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Coerced Salvation
Southern_Cocoa198 Reviews | 7.07/10 (198 Ratings, 0 Likes, 193 Favorites )
New orders from the Dark Lord throw Severus and the Malfoys into difficult situations. Snape will eventually have to seek assistance from Granger. When that happens, friendship and romance ensue.
This is a collaboration between Southern Witch 69 and CocoaChristy.
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Southern_Witch_69 and CocoaChristy have been working together by betaing each other's stories and by being admins here at the Poetess. We've decided to get together and write since we get on so well.
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I'm glad to know that this will be SS/HG, but I don't like the idea of Severus and Narcissa having a child together. Not a bit.But I'll stick with this story - it's very interesting so far...
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
Thanks for reading, Melissa, especially since you don't like some of it! Don't worry--this IS a SS/HG fic!
right now I can't possibly see how this will be SS/HG. but I'll keep reading to find out. Narcissa's punishment seems awfully lenient for Moldy.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: We're going to swing it around in just a couple of chapters actually. Voldemort was quite brilliant with her punishment. He saw how much she cared about Draco and how she was willing to do anything to save him. He figures it will be hard for her to carry, birth, and love another child only to see it taken away from her and have its father raise it while she had no say in its life. A few Crucio's wouldn't have lasted until the end of her life. At least, I think it's pretty harsh. LOL. Maybe it's not so some. But even so, that's how our Voldemort's mind is working. He's also "rewarding" Snape in a way, punishing Lucius, and punishing Draco. Teehee.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: You think its lenient? Not me! I would hate to have to have another mans child! And this way, Voldemort punishes all three of the Malfoy's. First, she has to have a baby and give it away with no say how it's raised, Lucius has to watch her carry another man's child and Draco has to see his mother being treated in such away and know it was because he failed--not considered worthy. But hang in there--it will be HG/SS soon!
The interaction between Draco and Wormtail had me HOWLING! And this line from Snape "I simply want you to know that I will do what I can to ease your discomfort while I find my pleasure..." Again, I found this line funny. I did like the moment between Snape and Narcissa as well...anyway, you guys are doing a great job so far and I'm looking forward to the next update.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for reading! Wormtail = shudder, the nasty vermin. Teehee. Snape's trying to get his groove on. More up shortly.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks Bella! This story is a blast to write with SW! Yep, wormtail is some piece of (nasty) work, I say! I love a snide and self-serving Snape! More up soon!
Oh, what a delight: two great authors teamed up to bring us a new story. So far, sooooo good! I'm totally hooked. Can't wait for the next update.
Suggest: "unforgiving" instead of unforgivable in prologue. "...THEY would have forced her..." up above in chapter 1 (typo, I think).
Again, great story!! THANKS.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Yes, that's what it needs to be. I read it over yesterday and never noticed. Thanks (right embarrassed). The next chapter is already being worked on. Cheers.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying so far! More coming soon!
Oh, that will be an excellent story! I love all these tiny details which let arose the story to life... Eg the hints about Severus's past, I never read the idea of his mother killing his father but it makes sense to me... I wish I could go through the Hogwart's library to do some research... ;)Your Narcissa is very well written, very subtle, I've never read her more convincing I loved it how she convinced herself. She is very narcisstic, but I like her nevertheless. :). Î'm looking forward to the next chapter, you are very fast writers, that's really amazing.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks,
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! This is so fun to do together, and it goes by quicker! Glad you are enjoying!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Those hints about his past will definitely come back up later. I really enjoy writing Narcissa, and this is mostly how I see her. I think since her name is close to narcissism that I try to give her that little touch of conceit. Teehee. More up soon!
An update already! Hmmm, you're sure this is going to be Hermione/Severus? I'm really looking forward to seeing how this will develop.Oh, and a lecherous Wormtail is very high on my squick-list; just ewww... (insert barfing emoticon here; couldn't find one *lol*)Hope you two update soon, again!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks,
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! Yep--I promise it will be SS/HG! We have it all plotted out, or the major things anyway! Uh huh--Wormtail is gross, but not without his uses!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Yeah, we hate Wormtail, too. It's why we used him that way. He'll get his though. Hermione really will get with the man soon. Teehee. "I solemnly swear..."
Whow its very good and i am trying to wonder how it will twist around to bring him to hermione nice work
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: We have it planned out and feel that it will be a very different type of hg/ss story. Different, but enjoyable.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: I know it's hard to see now, but it will twist to that!
good chapter
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: thanks, doll.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks Patty!
If you can keep up with so quick updates, you'll make me a very delighted reader. I understand the need to work out the kinks of the story first, and I still wonder if Severus will sleep with Narcissa or if Draco will be able to prevent it, though there isn't much time left. If so, the presence of that child in the story should make an interesting plot twist. I also wonder how Ron/Hermione's relationship will go before she goes to Severus.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: We're definitely going to continue with fast updates. It seems so much easier to write this way, and it's a blast! I'm afraid that Draco is a bit stuck where he is--for now anyway. I sort of like the idea of another woman's child with Snape and Hermione's reactions and feelings. The Ron/Hermione part won't be so bad. I think people will like it. :)
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! Its a lot of fun writing with SW, so we likely will have quick updates!They have to go through with things--so the story will develop from there!
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh very good * taps fingers on her desk and thinks* Now you both have done a good job on Snape's personality so far. I almost feel sorry for him a bit i got say.
Cold yet still a a good man. I say this in some stories but very few, this is snape i see all the time and how i think he might be if given a chance. I just kinda want to say awww at this yet ,,awwwww.
As for peter,werid little bugger he is. I don't like him at all mind you.
Just to ask do you both write a chapter or one at a time?
Oh to say double Yay's for you two making this fic rock.
Edania
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks Edania! We both write in one chapter--SW mainly does Severus. I have to say, she does do him so well... I have always teased her and said that she is the female Severus Snape! Glad you are enjoying!
Response from snapedreamer (Reviewer)
I also want to add which i didn't get to add in. I think i might start liking this NM/SS pairing going on..omg I have turned ,,, But i just hope it still has some HG/Ss abit..maybe a little insult here and there from the two?
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: This will eventually be an SS/HG fic! Though we may do a SS/NM in the future.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: I'm so happy that you like Snape. I was worried that people wouldn't care for him much because he seems "nice," but I figure it's the way Narcissa sees him. Teehee. I've found that I'm starting to really enjoy Snape and Narcissa, but yes, it's gonna kick back to Hermione.
please, please update I soon I love this story and the waiting is excruciating
Oh I wish so badly that this was simply a Narcissa and Snape story. NOt that I don't mind him with Granger. I've started liking those, but this is just delicious.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks C_S! Maybe our next one will be!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Maybe we can manage something for you, Cissy.
Good chapter. Looking forward to more!~ j
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks, J! We're working on it!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for reading, doll. We'll have more soon! Muahaha
Interesting beginning. Draco being a pouty little brat seems right on. Narcissa not catching the drift of the conversation until Severus explains it to her is just what I pictured Narcissa's persona to be. How you two are going to bring this around to Hermione will be quite the feat. However, I am a devoted fan of your writing talents, and I have great faith in you.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks so much
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! Just be patient, it will be brought around! Hopefully, nobody will guess how! Thanks for your faith!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for following! We've plans on how to bring them about. I just hope everyone likes it! :)
An interesting beginning to the story. Everybody's plotting something and I'm very curious as to what exactly is on Snape's mind. Is he going to be as cooperative as he comes across? Why? Good story!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! Twists within twists!! Glad you likeit so far!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: We're going to keep Snape's thoughts secret for jsut a bit. Muahaha...
I am VERY intrigued as to how this story will turn to HG/SS!! Can't wait for more. I love both of your writing styles, so this story will be a real treat. Yay!Peace! ~ j
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Wow! Thanks so much j! Glad you like it so far--and no worries, this will be SS/HG!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for the support, Jackie.
hey this is good and i like both of you and together you rock
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thank you,
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
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Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks!
You are wicked plot-weavers! So horrible of Voldemort to use the weaknesses of everyone against themselves... I wonder of the place Snape has in your sheming... and I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Muahahaha! Thanks
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! Snape has a very important place in the grand scheme of things... More up soon!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for reading and thanks for the rec! We appreciate it! More up soon!
What an intersting beginning, I'm definitely looking forward to read more of this story!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks! We wanted something a bit different that we haven't seen done before. More up soon!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for reading! More up soon.
**Scratches head** I read load of dialogue, especially in the firt 3/4s... Anyway, it's a great setup, you got Bella and Narcissa down really well. Congrats to both of you - what an awesome team.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
Thank you,
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
! SW and I have been working together for a long time now--so I will definitely keep her! Glad you are enjoying!
Response from Chartreuse (Reviewer)
LOL, I reckon she's happy to keep you too!
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Yea, I think I'll keep her round. Teehee.. And you know, it was mostly dialogue, wasn't it? teehee
Very promising start. Try not to do too much introspection by the characters...more dialog and action, less thought grinding.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
I often enjoy instropection when reading, so I use it while writing. I don't like long bouts of just narrative and thinking, though, so I do break in other things with it. Being the prologue, we sort of set the ground for the plot and how everyone was feeling about things. We've a great plot planned (so we think anyway). Hope you stick around.
Holy Merlin, now you two got me hooked. Honestly, THAT will become something big, I just know it.
You will be quick with updates, won't you? *taps his feet impatiently*
Patrick
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: We will definitely be quick with updates. This is just too fun for us! Thanks for reading.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks, Patrick! Yep, we plan quick updates. So happy you like it!
Amazing!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!! Will Draco run to the Order???
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: I hate to give away any plot, but I can safely say that Draco will end up face to face with an Order member.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thanks Phoenixflight! Yep, at least one member!
A very interesting first chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Thanks for reading! More up soon.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: Thank you miepje!
Like the chapter. Not really yet able to see where this story is going. Although, looking forward to rest of story. Seems like will have lots of tension.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
SW: Tension indeed. More up soon.
Response from Southern_Cocoa (Author of Coerced Salvation)
CC: I am an angst lover, so there will be tension! Glad you liked it ccrawley!