Champions
Chapter 5 of 21
HogwartsHoneyDisclaimer: Jo owns it all.
A/N: Thanks to my poppet for help with the boys.
The morning following the Welcoming Feast, Cedric climbed out of bed and dressed nervously. Markus and Jamie had sat with him the night before as he had written his name on a piece of parchment, and his hands had trembled slightly as his head filled with his father's words.
'You'll be set for life, Ced. Anything you want, any job, any position, yours for the taking,' Amos had said excitedly, his eyes shining with the possibilities.
'I know, Dad, it's a wonderful opportunity.'
'Ah, it's more than just the opportunity, m'boy. Think of the pomp. The fame! The grandeur!' Amos had said reverently. 'Think of the everlasting glory you'd bring to the Diggory name!'
Everlasting glory.
~*~
Those words resounded in Cedric's mind as he walked into the Entrance Hall and approached the Triwizard Cup. He had been too preoccupied to notice that his roommates were not in their beds, and was therefore shocked to see them, along with many members of his house, gathered around the Cup, laughing and wiping their eyes.
'What's happened?' he enquired.
'That idiot, Summers,' managed Ernie Macmillan. 'He tried an aging spell on himself to get around Dumbledore's Age Line. We all told him it was for naught, but he said he HAD to try!'
Cedric grinned. Everyone knew Professor Dumbledore's sense of humour, and he wondered what the outcome of that failed potion would be.
He soon felt himself locked in a powerful grip as Jamie and Markus grabbed him in a joint bear hug.
'C'mon, Cedders, are you ready?' Jamie's eyes twinkled with excitement.
'Yeah, Diggs, c'mon, do us all proud,' Markus echoed, and they caught Cedric in a bear hug playfully.
Cedric took a deep breath before he carefully stepped over the Age Line and looked around to the cheers of the crowd. He took another deep breath as he raised his hand and placed his slip of parchment in the blue-white flames. For a moment there was silence; then a roar of excitement echoed through the Hall as his fellow Hufflepuffs claimed their new prospective champion. He felt a surge of excitement, and the warmth of it swept thought his body as many hands congratulated him and clapped him on the back. The cheering crowd ushered him noisily into the Great Hall and sat him down for breakfast, but he was too excited and nervous to eat much.
The rest of that day seemed to take forever, and everywhere Cedric went he was greeted with good wishes and shouts of good luck from members of his own house and many from Ravenclaw and Gryffindor. He knew that Angelina Johnson, the Gryffindor Chaser, had put her name in the cup and her entire house was supporting her at every turn. The waiting was almost intolerable; made worse by the fact that the entire school now knew of his candidacy for Champion. Everywhere Cedric went he seemed to be surrounded by people, throngs of schoolmates, all around him, all the time. Markus laughingly suggested that his popularity rivalled Krum's, and they should sell tickets for an audience with 'The Hogwarts Champion'. Jamie had laughed but viewed him with a concerned eye, and Cedric knew that his friend was both excited and worried for him. He sensed Jamie's disquiet like a beacon - Jamie didn't realize that he broadcast his feelings without ever saying a word.
Finally, evening rolled around, and although a magnificent spread was prepared for everyone, Cedric could barely eat anything. His only concern was the Goblet of Fire and the names it would reveal this very night. The tension in the Great Hall was palpable as Professor Dumbledore began the proceedings. The Goblet shot out pieces of parchment, announcing firstly Viktor Krum, then Fleur Delacour and finally, Cedric heard his own name as the entire hall erupted in cheers and thunderous applause.
His first reaction was one of total shock as a thrill tinged with fear danced through his body, for this was indeed unknown territory. Cedric had willingly placed himself in danger to be a Hogwarts Champion, and there was no turning back. As he walked past the long tables, he could feel all eyes upon him, the cheering and shouting carrying him along like a wave. As he turned with what he hoped was a confident smile towards the crowd, his eyes searched the Gryffindor table and locked briefly with those of Harry, whose green depths followed his every step. Cedric felt his heart pounding in his chest as he approached the heavy wooden door of the chamber behind the teachers' table. He closed the door behind him and took what felt like his first breath ever, as the muffled sounds of the applause continued.
He stood and looked around the room as he noted that Fleur Delacour and Krum stood close to the fire, each apparently consumed with their own thoughts and emotions. He moved over to join them and, after exchanging brief nods, he stood and gazed into the fire as he allowed the mesmerizing flames to soothe his fervid mind. After what seemed like only moments, the door opened once more, and Harry stepped inside, looking very confused and uncertain.
'What's going on, Harry?' Cedric asked the young Gryffindor. He saw the confusion in Harry's eyes mingled with something akin to fear, and his own betraying stomach leapt at their proximity. Try as he might, he couldn't sense anything from the boy; Harry's aura was like a jumbled mass of colours with no pattern. That he was agitated was obvious, but what wasn't obvious was why.
When Ludo Bagman arrived and announced that Harry was chosen as the fourth Triwizard Champion, Cedric's mind whirled with questions while Fleur ridiculed the possibility. He saw the look on Harry's face and felt a twinge of regret that he had to deal with Fleur's contempt as well as the suspicious glares of the others, but Cedric himself was bewildered at the announcement. Surely that was impossible? Harry and Cedric's eyes met, and there was significantly more now than just his usual appraisal of the Gryffindor. He conceded that Harry was now his competition and that changed things. He mused at the potential complications of not only having to compete against the other school Champions, but also against someone from Hogwarts. Compete against the Boy Who Lived. Then there was the knowledge that he also had to compete against someone for whom he had... uncertain feelings. Were he true to himself, Cedric would admit that the final point proved to be the most telling.
The door banged open again, and in strode Professor Dumbledore, closely followed by a very agitated Karkaroff, Madame Maxime, Mr Crouch and Professors Snape and McGonagall. Cedric witnessed Harry being grilled repeatedly by Dumbledore and the other Headmasters, as well as Professors McGonagall and Snape, and was surprised at how vehemently Harry defended his position. Cedric didn't want to think of the boy as a liar, but how could this be?
The ominous words of Professor Moody still rang in their ears as the two Hogwarts Champions left the room together. Simply being in close proximity to Harry had elevated Cedric's state of anxiety significantly, and the Gryffindor's hesitant smile spurred Cedric's heart rate even higher. From his brief conversation with Harry, he understood that the younger boy was as confused as everyone else and insisted upon his innocence, but Cedric truly didn't know what to think.
They walked along the corridors in silence, and Cedric could feel Harry's aura as it swirled in chaotic waves around him; the boy was obviously in considerable distress. Cedric wished that he could get past the drama and confusion and just talk with Harry one on one. What would he say? What could he ask the Gryffindor? What did he really want to hear anyway?
'Did you really do it?'
'Are you lying?'
'What do you hope to gain from this?'
No, Cedric mused, his own head spinning with all manner of implications. Tonight was not a good night for questions, and he had to admit to himself that he was still a bit uncomfortable with the situation surrounding Harry's inclusion in the tournament.
They approached the steps, and Harry turned to face him. Cedric looked down at the younger boy and wondered again why someone as famous as Harry Potter would bother to enter such a competition. Harry didn't seem to be the type of person who craved attention, despite what the Slytherins and some members of the faculty thought. Cedric just didn't see it that way. There had to be something more.
'Well, good night,' Harry mumbled before Cedric could say anything, and he started up the staircase towards the Gryffindor common room. Cedric paused, half wanting to follow Harry up the stairs, and although he contemplated Dumbledore's words, 'Courage in the face of the unknown is very important', he was not yet prepared to act.
'Night,' Cedric muttered to Harry's disappearing shadow.
Shaking his head, Cedric continued down the passage to the Hufflepuff common room and, upon entering, was greeted with the yells and shouts of congratulations and encouragement from his entire house; a sea of human faces and bodies all wanting a piece of him. He had forgotten the plans for the party and groaned privately as Jamie and Ernie rushed to him through the crowd and pressed a glass of something into his hand. He smiled at his friends and shook hands all around as the throng moved him this way and that, but his only thought was 'I need to get away, I need time alone and I need to think.'
~~
Cedric sent an owl to his parents the next morning telling them that he'd been chosen as Hogwarts' Champion. He elected to remain silent about Harry's involvement, although he couldn't exactly say why. There weren't many things he didn't discuss with his parents, even where his feelings were concerned. Many times during his young years and early adolescence, Cedric had longed for a sibling with whom he could share his thoughts. His parents were both wonderful and understanding people who loved him dearly, but somehow, as he got older, Cedric was less inclined to open up to them about his preferences.
Although he was naturally handsome and had long been the object of desire by females, since becoming Champion his appeal seemed to quadruple and was apparently evident to more than just the female students of Hogwarts. On several occasions, members of the Beauxbatons Academy had cornered him in the halls and tried to engage him in conversation or to sign their schoolbooks and bags. He sighed and wished it wasn't that way and that he could live a more 'normal' life. As if there was anything normal about his particular situation.
Cedric didn't know much about the Muggle world and whether there were hang-ups about that sort of thing. Certainly his parents would have preferred him to have followed a more conventional sexual orientation, and he wondered whether Muggles took a very strict line on the matter. Although Cedric wasn't new to this world of galloping hormones, he couldn't help but wonder whether a feeling so strong and so natural could possibly be wrong, even if that feeling were for a boy, and a much younger boy at that. He had to admit that Harry was beginning to grow into a young man and, as his body developed, he became all the more desirable.
~*~
Almost two weeks had passed before Cedric noticed the badges. He doubted that they'd been around much before then, since the commotion created by their introduction was obvious. He was walking through the courtyard after lunch, trying to catch up with Markus and the others from his year, when he noticed Draco Malfoy and some of the other Slytherins approaching. They all had large badges pinned to the front of their robes which declared in vibrant lettering, "Support CEDRIC DIGGORY the REAL Hogwarts Champion!" As they approached, Malfoy slowed his pace and pressed his badge, whereupon the message changed to a glowing green, 'POTTER STINKS'.
'Hey, Cedric, do you like it? Everybody's got one.' Malfoy's face was contorted as he gloated.
Cedric groaned inwardly but was careful not to let any of his feelings show on his face. He felt sorry for Harry, as he knew that the boy would not cease to be the brunt of all the unkind jokes by many of the students. He gave Malfoy what he hoped was some form of a smile and continued walking, his long legs taking him away from the Slytherins' fetid aura.
He caught up with his classmates as they approached the door to their Defence Against the Dark Arts classroom and groaned as they all grinned and flashed their badges at him.
'Look, guys, don't wear those, okay?' he began and the smiles disappeared, replaced with quizzical looks.
'Why not, Diggs?' Markus was the first to speak. 'That little punk somehow got his name in the Goblet. He's a rotter.'
Cedric understood that their reactions were out of loyalty to him, and he nodded as he tried to think of a quick and reasonable explanation.
'I know, guys, and I understand. Truly I do. I just don't think that we need to use the Slytherins' idea, that's all. You know I don't want to associate with those people, so please, just take 'em off, okay?'
He searched their eyes as they grudgingly nodded, and he knew that they'd accepted his explanation, much to his relief. He watched as they removed the badges and threw them into a nearby bin. Markus turned to him with a slightly quizzical expression as he adjusted his robes and schoolbooks.
'Satisfied now?' he enquired.
'Quite,' was Cedric's reply, and although he was, he was also disconcerted by his own feelings. He knew that he hadn't given them the real reason, and he didn't want to. He simply felt an unusual need to protect Harry, although he couldn't say why. Not such a good idea to want to protect your competition though, is it?
Perhaps the voice in his head had a point.
~*~
Cedric received a summons from the Headmaster to meet in one of the upstairs classrooms. Upon entering, he noted that Fleur and Krum were already present. Mr Bagman was also in the room and stood next to a bespectacled witch in bright magenta robes, as the other Champions posed for a photograph. Mr Bagman walked over to greet Cedric with an enthusiastic handshake and then returned to his conversation. At a single glance, Cedric could see that Viktor Krum was in no mood for conversation, light or otherwise, as the Bulgarian seeker stood alone facing a window. He walked over to Fleur, who was very happy to have someone to converse with, although Cedric suspected that her main objective was to get away from the leering glances of the photographer.
'And 'ow are you, Cedreec?' Fleur asked throatily as she tossed her silvery hair over one shoulder and fluttered her perfect eyelashes at him. He smiled, knowing that, Veela or not, she would have no effect on him that way.
'I'm doing well, thanks, Fleur. Are you enjoying your visit to Hogwarts?' he enquired politely, all the while mentally checking the door in anticipation of the fourth Champion's arrival.
'Eet eez very deeferent to where eye come from, Cedreec, but eye hev my sister and ozzer schoolmates, so eet eez not too terrible.' Cedric could understand most of what she said with difficulty, and smiled encouragingly when he did not. Although he still held her in his gaze, his every nerve was focused on the door as he mentally reached out and felt for a certain aura.
After roughly five minutes, the door opened and revealed the owner of said aura, an anxious Harry Potter. Mr Bagman announced his arrival with a flourish and explained that there would be the weighing of the wands and a photo shoot. Cedric groaned. He instinctively disliked the purple-clad witch, who looked devious just standing still. He noticed how she looked at Harry, almost as though he was a meal to be devoured, and not in a good way. She steered the youngest Champion away and out of the room as Cedric watched with a carefully hidden eye.
Moments later, Professor Dumbledore entered with Mr Ollivander, from whom Cedric had purchased his own wand so many years ago. He remembered the day in that dusty shop as he had looked around at the thousands of boxes, containing wands of all shapes and descriptions. He had tried a number of wands before Mr Ollivander had finally handed him a finely crafted one. He could still remember the rush of magic he'd felt as his fingers curled somewhat protectively around the wand's handle, and he had known, as surely as he knew his own name, that this was his wand. He couldn't remember having felt so... connected... to any one thing before.
'Now, where is our fourth Champion?' Dumbledore enquired as he glanced around the room.
'I believe Rita Skeeter took him off for a bit of a private interview, Dumbledore,' managed Mr Bagman, who looked as though he ought to have known better.
'Blast!' Dumbledore hastened from the room, and Cedric sighed and felt the twisting of his stomach as he joined the other Champions and sat in one of the five chairs to await the Headmaster's return. He felt the pressure of the impending Triwizard Tournament a little stronger today, as the weighing of the wands signified yet another step towards their First Task.
Professor Dumbledore soon returned, sweeping Harry into the room before him as Rita Skeeter followed and closed the door. Cedric could see a look of shaken relief on Harry's face and wondered what the reporter had spoken to him about. Harry looked in Cedric's direction and walked towards him, his eyes never leaving Cedric's as he ran his hand through his hair. Oh, do that again! Cedric could feel the distinct increase of his own heartbeat as he strove to maintain a pleasant yet neutral expression. Harry sat in the chair next to Cedric, who was acutely aware of Harry's every breath as Professor Dumbledore introduced Mr Ollivander and announced the start of the proceedings.
Fleur's wand was checked first, but Cedric barely noticed much more than the human form to his right. Harry's legs bounced nervously under the table, and Cedric empathized with him; Cedric's own propensity to pace the room was also being severely hampered.
Cedric heard his own name called and stood, allowing Fleur to pass before he walked up to Mr Ollivander. The old man beamed as Cedric handed over his wand, whereupon the Wand merchant proceeded to recite the properties of Cedric's particular piece. Cedric smiled as Mr Ollivander complimented him on the condition of his wand, as he took special pride in keeping it at peak performance. He grinned as Mr Ollivander enchanted silver rings of smoke from the tip of his wand that floated through the air in a line, after which he proclaimed the wand to be in satisfactory condition. Cedric received his wand and bowed slightly, then turned and walked back to his seat next to Harry.
He glanced at the younger boy who appeared excessively nervous.
'Relax, Harry, just breathe. It's only the weighing of the wands,' he whispered.
'It's not just that, Cedric. That Rita Skeeter woman, she's up to no good, writing things about me that I never even said...' Harry's agitated voice trailed off as his legs started bouncing again.
Cedric's mind raced. What could that... witch ... have said or done that would have upset Harry this way. He felt a protective wave of empathy for the boy, and he placed his hand on Harry's thigh to quieten his leg's activity.
'Stop the bouncing, Harry. You'll be fine,' he said, but then gasped as he felt an enormous surge of energy flow from Harry's body to his. One glance at the expression on Harry's face revealed that the boy had felt it too and was as surprised as he.
'... Mr Potter, your wand please.'
Obviously puzzled, Harry broke Cedric's gaze as he rose from his seat and approached Mr Ollivander. Cedric watched him as he walked away and wondered just what in the hell was going on between him and Harry Potter.
~*~
TBC
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A/N: All recognisable quotes are taken from Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire
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Latest 25 Reviews for Wizards and Champions
68 Reviews | 6.87/10 Average
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait to see where you take them.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Cedric's role in the books was always a tear-jerker, but developing a story like this makes it even more intense. Good plot idea, and well written!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks, and I'm happy you actually read the last chapter. I always wondered what Cedric might have been like if JKR had expanded his character even a little bit, so that the readers would have an even greater sense of loss.
Just so you know, I cried like an ass every time I wrote a piece of the last chapter, every time I edited it, and every time I posted it at an archive. ~H
Yes! That was satisfying! I don't want to read the next chapter but I will anyway...
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins*
Oh my god, I am already devastated for poor Cedric....nothing like knowing that the worst horrors imaginable are approaching....I'm hoping that Cedric and Harry at least get a special moment before going into the maze- that they at least kiss.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
The muse was particularly horrible in these chapters, and although I kept screaming "Kiss" "sex" "more" she was adamant.
Bossy thing, the muse.Thanks for reading! ~H
Seems to have potential for a great story-I look forward to reading more =)
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it. ~H
Cedric's going to die in the next chapter, isn't he?
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
La la la la lalalalalalalalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.........
Thanks for the review!
Uh oh Cedders, you need to watch out! Something wicked this way comes!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods*
Oh yes, it does! Thanks for reading, and Chapter 19 is almost ready for the betas.
~H
Eau PIDGELING!The boys... I love them so.. .can't we just keep them? Can't we????We are so Mary-Sue'd... I'm breathless with anticipation for your further chapters.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL Mary-Sue'd and proud!
Thank yew, Midgeling!
wow.... he's figured out old dumbledore already! i hope you don't really kill him! i like cedders!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Dumbledore might have let himself slip a little too much, and everybody underestimates the Hufflepuffs! I love my Cedders too ;o) Thanks, HH
Another wonderful chapter! I loved their interaction when they were flying, and I'm getting a little weepy now because I know it will all end soon!Do you think you might change this into an AU fic where Cedric lives? I can bribe you! *begs*
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I loved the flying scene myself - I felt that it was a real bonding time for them.
*grins* One can never tell where the muse will take me and I'm always open to bribes! Chocolate-covered Harry *cough*Equus*cough*, or Cedric, or Severus, come to think of it. Yes, those are all good bribes
just read the whole thing! it's awesome! poor jealou cedders....
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Woah, the whole thing? Hope you don't have a headache! Thanks for that and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
"the Boy Who Mattered Most." - RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRhhhrrrr!!!
"Merlin, he's a living, breathing wet dream!" - Merlin! He IS!
"...he felt the thrum as their magic met, clashed and, finally, harmonised." - SUCH a beautiful image, mouffling!
Heh! Harry's such a lil bad-ass!
Eau, MISTY!
"Your cousins Anne-Marie and Joan..." - *WETS self!!!!*
*laughter... laughter and more laughter!*
I think this is my favourite chapter, peaupette... I'm not shore of course... but it just FEELS thet way!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. It's been SEAU long in the making, Midgen, eye kneau! and yes, here we have young Harry, all het up by that beautiful Hufflepuff and not being able to *do* anything about it because Cedric's getting all 'ethical' on his ass! I mean, REALLY!!! ;O)
I must say that this story is coming along nicely. I cant wait to read more about it! Love the way you stuck to the original story but add your on twists. Please up date soon!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks for your review! I enjoyed the plot of The Goblet of Fire because I found that it was so involved, with so many new and different characters! Am working on the storyline and hope to have the next chapter up soon! HH
Yes! *pumps fist in air* You have no idea how eager I've been for the new chapter! And it's finally here! Yay! It was well worth the wait. The battle scene in the forest was so well written that I felt as if I was actually there.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Wow! What a review! Thanks for that, and I'm thrilled that the battle scene works! I caught my a** trying to get it to 'sound' like how it looked in my mind! HH
I just had an epiphany ... and it made me so sad. I realized (while I was hanging up clothing in my closet, of all places!) that Cedric was a 'real' person, which is what you've been getting at in this story all along. Cedric was real and he had friends who loved him and he had a life ... and he died. And it just struck me and made me really sad.
The "battle" scene was beautifully written. I loved it. So captivating; you've really done your research well (the jinxes, hexes, etc.) and made everything very believable. Well done. :)
So ... Wow, this story is really marvelous. Thank you for writing it! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Scary thing - I just realized that you're right about Cedric being a 'real' person! I always wondered what he was like, who his friends were and whether Rowling put much thought into his life.
I had the battle scene vividly in my mind, yet somehow it was particularly hard to write/coordinate! All snaps go to my fantabulous beta, JaneAverage! She made my mish-mash of jinxes,hexes,wrong incantations into something that really rocked!
Thanks for your review, I'm so happy that you enjoy the story and appreciate your taking the time to review!
HH
I have been waiting SO LONG for an update! When I saw it in the Newly Submitted list, I literally jumped up and down and squealed!I cannot tell you how much I ADORE this story! I hope the next chapter is just as satisfying as this one!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. wow, I'm gratified to know that you're getting such a kick out of my ficlet.I'm working out some details with my beta on Chapter 12 and I hope to have it in her capable hands by the end of next week. Fingers & toes crossed, and thanks for reading! HH
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
I LOVE your Patronus class! I can just see the rest of the class saying "CUDDERS MUNT, boy!"
Poor Diggs, having to be with the couples when all he wants is Harry... *sighs wistfully*
VERY clever that you put in the trip up the mountain with Snuffles, the exchange between him and the twins/Lee.
*DIES* - "Oh, do that again."
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. Cudders munt indeed, poppet!
You remember our days of 'do that again' don'tcha!? I agree that I've been unfair to our Cedders in Puddifoot's with all the couples... *bad muse* I caught my *arse* with that whole Snuffles/Ced waiting timeline thing... am happy that it's come off okay! Hugs, HH
The Patronus Charm was very effective, wasn't it? Marvelously written! Just what exactly is an African Oryx? Is it a buffalo or gazelle-like creature? I am too lazy to look it up on the internet and I can't quite recall what it is right now...
Oh, yes! I loved this line, "She had still been friendly, but she was distant, and he could see the hurt in her eyes; could feel her loss without even trying to sense it."
It reminds me of another story I read (can't remember what it was) in which the author had written, "No girl wants to be the one who turned her boyfriend gay." Hee! That's what I thought of when I read the above.
This is very well-written and I look forward to an update. I hope your move went well. And there's just one little bit of con. crit.
*Ahem!* You use a lot of "alrights" and I remarked on that in an earlier chapter. However, I see them here, too, hee! So... if you wanted to change them to 'all right', that's fine. If not, that's great, too, because a lot of writers use 'alright,' although--grammatically--it isn't quite correct.
Again, looking forward to reading more. Cheers!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
African Oryx . I think they're beautiful creatures, even though this particular photo isn't the most graceful one I've ever seen.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m89/HogwartsHoney/AfricanOryx-cedders.jpg
HH
Well, Cho's not a Ravenclaw for nothing! She's a smart cookie! :P
Great job on the Second Task. Harry showed up right on cue ... after all the others! I suppose he'd just been woken up by Dobby and given the Gillyweed.
Lovely job and I knew that Jamie would understand ... he's the understanding type.
Reading on!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yep, that Cho sharp all right! I try to weave my story in and out of canon. I hope it makes it more plausible that way instead of being waaaaaaaay out, y'know? Jamie is my prince!!! I love that boy!! He IS the understanding type and very mellow, but , like all my Hufflepuffs, he's more than he seems.... ! *cough*
Response from Celestial Melody (Reviewer)
Ooh, really? I can't wait to find out about this unseen side of Jamie. :)
~Julia~
Wow. That was an intense chapter and I was shocked that Harry was in the bathroom with Cedric! I had to reread it to make sure that I'd read it correctly the first time.
This story is getting very complicated. The triangle is going to have a bit of an upset when Cho finds out. Reading on...
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Poor boy - he certainly didn't expect to walk in on THAT kind of thing!! LOL HH
Ooooh, very nice. The conversation between Cedric and Harry was mesmerizing and I can't wait to read more, so just one itty-bitty bit of con crit.
"who Cedric belatedly realized was Hermione Granger."
Perhaps it should be "who, Cedric belatedly realized, was Hermione Granger." Offset that statement *points up* with commas.
I'm truly enjoying this story and reading on, leaving a short review, because I can't wait! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yes, poor Cedric. The mention of the Firebolt was almost his undoing!! ;o) HH
Beautiful! This is my favorite chapter so far. I loved the capricious nature of the mermaid. Good job on the gifts at the end, too. :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins* I enjoyed this chapter too, and the mermaid was fun to write. HH
Hee! Fantastic detail about Hannah; I applaud her for her intelligence! They do say that Hufflepuffs are well-rounded in everything.
Marvelous job on writing the First Task. We finally find out what happens to Cedric during that task! Great job; I'm truly enjoying this story.
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
'Puffers' are too often overlooked y'know! They may be the gentle souls of the bunch, but I think they have HUGE potential and a lot to offer the school!
Thanks for your reviews. That first task was a joy to write, although stressful in its own right!
HH
The first thing I thought of after I read the first few paragraphs was, in response to Amos' input, "Ooh, I bet he'll be sorry after the tournie is over!"
This story has really captured my attention and the only other slash I've read that I liked was one about Harry/Draco. Good job! :)
Hee! I laughed when I read this, "uncertain feelings." It's often 'certain' feelings, but of course Cedric doesn't understand his! :)
Great detail on the badges.
Um... should this be a question? "What could that… witch … have said or done that would have upset Harry this way."
"have said or done that would have upset Harry this way?"
And Cedric placed his hand on Harry's thigh! *gasp* This is getting very interesting! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Our poor Ced. Things are conspiring against him, not least of which his hormones and a determined author with an extremely naughty muse!! ;o) I'm happy that you're enjoying it.
Ced didn't mean his hand placement to be in a sexual way, more of in a supportive way, 'cause... let's face it, he's worked up also about the entire Tournament. He's a caring and sympathetic being...
HH
I enjoyed reading about Lee ... he has always been a favorite character of mine, :), and I appreciate that you've included him in the story.
A bit of a constru. crit. that I found in the... oh, I am NOT about to count the paragraphs, :P, but here it is anyway: "'Hey, listen, it’s not about that, alright?’ he growled."
Often, authors use 'alright' in their stories, however, the correct way to use this term is 'all ____ right", with a space in between the 'all' and the 'right.' This is because 'right' corresponds with 'wrong' and you wouldn't say 'alwrong,' would you?
Just a bit there... and "...scarlet-haired Gryffindors." I assume you're referring to the Weasley clan, although they don't really have "scarlett hair," do they? It's more of a carrot color, whereas robed Gryffindors would definitely be scarlet.
I am really enjoying your story, it's marvelously written and I can't wait to see how the "Cho Chang conflict" works out. *bounces up and down excitedly* :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods* Yep, I was in two minds about the 'alright' vs 'all right' thing, so have changed it. thx again, it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes picking up what my beta and I have missed! Also changed the hair colour! LOL
I love Lee, he's a wonderful addition to the twins' lunacy and he's very important in his own right. Thanks for reading! HH