Revelations
Chapter 7 of 21
HogwartsHoneyDisclaimer: Jo owns them. Anything recognisable belongs to her.
A/N: Thanks to Allison, my beta, who agreed to take on a slashy fic even though she doesn't like them!
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Two nights before the Yule Ball, Cedric decided to have a peaceful and quiet bath in a seldom-used prefects' bathroom on the fifth floor. After muttering the password, he filled the bath with warm water, stripped and climbed inside. He frowned at the egg as it sat among his bundled clothes and, again, wondered what he could do differently. Nothing came to mind. He gave up in disgust and relaxed into the bath, enjoying a soak alone with his thoughts.
His mind wandered and his thoughts turned to Cho. Oddly enough, even though they had pretty much been "an item" for the past few weeks, he knew that his feelings for her were not what they should be towards a girlfriend. Cho was a year younger than he, and she was very cute, full of fun, easy to be with, very attractive and obviously attracted to him. He had asked her to the Yule Ball because he genuinely liked her, but also because, as Hogwarts Champion, he was required to bring a date. He knew to himself that he wasn't all that romantically interested in girls, although they made great friends. Thus far, no one had been able to push any Diggory buttons. No one, that is, except Harry Potter.
He had seen Harry occasionally since the first task, usually between classes or during meals in the Great Hall. His stomach always fluttered at the sight of the Gryffindor, and he noticed that Potter also wore a slightly strained expression. Cedric could only assume that Harry's egg was presenting a similar problem. Although they had smiled and acknowledged each other whenever they came into contact, Cedric found that his heart beat entirely too quickly after such brief moments. He still wanted more interaction with the younger Champion, and his feelings of longing often waged war in his mind with other feelings of unease, uncertainty, and anxiety. He thought it strange that he should feel such complex duality whenever he was around the dark-haired boy.
He leaned his head back against the side of the tub and closed his eyes, smiling as thoughts of Harry played and replayed in his mind. Images of his laughing face that morning at breakfast evoked tingling sensations in Cedric's mind and goose bumps along his flesh, despite the warmth of the bath water. He pictured how the corners of Harry's mouth turned up when he laughed, and recalled Harry's tousled look after completion of their First Task. He remembered the night they had been chosen as Hogwarts Champions and how the adrenaline had coursed through his own body when he and Harry shook hands. That night, and again after their First Task, the mere touch of flesh on flesh had caused alarming reactions along Cedric's entire body. He had found those reactions to be a bit disturbing, but in retrospect they were also very ... nice. He found himself wondering what the rest of Harry might feel like ...
With a shock he realized that he was quite aroused.
He stood up in the water and quickly grabbed for his towel, upsetting the pile of clothes under the egg. The egg bounced once on the tile and sprung open, wailing as it fell into the warm soapy water.
"Blast!" he fumed, and ducked his head under the water to retrieve the bane of his existence.
Oddly enough, the egg didn't shriek underwater, but instead he heard voices singing. He came up for air and checked around, wondering if the sounds were coming from somewhere else. When he realized that the submerged egg was the only source of the music, he again ducked his head below the bubbles and listened.
"Come seek us where our voices sound,
We cannot sing above the ground..."
"What could that mean?" He pondered the words as he floated on his back in the tub, muttering them over and over.
'The only time the voices sounded was when the egg was under the water!' he exclaimed to the room.
His mind raced as he considered water, and since Hogwarts had no swimming pool, his only logical choice was the Black Lake. He pondered the possible inhabitants of the lake for several minutes before raising his head. Suddenly, he realized that the mermaid in the picture on the wall was flapping her tail flukes at him. He studied her for many minutes as she giggled and splashed the water, turning her tail and tossing her hair.
"Mermaids," he exclaimed, "in the lake!" He looked to the painting, and the mermaid clapped her hands together in joy. Amazed, he sank beneath the water once more, and listened to the rest of the song.
"An hour long you'll have to look,
And to recover what we took ..."
He would have to survive in the Black Lake for an hour. Cedric was a good swimmer, but still, the prospect of spending an hour searching the cold lake in February filled him with dread. He resolved to visit the library to research Warming Charms and to figure out what would allow him to breathe for an hour underwater.
Cedric's thoughts turned again to Harry, and he wondered whether the younger boy had made any headway with his own egg. He resolved to speak with the Gryffindor the following day, and his face coloured as he recalled his condition immediately preceding his breakthrough with the egg. Sighing, he drained the now lukewarm tub water, dressed and made his way back to his room, hoping that he wouldn't run into anyone who might question his flushed face.
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Cedric spent the next morning trying to track down Harry Potter. Under other circumstances, his actions might be looked upon as odd, but he thought that their Champion status would be enough to cover any questions from the student population. He was unable to get him alone as the school was in the throes of preparation for the following night's Yule Ball. Cedric had taken out his dress robes earlier that morning and tried them on, turning to view himself in the mirror of his dorm. He had to admit that he made a striking picture, and sighed as thoughts of him and Cho sprung to mind. He was certain that she would expect more than the chaste kisses they had exchanged thus far, and he was nervous at the prospect of what that might actually entail.
The Castle was abuzz with excitement. Cedric saw Cho briefly at lunch, but couldn't get close as she was surrounded by a pack of giggling girls. He smiled at her from afar, hoping that his nervousness wasn't as apparent to them as it was to him. He'd noticed that girls seemed to be in packs everywhere, no doubt going over their dresses and hairstyles for the Ball. He was actually looking forward to the ball, and although he knew he and Cho would make a dashing couple, he still harboured a hope that he would be able to get more than fleeting glimpses of the tournament's youngest Champion. He knew that his musings about Harry had intensified since his decision to tell him about the egg, but there was something else that nagged at him.
~*~
Immediately after lunch, Cedric sat alone in his dorm and pulled the curtains around his bed as he opened the small box containing the Firebolt. It zoomed back and forth, periodically performing various manoeuvres such as the famed Wronski Defensive Feint and the Double Eight Loop. Cedric smiled as he pictured Harry's body miniaturized on the broom, and interspersed those images with others of Harry's face wreathed in smiles as he received Cedric's gift.
Cedric snapped back to reality as he acknowledged his problem. He couldn't risk giving Harry the gift while they were face to face, and he wasn't even sure that he could write his own name on a card to Harry. He sighed heavily. No, this would have to be an anonymous gift. He was relieved that both Markus and Jamie weren't around, for although he loved his best friends like brothers, he wasn't yet ready to face their inevitable questions regarding the gift.
Cedric picked up Harry's gift, which he had wrapped in simple green yuletide paper adorned with twinkling silver stars. He returned to the Entrance Hall and walked down the staircase and through the corridor that lead to the Hufflepuff common room and the kitchens. Upon entry into the kitchens, he took in the sight of dozens of house-elves working feverishly to clean up after lunch. He was amazed as always that so many elves could be at Hogwarts, working alongside each other, yet they were almost never seen by the students.
He looked around for the one elf that was different. Dobby, a former house-elf of the Malfoys, was running around with mismatched socks. Somewhat hesitant, Cedric approached the elf, whose eyes opened wide in shock. Before Dobby could prostrate himself, Cedric shoved Harry's present into the elf's hands and asked for his help in a low voice. Dobby listened intently and nodded severely when Cedric insisted that his name never be mentioned in connection with the gift. Feeling slightly foolish for all the subterfuge, Cedric nevertheless thanked the elf and hastened back to the common room.
~*~
That evening after dinner, he and Cho walked through the Entrance Hall and through the corridor leading to the courtyard. They sat together on a bench and, shivering slightly, Cho moved closer to him in the brisk night air. He gallantly performed a Warming Charm over the two of them.
"Oh, thanks. That's much better," she breathed, not changing her position, but gazing up at him with her enormous brown eyes.
He smiled uncertainly and masked his slight unease as he withdrew her Christmas present from inside his robes. He presented it to her with an exaggerated flourish, and they laughed easily as she, in turn, presented him with her gift, shyly placing the box into his hands. He smiled at her fondly and wished that he could feel for her the way she obviously felt for him.
"Shall we open them now?" she asked excitedly, her eyes dancing in the reflected lights of the castle.
"No, no, my dear, it's not yet Christmas!" he admonished jokingly, but relented when he saw that she could no longer contain her excitement. He nodded, and she began to open her gift, taking rather more care to not rip the paper than he thought absolutely necessary.
She gasped delightedly as she opened the box to reveal a silver chain with a pendant in the shape of an eagle in flight. Intricately carved and obviously magically enchanted, the eagle's wing feathers appeared to ruffle as it glided through an imaginary wind. It was, in a word, exquisite.
"Oh, Cedric, it's beautiful," she exclaimed, and he smiled again at her words. He had chosen this particular pendant because, being a Ravenclaw, her house's emblem was an eagle. This one reminded him of how she looked when she played Quidditch and her hair flowed out behind her, similar to the eagle's feathers as they tracked the wind.
Her eyes misted over as she hugged him, and their lips met in a warm embrace. She broke their kiss quickly and smilingly urged him to open his own present. He complied, partly out of curiosity, and partly because he was enjoying their worry-free time together. He'd had precious little of that recently.
His fingers quickly removed the wrapping and he opened his own box, catching her eye as he reached in dramatically. He was surprised to feel something moving and withdrew what appeared to be a small chest. He glanced at Cho quizzically and she blushed, suddenly looking like a little girl. He shrugged off the image and returned his attention to the chest now sitting in his lap. He opened the lid and peered inside, unconsciously gasping in his surprise. There before him was a miniature Quidditch set, painstakingly crafted, and perfect in every detail. The two Bludgers were made of bronze, the Quaffle of silver and the tiny Snitch of pure gold. He shook his head in stunned amazement.
"Cho, this is wonderful!" he exclaimed, truly at a loss for words. Her smile was stellar as she explained.
"I wanted to get something that would mean as much to you as it does to me, Cedric, and Quidditch is something we both love." He had to agree with her there, and realized that he'd probably found a very kindred spirit in the person of Cho Chang. Why then couldn't he love her?
But he knew the reason why.
~~~
TBC
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68 Reviews | 6.87/10 Average
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait to see where you take them.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy their journey.~HH
Cedric's role in the books was always a tear-jerker, but developing a story like this makes it even more intense. Good plot idea, and well written!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks, and I'm happy you actually read the last chapter. I always wondered what Cedric might have been like if JKR had expanded his character even a little bit, so that the readers would have an even greater sense of loss.
Just so you know, I cried like an ass every time I wrote a piece of the last chapter, every time I edited it, and every time I posted it at an archive. ~H
Yes! That was satisfying! I don't want to read the next chapter but I will anyway...
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins*
Oh my god, I am already devastated for poor Cedric....nothing like knowing that the worst horrors imaginable are approaching....I'm hoping that Cedric and Harry at least get a special moment before going into the maze- that they at least kiss.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
The muse was particularly horrible in these chapters, and although I kept screaming "Kiss" "sex" "more" she was adamant.
Bossy thing, the muse.Thanks for reading! ~H
Seems to have potential for a great story-I look forward to reading more =)
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it. ~H
Cedric's going to die in the next chapter, isn't he?
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
La la la la lalalalalalalalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.........
Thanks for the review!
Uh oh Cedders, you need to watch out! Something wicked this way comes!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods*
Oh yes, it does! Thanks for reading, and Chapter 19 is almost ready for the betas.
~H
Eau PIDGELING!The boys... I love them so.. .can't we just keep them? Can't we????We are so Mary-Sue'd... I'm breathless with anticipation for your further chapters.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL Mary-Sue'd and proud!
Thank yew, Midgeling!
wow.... he's figured out old dumbledore already! i hope you don't really kill him! i like cedders!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Dumbledore might have let himself slip a little too much, and everybody underestimates the Hufflepuffs! I love my Cedders too ;o) Thanks, HH
Another wonderful chapter! I loved their interaction when they were flying, and I'm getting a little weepy now because I know it will all end soon!Do you think you might change this into an AU fic where Cedric lives? I can bribe you! *begs*
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks! I loved the flying scene myself - I felt that it was a real bonding time for them.
*grins* One can never tell where the muse will take me and I'm always open to bribes! Chocolate-covered Harry *cough*Equus*cough*, or Cedric, or Severus, come to think of it. Yes, those are all good bribes
just read the whole thing! it's awesome! poor jealou cedders....
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Woah, the whole thing? Hope you don't have a headache! Thanks for that and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
"the Boy Who Mattered Most." - RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRhhhrrrr!!!
"Merlin, he's a living, breathing wet dream!" - Merlin! He IS!
"...he felt the thrum as their magic met, clashed and, finally, harmonised." - SUCH a beautiful image, mouffling!
Heh! Harry's such a lil bad-ass!
Eau, MISTY!
"Your cousins Anne-Marie and Joan..." - *WETS self!!!!*
*laughter... laughter and more laughter!*
I think this is my favourite chapter, peaupette... I'm not shore of course... but it just FEELS thet way!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. It's been SEAU long in the making, Midgen, eye kneau! and yes, here we have young Harry, all het up by that beautiful Hufflepuff and not being able to *do* anything about it because Cedric's getting all 'ethical' on his ass! I mean, REALLY!!! ;O)
I must say that this story is coming along nicely. I cant wait to read more about it! Love the way you stuck to the original story but add your on twists. Please up date soon!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Thanks for your review! I enjoyed the plot of The Goblet of Fire because I found that it was so involved, with so many new and different characters! Am working on the storyline and hope to have the next chapter up soon! HH
Yes! *pumps fist in air* You have no idea how eager I've been for the new chapter! And it's finally here! Yay! It was well worth the wait. The battle scene in the forest was so well written that I felt as if I was actually there.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Wow! What a review! Thanks for that, and I'm thrilled that the battle scene works! I caught my a** trying to get it to 'sound' like how it looked in my mind! HH
I just had an epiphany ... and it made me so sad. I realized (while I was hanging up clothing in my closet, of all places!) that Cedric was a 'real' person, which is what you've been getting at in this story all along. Cedric was real and he had friends who loved him and he had a life ... and he died. And it just struck me and made me really sad.
The "battle" scene was beautifully written. I loved it. So captivating; you've really done your research well (the jinxes, hexes, etc.) and made everything very believable. Well done. :)
So ... Wow, this story is really marvelous. Thank you for writing it! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Scary thing - I just realized that you're right about Cedric being a 'real' person! I always wondered what he was like, who his friends were and whether Rowling put much thought into his life.
I had the battle scene vividly in my mind, yet somehow it was particularly hard to write/coordinate! All snaps go to my fantabulous beta, JaneAverage! She made my mish-mash of jinxes,hexes,wrong incantations into something that really rocked!
Thanks for your review, I'm so happy that you enjoy the story and appreciate your taking the time to review!
HH
I have been waiting SO LONG for an update! When I saw it in the Newly Submitted list, I literally jumped up and down and squealed!I cannot tell you how much I ADORE this story! I hope the next chapter is just as satisfying as this one!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. wow, I'm gratified to know that you're getting such a kick out of my ficlet.I'm working out some details with my beta on Chapter 12 and I hope to have it in her capable hands by the end of next week. Fingers & toes crossed, and thanks for reading! HH
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
I LOVE your Patronus class! I can just see the rest of the class saying "CUDDERS MUNT, boy!"
Poor Diggs, having to be with the couples when all he wants is Harry... *sighs wistfully*
VERY clever that you put in the trip up the mountain with Snuffles, the exchange between him and the twins/Lee.
*DIES* - "Oh, do that again."
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
LOL. Cudders munt indeed, poppet!
You remember our days of 'do that again' don'tcha!? I agree that I've been unfair to our Cedders in Puddifoot's with all the couples... *bad muse* I caught my *arse* with that whole Snuffles/Ced waiting timeline thing... am happy that it's come off okay! Hugs, HH
The Patronus Charm was very effective, wasn't it? Marvelously written! Just what exactly is an African Oryx? Is it a buffalo or gazelle-like creature? I am too lazy to look it up on the internet and I can't quite recall what it is right now...
Oh, yes! I loved this line, "She had still been friendly, but she was distant, and he could see the hurt in her eyes; could feel her loss without even trying to sense it."
It reminds me of another story I read (can't remember what it was) in which the author had written, "No girl wants to be the one who turned her boyfriend gay." Hee! That's what I thought of when I read the above.
This is very well-written and I look forward to an update. I hope your move went well. And there's just one little bit of con. crit.
*Ahem!* You use a lot of "alrights" and I remarked on that in an earlier chapter. However, I see them here, too, hee! So... if you wanted to change them to 'all right', that's fine. If not, that's great, too, because a lot of writers use 'alright,' although--grammatically--it isn't quite correct.
Again, looking forward to reading more. Cheers!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
African Oryx . I think they're beautiful creatures, even though this particular photo isn't the most graceful one I've ever seen.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m89/HogwartsHoney/AfricanOryx-cedders.jpg
HH
Well, Cho's not a Ravenclaw for nothing! She's a smart cookie! :P
Great job on the Second Task. Harry showed up right on cue ... after all the others! I suppose he'd just been woken up by Dobby and given the Gillyweed.
Lovely job and I knew that Jamie would understand ... he's the understanding type.
Reading on!
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yep, that Cho sharp all right! I try to weave my story in and out of canon. I hope it makes it more plausible that way instead of being waaaaaaaay out, y'know? Jamie is my prince!!! I love that boy!! He IS the understanding type and very mellow, but , like all my Hufflepuffs, he's more than he seems.... ! *cough*
Response from Celestial Melody (Reviewer)
Ooh, really? I can't wait to find out about this unseen side of Jamie. :)
~Julia~
Wow. That was an intense chapter and I was shocked that Harry was in the bathroom with Cedric! I had to reread it to make sure that I'd read it correctly the first time.
This story is getting very complicated. The triangle is going to have a bit of an upset when Cho finds out. Reading on...
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Poor boy - he certainly didn't expect to walk in on THAT kind of thing!! LOL HH
Ooooh, very nice. The conversation between Cedric and Harry was mesmerizing and I can't wait to read more, so just one itty-bitty bit of con crit.
"who Cedric belatedly realized was Hermione Granger."
Perhaps it should be "who, Cedric belatedly realized, was Hermione Granger." Offset that statement *points up* with commas.
I'm truly enjoying this story and reading on, leaving a short review, because I can't wait! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Yes, poor Cedric. The mention of the Firebolt was almost his undoing!! ;o) HH
Beautiful! This is my favorite chapter so far. I loved the capricious nature of the mermaid. Good job on the gifts at the end, too. :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*grins* I enjoyed this chapter too, and the mermaid was fun to write. HH
Hee! Fantastic detail about Hannah; I applaud her for her intelligence! They do say that Hufflepuffs are well-rounded in everything.
Marvelous job on writing the First Task. We finally find out what happens to Cedric during that task! Great job; I'm truly enjoying this story.
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
'Puffers' are too often overlooked y'know! They may be the gentle souls of the bunch, but I think they have HUGE potential and a lot to offer the school!
Thanks for your reviews. That first task was a joy to write, although stressful in its own right!
HH
The first thing I thought of after I read the first few paragraphs was, in response to Amos' input, "Ooh, I bet he'll be sorry after the tournie is over!"
This story has really captured my attention and the only other slash I've read that I liked was one about Harry/Draco. Good job! :)
Hee! I laughed when I read this, "uncertain feelings." It's often 'certain' feelings, but of course Cedric doesn't understand his! :)
Great detail on the badges.
Um... should this be a question? "What could that… witch … have said or done that would have upset Harry this way."
"have said or done that would have upset Harry this way?"
And Cedric placed his hand on Harry's thigh! *gasp* This is getting very interesting! :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
Our poor Ced. Things are conspiring against him, not least of which his hormones and a determined author with an extremely naughty muse!! ;o) I'm happy that you're enjoying it.
Ced didn't mean his hand placement to be in a sexual way, more of in a supportive way, 'cause... let's face it, he's worked up also about the entire Tournament. He's a caring and sympathetic being...
HH
I enjoyed reading about Lee ... he has always been a favorite character of mine, :), and I appreciate that you've included him in the story.
A bit of a constru. crit. that I found in the... oh, I am NOT about to count the paragraphs, :P, but here it is anyway: "'Hey, listen, it’s not about that, alright?’ he growled."
Often, authors use 'alright' in their stories, however, the correct way to use this term is 'all ____ right", with a space in between the 'all' and the 'right.' This is because 'right' corresponds with 'wrong' and you wouldn't say 'alwrong,' would you?
Just a bit there... and "...scarlet-haired Gryffindors." I assume you're referring to the Weasley clan, although they don't really have "scarlett hair," do they? It's more of a carrot color, whereas robed Gryffindors would definitely be scarlet.
I am really enjoying your story, it's marvelously written and I can't wait to see how the "Cho Chang conflict" works out. *bounces up and down excitedly* :)
~Julia~
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Wizards and Champions)
*nods* Yep, I was in two minds about the 'alright' vs 'all right' thing, so have changed it. thx again, it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes picking up what my beta and I have missed! Also changed the hair colour! LOL
I love Lee, he's a wonderful addition to the twins' lunacy and he's very important in his own right. Thanks for reading! HH