A New Year Begins
Chapter 3 of 21
HogwartsHoneyDisclaimer: See Chapter 1
A/N: Anything you recognise is taken from Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Everything else is mine. Thanks to my Nishles for the endless discussions about our boys!
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Cedric arose early after a troubled and sleepless night. Visions of the Dark Mark in the sky and dreams of him being trapped in a sea of screaming people haunted his few sleeping moments. His head was aching, and he clambered out of bed, rubbing his scratchy eyes as he made his way downstairs.
'Morning, Mum, Dad,' he managed in between expansive yawns.
'Good morning my boy,' his father said, trying to sound jovial as he too yawned.
'Good lord, Cedric, sit yourself down and have some breakfast before you faint,' his mother admonished with a twinkle in her eyes that belied her tone.
He took his seat at the table and poured himself a cup of orange juice as his mother placed two large plates in front of the men, filled with scrambled eggs, sausages, bacon, tomatoes, and toast.
'Well, Ced I have to be at the Ministry early this morning to meet with Arthur Weasley and the rest of that lot. Merlin knows there'll be lots of questions that'll need answering after that fiasco.' Amos sighed.
Cedric's mind slowly began working again. The Weasleys. What about Harry? His father hadn't mentioned anything about Harry.
'So, the Weasleys all made it through okay? Everyone?' he enquired carefully, trying to sound nonchalant as he chewed on a strip of bacon.
Amos barely looked up at his son as he ate his meal hurriedly.
'Yes, yes, they're all fine. Bit of a mess with that Potter boy though.'
Cedric felt a chill go down his spine, and suddenly the bacon in his mouth lost its taste. He looked at his father anxiously, even though he tried to appear only moderately interested.
'What mess is that, Dad?' he asked conversationally.
'Well, there was a bit of bother over his wand. Seems it was used to conjure the Dark Mark, yet he swears he didn't conjure it. Don't suppose he could have really; he's just a young boy. Most odd,' Amos muttered, drifting off into thought as he sipped his tea.
'Harry's wand conjured the Dark Mark?' Cedric asked incredulously. 'But, Dad, surely that's ... '
Amos finished the last mouthful of his tea, wiped his mouth on his napkin and stood, shrugging into his travelling robes.
'Can't get into it with you right now, Ced, I must be off,' he said gently, clapping his son on the back and kissing Sheila on the cheek.
'Be back later,' he said cheerfully as he threw Floo powder into the fireplace and disappeared in a blaze of green flames.
Cedric stared absentmindedly into the flames long after his father had disappeared, mulling over the happenings of the past twenty-four hours.
He noticed a copy of the Daily Prophet lying on the kitchen table with a blaring headline that proclaimed: 'Scenes of Terror at Quidditch World Cup'. Cedric began reading the article and was angered by the reporter's insinuations that the Ministry had somehow been at fault. From what little Cedric knew of the dark forces, he doubted whether they ever gave much warning of their evil intentions. The article seemed to be more about sensationalist journalism than a quest for the truth.
'Prats,' he muttered under his breath as he crushed the paper angrily between his hands and tossed it aside. The photograph of the Dark Mark as it hung in the air was still partly visible, even though the paper was mangled by the force of Cedric's anger. He shivered involuntarily as his own images of the Dark Mark flashed through his mind, all the clearer because of his dreams the night before.
'Cedric! Careful, son, you nearly knocked over the teapot,' his mother's voice admonished, and her unusually sharp tone made him look up in surprise. In his bleary-eyed descent to the table earlier and his intense conversation with his father, Cedric had failed to realize that his mother was terribly worried. Her grey eyes met his searchingly, even darker than his own now as they clouded with worry. Deeply alarmed at his thoughtlessness, he hung his head in shame and moved to where she stood by the sink.
'Oh, Mum, I'm so sorry,' he began. 'I, I'm stupid. I didn't think...' he finished lamely. He held his mother's hands in his own, noting for the first time how much smaller she appeared. He had always known her to be a strong woman, and it unnerved him now to see her so uncharacteristically close to tears.
'Come, sit down here, and I'll get you something.' He helped her into a chair and looked around for the blanket he'd had around his shoulders last night, but it was nowhere to be found.
'Oh, Cedric, after your father told me what happened I was so worried,' she moaned and dropped her head into her hands. 'Please, tell me what happened, what you saw.'
Cedric wasn't sure he wanted to go over it again; he'd been haunted by the scenes in his dreams. He knew that he couldn't refuse her and made her a cup of tea while he tried to organize his memories. He managed to delay his reply until he sat in front of her at the table and placed the cup in her hands, but as she looked up at him expectantly, he sighed and began.
'Well, it happened quite long after the match, I was with Dad in the tent. We were making lots of noise, and there was a great deal of noise inside coming through from outside too, you know, with the celebrations and all that. Suddenly there was a very different set of screaming and shouting.' Cedric shuddered as the images flashed through his mind, almost like they were being seared into him once again.
'Dad ran outside almost immediately and I could see through the open flap of the tent that people were running outside, frantically running in all directions. The tent was almost empty by the time I'd managed to get outside, and I was almost knocked over by the surge of people.' Cedric could see his mother's eyes grow wider and wondered at the wisdom of telling her everything.
'I could see Dad in the distance; he was helping some of the foreign dignitaries get organized so that they could find safety, or Port back to their homes, I don't know which. I felt a horrible chill inside me, colder than the air around, but this chill, it seemed to ... I don't know really, it seemed to almost ... crawl inside me.' He shuddered at the memory, and he saw that his mother had done the same.
Sheila reached out and grasped her son's hands in her own, stroking them soothingly as she'd done when he was a young boy. Cedric breathed deeply and then continued.
'I saw them then, the Death Eaters. They were in a tight group, casting spells and destroying tents. They had a Muggle family too, Mum, with children, all suspended above their heads, and the Muggles were screaming. There were people running everywhere, falling over themselves to get out of the way, but they just kept marching through the campsite. Not long after that, I saw it. The Dark Mark just hanging in the sky, and that's when I knew, but I felt so helpless. There was nothing I could do.'
He bent his head as he acknowledged both his fear and his shame, and his mother placed her hands on the back of his head. She smoothed his hair and patted his back, rocking him gently as she had done all his life when things had been too hard to handle. It didn't occur to him to mind.
He brushed the back of his hand across his eyes and raised his head again.
'Then Dad found me, and before I could say anything, he'd Ported me here.' A flash of something akin to anger crossed Cedric's face briefly, but it was enough for his mother to notice.
'Now, Cedric, you mustn't be too harsh on your father. He did what he thought was best, and even though you might have wanted to stay behind and fight, you don't know the enemy enough to properly appreciate what you would have been up against.' Cedric started to protest, but she quietened him with her hand, a sense of urgency evident in her eyes.
'No, son, believe me, the Death Eaters are a considerable force and your father was absolutely right in doing what he did. Bravery is a wonderful thing, but it's no good to you if you're ... dead.' Her voice faltered at the end, and her grey eyes filled with tears as her hands rushed to her mouth. As her muffled cries turned to wracking sobs, Cedric could do nothing. Helplessly, he wrapped his arms around his mother and held her until her weeping subsided.
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The morning that Cedric was due to return to Hogwarts, he descended the stairs to find his father fully dressed. Amos Diggory shook his son's hand firmly and clapped him on the shoulder with a regretful smile.
'Sorry I can't come with you and your mother, m'boy, but I have to get to the Ministry to send off some urgent owls. I'll expect to hear from you by the end of the week, alright?'
Cedric smiled ruefully and nodded his understanding, as he knew that his father was still trying to settle things at the office since the World Cup fracas. Amos kissed his wife and, with a nod to Cedric, Disapparated.
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Sheila Diggory hugged her son tightly and bade him farewell at King's Cross station. He smiled and stepped through the wall to Platform Nine and Three-Quarters, where he felt an immediate sense of security at the sight of the Hogwarts Express, gleaming red as it waited for its passengers. He'd always thought of the train as an extension of Hogwarts itself, a tunnel that joined the school to the rest of the world. He noticed Ernie McMillan standing with several other fourth and fifth years from Hufflepuff and they smiled as he approached the small group. They found their seats on the train and proceeded to chat about their summer adventures. Cedric was happy to delegate his Prefect duties to the fifth year Prefects, so he relaxed, half-listening to the conversations around him. Even though everyone had their version of the goings on at the Quidditch World Cup, the basic information seemed to be the same. He sighed and leaned back into his seat as he closed his eyes and thought about the World Cup and all that had transpired since.
~*~*~
In the week following the Death March at the World Cup, his father had worked long hours every day at the Ministry as he and the other members of his team attempted to recreate the events that had transpired. It appeared as though Harry had been exonerated of any wrong doing, but the question of how his wand fell into another's hands had still been a matter of much debate.
His father had also taken him aside one night after dinner and had mentioned the Triwizard Tournament. Cedric had vague recollections of such a thing but remembered it mainly from stories told when he was a boy. His father had informed him that the Tournament was to be reinstated at Hogwarts during the upcoming year. He had listened as his father extolled the competition, and Amos' eyes had glowed as he described the glory and honour that awaited a Triwizard Champion.
'I don't want you to think of it as an easy thing, m'boy,' he had said, his eyes twinkling. 'The Tournament is a very serious, magically binding undertaking, and it is designed to test not only your skills as a wizard, but also your ability to cope with all kinds of danger.' He had given his son a meaningful look. 'But the glory, Cedric, the honour, the power afforded to the winner! The possibilities are endless!'
Cedric had pondered his father's words that night as he lay in bed wondering what the implications of the Tournament were. He had been caught up in his father's excitement and had envisioned himself holding the Cup above his head, victorious. He had felt rivers of exhilaration down his spine at the mere thought of winning, and he had known then that he would certainly enter the Tournament and pit his skill against the other competitors.
Cedric had been groomed for success most of his life to attain excellence, both in his academic life and in the sporting arena. Being chosen as both Captain and Seeker of the Hufflepuff Quidditch team in his fifth year had pleased his father to no end, and when he was chosen as Prefect, Amos Diggory had been almost beside himself with joy and pride. This upcoming competition was sure to be a natural continuation for him and a new opportunity to hone his skills and apply his talent.
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The rocking movement of the train must have lulled him into sleep, but he was suddenly awakened by rough hands shaking him. Bleary eyed, he turned to see who his tormentor was, only to be greeted by the laughter of Markus Hughes and Jamie Bryers, two of his roommates and his best friends.
Markus was tall and appeared to have gotten even more muscular over the summer. He was dark haired, dark eyed, powerfully built in an almost Italian sort of way, and his deeply tanned skin enhanced the overall image of swarthiness. A definite lady-killer, Markus was loud, gregarious, funny and desperately good looking a combination that virtually ensured that he could have anyone he wanted at any time. Cedric was slightly in awe of that kind of power.
Jamie was a lighter version of Markus in almost every way. He was shorter than both Cedric and Markus, but long and lean. His light brown hair had been lightened further by the summer sun and shone with the golden vigour of youth and health. His blue eyes were deep, gentle, and caring, and whereas Markus was the troublemaker, Jamie was the peacemaker. Jamie was less likely to offend people; certainly not the way that Markus could with his quick wit and sometimes sharp tongue. No, Jamie tended to be more like Cedric. He valued fair play and honesty above all else and was a gentle, quieting and comforting presence in the wake of Hurricane Hughes.
'Cedders, old mate, good to see you again!' Jamie exclaimed.
'Diggs! You old goat!' Markus' brown eyes gleamed with mischief, and Cedric knew that their attack was inevitable.
He braced himself as they flung themselves down on him and messed up his hair. They scrabbled and tugged on his robes, and he fought valiantly to stave off their assault. After a few minutes, they all collapsed in a laughing heap as they regaled each other with stories of their summer vacations.
'So out with it, Diggs, what was it like? The World Cup, I mean; the match and everything that happened afterwards?' Markus settled into his seat comfortably and put his feet up on Cedric's knees as he began to eat a Pumpkin Pasty.
'Gerroff there 'Kus, give the man some room.' Jamie came to Cedric's rescue as he swept Markus' feet onto the floor, but then he plonked himself down on Cedric's lap and posed like a young child about to be told a bedtime story.
Cedric laughed so hard he thought his sides would burst. These two idiots, his best friends in the entire world, hadn't changed one iota since their first weekend at Hogwarts.
~*~
They had all been sorted into Hufflepuff and had spent the first week together trying to learn the layout of the castle. By Friday of their first week, they had been physically and emotionally drained by Professor Snape's Potions classes and had all agreed that they had wanted nothing more than to fall into their beds and sleep. In fact, they had spent that entire Friday night telling each other the most outrageous stories they could think of and eating all of the large box of treats and biscuits that Jamie's mother had sent with him. They had been severely ill for most of the following day, but their time in the infirmary hadn't dampened their spirits. They had staggered out sometime on Sunday, stomachs empty and ears full of Madam Pomfrey's 'tut-tuts' and mutterings of 'silly first years'. Markus had pushed his way between them and draped his arms lazily around their shoulders, and they hadn't realized at the time that their bond had been forged that day, or that they would continue to be as close as brothers all the way through their school lives.
~*~
Markus and Jamie gave Cedric their full attention and he knew they were eager to learn about the confusion after the final match from his point of view. He told them almost everything in great detail but was careful with some of the information; he left out the part about Harry's wand being used to conjure the Dark Mark, as he didn't want the boy to suffer any further at the hands of Hogwarts students. Of course, he completely left out what he considered to be the most significant part of the entire experience, the fact that he and Harry had formed an unusual connection of uncertain implications. No, he'd be sure to keep that information all to himself. Although these two lads had known him for all of his Hogwarts life, he still considered Harry to be too much of a private thought and was still unsure of its significance. He just knew somehow that it was significant, and he didn't know how his friends would feel if he told him that little bit of information.
~*~
Many hours later after the Sorting Hat had arranged the first years into their houses and the students and faculty feasted on the delicious meal, Professor Dumbledore went through his usual start-of-year notices. The students were most unhappy when he advised that the school's Quidditch Cup would not be held that year, and Cedric joined his teammates in groans and shouts of disapproval. Markus made a big show of banging his head on the table in mock-frustration as Professor Dumbledore raised his hand in an attempt to quiet the crowd, but just then the great oak doors at the end of the Hall were thrown open, and they boomed as they collided with the stone walls of the building.
The echoes surged through the Great Hall, and the enchanted ceiling above them flashed angrily as lightning streaked across it, which gave greater impact to the unexpected arrival. There was barely a sound as the man made his way towards the head table and every pair of eyes in the Hall followed his clumsy steps. Cedric could hear the ripple of whispers all around him.
'Moody, that's Mad-Eye Moody!'
'Who's he?'
'Moody?'
'The Auror!'
Yes, that was Mad-Eye Moody all right. Cedric had seen him once in passing a few years ago when he'd spoken with Cedric's father inside the Ministry of Magic. Cedric remembered that his father had appeared to be persuasive, perhaps even cajoling, and although Cedric had been too far away to hear the words and too young to care much about the contents of that meeting, he could see the tension between them evidenced by their body language. Cedric had always been intuitive that way, able to get a very strong sense of people by their auras, their 'vibes,' for lack of a better term. His father's vibes had been urging and a little pleading that day; Mad-Eye's vibes had been very scattered and uneasy then and were certainly no different tonight.
After Moody had been introduced to the student body, Professor Dumbledore continued with his announcements, and Cedric shivered with excitement a moment later when Dumbledore proclaimed that the Triwizard Tournament would be held at Hogwarts later that year. His father had been right!
'You're JOKING!'
A loud exclamation came from the Gryffindor table; a voice that sounded suspiciously like Fred or George Weasley, and Cedric's laughter joined that of the rest of the students. He tried to stop himself as he glanced furtively in the direction of the sound, knowing that Harry wouldn't be far from the Weasleys, but even with his height, he was unable to lay eyes on the smaller boy. He wasn't sure whether or not he was disappointed.
He turned his thoughts back to the Tournament as Dumbledore explained its history, and he thought again about the importance of the Cup, of how winning the tournament brought with it untold fame and opportunities to the victor, and Cedric understood his father's motivation. The thousand Galleon prize money was one thing, but Amos Diggory wanted more for his son and his family name than to be merely a Ministry official. Cedric knew that his powers had grown significantly through puberty, and he enjoyed competitions that challenged those skills, but this Tournament was huge and would pit school against school. Still, the honour of being selected to represent both his house and Hogwarts was certainly worth a try.
More groans and shouts of disapproval echoed through the hall as Professor Dumbledore imposed an age limit on the competition. Cedric had turned seventeen earlier that year and was somewhat pleased to realize that most of the student population would be excluded by that rule alone. He felt that his chances were more than average that he would be well in the running for the position of Champion.
'Blast, well, that means we're out, Markers and I, but you, Cedders! YOU could enter the tourney though.' Jamie's eyes were on fire beside him as he considered the possibilities.
'Yes, that's true, Diggs! You're the oldest, seventeen already. And you're smart. And brave. And a vewwwy powerful wizard!' Markus chimed in, laughing.
'But most of all, you're SOOOOOO handsome!' the two boys chorused and then collapsed in laughter as Cedric bashed them playfully.
'Idiots,' he thought laughingly, but he knew that their sentiments were sincere under all the mocking. Markus and Jamie; they were his band of brothers and they often referred to themselves as the Gleesome Threesome.
They righted themselves and stood up as Dumbledore dismissed the students and Markus winked at the two of them as he took the opportunity to approach Hannah Abbott. Cedric watched his progress with interest; he knew that Markus had been interested in Hannah since the previous year, but with their OWLs as their foremost priority he had elected to wait until sixth year to see what would happen. Cedric's eyes followed Markus as he joined Hannah and her friends and marvelled once again at how easily his friend could insinuate himself into various groups. He watched as Markus threw one arm around Hannah and the other around a younger Hufflepuff, whose name Cedric didn't know, and swept them both from the hall, the sound of their laughter lingering behind as Cedric and Jamie gave each other knowing looks. Markus was on the hunt no lives would be spared!
TBC
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68 Reviews | 6.87/10 Average
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait to see where you take them.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Cedric's role in the books was always a tear-jerker, but developing a story like this makes it even more intense. Good plot idea, and well written!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks, and I'm happy you actually read the last chapter. I always wondered what Cedric might have been like if JKR had expanded his character even a little bit, so that the readers would have an even greater sense of loss.
Just so you know, I cried like an ass every time I wrote a piece of the last chapter, every time I edited it, and every time I posted it at an archive. ~H
Yes! That was satisfying! I don't want to read the next chapter but I will anyway...
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins*
Oh my god, I am already devastated for poor Cedric....nothing like knowing that the worst horrors imaginable are approaching....I'm hoping that Cedric and Harry at least get a special moment before going into the maze- that they at least kiss.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
The muse was particularly horrible in these chapters, and although I kept screaming "Kiss" "sex" "more" she was adamant.
Bossy thing, the muse.Thanks for reading! ~H
Seems to have potential for a great story-I look forward to reading more =)
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it. ~H
Cedric's going to die in the next chapter, isn't he?
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
La la la la lalalalalalalalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.........
Thanks for the review!
Uh oh Cedders, you need to watch out! Something wicked this way comes!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods*
Oh yes, it does! Thanks for reading, and Chapter 19 is almost ready for the betas.
~H
Eau PIDGELING!The boys... I love them so.. .can't we just keep them? Can't we????We are so Mary-Sue'd... I'm breathless with anticipation for your further chapters.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL Mary-Sue'd and proud!
Thank yew, Midgeling!
wow.... he's figured out old dumbledore already! i hope you don't really kill him! i like cedders!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Dumbledore might have let himself slip a little too much, and everybody underestimates the Hufflepuffs! I love my Cedders too ;o) Thanks, HH
Another wonderful chapter! I loved their interaction when they were flying, and I'm getting a little weepy now because I know it will all end soon!Do you think you might change this into an AU fic where Cedric lives? I can bribe you! *begs*
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I loved the flying scene myself - I felt that it was a real bonding time for them.
*grins* One can never tell where the muse will take me and I'm always open to bribes! Chocolate-covered Harry *cough*Equus*cough*, or Cedric, or Severus, come to think of it. Yes, those are all good bribes
just read the whole thing! it's awesome! poor jealou cedders....
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Woah, the whole thing? Hope you don't have a headache! Thanks for that and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
"the Boy Who Mattered Most." - RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRhhhrrrr!!!
"Merlin, he's a living, breathing wet dream!" - Merlin! He IS!
"...he felt the thrum as their magic met, clashed and, finally, harmonised." - SUCH a beautiful image, mouffling!
Heh! Harry's such a lil bad-ass!
Eau, MISTY!
"Your cousins Anne-Marie and Joan..." - *WETS self!!!!*
*laughter... laughter and more laughter!*
I think this is my favourite chapter, peaupette... I'm not shore of course... but it just FEELS thet way!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. It's been SEAU long in the making, Midgen, eye kneau! and yes, here we have young Harry, all het up by that beautiful Hufflepuff and not being able to *do* anything about it because Cedric's getting all 'ethical' on his ass! I mean, REALLY!!! ;O)
I must say that this story is coming along nicely. I cant wait to read more about it! Love the way you stuck to the original story but add your on twists. Please up date soon!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks for your review! I enjoyed the plot of The Goblet of Fire because I found that it was so involved, with so many new and different characters! Am working on the storyline and hope to have the next chapter up soon! HH
Yes! *pumps fist in air* You have no idea how eager I've been for the new chapter! And it's finally here! Yay! It was well worth the wait. The battle scene in the forest was so well written that I felt as if I was actually there.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Wow! What a review! Thanks for that, and I'm thrilled that the battle scene works! I caught my a** trying to get it to 'sound' like how it looked in my mind! HH
I just had an epiphany ... and it made me so sad. I realized (while I was hanging up clothing in my closet, of all places!) that Cedric was a 'real' person, which is what you've been getting at in this story all along. Cedric was real and he had friends who loved him and he had a life ... and he died. And it just struck me and made me really sad.
The "battle" scene was beautifully written. I loved it. So captivating; you've really done your research well (the jinxes, hexes, etc.) and made everything very believable. Well done. :)
So ... Wow, this story is really marvelous. Thank you for writing it! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Scary thing - I just realized that you're right about Cedric being a 'real' person! I always wondered what he was like, who his friends were and whether Rowling put much thought into his life.
I had the battle scene vividly in my mind, yet somehow it was particularly hard to write/coordinate! All snaps go to my fantabulous beta, JaneAverage! She made my mish-mash of jinxes,hexes,wrong incantations into something that really rocked!
Thanks for your review, I'm so happy that you enjoy the story and appreciate your taking the time to review!
HH
I have been waiting SO LONG for an update! When I saw it in the Newly Submitted list, I literally jumped up and down and squealed!I cannot tell you how much I ADORE this story! I hope the next chapter is just as satisfying as this one!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. wow, I'm gratified to know that you're getting such a kick out of my ficlet.I'm working out some details with my beta on Chapter 12 and I hope to have it in her capable hands by the end of next week. Fingers & toes crossed, and thanks for reading! HH
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
I LOVE your Patronus class! I can just see the rest of the class saying "CUDDERS MUNT, boy!"
Poor Diggs, having to be with the couples when all he wants is Harry... *sighs wistfully*
VERY clever that you put in the trip up the mountain with Snuffles, the exchange between him and the twins/Lee.
*DIES* - "Oh, do that again."
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. Cudders munt indeed, poppet!
You remember our days of 'do that again' don'tcha!? I agree that I've been unfair to our Cedders in Puddifoot's with all the couples... *bad muse* I caught my *arse* with that whole Snuffles/Ced waiting timeline thing... am happy that it's come off okay! Hugs, HH
The Patronus Charm was very effective, wasn't it? Marvelously written! Just what exactly is an African Oryx? Is it a buffalo or gazelle-like creature? I am too lazy to look it up on the internet and I can't quite recall what it is right now...
Oh, yes! I loved this line, "She had still been friendly, but she was distant, and he could see the hurt in her eyes; could feel her loss without even trying to sense it."
It reminds me of another story I read (can't remember what it was) in which the author had written, "No girl wants to be the one who turned her boyfriend gay." Hee! That's what I thought of when I read the above.
This is very well-written and I look forward to an update. I hope your move went well. And there's just one little bit of con. crit.
*Ahem!* You use a lot of "alrights" and I remarked on that in an earlier chapter. However, I see them here, too, hee! So... if you wanted to change them to 'all right', that's fine. If not, that's great, too, because a lot of writers use 'alright,' although--grammatically--it isn't quite correct.
Again, looking forward to reading more. Cheers!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
African Oryx . I think they're beautiful creatures, even though this particular photo isn't the most graceful one I've ever seen.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m89/HogwartsHoney/AfricanOryx-cedders.jpg
HH
Well, Cho's not a Ravenclaw for nothing! She's a smart cookie! :P
Great job on the Second Task. Harry showed up right on cue ... after all the others! I suppose he'd just been woken up by Dobby and given the Gillyweed.
Lovely job and I knew that Jamie would understand ... he's the understanding type.
Reading on!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yep, that Cho sharp all right! I try to weave my story in and out of canon. I hope it makes it more plausible that way instead of being waaaaaaaay out, y'know? Jamie is my prince!!! I love that boy!! He IS the understanding type and very mellow, but , like all my Hufflepuffs, he's more than he seems.... ! *cough*
Response from Celestial Melody (Reviewer)
Ooh, really? I can't wait to find out about this unseen side of Jamie. :)
~Julia~
Wow. That was an intense chapter and I was shocked that Harry was in the bathroom with Cedric! I had to reread it to make sure that I'd read it correctly the first time.
This story is getting very complicated. The triangle is going to have a bit of an upset when Cho finds out. Reading on...
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Poor boy - he certainly didn't expect to walk in on THAT kind of thing!! LOL HH
Ooooh, very nice. The conversation between Cedric and Harry was mesmerizing and I can't wait to read more, so just one itty-bitty bit of con crit.
"who Cedric belatedly realized was Hermione Granger."
Perhaps it should be "who, Cedric belatedly realized, was Hermione Granger." Offset that statement *points up* with commas.
I'm truly enjoying this story and reading on, leaving a short review, because I can't wait! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yes, poor Cedric. The mention of the Firebolt was almost his undoing!! ;o) HH
Beautiful! This is my favorite chapter so far. I loved the capricious nature of the mermaid. Good job on the gifts at the end, too. :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins* I enjoyed this chapter too, and the mermaid was fun to write. HH
Hee! Fantastic detail about Hannah; I applaud her for her intelligence! They do say that Hufflepuffs are well-rounded in everything.
Marvelous job on writing the First Task. We finally find out what happens to Cedric during that task! Great job; I'm truly enjoying this story.
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
'Puffers' are too often overlooked y'know! They may be the gentle souls of the bunch, but I think they have HUGE potential and a lot to offer the school!
Thanks for your reviews. That first task was a joy to write, although stressful in its own right!
HH
The first thing I thought of after I read the first few paragraphs was, in response to Amos' input, "Ooh, I bet he'll be sorry after the tournie is over!"
This story has really captured my attention and the only other slash I've read that I liked was one about Harry/Draco. Good job! :)
Hee! I laughed when I read this, "uncertain feelings." It's often 'certain' feelings, but of course Cedric doesn't understand his! :)
Great detail on the badges.
Um... should this be a question? "What could that… witch … have said or done that would have upset Harry this way."
"have said or done that would have upset Harry this way?"
And Cedric placed his hand on Harry's thigh! *gasp* This is getting very interesting! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Our poor Ced. Things are conspiring against him, not least of which his hormones and a determined author with an extremely naughty muse!! ;o) I'm happy that you're enjoying it.
Ced didn't mean his hand placement to be in a sexual way, more of in a supportive way, 'cause... let's face it, he's worked up also about the entire Tournament. He's a caring and sympathetic being...
HH
I enjoyed reading about Lee ... he has always been a favorite character of mine, :), and I appreciate that you've included him in the story.
A bit of a constru. crit. that I found in the... oh, I am NOT about to count the paragraphs, :P, but here it is anyway: "'Hey, listen, it’s not about that, alright?’ he growled."
Often, authors use 'alright' in their stories, however, the correct way to use this term is 'all ____ right", with a space in between the 'all' and the 'right.' This is because 'right' corresponds with 'wrong' and you wouldn't say 'alwrong,' would you?
Just a bit there... and "...scarlet-haired Gryffindors." I assume you're referring to the Weasley clan, although they don't really have "scarlett hair," do they? It's more of a carrot color, whereas robed Gryffindors would definitely be scarlet.
I am really enjoying your story, it's marvelously written and I can't wait to see how the "Cho Chang conflict" works out. *bounces up and down excitedly* :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods* Yep, I was in two minds about the 'alright' vs 'all right' thing, so have changed it. thx again, it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes picking up what my beta and I have missed! Also changed the hair colour! LOL
I love Lee, he's a wonderful addition to the twins' lunacy and he's very important in his own right. Thanks for reading! HH