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Five years after the fall of Voldemort, Hermione and Severus receive unhappy news.
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Neville is a compelex character, he is very brave, but also very shy, he has suffered so much in his young life. I have often wondered if he had been exposed to a memory charm of some sort, given the fact of his parents torture, was he there? was it the death eaters that cast the spell, or his gran, to protect him from the memory of such horror. I hope you will be kind to Neville, and Severus & hermione as well.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Oh, I will. Especially Neville. His story always plucked at my heart strings! :) Thanks for your review, mick! LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Oh, I will. Especially Neville. His story always plucked at my heart strings! :) Thanks for your review, mick! LB x
Ok, Draco wasn't gay, maybe Theo is gay then. Snape knows SOMETHING! :)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
He does! And SOMEONE in this story will definitely be gay. ;)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
He does! And SOMEONE in this story will definitely be gay. ;)
He was polite to Neville? Oh, my! :)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Yes! I don't know WHAT'S come over him. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Yes! I don't know WHAT'S come over him. :) LB x
Dum de dum dum dummmm. He smirked as he watched his wife leave the room... He knew damn well she wouldn’t be spending the weekend alone. Poor Severus. He is very good at keeping his own counsel, isn't he?Hermione's conversations with Minerva and later with Padma and Dean seems to have helped her sort out her thoughts on whom she would want to marry. But I did roar with laughter when Michael Corner found her reading Magical Masturbation for Lonely Witches: Ten Hot Tips for You and Your Wand. How embarrassing!I can't wait until Hermione's and Snape's next meeting. Theo Nott is his step-son. There are loads of surprises along the way to marriage, eh?BTW, I adore Ogden Nash.Beth
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you for all your lovely comments! And I absolute LOVE Ogden Nash. The Bronx? No Thonx! :D LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you for all your lovely comments! And I absolute LOVE Ogden Nash. The Bronx? No Thonx! :D LB x
What was he summoned for? I can't remember from last time I read this! :)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Would you believe, I'd forgotten loads of it myself! :D LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Would you believe, I'd forgotten loads of it myself! :D LB x
Draco is gorgeous! I wonder if he's gay? ;)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
He IS rather camp here!
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
He IS rather camp here!
Poor Nev. :0
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Sob! :( LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Sob! :( LB x
WOW! I'd completely forgotten about the Severus/Lily scene in the playground. What Lily told him put a smile on my face. “Of course it’s happening inside your head, Severus, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?”I adore Draco. I think he has succeeded in stirring up the "ladies and gentlemen" in the common room. They had better get cracking before the one they want is taken by someone else. There's nothing like the specter of competition to the get the masses moving.I love this story. Beth
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Beth, you really do spoil me, and your reviews are always such an absolute joy! Thank you so much. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Beth, you really do spoil me, and your reviews are always such an absolute joy! Thank you so much. LB x
Sorry I have not reviewed, I kept going on to the next chapter, Yay! I am really enjoying this story and it has quickly become one of my favorites. I love the dynamics of it all. The banter between Severus & Hermione is fun to read. (raised eyebrows) I love Draco so much in this. Plus it is nice to see other characters you normally wouldn't. So, what is up with TN and why is Severus so against him? Then again, who was TN seeing on his trip?
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks so much for your reviews,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
! They're a joy to read. :) I'm delighted you're enjoying it so much - Severus will explain a lot about Theo in the next chapter. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks so much for your reviews,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
! They're a joy to read. :) I'm delighted you're enjoying it so much - Severus will explain a lot about Theo in the next chapter. LB x
Aw, I remember this chapter well. Always loved the bombshell. Looking forward to more.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
More on Tuesday, and thanks for your reviews. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
More on Tuesday, and thanks for your reviews. :) LB x
The thing I like most about this chapter is the mirroring of the Harry&Dumbledore in the train station scene and your Lily&Severus in the playground. Veyr nice!
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! LB x
Poor poor Neville. I'd forgotten about his storyline!
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I know! :( LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I know! :( LB x
I'd forgotten about the poems. I always liked them. And I like Padma here - It's nice that Hermione has a female friend to talk to. Reading on!
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks - I'm glad you like the poems. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks - I'm glad you like the poems. :) LB x
I heard you were back!!! OMG, I can't wait to read this again. I've missed it so much. Will you be cahnging a lot?
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Bingo! How lovely to hear from you again. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Bingo! How lovely to hear from you again. :) LB x
I remember reading this chapter the first time. I feel as if I'm reading it again for the first time. My perspective has changed so much. The first time, I could not imagine Hermione and Snape as a couple, now I have a hard time with them being with anyone else.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I know, it's very strange how a rereading of stories can change our perspective! :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I know, it's very strange how a rereading of stories can change our perspective! :) LB x
Sooo, what's wrong with Theo, is he gay, or is there some sort of mental problem { ie , daft as a brush, mad as a bed bug, } alcoholic, drug addict, must be something big.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
LOL. Severus will explain all in the next chapter, which is now up! LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
LOL. Severus will explain all in the next chapter, which is now up! LB x
Awe poor Neville, he deserves so much more. Good grief Hermione and Severus at it once again. Oh but I do love how she gives it back to him. :D
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Yes, poor Neville! I've always felt sorry for him. :( LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Yes, poor Neville! I've always felt sorry for him. :( LB x
I am really enjoying this story so far, I'm glad to see I can read another chapter without waiting. :D
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks, cotton! I'll try tp keep 'em coming, so you'll never have too long to wait. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks, cotton! I'll try tp keep 'em coming, so you'll never have too long to wait. :) LB x
Every time I see this story has a new chapter, I am very excited! I have loved every thing so far. I really wish I had all of the story, so I could spend this weekend curled up with coffee and reading this great story! With that being said, I hope more is posted really soon! :)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
AW, thank you! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for each chapter. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
AW, thank you! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for each chapter. :) LB x
I kind of like that for once in a marrige law fic, that Hermione is resigned to her fate. Not that I think she wouldn't fight it tooth and nail based on her sense of justice and fairness for all, but there is the other side of her, the logical law abiding citizen who just might do what she is supposed to do without storming the Ministry, And because of that, she is getting all dreamy about Theo. She is still being realistic, but for once she can't stop thinking about them together.And her moment with Snape. They fight and argue and bicker, but suddenly at the mention of Hermione marrying Theo, he becomes very serious about this whole business. Of course she thinks it is because he hates her. What else would she think?Lovely chapter, as always.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
You have Hermione and all she's going through exactly right! Thanks for your review,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
! More soon. :) LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
You have Hermione and all she's going through exactly right! Thanks for your review,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
! More soon. :) LB x
This chapter raises a lot of questions, why is Hermione willing to stay and marry a stranger, when she could leave the country, why is Draco still unmarried, and why can't Severus control his temper around a certain Griffindor. Inquiring minds need to know, so I had better keep reading.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
LOL. Yes, you'd better! The answers might take a while ... LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
LOL. Yes, you'd better! The answers might take a while ... LB x
WELL THAT WAS WIERD, and snape is married!!!!!! how did that happen??? and with a stepson!!!! poor hermione i bet theo is gay too! oh boy thanks for the update.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
His marriage/wife was mentioned back in chapter one - but not the stepson! Hermione's pretty surprised by that! Thanks for your review, and more soon. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
His marriage/wife was mentioned back in chapter one - but not the stepson! Hermione's pretty surprised by that! Thanks for your review, and more soon. LB x
Poor Hermionie she is more confused and angry then before. Severus is truly trying to discurage her, I wonder why. Is it personal or about Theo himself or both time wiill tell.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Time will tell, but a lot of it Severus will explain in the next chapter ... but is he telling the truth??? LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Time will tell, but a lot of it Severus will explain in the next chapter ... but is he telling the truth??? LB x
Love it, love it, love it!Have you made much amendments to the naughty bits?
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks. :) And LOL. No, not yet! I've only edited up to chapter 11 - pre naughty bits! More soon, LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks. :) And LOL. No, not yet! I've only edited up to chapter 11 - pre naughty bits! More soon, LB x
Poor Severus! He really doesn't seem to have come to terms with his own survival...I like this Draco! He really seems to be growing into quite an agreeable young man!
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Draco isn't quite canon here, it must be said, but I did enjoy writing this version of him! More soon, LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Draco isn't quite canon here, it must be said, but I did enjoy writing this version of him! More soon, LB x