very nice chapter! i'm looking forward to the ss/hg interaction :)

Its getting better and better! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love how its a little twisty,never knowing what eaxh character is thinking or planning!!

And I can not wait until the next chapter is online :) I only wish I could have a look at this hidden drawer. I love secrets :). But I hate Ron in this chapter, how can anyone be so stupid! Good work!

Oh I am angry. My review was lost. I was saying that this was a great update but I had missed it. Since Narcissa is my favourite, I hope you go easy on her when the time comes, I have a bad feeling about this.

Oh I am angry. My review was lost. I was saying that this was a great update but I had missed it. Since Narcissa is my favourite, I hope you go easy on her when the time comes, I have a bad feeling about this.

Can I find an author for you to complete it? Like Grace Under Victory? Or perhaps someone else of your choice can take over?

I love this stroy! Y'all sure can write a great story together! I hope you update soon. I cant wait to find out who he (Draco) ran into!

Great chapter.  You have portrayed each character with such believable personality traits. I can vividly visualize each one as you describe the scenes.  Bellatrix seems so evil, of course, and Narcissa so spoiled and vain, obviously.  As you can tell, I am not a writer.  However, I am thoroughly enjoying your writing talents. 

So many possible threads in this story: Lucius, Draco, the trio, Severus and Narcissa, Bellatrix...I like it, and I'm looking forward for a bit of Hermione/Severus interaction.

thank you for a new chapter.

wonder who he ran into?

waiting to see. 

Pleasssse Update as soon as you can, I love this fic and I'm dying to know what's gonna happen:)

REally enjoying this story. Looking forward to the update.

What a position to be in. And poor Snape having his child raised to be the ultimate death eater.

Trust Hermione to always ask questions. ^^And is Severus going to be a daddy? *lol*Again, great chapter and looking forward to more!

ah, Snape and Narcissa. i just love them together. this was a very interesting chapter. i can't wait for the next one!

I start to like your Narcissa... And I'm wondering what's really going on in Snape, because until now we see everything through her eyes... So is her really in love with her? I'm not sure at all!You are doing an equal good job with the order meeting. I even like Ron :) And what has Hermione figured out about Snape? Why are they not listenig! Stupid order members... I love it to hate Moody. 

Great chapter! I hope Severus wont be hurt too bad.

Will Hermione sleep with Ron? It seems like it would only be fare if she did since snape is sleeping with Narcissa, not that it matters, but i was just wondering, and i like what is going on so far. This is something different. I thought they wouldn't really go through with it, ss/nm, but they did! wowupdate soon!

I love this Narcissa. I think you've captured her beautifully. I find myself wishing to know Snape's thoughts. Also, the Ron and Hermione part was perfect. Both definitely acted their ages in their exploration. I look forward to the point when she and Snape come face to face. Any idea when that might be?

thank you for a new chapter. it was great. p

the more I read, the more I want to read. The plot seems to be slowly unravelled and that's just fine with me. I'm eager to see how emotions and relationships will evolve.

My oh my! Narcissa seems very sure of herself, maybe Snape does love her, but geez, could she be anymore conceited?! She bugged me in this chapter--so you should take this as a compliment to your writing--you wrote her so well that I found myself making running comments outloud!  Hopefully she's pregnant and Snape can move on to Hermione!   Speaking of which, I absolutely loved when Ron sniffed his finger--that was hysterical. Good job and as always, looking forward to the update.

I just have to say to SW and CC you two are doing a wonderful job so far on Severus, Hemrione and the rest of the lot.

Now  I wanted to bring this up in the last review but forgot to do that. While reading I noticed how well you really did with Hemrione in the chapter and and others. When I read about her   personality. You really showed her age, that even if she is bright, she is still a girl at heart, still pure and non touched ( to a limit) .

Now I have read a good 300 stories base off  Hermione and Snape and i have to say this as close as I have seen her  act i think she would act.  though a women ( in some ways) but a child who has yet to see true horrors of war. The real side of darkness...

Just to ask who writes the part of Hemrione?

Now as for Severus,  it seems he might just have a thing for her but   to me  maybe a crush but then again after reading this chapter. I think maybe something more, or maybe in Narcissa , even though he can't have her heart its maybe as close as for him to have some type of future or family in a twisted way.   I really don't know how you will pull  him liking Hermione while Narcissa seems a bit closer, then again you guys did say a HG/SS fic . 

i am not rushing with the whole action of the story

. I  just want to make you don't get the wrong idea of what i mean by that comment.

One morething and I will shut up with this long review, I just like to add, you did a great job with ROn as well. the both of you did. Really made ron true to who he is somewhat ( not a ron fan so its hard to say). Most stories i read make him to be dumb or the type that might hurt Hermione, but you didn't do that.

I think that you have made this fic one of kind in its own way even if Snape is nice in this one though i think it fits him  for this story.

One more thing , to SW: A female Snape?  Seeing how you write him so well, i wonder , sure your not a snape and we just don't know?

I look forward to the next chapter to see what happens with Nacissa and what of Draco and Peter? 

Edania

The reviwer who bugs writers about Snape 

Your portrayal of Narcissa really makes me feel for her. I find her relationship with Severus rather interesting; in most fic I've read, the female interaction I'm used to seeing with him is Hermione, McGonagall, or his mother. Narcissa makes for a unique dynamic. Keep the chapters coming!

Oh!  Loving it!  I can appreciate a SS/NM pairing every now and then, though I am glad to see the it will ultimately be a SS/HG story.  Great start!  Knowing you two, this will be brilliant!  Update soon!  :)