Hogsmeade
Chapter 11 of 21
HogwartsHoneyFor disclaimer see Chapter 1.
A/N: I know it's been forever, but I've moved countries since last I posted. Now that life is *almost* normal, may I present the latest installment of Wizards and Champions. Sorry for the delay, and I hope it's worth it.
Thanks to my betas, Allyness29 and JaneAverage -- you ladies are wonderful.
Chapter 11 ~*~ Hogsmeade ~*~
Cedric felt oddly lighter since his talk with Jamie, and even though the pressures of both school and the Tournament were still exceptionally high, the following few days were some of the best he'd had since becoming champion.
Professor Moody had begun teaching them the Patronus Charm. Everyone was expected to conjure their Patronus and use it both for sending messages and in a mock battle. Markus was particularly amused at the sight of Jamie's silver fox chasing Fred's rabbit (or was it George's?) around, and his big, booming laugh echoed through the classroom as he leaned on Lee Jordan for support.
Professor Moody seemed particularly agitated at what he called the class' 'tomfoolery,' and he had them practicing until they neared exhaustion.
'Again, Mister Diggory! I need something strong from you, something tangible, something REAL!'
Cedric slumped against the wall and groaned at the sheer volume of Moody's voice as he looked at Jamie, who clapped him on the shoulder in a show of encouragement. Cedric had initially used images from his childhood, the day that he got his Hogwarts letter and the joy on his parents' faces, but the joy he had felt that day had been more of a reflected excitement from his mother and father. His Patronus barely held its shape, and he began to realize that the feelings weren't strong enough because they weren't his feelings. No, what truly made Cedric happy was Harry, and he straightened once again to conjure up a memory of his own.
He thought of the younger champion and felt a warmth flow over his body. He recalled an image of Harry after their first task and he felt a surge through his magic. Another image flashed through Cedric's consciousness, an image so clear and so powerful that he almost staggered backwards. He and Harry, surrounded by their auras in the small room, and his feeling of peace, of belonging... Suddenly he felt the power build in his own body as his magic took hold, and he uttered the words almost without thought.
'Expecto Patronum!'
The effect was profound. He felt his magic swirl through him and funnel itself down through his arm and into his wand. The tip of his wand flared with an incredibly bright light, out of which galloped a large African Oryx. Cedric looked in amazement at the fully formed animal, its horns standing up proudly from its head. The shimmering, silvery Oryx ran around the room, causing the other Patronuses in its path to scatter, and as it rounded again on the grouping of Cedric, Professor Moody and Jamie, both Cedric and Jamie held their ground while the Professor leapt out of the way. The Oryx skidded to a halt in front of Cedric and lowered its head, placing its forehead against his chest with its long horns lying on each of Cedric's shoulders for a moment before the beast disappeared.
Markus was the first to speak.
'Well, Diggs, that was something.'
That was something indeed, thought Cedric.
~*~
The end of that week brought with it another trip to Hogsmeade. Cedric couldn't bring himself to ask Cho for fear of rejection. He had been quite reserved and almost unkind to her after the second task, and he felt an uncomfortable distance between them. He deeply regretted his inability to be who she wanted, to live up to everyone's expectations, but in rational moments he knew that he could only truly be himself. He felt that he could no longer be everything to everyone and he would not live his life for others any longer. After the Tournament was over he would explain things to his parents; explain himself and his feelings. He felt that he owed them at least that much.
The sun was at its zenith, and it shimmered like a Patronus as Cedric's group left Hogwarts and headed down towards Hogsmeade. Cedric glanced at his friends as they walked alongside him and he felt oddly disconnected. Jamie and Katie soon pulled ahead of the group, excitedly discussing Quidditch, and Cedric was amused to note that they walked extremely close to each other. He had felt waves of nervousness from Jamie earlier, but now Cedric felt a sense of acceptance emanating from Katie, and he knew that the two of them would be all right.
He glanced sideways at Hannah who was laughing at something Markus had said. Cedric was truly happy for his friends and the corners of his mouth turned up in a private smile. Hannah had proved herself to be more than up to the task of handling Markus, and that was no mean feat.
Cedric's feet made their way down the well-worn path towards Hogsmeade, and he allowed his mind to wander. Predictably, they centred on Cho's face at the lake and later that same week at breakfast. Cedric had tried to talk with her on a couple of occasions, but he realized that nothing he said would make a difference. She had finally realized that her feelings for him weren't being returned ... couldn't be returned ... and that realization had stood between them like a wall. She had still been friendly, but she was distant, and he could see the hurt in her eyes; could feel her loss without even trying to sense it.
His melancholy turned his thoughts to the other problem: Harry Potter. After their performances in the second task, both he and Harry were tied for first place in the competition, and Cedric couldn't deny the fact that their standings further complicated things. He now felt the pressure increase twofold; on the one hand he was champion and would fight to win to the very best of his ability, but on the other hand, he felt an instinctual and very strong loyalty to the young Gryffindor that went against all logic. Cedric believed and trusted in his instincts, and in that regard he realized that he was truly at an impasse.
He was jolted out of his musings by Hannah's hand wrapping around his arm as she pulled him to join the two of them.
'Come on now, Cedric, it's a Hogsmeade weekend! Let's go into Honeydukes first and then we can head to Dervish and Banges.'
Cedric couldn't help but be caught up in her enthusiasm, and he shook off the darkness of his thoughts as the trio marched as one down High Street and swept into Honeydukes.
~*~
They emerged thirty minutes later, each clutching a bag of treats. Markus had purchased a block of Honeydukes' finest milk chocolate for himself and a small box of flower-shaped fudge for Hannah. Cedric had also purchased a large block of milk chocolate for himself, as well as a variety of several smaller chocolates, each wrapped in shimmering foil. Munching their treats, the trio caught up with Jamie and Katie as the pair came out of Zonko's Joke Shop.
'Hey, Katie needs to stop at Scrivenshaft's so we're heading over that way. Where shall we meet you?'
Katie and Hannah chorused, 'Madame Puddifoot's for a late lunch?'
The men groaned in unison.
'Why does this feel like a setup, lads?' Jamie asked wryly, and ducked as Katie reached out quickly and tapped him on the back of his head. Everyone laughed easily and agreed to meet at the claustrophobic tea shop.
Cedric accompanied Markus and Hannah as they entered the shop and made for a large booth along the side wall. They all ordered Butterbeer from the waitress while they waited for Jamie and Katie to join them. Cedric looked at the patrons, mainly couples, clustered around the small round tables dotted throughout the shop, and he was forcibly reminded of his visit with Cho. He began to feel as though he should be anywhere else but there and shifted in his seat as he prepared to leave, but his departure was forestalled by Jamie and Katie's arrival. Cedric moved aside to let them into the booth and sat down at the end of the bench seat. He engaged them all in animated conversation for a while as he drank his Butterbeer, but the atmosphere was decidedly skewed towards couples, and he became uncomfortable, feeling that he was a fifth wheel.
Finishing his Butterbeer with a flourish, he rose.
'Right, you lot, I've got to make a move. See you back at Hogwarts, yeah?'
The chorus of protests was predictable.
'Cedric, come on, stay with us.'
'C'mon, Diggs, have another Butterbeer.'
'Cedders, mate, don't go.'
Only Hannah was silent, and as her eyes met Cedric's, a silent understanding passed between them. He was surprised that she understood, but he also had to admit that Hannah Abbott was a most unusual character and a truly good person.
'Nah, I have to take care of something, alright? So, later?'
Barely waiting for an answer, Cedric turned and hurried out of the tea shop, dodging fluffy decorations and large enchanted flowers that shed their petals upon the patrons.
With a sigh of relief, Cedric walked out into the street. It was a beautiful day in Hogsmeade and quite warm for March. He started walking along the road towards High Street when he noticed an unmistakable sight. Harry, accompanied by Ron and Hermione, walked past his field of view on their way towards Dervish and Banges. They appeared to be carrying two bags with them, one a lurid green with yellow writing on it that was clearly from Gladrags and another that was slung over Harry's shoulder. Cedric had the distinct impression that they were up to something, and certainly fourth-years weren't allowed out of Hogsmeade unless they were going back to Hogwarts. The trio were clearly walking out of town, and Cedric hurried down his street with an anxious feeling in his gut that he could not explain. He turned the corner and looked to his left, hoping to catch a glimpse of the trio, but he couldn't see anything beyond the bend in the road that led out into the countryside. The mountain commanded the view, and he scowled, disquieted by their obvious disregard for the rules.
Cedric weighed his options. As a prefect, he was obliged to monitor the younger students, and he could easily have followed them and prevented them from leaving, but on the other hand, he didn't want to force too heavy a hand on Harry and his friends. His gut instinct told him that they were reasonably safe, and although he couldn't exactly say why, he resolved to let the matter go for now.
He knew that he should return to Hogwarts, but something in him refused to let him leave without making sure that Harry and his friends returned. He didn't know how long he'd have to wait, so he visited Dervish and Banges, browsing through the supplies and various items while keeping an eye on the street outside. After nearly forty minutes with no sign of the fourth years, Cedric left Dervish and Banges and walked towards Scrivenshaft's. He stood outside the shop for several minutes, smiling at various groups of schoolmates who walked by, laden with purchases. Finally, to avoid questions and prying eyes, Cedric entered the shop and stood next to the window, peering out through the mottled glass while pretending to examine the selection of quills and bottles of magical ink on the shelves. Luckily, the shop was filled with many different types of quills, and as the shopkeeper was busy attending to the four or five customers already in the shop, Cedric felt reasonably certain that he could avoid any confrontation for many minutes.
Many minutes came and went with still no sign of Cedric's quarry. Exasperated and feeling not a little foolish, he left Scrivenshaft's and proceeded to walk slowly up High Street towards Hogwarts. He met the Weasley twins and Lee Jordan coming out of Zonko's Joke Shop, clutching bags and boxes filled with various items. The looks on their faces gave new meaning to the word mischievous, but they all smiled easily as Cedric approached.
'Hey, Cedric, fancy a bit of excitement?' one of the twins started.
'Not that he hasn't had his fair share lately, has he?' The other twin was quick on the uptake.
'Yeah, Cedric, how's about it?' Lee's face was virtually split in two by his wide grin.
'Come on now, guys, can't you see that Cedric's not particularly keen on anything you lot have to offer?'
'Harry!' the group chorused, and Cedric's stomach and heart leapt as he turned and took in the sight before him. Harry and his friends approached Cedric's group, his cheeks pink from the cold and his hair even more unkempt than usual. He was punched playfully by the twins, and Lee grabbed Ron in a headlock. Hermione simply stood a little apart from the brawling men, looking exasperated, but Cedric could feel her eyes on him. He looked up and smiled, meeting her gaze steadily before she blushed and looked away. He ruefully admitted that he had that effect on most girls and wished that his powers extended to the likes of Harry Potter.
'Well, you scoundrels, much as we'd love to stay and play,' began a twin.
'We've got some serious business to attend to,' the other continued.
'And you know how we get when we're serious!' Lee's voice almost cracked from holding back his laughter as the three Gryffindors turned and hastened towards Hogwarts. Cedric chuckled to himself those three reminded him of his own band of brothers.
Cedric turned his attention back to the younger Gryffindors and noted that Harry stood next to Ron, who was trying not to look uncomfortable. Hermione grabbed Ron's arms and started propelling him towards Hogwarts with a 'Bye, Cedric.' He and Harry watched as the pair walked quickly through Hogsmeade, their heads bent in conversation.
Puzzled, Cedric met Harry's eyes as the younger boy turned back to face him, dragging his hand through his unruly black hair in a way that always sent goose bumps across Cedric's flesh; goose bumps that had nothing to do with the cold. No matter how often he watched Harry do that, he still thought, Oh, do that again! Cedric longed to run his own hand through that wildly tangled hair, to bury his face in Harry's neck and inhale the scent of him.
Cedric pulled himself back with great effort and started walking after Ron and Hermione.
'So, did you enjoy the outing today?' Cedric asked pointedly.
Harry fell in step beside him and his flickering emerald gaze told Cedric everything he needed to know. The trio had indeed left Hogsmeade unaccompanied by an adult or teacher, and if Cedric were ever in a position to get Harry in trouble, this was it. One mention of Harry's infraction of school rules to someone like Professor Snape and Harry would be spending the next month in detention, Triwizard champion or not. That, combined with his already disadvantaged position of being the youngest and most inexperienced champion would virtually seal his defeat.
However, Cedric didn't operate like that and was genuinely surprised that the thought should have entered his mind at all. His main concern was that Harry was safe, that they all were, and since none of them seemed worse for wear he decided to let it pass.
'We're fine, Cedric. It was a very enjoyable trip.'
Cedric stopped walking and looked at Harry intently as the younger boy turned to face him. His heart still fluttered during every moment spent with this boy, and his stomach still turned in delighted turmoil every time he so much as thought of him. Cedric was sure that Harry could feel his nervousness and his conflicted thoughts, because they shouted in his own mind louder than anything he'd experienced before. Harry's face and eyes glowed with intensity as he stared up at Cedric who realized that the younger boy didn't want him to press the point. Cedric could sense Harry's reluctance to explain as clearly as he felt the whirls of colour that signified Harry's aura. No explanation was necessary.
'Okay.'
'Cedric...'
'Harry, really, it's fine.'
'Okay, then.'
Silence.
Cedric fought to remain impassive, to project a calm exterior to shield the world from the maelstrom inside him. Harry broke the gaze first and shuffled his feet nervously, dragging his hand through his hair again. Cedric shivered. Do that again!
'Do you believe me?'
The words were softly spoken, but the weight of the question hung between them. Cedric considered his answer and knew that Harry deserved nothing but honesty.
'Not entirely, but you're safe. That's all that matters.'
Harry paused, seemingly taken aback by Cedric's words, and the prefect saw the young Gryffindor considering his response.
'Oh. Well, I... guess I'll see you later? I have to catch up with Ron and Hermione.'
'Sure, see you.'
The Hufflepuff prefect felt an odd pang at their strained conversation, and a feeling of loss swept through him as Harry turned and hurried after his friends. His shivering body and pounding heart mourned the loss for much longer.
TBC
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68 Reviews | 6.87/10 Average
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait to see where you take them.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Cedric's role in the books was always a tear-jerker, but developing a story like this makes it even more intense. Good plot idea, and well written!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks, and I'm happy you actually read the last chapter. I always wondered what Cedric might have been like if JKR had expanded his character even a little bit, so that the readers would have an even greater sense of loss.
Just so you know, I cried like an ass every time I wrote a piece of the last chapter, every time I edited it, and every time I posted it at an archive. ~H
Yes! That was satisfying! I don't want to read the next chapter but I will anyway...
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins*
Oh my god, I am already devastated for poor Cedric....nothing like knowing that the worst horrors imaginable are approaching....I'm hoping that Cedric and Harry at least get a special moment before going into the maze- that they at least kiss.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
The muse was particularly horrible in these chapters, and although I kept screaming "Kiss" "sex" "more" she was adamant.
Bossy thing, the muse.Thanks for reading! ~H
Seems to have potential for a great story-I look forward to reading more =)
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it. ~H
Cedric's going to die in the next chapter, isn't he?
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
La la la la lalalalalalalalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.........
Thanks for the review!
Uh oh Cedders, you need to watch out! Something wicked this way comes!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods*
Oh yes, it does! Thanks for reading, and Chapter 19 is almost ready for the betas.
~H
Eau PIDGELING!The boys... I love them so.. .can't we just keep them? Can't we????We are so Mary-Sue'd... I'm breathless with anticipation for your further chapters.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL Mary-Sue'd and proud!
Thank yew, Midgeling!
wow.... he's figured out old dumbledore already! i hope you don't really kill him! i like cedders!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Dumbledore might have let himself slip a little too much, and everybody underestimates the Hufflepuffs! I love my Cedders too ;o) Thanks, HH
Another wonderful chapter! I loved their interaction when they were flying, and I'm getting a little weepy now because I know it will all end soon!Do you think you might change this into an AU fic where Cedric lives? I can bribe you! *begs*
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I loved the flying scene myself - I felt that it was a real bonding time for them.
*grins* One can never tell where the muse will take me and I'm always open to bribes! Chocolate-covered Harry *cough*Equus*cough*, or Cedric, or Severus, come to think of it. Yes, those are all good bribes
just read the whole thing! it's awesome! poor jealou cedders....
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Woah, the whole thing? Hope you don't have a headache! Thanks for that and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
"the Boy Who Mattered Most." - RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRhhhrrrr!!!
"Merlin, he's a living, breathing wet dream!" - Merlin! He IS!
"...he felt the thrum as their magic met, clashed and, finally, harmonised." - SUCH a beautiful image, mouffling!
Heh! Harry's such a lil bad-ass!
Eau, MISTY!
"Your cousins Anne-Marie and Joan..." - *WETS self!!!!*
*laughter... laughter and more laughter!*
I think this is my favourite chapter, peaupette... I'm not shore of course... but it just FEELS thet way!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. It's been SEAU long in the making, Midgen, eye kneau! and yes, here we have young Harry, all het up by that beautiful Hufflepuff and not being able to *do* anything about it because Cedric's getting all 'ethical' on his ass! I mean, REALLY!!! ;O)
I must say that this story is coming along nicely. I cant wait to read more about it! Love the way you stuck to the original story but add your on twists. Please up date soon!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks for your review! I enjoyed the plot of The Goblet of Fire because I found that it was so involved, with so many new and different characters! Am working on the storyline and hope to have the next chapter up soon! HH
Yes! *pumps fist in air* You have no idea how eager I've been for the new chapter! And it's finally here! Yay! It was well worth the wait. The battle scene in the forest was so well written that I felt as if I was actually there.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Wow! What a review! Thanks for that, and I'm thrilled that the battle scene works! I caught my a** trying to get it to 'sound' like how it looked in my mind! HH
I just had an epiphany ... and it made me so sad. I realized (while I was hanging up clothing in my closet, of all places!) that Cedric was a 'real' person, which is what you've been getting at in this story all along. Cedric was real and he had friends who loved him and he had a life ... and he died. And it just struck me and made me really sad.
The "battle" scene was beautifully written. I loved it. So captivating; you've really done your research well (the jinxes, hexes, etc.) and made everything very believable. Well done. :)
So ... Wow, this story is really marvelous. Thank you for writing it! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Scary thing - I just realized that you're right about Cedric being a 'real' person! I always wondered what he was like, who his friends were and whether Rowling put much thought into his life.
I had the battle scene vividly in my mind, yet somehow it was particularly hard to write/coordinate! All snaps go to my fantabulous beta, JaneAverage! She made my mish-mash of jinxes,hexes,wrong incantations into something that really rocked!
Thanks for your review, I'm so happy that you enjoy the story and appreciate your taking the time to review!
HH
I have been waiting SO LONG for an update! When I saw it in the Newly Submitted list, I literally jumped up and down and squealed!I cannot tell you how much I ADORE this story! I hope the next chapter is just as satisfying as this one!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. wow, I'm gratified to know that you're getting such a kick out of my ficlet.I'm working out some details with my beta on Chapter 12 and I hope to have it in her capable hands by the end of next week. Fingers & toes crossed, and thanks for reading! HH
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
I LOVE your Patronus class! I can just see the rest of the class saying "CUDDERS MUNT, boy!"
Poor Diggs, having to be with the couples when all he wants is Harry... *sighs wistfully*
VERY clever that you put in the trip up the mountain with Snuffles, the exchange between him and the twins/Lee.
*DIES* - "Oh, do that again."
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. Cudders munt indeed, poppet!
You remember our days of 'do that again' don'tcha!? I agree that I've been unfair to our Cedders in Puddifoot's with all the couples... *bad muse* I caught my *arse* with that whole Snuffles/Ced waiting timeline thing... am happy that it's come off okay! Hugs, HH
The Patronus Charm was very effective, wasn't it? Marvelously written! Just what exactly is an African Oryx? Is it a buffalo or gazelle-like creature? I am too lazy to look it up on the internet and I can't quite recall what it is right now...
Oh, yes! I loved this line, "She had still been friendly, but she was distant, and he could see the hurt in her eyes; could feel her loss without even trying to sense it."
It reminds me of another story I read (can't remember what it was) in which the author had written, "No girl wants to be the one who turned her boyfriend gay." Hee! That's what I thought of when I read the above.
This is very well-written and I look forward to an update. I hope your move went well. And there's just one little bit of con. crit.
*Ahem!* You use a lot of "alrights" and I remarked on that in an earlier chapter. However, I see them here, too, hee! So... if you wanted to change them to 'all right', that's fine. If not, that's great, too, because a lot of writers use 'alright,' although--grammatically--it isn't quite correct.
Again, looking forward to reading more. Cheers!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
African Oryx . I think they're beautiful creatures, even though this particular photo isn't the most graceful one I've ever seen.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m89/HogwartsHoney/AfricanOryx-cedders.jpg
HH
Well, Cho's not a Ravenclaw for nothing! She's a smart cookie! :P
Great job on the Second Task. Harry showed up right on cue ... after all the others! I suppose he'd just been woken up by Dobby and given the Gillyweed.
Lovely job and I knew that Jamie would understand ... he's the understanding type.
Reading on!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yep, that Cho sharp all right! I try to weave my story in and out of canon. I hope it makes it more plausible that way instead of being waaaaaaaay out, y'know? Jamie is my prince!!! I love that boy!! He IS the understanding type and very mellow, but , like all my Hufflepuffs, he's more than he seems.... ! *cough*
Response from Celestial Melody (Reviewer)
Ooh, really? I can't wait to find out about this unseen side of Jamie. :)
~Julia~
Wow. That was an intense chapter and I was shocked that Harry was in the bathroom with Cedric! I had to reread it to make sure that I'd read it correctly the first time.
This story is getting very complicated. The triangle is going to have a bit of an upset when Cho finds out. Reading on...
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Poor boy - he certainly didn't expect to walk in on THAT kind of thing!! LOL HH
Ooooh, very nice. The conversation between Cedric and Harry was mesmerizing and I can't wait to read more, so just one itty-bitty bit of con crit.
"who Cedric belatedly realized was Hermione Granger."
Perhaps it should be "who, Cedric belatedly realized, was Hermione Granger." Offset that statement *points up* with commas.
I'm truly enjoying this story and reading on, leaving a short review, because I can't wait! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yes, poor Cedric. The mention of the Firebolt was almost his undoing!! ;o) HH
Beautiful! This is my favorite chapter so far. I loved the capricious nature of the mermaid. Good job on the gifts at the end, too. :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins* I enjoyed this chapter too, and the mermaid was fun to write. HH
Hee! Fantastic detail about Hannah; I applaud her for her intelligence! They do say that Hufflepuffs are well-rounded in everything.
Marvelous job on writing the First Task. We finally find out what happens to Cedric during that task! Great job; I'm truly enjoying this story.
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
'Puffers' are too often overlooked y'know! They may be the gentle souls of the bunch, but I think they have HUGE potential and a lot to offer the school!
Thanks for your reviews. That first task was a joy to write, although stressful in its own right!
HH
The first thing I thought of after I read the first few paragraphs was, in response to Amos' input, "Ooh, I bet he'll be sorry after the tournie is over!"
This story has really captured my attention and the only other slash I've read that I liked was one about Harry/Draco. Good job! :)
Hee! I laughed when I read this, "uncertain feelings." It's often 'certain' feelings, but of course Cedric doesn't understand his! :)
Great detail on the badges.
Um... should this be a question? "What could that… witch … have said or done that would have upset Harry this way."
"have said or done that would have upset Harry this way?"
And Cedric placed his hand on Harry's thigh! *gasp* This is getting very interesting! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Our poor Ced. Things are conspiring against him, not least of which his hormones and a determined author with an extremely naughty muse!! ;o) I'm happy that you're enjoying it.
Ced didn't mean his hand placement to be in a sexual way, more of in a supportive way, 'cause... let's face it, he's worked up also about the entire Tournament. He's a caring and sympathetic being...
HH
I enjoyed reading about Lee ... he has always been a favorite character of mine, :), and I appreciate that you've included him in the story.
A bit of a constru. crit. that I found in the... oh, I am NOT about to count the paragraphs, :P, but here it is anyway: "'Hey, listen, it’s not about that, alright?’ he growled."
Often, authors use 'alright' in their stories, however, the correct way to use this term is 'all ____ right", with a space in between the 'all' and the 'right.' This is because 'right' corresponds with 'wrong' and you wouldn't say 'alwrong,' would you?
Just a bit there... and "...scarlet-haired Gryffindors." I assume you're referring to the Weasley clan, although they don't really have "scarlett hair," do they? It's more of a carrot color, whereas robed Gryffindors would definitely be scarlet.
I am really enjoying your story, it's marvelously written and I can't wait to see how the "Cho Chang conflict" works out. *bounces up and down excitedly* :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods* Yep, I was in two minds about the 'alright' vs 'all right' thing, so have changed it. thx again, it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes picking up what my beta and I have missed! Also changed the hair colour! LOL
I love Lee, he's a wonderful addition to the twins' lunacy and he's very important in his own right. Thanks for reading! HH