermione and Ron, nodded to Remus and headed upstairs.
She and Ron waved goodbye to the others and followed Harry upstairs. They caught up with him in the library.
"There are lots of books here that can help us. Though I think we have a pretty good idea what type of objects we're looking for, I don't have any idea as to what to do with them once we have them." He looked at Hermione expectantly.
"Let's get to work then. I don't have any more of an idea than you, Harry." With that, she started pulling any books from the shelves that could be helpful.
"Harry, have you given any more thought to who R.A.B. is?" Hermione asked suddenly, the next afternoon.
Harry's brow furrowed. "Not really. We've been so busy with looking up the objects; I haven't had much time to think about anything else."
"Why, do you have an idea?"
"I just thought that we'd have as good a chance as any finding a reference here for someone with the initials R.A.B."
"Wait a minute..." Harry trailed off.
"What? What is it?"
Harry didn't seem to hear her. She looked at Ron, but he looked just as confused as she felt. Harry was heading toward the door. They got up and followed him out to the drawing room. Opening the door with a little more force than was necessary, Harry rushed through and moved straight to the Black Family Tapestry.
Hermione followed his gaze and landed on the name Regulus. Regulus Black. Could it really be that easy? she thought.
"I remember Sirius saying something about his Uncle Alphard. What if Regulus was partially named after him?" Harry asked the room.
"Then the locket may be in this house!" Hermione exclaimed, looking around as if she would be able to find it.
"Didn't we move a locket when we were cleaning the house a few summers ago?" Ron asked.
"Yeah, it was heavy. I wonder what happened to it," Harry replied.
"Let's go look in the cabinet," Hermione said as she crossed the room to look into the glass cabinet that had held all of the miscellaneous items.
"Oh no," she said barely above a whisper. "They're empty!"
"Damn! I bet it was in the stuff Mundungus sold." Harry whirled around and started pacing.
"Where's Dung now?" asked Ron.
"Azkaban. He was sent there for doing something stupid a few months ago," Hermione spoke cautiously.
"We need to talk to him. I have to know where that locket went."
"Harry, please be reasonable. We can't go rushing off to Azkaban with all of V-Voldemort's followers in there." Hermione tried to calm him.
Harry let out a growl of frustration. "You're right, Hermione. We were so close to having one more Horcrux out of the way."
"I know. Let's go downstairs and talk to Remus. We'll have to tell the Order about the Horcruxes anyway. Better to let Remus know before we have to tell everyone at once."
Harry nodded and the three of them made their way down to the kitchen. When they entered, they saw that Remus was talking to Tonks in a low voice. The two of them didn't notice the others come in until Harry cleared his throat. Remus' head snapped up and Tonks went reaching for her wand.
"Whoa," Harry said, holding up his hands. "It's just us."
Tonks laughed a little uneasily, but the tension left her body.
"We have some things that the Order needs to know, but we would like to tell you guys first; that way not everyone is shocked at once."
Harry spent the next hour explaining about Voldemort, his Horcruxes and what little information they knew. Finally, Harry got to the part about the locket and R.A.B. Remus was furious with Mundungus after Harry's explanation.
"I'll go to Azkaban first thing tomorrow," Remus stated after Harry finished talking.
"Thanks, Remus. I wanted to go, but Hermione talked some sense into me." Harry at least looked sorry about his earlier suggestion.
Remus smiled at Hermione. "Thanks. We really didn't need to be chasing after you three so early on."
Hermione shook her head and laughed.
Author's Notes: I want to thank both of my wonderful betas GinnyW and snarkyroxy. I can't thank you both enough.
This story is completely written and about halfway done with edits. You can expect a new chapter at the beginning of every week.
Reviews are very welcome and appreciated.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Deception of the Night
47 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
Loved It!! Wicked!! Amazing!! Fantastic!! Bloody Brilliant!!
awwww, good chapter lets hope Hermione's able to wrap her mind around the realities of the situation soon.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
She is making slow but steady progress, which is only to be expected after the horrors she went through. Thanks for reading and letting me know!
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter...I just hope that Hermione will be able to talk to Severus in the next chapter! I do hope so!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you for reading and letting me know! I can guarantee that they'll talk, but things won't be very easy.
Ach! I've figured out the problem. [Yes, I'm a chronic complainer, but I write this with only the best of intentions.] It's a good story. I like the story. But it is my humble opinion that it lacks passion.
Not sexual passion, but intensity, fervor! It reads more like you are just tickling at the story rathering than shouting it out. Put some oomph in it! Crank up the emotions.
You can be passionate without all the gory details I wrote of in the last chapters review. These people need to express themselves more vividly.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I appreciate your words. Occasionally a bit hard to swallow, but I do ask for any and all feedback! It helps me to know exactly what my readers are thinking. I do realize that my descriptions are a bit nonexistant, and I am working on that. If you've read any of my old stuff you'll notice that.
Again, thank you for your thoughts.
I understand where Hermione is coming from, and I know Snape is not really doing well with her not being able to deal with him, but I really like your Draco.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you so much! I've never really written Draco, but he seemed like a perfect 3rd party for this story.
Since you only wrote about what Severus did to Hermione, we don't know the extent of any other harm that may have been caused... but I have to feel sorry for her. Regardless of the fact that Severus didn't want to hurt her, he chose a permenant, extremely painful way to do what he didn't want.
I've recently seen the results of a hot metal burn on my sons hand and the scaring is deep and forever. Just what a pretty young woman wants to live with. My point is, I can't believe the memories will be that easily assuaged with visible deformities marring her hands and elsewhere to constantly remind her. And, I can understand why she wouldn't want to have Severus around regardless of how 'prepared' she was.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I agree that what Severus chose was overkill for the fact that he didn't want to hurt her, but he also had to think about what the other 30+ people would think and say.
As for the physical scaring, there will be some, yes... but it is my belief that the wizarding world's potions are better at healing than the medicines we know. Keeping that in mind, I think that the scars will be better hidden.
Lovely tid-bits, but it just leaves one aching for more. I understand completely what Draco must be feeling because I am too (thanks to you) I just want to lock them in a room together. I know, I know, Hermione needs to go slow and think her way though all the emotional turmoil. I look forward to your next submission to see how far they can both come and how fast, because you know Voldemort won't wait for too long. Keep up the good work, JoAnne
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Isn't it infuriating? And they were moving along so nicely until Voldemort got in the way. Oh well, there will be progress, and not too far in the future.
Thank you very much for reading.
Wow!
His branding her did that block out the rest of her pain of the DE's play time?
Hopefully she will be able to forgive him of such acts. How is Draco taking all of this?
I can see why this would be a very hard chapter to write.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks for your thoughts. Having so much pain up front probably did block out most if not all of the pain.
As for Draco, he handles it in a slightly odd way, which you'll in the next chapter.
Thanks again!
Oh, I really hate reviewing.....I don't feel like we should have any affect on writers, positively or negatively. I'll just say I'm eager to see the rest of the story. It is very interesting and I look forward to your updates.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I'm glad that you decided to review. I always love hearing that people are reading along. Thank you for letting me know....
I am not sure what to say. I have enjoyed your story and you are an exellent writer, but I am not sure I would like the turn I think this story is taking. I find the situation where Severus, no matter the need for continue spying, is taking a student and someone I think he is responsible for, into a situation where the outcome will be torture and rape. I also find it hard to belive that Hermione willingly, no matter how "necessary", will let her self be tortured and raped by several Death Eaters with no greater wish than to hurt, torture, humiliate and probably kill her. I think that when the next update is submitted, I will have to make a decission on weather or not I want to continue reading this story. I read fanfiction because I love the characters, I want to be entertained, and want the good guys winning at the end. No matter if your intention is to let the "good" side win at the end, the price migth be to high to pay. Rape is a serious situation with ramifications for the futuere way wider the actual time it happens. I can't find it belivable for Hermione to ever forgive Severus for letting this happen to her, even if she would know that he is more or less forced to do so, and I can't imagine Severus being able to forgive him self either (and I am nor sure he should be able to forgive him self). To be honest, for him to do this marks him as the coward he himself hate to be called in my eyes. Well, enough about me ranting, your story still deserves it's five stars, and if I don't like the next turn of the story I will stop reading it without flaming you.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this.... I agree with all the points you've made, and I value your opinion. All I can say is that my intentions are good. I know the road I take is not often an easy one, but in the end, "good" will prevail. I hope to see you reviewing again, if not this story, then something else.
I am at the edge of my seat with this story! I just can't help wondering what's next! Amazing as always!
A.M.B.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I will update soon...
Very intense story. Should Hermione Sleep with Severus or Draco first? It might cause less damage. Update soon!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks for reading and letting me know. I'll say that things will be bad, but the events are pretty set.
Sorry but the entire story doesn't work. You have not shown a convincing reason for her to place herself in this position. Would be better to have kidnapped her to begin and have them save her. Your writting is excellant by the way. It kept me reading. Voldemort is coming across as a bit lame, I think he would revel in excess torture, you could also say Harry is more concerned with the thought the torture is ongoing and finds himself unable to concentrate while she is missing. That or in his arragance- Voldemort hopes to sway her loyalties. Anyway I would scrap or rewrite it cause it could be very good.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I appreciate that you've taken the time to let me know what you think. I value any sort of feedback and do welcome it all. I am sorry to heard that you think this story doesn't work. Having her kidnapped outright would cause an uproar and negate everything that Severus and Draco are trying to accomplish. They need her willing so that she can give information. She is in peril, but trusts that she won't be taken complete advantage of.
wow. This is great I love the way this story is going... I'm a little aprehensive about the next meeting though!Don't wait too long to update please!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you very much for letting me know what you think! The next update won't be nearly so far away, I promise.
Hello,
Happy for the update. It seems Severus will have to do some breaking in with her. Is that what the looks are about? He feels sad it will have to come to that? Or has the Dark Lord told him in advance that they will give a performance for all to see and she must maintain her innocence?
Or do I need to read this over again to recall what is what?
Well I have to get shower fresh off to a meeting tonight. Oh joy. Would rather stay at home and read your story.
Have a great week.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Severus is in a pretty harsh situation. He knows how Voldemort works, and that scares him. It would scare anyone.
Thank you for reading! I always love hearing from you... :)
I'm dreading Hermione's next meeting. I don't think I'll have the stomach if/when that scene comes to pass. I still can't wait for the next chapter though.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I promise that none of my chapters are horribly graphic. I do thank you for taking the time to read and review. It means a lot to use poor authors! :D
A good story. I don't really like the fact that Hermione was tortured so badly. Great plot and characters!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you. It was hard to write, so I'm sure it was even worse to read about Hermione's torture. Unfortunately, I think that is a very feasible course of events for the situation that she's facing.
Again, thanks for letting me know what you think.
Execellent fic!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it.
how many chapters left? *scared look* i want it to keep going on and on and on and yea. :)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
There are a total of 19 chapters and an epilogue. Don't worry, there is still plenty of story left to go.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
YAY!
An interesting story and you write well. However, I have some trouble understanding why Hermione would agree to put herself in this situation in the first place...
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Hermione knows what is required of members of the Order. So, the fact that Draco is there means that there must be some good in him. That's what helps her make the decision to help him. Hermione kind of goes out of the way to believe that there is good in people. That's the aspect of her character I was using.
Intriguing. I can't wait to see who the guy is. My gut says that it's Malfoy, a secret Order member, and he was party Disillusioned... or something. LOL Maybe it's Snape on Polyjuice? Teehee... Mah mind is wandering!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you. I'm glad that people are taking guesses. It's a lot of fun that way.
Since you say the story is already written, I guess there isn't any point in begging for a happy ending (meaning Severus and Hermione, alive, happy, and together), is it? Oh well, I like it so far and will hope for the best! Thanks for your work.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I'm not that cruel. There will be some rough spots, but this story does have a happy ending. :)
I see you've twisted canon a bit in your story, because I don't think Harry would ever tell anyone else than Ron and Hermione about the Horcruxes. Now I wonder what that unexpected place Hermione will find herself might be.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
I don't know if I'm necessarily twisting canon. Sooner or later, the Trio is going to get to a point where they just can't do it on their own. Though, I'm glad to see that you're back along for the ride. :)
I like the start and find it interesting that the trio will be at the Dursleys together. I wonder if they'll give Dudley a taste of magic... Muahahaha
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thank you. They don't use magic, but Hermione gets to bossy them around a bit. ;)
Great beginning! I loved the sassy Hermione..
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Deception of the Night)
Thanks so much for the review. The first chapter will be out next week.