Percy's Wedding
Chapter 18 of 20
reader76December arrives; Percy and Audrey's wedding is the event of the season. And this time, a Weasley manages to marry without a Death Eater attack interrupting.
ReviewedIt was strange to walk up to Muriel's house without feeling an ounce of dread. It had been two months since her death, and Audrey had done a fine job updating the large house for her new family with Percy. Molly greeted us as we walked into the entrance hall. Audrey's love of historical artifacts showed in the decorating.
They were blended with a warm, welcoming décor in a way that was both attractive and comfortable at the same time. Severus was at my side; he was muttering about his dress robes under his breath.
Molly led us to the former hospital wing; the room had been transfigured into a ballroom for the wedding. Molly cheerily babbled about how Audrey had told her they would use part of it for the nursery when the time came. I could hear the flurry of the house-elves in the kitchen. Orby, Kreacher and a few of the Hogwarts elves were on hand to assist. Knowing Percy, the wedding would be as grand of an event as he could manage; all the help would be appreciated.
We made our way to our seats and waited for the ceremony to begin. Audrey was an only child, so much of the wedding party was going to consist of Weasley siblings and significant others. Percy wanted his influential friends seen, so he had asked Harry and Neville to serve as ushers and the Minister to perform the ceremony. Harry led Arthur and Molly down front, and Neville escorted Mr. and Mrs. Hopkirk to their seats.
Percy stood at the front with the Minister. Kingsley looked as regal as always. Ron and Hermione entered first, both looking charming but a bit nervous. They were followed by Bill and Fleur, whose abdomen was protruding slightly with early pregnancy. Charlie escorted his little sister in next. They both wore bright, mischievous smiles that made us all a wee bit nervous. Finally, George escorted Audrey's close friend Susan Bones down the aisle.
Audrey was a beautiful bride, and Percy's face when he saw her was priceless. For a moment, he forgot himself, and his smug expression turned to one of childlike awe. The ceremony was lovely, and soon the guests moved to the back of the room while it was magically transformed for the dinner and dancing.
We milled about until we located our seats. I took my seat next to Narcissa, politely greeting Lucius. Kingsley helped Andromeda into the seat next to Severus, and then he sat next to Minerva. She had been escorted by Xenophilius Lovegood. Minerva looked perfectly comfortable with the eccentric wizard, but Lucius, who was seated on the other side of Mr. Lovegood, looked quite alarmed.
Andromeda and Narcissa were chatting pleasantly about Teddy. Narcissa seemed a bit wistful for Draco's childhood. Kingsley and Minerva were talking about the new term at Hogwarts and her plans for some new classes at the school, one of which was going to be on magical culture. Lucius was trying to participate in their conversation, but he kept getting derailed by Xenophilius and his talk of adventures to find exotic creatures. Lucius breathed a huge sigh of relief when Mr. Lovegood went off to find his daughter at the conclusion of dinner and the toasts.
I excused myself to go talk to the family, leaving Severus at the table as I knew mingling was his own personal Crucio.
The first person I found was Molly. "Molly, everything was beautiful. You should all be proud. They seem very happy." Molly nodded and started to tear up again.
George, Charlie and Ginny were huddled around the head table, obviously plotting. Ginny cast a Sonorus Charm to get the attention of the room.
"Ladies and gentleman, before we begin the dancing, my brothers and I have a bit of a surprise for the bride and groom." Ginny smiled brightly as she addressed the room.
The room was then entertained by a presentation of photos of the bride and groom. Audrey's were all exceptionally tasteful and flattering, showing her as a toddler on a toy broom, then as a young witch playing around with wandless magic, on Platform 9 ¾ her first year at Hogwarts, plus a few more as the years past, culminating with a photo from her leaving feast at Hogwarts. There were a few pictures of her with her parents. Percy's photos were a bit more embarrassing, but his siblings were generally very kind. The presentation wrapped up with photos of the couple during their time dating, their engagement photo and finally a photo of them in front of the new house the night of the wedding rehearsal.
Molly was crying again, as was Audrey's mother. Percy, who had been initially very nervous about the display, embraced his brothers and sister. Audrey was then given a warm welcome by the Weasley siblings as well, which prompted even further tears from Molly.
At that point, the party began. Most of the young people took to the dance floor. I spotted Dean Thomas, who had brought Lavender as his date. Seeing Dean up and about really made me smile. Luna Lovegood and her date, a young man I did not recognize, were dancing decidedly out of time with the music, but they looked happy. I had been informed by Hermione that Luna and Neville had decided to part ways amicably. Apparently, their romance was brought about by the pressure of the war, and they ultimately decided they were better as friends. Neville was dancing, with more skill than I would have expected, with a pleasant blonde named Hannah.
Harry and Ginny were pulled close, to mixed reactions from her brothers, though Molly looked pleased. Hermione was trying to protect her toes from Ron's awkward steps. George wasn't dancing, but he was chatting with Angelina, the young woman I had met the night we encountered Rita at the pub. Charlie had gotten up the courage to bring Gawain as his guest, and they were also talking near the bar.
I looked around for Bill and Fleur. Curiously, I spotted Fleur engrossed in conversation with Narcissa, but Bill was nowhere to be seen. Even more curious was that I didn't see Severus.
Lucius was speaking to the Minister; Percy was trying to break into the conversation. Audrey and Minerva seemed to be having a pleasant dialogue. Arthur and Molly were standing near the table visiting with Andromeda.
Lucius' mobile telephone rang. Everyone looked and then quickly went about their business. Arthur's eyes lit up like a Christmas tree. It was truly comical to see Arthur try to question Lucius about Muggle technology. Lucius was overwhelmingly gracious, particularly given their history, but you could see behind his gray eyes that he was truly becoming bored with Arthur's constant questions.
I walked over to Narcissa and Fleur and took a seat. We chatted for a few minutes. Narcissa asked me where Severus had disappeared to; I couldn't help but notice that Fleur shot her a look. Narcissa quickly changed the topic back to the baby, and Fleur positively glowed. It seemed that Fleur and Narcissa's latest project was a line of maternity clothes for witches. I soon found myself out of my element, so I politely excused myself and made my way over to the bar, where some of the younger guests were now taking a break from dancing.
Draco spotted me and steered Astoria over to meet me. She was polite and sweet, and she seemed a little nervous meeting me.
"Healer Prewett, I would like present Miss Astoria Greengrass."
"It is nice to meet you, Miss Greengrass; please call me Elizabeth."
"Thank you, and please, call me Astoria. I'm very pleased to meet you, Elizabeth. Draco has had nothing but compliments about you."
I laughed. "He is too kind. But I assure you, Draco has been wonderful to work with these past few months. St. Mungo's will be lucky to have him on staff." They both smiled.
"You are in your final year at Hogwarts, is that correct?"
"Yes, Elizabeth."
"Have you made any plans for after Hogwarts?" She looked down and blushed. I realized that she had misunderstood me. "Are you planning to seek an Apprenticeship or attend university?"
She brightened. "I have been accepted into a Herbology program at Oxford's wizarding university. It is a subject that I enjoy very much."
"That's wonderful, Astoria. I'm sure you know this, but Lady Malfoy is very proud of her gardens. She performs a fair bit of work herself on several of the more delicate species. I'm sure she would love to discuss it with you sometime."
"Thank you, Elizabeth; I was not aware that she enjoyed the subject."
"Draco, you need to keep Astoria better informed in the future," I teased him lightly.
"I shall, Elizabeth; thank you for your sage advice." He was clearly teasing back. "Elizabeth, someone seems to be looking for you." Draco motioned over my shoulder to where Severus had entered the room.
As I started to cross the room to Severus, George stepped to the front of the room and cast Sonorus.
"Ladies and gentlemen, Percy and Audrey will be leaving shortly, so I'd like to ask everyone to move to the front lawn to see them off." I was caught up in the crush of people, and I could not reach Severus. Instead, I found myself next to Fleur and Bill.
We watched Percy and Audrey exit the house, accepting well wishes from their guests along the way. Bill stepped away for a moment to say goodbye to his brother and new sister-in-law. Fleur kept grinning at me.
The crowd was thinning quickly. The younger guests were heading back in for more fun; many of the older witches and wizards were departing.
Fleur remained firmly on the step, looking over my shoulder with a strangely determined look on her face.
"Fleur, you are positively glowing," I commented. "Pregnancy suits you." She grinned. Why did I get the feeling she knew something I did not?
"Well, you are glowing a bit yourself tonight, Elizabeth," she said, straightening my robes and fussing with my hair. "Tonight is a special evening for many of us."
Bill, as he was returning, chuckled at his wife, "Fleur, stop fussing with Lizzie's hair and robes."
The crowd had completely disappeared by now; it was just the three of us on the front steps when I spotted Severus at a distance.
Bill suddenly became twitchy. "Come Fleur, I think Mum was looking for us inside."
I crossed over to Severus and kissed him. He led me over to the fountain in front of the house and sat on the stone wall, motioning for me to sit on his lap. It was a chilly night, but surprisingly not cold. I leaned against him, placing my head on his shoulder and looked up at the stars, which he was doing as well.
"Do you realize... " he began, then his voice faltered, "do you realize that it has been seven months tonight since the battle?"
I thought for a second. "I hadn't actually realized it until just now, Severus."
"If anyone had told me before that night that I'd be sitting her like this, I would have checked if they had been Confunded." I chuckled.
"My life has changed so much since that night."
"Everyone's has, Severus."
"I know, but I'm honestly a different person than before you saved me." I winced at the word 'saved'.
"Elizabeth, you saved me that night. I know you say you were just doing your job, but it was more than that. If someone else had physically helped me, my life wouldn't have turned around the way it has. You have given me a life I never thought I'd be privileged enough to enjoy. I love you, Elizabeth."
"I love you, too, Severus." I tried to turn in his arms.
"Wait. Let me finish. If you turn now, I'll kiss you, and then we'll both be distracted. I need to say this."
"Go on." My voice was starting to tremble as comprehension dawned on me.
"This life, this future, it's something I haven't dared dream of since I was very small. Now, I can see it clear as anything, and you are the key to it. Please say you'll share that life with me. Be my wife, Elizabeth." His hands moved beside me, and then he raised his hands to where I could see them. In his hand there was a box containing a very old, very beautiful, engagement ring.
I gasped and then quickly squeaked out, "Yes, of course I'll marry you. Oh, Severus, it's beautiful."
"It was Grandmother's. Actually, it's over three hundred years old, but Grandmother was the last one to wear it. She wanted you to have it. I was going to select one of the other Prince rings, but she insisted." He took my shaking hands and slid the ring on my finger, whispering the spell to size it to my hand.
"It's gorgeous. I love you, Severus. Can I turn around now? I would like to kiss you at some point tonight."
He laughed and stood, turning me and leaning down to kiss me. The kiss was slow, tender and passionate. It must have lasted a while, because I suddenly heard a whistle from the direction of the house.
Bill, Fleur, George, Harry, Ginny, Charlie, Hermione, Ron and Draco were all on the porch, staring at us.
"Bill!" Severus growled at my nephew. He looked embarrassed and led Fleur back into the house, motioning for the rest to follow him. Severus kissed me again, before looking at me and saying quietly, "Are you ready to face them?"
I hesitated. "Is that appropriate? At Percy's wedding?"
"I asked him, and he encouraged me to make the announcement. Apparently," Severus said with a roll of his eyes, "this will further solidify this wedding as the event of the season."
I laughed. "That's so Percy. So wait, Bill obviously knew, and so did Fleur. They clearly told the other kids. Does your Grandmother know?"
"Yes. And..." he looked slightly timid, "so does your mother. Molly also knows I was going to ask soon, but she doesn't know about tonight."
"You told Mother?" I wasn't upset, but I was shocked. Severus had met Mother, as she had visited us in September, but I couldn't imagine he'd been planning this that long.
"Do you remember that research meeting I went on last week?"
"Yes."
"On my way back from Toronto, I stopped in Boston, had lunch with your mother and informed her."
"No!"
"You aren't angry, are you?"
"Of course not. I'm a little shocked that you managed to cover all the bases without me finding out."
"One of these days, my dear, you are going to understand what it means to be a Slytherin. Or at least you better figure it out, because odds are good we'll have at least a couple."
I laughed and kissed him again. "Let's go back inside."
When we got back in the house, I was practically bowled over by Molly. She immediately began talking about the wedding, when it would be, where we would have it, and who would all be invited. I was overwhelmed. Severus, having just been vigorously hugged by Arthur and welcomed to the family, looked equally shell-shocked.
Bill beckoned us over to him. "This is my job, you two. Do you want me to announce this now or later?"
"Now," said Severus. "Everyone is going to know soon based on how you Weasleys all chatter. I'd rather have them all maul me at once rather than in shifts."
Bill looked at me; I nodded my approval. Bill crossed to the front of the room. "Ladies and Gentleman, I have another announcement to share with you." Narcissa's eyes cut my way; they immediately went to my left hand. She gave me a knowing smile.
"As most of you know," Bill continued, "Elizabeth Prewett and Severus Snape have been courting for the past six months. It is my pleasure to announce that they are now engaged. Let me be the first to say congratulations to the future Lord and Lady Prince-Snape."
The room burst into applause. Severus had his arm wrapped around me, and while he was clearly happy, he still looked decidedly uncomfortable with the attention. As the applause started to die down, we heard Ginny and George bellow "Kiss her!" I blushed and buried my face in Severus' shoulder, but the crowd was not deterred that easily. Charlie joined in, followed by Angelina, Dean, and a few others. To my shock, I heard Draco's voice in the mix. I looked over at Narcissa, who looked both mortified and amused by the display.
"ENOUGH!" Severus yelled. The crowd went immediately silent, sure that they'd just evoked the old Severus. Then, with a smirk, he stated, "If you ruffians would halt for a moment, I would be able to concentrate on kissing my fiancée." Then Hermione and Ginny giggled, and a few others joined in.
"Now, let's see," he whispered, leaning in to give me a soft, yet intense kiss. The room erupted once again.
"Prince-Snape? Is that what we are going to go by?" I asked.
"Well, Fitzgerald-Prewett-Prince-Snape is a little wordy, don't you think?"
"I'm actually shocked you aren't suggesting just Prince."
No, Elizabeth, if I drop Snape entirely, they'll expect me to be proper and polite all the time. We can't have that"
I chuckled. "I'm not tied to any name, Severus; I hope you know that."
"I do; though you clearly do like the Prince diamonds."
"I am female, Severus. We like sparkly things."
"I love you, Elizabeth."
"And I love you, Severus."
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38 Reviews | 4.45/10 Average
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story and for creating one of the most interesting oc I have encountered in a long time. I particularly liked the insights in all these episodes of their lives you used to wrapp it all up in this final chapter and I do feel sad you only have such a few reviews. This story definitely deserves more.
A nice chapter--you are clearly someone who enjoys describing houses as much as I do! And I really enjoyed Elizabeth's very sage advice to Lucius about using his temporary lack of magic to hone his other strengths, as well as his oblivious reaction. One tiny bit of constructive (I hope) criticism: Lady Evelyn is not more informal than Lady Prince; in fact, it's actually a higher title. Lady Jane means you are the daughter of a duke, marques, earl, or baron. (Second sons only get to be Lord John if their fathers are dukes or marquesses; their older brothers usually get a lower family title as a courtesy.) Lady Doe means she has married into the aristocracy, unless she has married one a second son like Lord John, in which case she is Lady John. So Lady Evelyn would have been born and raised the daughter of a baron at the very least, and thus she outranks Lady Prince, who might have been a gum-snapping chorus girl who caught Lord Prince's eye. And everyone who is not a servant (they say "your lordship, your ladyship") would call her Lady Evelyn if that was her title, not just her friends.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
oh, this story is so wonderful, hopefully Lucius will come to his senses if that is possible, well maybe he is just protective of Severus as Molly is of Elizabeth.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
:) oh my....
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Several new people are enriching this narration with their own stories. You've woven them all together very well. Its good to know that Draco showed some spine even while they were hosting the Dark Lord. Severus is more relaxed than ever before. A romance will do him immensely good--even if he might deny needing it. It would now help to know how Elizabeth's love life looked back in the States. She's very reserved for a reason, I wager, and not all might be her professional relationship with Severus.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
this is a very good story, I love the way we follow several people and their problems, I love especially following Elisabeth and Severus' budding love
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
This is such a wonderful story. It's nice to see Severus with fresh eyes and I like the other stories about the other injured people and the development of Draco as well. You have a good hand in bringing all the storylines together and in fleshing out all your characters. And what I particularly like is the fact that despite the title it's much more developing as an equal relationship than one in which one is rescued by the other. Well done! You really deserve more reviews.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
:) I really like how you're developing Elizabeth and through her Severus as a person we've not yet "met". keep up the good work
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Ya know I've had astory in my head for a year now about Severus, a muggle library and Hermione's Cousin/Adopted Sister but every time i write it it comes out all funky andn not how I intended. I am eating this story up because its a similar theme. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter <3
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
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oooh I'm so excited, This looks to be a great start to a grand adventure.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
oooo - you have a great "voice". please keep up the good work!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
And now it gets interesting! I wonder whom Elizabeth will have as patients? (I have my suspicions about one of them.) I might wonder why Elizabeth didn't play a role in healing Hermione and the others from Malfoy Manor, but I'm sure there's a good reason. This story has been very well and plausibly set up, and I look forward to its continuation.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Oh my. You have certainly laid the groundwork well and set us up for exciting/terrifying events to come - THE battle. I think we can all guess who one of her patients will be. Looking forward to how Elizabeth's side of the story plays out.It's interesting, isn't it, that most of us have an Aunt Muriel in our lives. Maybe not an actual relative, but someone close enough to have an influence on our lives. I like that you have Elizabeth coping with this relationship as you do. People like Aunt Muriel can really pull a person down, but only if that person allows it to happen.Enjoyed your chapter and looking forward to the next with great expectations.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Hi Elizabeth, so nice hearing about you! You've had quite a life, I must say! Kudos to your Mom for allowing you to stay connected at all! How is she? Now you return just when things are getting the worst imaginable? That's very brave indeed. I think you're safe assuming that Aunt Muriel hates the American part AND the spunky part. Let's at least assume it isn't the Muggle part. She might not agree to host the Order's hospital if that were the case. Good luck with her! I'm sure you'll get along well enough with most Weasleys (as long as you eat & sleep enough). What is your take of Fleur, though? Looking forward to hearing from you,
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Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
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-- Thanks for the review!
You have me intrigued already. I like the first person telling of this story. Good start. Looking forward to the next installment.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Goodness, I liked this so much. Your narrator is such an engaging OC, with an interesting and plausible backstory (and a great name, lol). And it was great to read a happy ending for Snape with a partner who not only was close to him in age but also had a temperament that complemented his so well.
The transfer went very well, and Severus manages to be rather civil. Undoubtedly he will have lapses, and I'm looking foreard to Elizabeth's reaction.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
nice movement through your chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Well written, and easy to read, but I cannot quite believe this soft side of the Malfoys. Not yet--you might still convince me.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
A wise move!Nice interaction between Minerva and Severus. yes, this is how I assume their relationship.I fear for Elizabeth's wellbeing after she silenced the man. One remark: I have heard from Muggle doctors (snort) that bloodloss always looks like far more than it actually is due to its intense colour and how it spreads. As a Healer Elizabeth woudl know of this effect, I think.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Now here's the most believable way I've found so far how and why someone came to rescue Severus! You've woven this very well into canon. And yes, Severus is strong in whatever state one finds him!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!