The Arrival of the Patients
Chapter 6 of 20
reader76The hospital at Malfoy Manor receives its patients. Elizabeth attempts to treat her difficult patient.
ReviewedA/N: I still don't own anything you recognize. Severus' character starts to evolve here. It's definitely different from canon. I do feel he would have been different once out of the clutches of Voldemort and Dumbledore for good. I'm hoping as the story unfolds, the transition makes sense.
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I rose early the next morning. There was much to do before lunch time, and I knew Severus would want to get on with his morning with Draco. However, it was important that I check his levels before he started working.
As I stood outside his chambers, I suddenly felt nervous. All the Malfoys, plus my house-elf, had hounded me about Severus yesterday. What must they be saying to him? I knocked hesitantly on the door.
"Enter."
I walked in the room. Severus had obviously just finished eating. "How are you feeling this morning?"
"I feel like I was attacked by a massive poisonous snake."
"Would you like any pain relief potion?"
"No. Can we get on with this? The sooner Draco and I get going, the sooner I can finish the antivenin; which is what I need, not these endless questions."
"Very well, Severus, I can multi-task." I took out my wand and tapped his arm, casting the first of the diagnostic charms.
"I see they've moved you from liquids to soft foods. Are you experiencing any more pain from that?"
"No," he sighed.
I moved to the next diagnostic charm. "Your voice sounds stronger. How does your neck feel?"
This time his sigh was accompanied by an eyeroll. "Sore," he grumbled.
I performed the next diagnostic charm. "And how is your energy level?"
"Low."
"Where is this belligerence coming from this morning, Severus?"
"I'm not a pleasant man, Healer Prewett."
"Well, your levels are holding up reasonably well. You should be able to brew this morning without too much trouble, but do take it easy."
"I think I know what I can handle."
"You do realize I'm trying to help you?"
"Of course I do. I'm not a child. But don't expect me to be thrilled about your incessant questions and manhandling."
"Manhandling? It's a simple blood test. Given all you've been through, I wouldn't think you'd be so jumpy about a few medical tests."
"Given all I've been through! Seriously, woman, what do you know about what I've been through?"
"Severus, stop. I'm just trying to help you."
"Don't think you know me because you saw into my mind! You don't get some kind of pass because you look like her! You don't know what my life is like. And I don't care how much Lucius tries to play his little games, you are not Lily."
"No, Severus, I'm not. Let's get that straight. I have auburn hair. End of story. That's it. I'm not Lily; I'm not trying to be Lily. If you think I'm any happier than you are about the comparisons, you are sadly mistaken."
"In the shack, you let me believe you were her. I thought she was taking me home."
"In the shack, you were disoriented. I needed information from you. I didn't have time to go through a long drawn out 'getting to know you' session. Healers use the information they can get quickly, information that they need to help the patient. I didn't interrupt your delusion. You were dying, Severus. Should I have let you die? Should I have followed some ridiculous ethical code above all costs at the expense of my patient's life?"
And then something strange happened. He laughed. It was a dark, slow, laugh at first, which provided no comfort.
"What could possibly be funny?"
"I've become a Gryffindor! It's official! I'm in hell."
"Well, if Gryffindors are prone to melodrama, you're doing a good impression," I started sharply. I stopped myself. I had to maintain control; I wasn't the one that almost died. I continued more softly, "Are you really angry at me for not correcting you in the shack?"
"Yes. No. Merlin, I don't know. You did what you had to do to achieve your goal of helping me. It's just embarrassing." He looked up at me, clearly trying to hide pain behind those black eyes. "My whole embarrassing life is going to be on display with these trials coming up, Potter spilled my memories all over the Daily Prophet, and I gushed to you thinking you were Lily."
"Severus, I don't know what you think you let me see, but it wasn't much. It wasn't about Lily. It was about Harry. You were upset that you weren't able to protect him. You thought he was going to die, and you apologized to me, to Lily, because of Dumbledore's scheming. You said Harry got his good traits from Lily, and you made a crack about James. Then, you noticed my eyes. At that point, I told you I was just trying to help you, and you yelled at me to look in your pocket. Then you passed out again. The next person that cast Legilimens was you, after I silenced you."
He shot me a dirty look, but this one was less malicious. "Are you telling me the truth?"
"Yes. Look, I am not a master at looking into people's minds. I can only connect with their current train of thought. I cannot rifle through memories, and if anyone wants to toss me out, they can. Even mild Occlumency walls are more than I can breach.
"You entered my mind after you woke back up; you asked me a few questions about the battle. After that, Lucius took over that job at your request."
"I remember more conversations with Lily while I was in the shack. She was there."
"I don't know, Severus. A dream, an apparition, a side effect of having your memories stirred up when you gave Harry your memories of her. Maybe your daydreams got tangled with your memories. It could have been a simple hallucination caused by blood loss and trauma. Seeing Harry, plus seeing me and my physical similarity to her; either may have triggered it. I swear to you, Severus, I did not see anything of a personal nature regarding you and Lily."
He covered his face with his hand. "I am sorry. It was unfair of me to attack you, even if you had seen something. You saved my life. It's just difficult, after keeping secrets for so long, to live with them being so very public." He looked away.
"And the thought of having a stranger rifling through your most intimate thoughts made it that much uglier?"
"Yes. Combined with the fact that you saved my life, and the fact that Lucius and Narcissa started in about you the moment you arrived here. I'm tired of having my life meddled with by others. I've survived twenty years under the thumb of two masters, and I'm ready to be my own man."
"Severus, you don't owe me anything. I didn't pull you from a burning building. I'm a Healer. You were a patient in need. I did my job."
"I owe you a life debt."
"No, you don't. What I did was not at any peril to me. It is my job. It's specifically why I was at Hogwarts that night. I've been the Order's Healer for nearly a year now. And as far as Lucius and Narcissa go, honestly, it's harmless gossip. They are happily married; they want to see you happy. You're an eligible man, I'm an eligible woman. We met under stressful circumstances, I 'saved your life', and I look like your long lost love. It's a bunch of romantic nonsense. Let it go in one ear and out the other. Honestly, consider it a compliment that they care so much about your happiness."
"You realize I'm not used to being the subject of romantic gossip, right?" Severus frowned in a self-deprecating way.
"What makes you think I'm used to it?"
"You lived with Molly's Aunt Muriel; no doubt she clucked and doted about you."
I laughed. "Clearly you've never met Muriel. She certainly clucks, but doted, oh no. Her favorite topic is how disgraceful I am. I'm not sure I'd classify Muriel's gossip as harmless."
"See, that's the kind of gossip I'm used to, Elizabeth. Greasy git, bat of the dungeons, whisperings that I'm a vampire, this is what people say about me." His face showed the tiniest hint of a smile.
"Vampire? I'm not sure I can top that one."
There was a knock at the door. Draco peeked around the corner. "Are we ready to start?"
"We're almost done, Draco. One more test. I need to check if he's still a Slytherin."
Severus pouted, and then Draco laughed.
"No really, Draco, I'm all finished with him. Do you have a moment?"
Draco nodded. I stepped out into the hall with him. "How was your talk with your father?"
"It went reasonably well."
"I wasn't called down last night, so I'm assuming everything went smoothly."
"You mean the release of the binding spell? Yes, no serious issues. It's strange; I am feeling a little out of sorts today, clumsy almost."
"Your body is adjusting to the new feeling of your unbound magic. It should go away in a few days. Don't try any spells that requires precision for a few days."
"How am I going to shave?"
"Really, that's the best you could come up with?"
"No really, I mean it."
"You're a Malfoy. Call a house-elf."
"Ouch!"
"Alright Draco, Severus will have my head if I detain you much longer. I will see you at two for afternoon rounds. We'll talk more then."
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I headed to the hospital ward to take a final inventory before taking the Floo to Hogwarts. Everything appeared to be in order, thanks to Orby and the Malfoys. Lucius had been as good as his word and had provided everything we needed.
I walked over to the Floo, took a handful of powder, stepped in, and tossed it into the flames, calling out, "Hogwarts!"
Minerva was at her desk waiting for me. "Elizabeth, it is lovely to see you again."
"Thank you, Headmistress."
"How is Severus?"
"Physically, he's still weak; however, I think once we get him the next dose of the potion, he will feel much better."
"And how is otherwise?"
"He's coping. He's been through a great deal."
"And how are you faring? Is living with the Malfoys too much of a strain?"
"I'm staying in one of the cottages on the property, but honestly, Narcissa and Draco have been nothing but polite. I can't say that I trust Lucius." Minerva paled at my words. "Don't worry; it's in his best interest to treat me well, and he's savvy enough to know that. I'll be tutoring Draco until his trial. He is considering medicinal potions as a career or possibly becoming a Healer."
"That is interesting. Draco was always a bright boy, though his magic became a bit cloudy during the war. Perhaps the pressure of it all affected him."
I looked at the ground. That was not my secret to share.
"Minerva, are the patients ready?"
"Yes. St. Mungo's sent some orderlies to handle the transfer. Poppy has their charts for you. You'll just need to open the Floo for them and then show them to their rooms on the other side."
"Thank you. The Malfoys have established a lovely area for the patients. There are two lounges and a dining room. One lounge is much like the common rooms here at the school. It contains a sitting area, a fireplace, and some wizarding games. The other has actually been charmed to allow Muggle technologies. It has a television, computer, a few game tables, and other Muggle diversions. The intent is for them to feel like guests rather than patients. We will be keeping them to the wing with the patient rooms, as we don't want them to stumble upon Severus, nor do I want them intruding upon the family in their private quarters. There's also the trouble with some of the portaits. They will have access to one of the smaller gardens to get some fresh air."
"It sounds like you've all put in a lot of work to make them comfortable."
"Honestly, it's mostly been Draco. Though Lucius, I'm sure, we'll be happy to have all of this reported to show how they've changed."
Minerva chuckled. "Once a Slytherin, always a Slytherin. Do watch him, dear."
I nodded. "How is the restoration of the castle coming along?"
"Slowly, but we've had a lot of offers to help. Several have come from abroad. The Ministry is short on resources and will likely soon be distracted by the trials as well."
"Yes, I expect it will." We had arrived at the hospital wing. In front of me were the eight patients that were being transferred to Malfoy Manor.
I was officially introduced to Lavender Brown, the young girl that had been attacked by the werewolf. Her wounds were healing as well as could be expected, but as they were cursed wounds, the scarring was extensive.
Dean Thomas was next. He was a pleasant young man, handsome and charming. He had fallen during the battle and had done serious damage to his spinal cord. The doctors from St. Mungo's had performed most of the healing necessary, but his body would need to be retaught how to use those muscles. He was in a wheelchair, but he still maintained use of his upper body.
Terry Boot was another young man with similar injuries to Mr. Thomas. One of his arms had also been badly broken and would need some therapy as well. I shook his uninjured hand as the orderly wheeled him past me towards Minerva's office.
Professor Sinistra had been struck by a particularly nasty curse and had lost much of her memory. It was not a case for the Janus Thickney ward, for her ability to learn was intact, as was much of her general knowledge. But her personal memories and much of her professional knowledge was either locked away or erased. It was our job to figure out which and to help her move forward. She smiled sweetly as we walked together towards the Floo connection.
Edward MacMillan had a gash on his arm that seemed to reopen about every 24 hours. Poppy had tried all forms of magical healing that were commonly used, and she had also tried to treat it through Muggle means, but there was clearly some sort of exotic hex that had been used. His arm was currently wrapped in a sling.
Jessica Wood had been hit by a curse that had caused sudden muscle atrophy in her legs. Muggle therapy would reverse the effects, but it would be slow and painful. She was also in a wheelchair.
Margorie Davies had suffered a head injury, and while she seemed fine much of the time, she suffered from frequent fainting spells. She also had occasional panic attacks and hallucinations of Death Eaters. I had arranged for Lucius and Narcissa to stay away from the hospital for the first few days. Draco was to wear his Healer trainee robes at all times in her presence to try and remove any past association with the Death Eaters.
Rosalyn Kirkwood had lost the use of one of her arms from a curse. St. Mungo's had not been able to figure out the cause. Like Edward, her arm was in a sling to protect it.
I led the orderlies back through the castle to the Floo. One by one, I tossed the powder into the Floo and called out the destination. Boppy and Orby waited on the other side to lead them to the lounge.
As I walked through, I saw that they had already settled in waiting for me. Boppy and Orby were there as well. I saw Draco standing off in the corner. He understood that his involvement would likely take some time for some of the patients to accept. I took a deep breath and addressed the group.
"Welcome to Malfoy Manor, everyone. I know some of you may have been nervous about coming here, but let me assure you, you will be safe. There are two Aurors onsite for your protection, as well as a variety of charms and wards. Further, we will do everything to ensure your comfort. If there is anything you need, please call Boppy or Orby." I motioned to the elves.
"They will find me, Draco, or the Mediwitch working the current shift; whatever is appropriate. They will also help you with any accommodation requests you might have.
"There is an owlery available for your use. We will also have regular visiting hours starting tomorrow. You may have visitors in the afternoons or before nine in the evenings. The Floo will be open to the visitors that you had previously approved while you were at Hogwarts.
"There will be meals in the dining room, or the elves can bring them to your rooms if you prefer. Please let the elves know of any requests for meals. I will review any requests for health limitations, but beyond that, you are guests here, so feel free to let us know what you need or want.
"Through the doors behind you is the Muggle lounge. Please do not take wands in that room. The equipment is warded, but nevertheless, it is important that we be careful with magic in there.
"To your left are the gardens. Stay inside the hedges unless you speak with Draco or me first. We do not want to tread on the hospitality of our hosts, so that will ensure their privacy.
"If there are no questions, orderlies, please see Draco for the room assignments and take your patients to their rooms. I will begin rounds in approximately one hour."
"Very impressive, Healer Prewett," called a deep voice from behind me. I turned to see Minister Shacklebolt.
"Minister, I did not expect you here today."
"Honestly, Healer Prewett, I came today to check on the Malfoys and reassure myself of the decision to allow them to remain in their home. I had lunch with them a little while ago, and I am quite pleased. Lucius shared with me Draco's role in the hospital, and Narcissa told me of the renovations you all have done for the patients. You really have gone above and beyond."
"I've had a lot of help, both with the work and with the ideas. Draco has thrown himself into making this operation a success, Narcissa is a master at hospitality, and Lucius has spared no expense. The elves are dedicated, St. Mungo's has been helpful, and Minerva and Poppy ran a splendid operation at Hogwarts that made the transition easier."
"Excellent, I'm very pleased to hear it. Did Lucius correctly relay that you intend to stay on as Draco's tutor until he is able to move on to the the next stage of his training?"
"I have not officially accepted Lucius's offer. But that is my intent, and I have communicated as such to Narcissa."
"Well, we're happy to have you as long as you wish to stay." Kingsley smiled.
"Do you speak for all of Wizarding England?"
"I believe I do. I have heard nothing but praise for your work. Now, I was planning to go speak to your other patient before I depart. I would like to hear of the plans for Draco. Do you care to join me?"
"Actually, I should probably check in with Severus and see how he feels after working with Draco this morning. Follow me." Kingsley and I began walking to the family wing. Draco, who had finished talking with the orderlies, caught up with us.
"How did this morning go, Draco?"
"Well, I think. Professor Snape is a far more patient teacher when it is one on one. We were able to complete the first stage of the potion for him. We also started a couple simple potions for the other patients. There is one other that will need some attention this afternoon. I will bring them by the hospital storeroom this evening before dinner."
"Excellent. How is he?"
"Professor Snape is as stoic as always. I think brewing, or even instructing brewing, is more taxing on him than he would like to admit."
"Hmm, well, presuming the brewing continues to go well, hopefully he'll be better shortly."
We had arrived at his room. Kingsley knocked firmly.
"Enter." I walked in with the others. It was difficult not to laugh at Severus' cross face. Orby's description of grumpy certainly seemed to fit.
"Severus, how are you feeling after working with Draco this morning?"
"A bit more tired than yesterday. I plan to rest this afternoon. Healer's orders."
"That is excellent, Severus. Snark is a vast improvement over vitriol."
"Trying to beat me at my own game, Elizabeth?" Severus inquired with considerable mirth in his voice.
"Oh, I wouldn't dream of it, Severus. I'm merely hoping to learn from the master." I gave him a smirk of my own.
"Your color looks better than this morning. It looks like exercising your mind is helpful to your overall well-being. But don't overdo it. How did it feel this morning, being back in the lab?"
"It was energizing, actually; though I did tire out quickly."
"After your nap, I'd like you to take a short walk, if you are feeling up to it. Draco, are you available to escort him? I'd rather someone be with him in case he needs assistance."
"Actually, I cannot. My interview with Robards is later today. Mother is also meeting with him today, and Father is in business calls all afternoon."
"Oh. Well, then, Severus, I suppose you are stuck with me. If you don't mind, that is." I felt my face warm a bit. Draco's eyes gleamed.
Severus frowned at Draco. "That should be fine. Perhaps we can use that time to discuss Draco's training in-depth a bit more." He eyed the boy menacingly.
Kingsley stepped up at this time. "Severus, you look much better than when I saw you last."
"Thank you, Minister Shacklebolt."
"I have been approached by several Ministry officials regarding the first round of accolades for service during the war with Voldemort. Your name has come up. You have been nominated for an Order of Merlin, First Class. Well deserved, mind you, but I can't give you a posthumous award in good conscience, since, well, since you are alive."
"It will be interesting to see how those opinions change when people know I have survived." His voice betrayed his doubt.
"Oh, I doubt that it will be as significant as you think, Severus. Mr. Potter is leading quite the campaign on your behalf."
"Minister Shacklebolt, please ask the boy to desist. If not for my sake, how will it look for him when my survival is revealed?"
"Still protecting the boy, Severus?" Kingsley inquired honestly.
"Hardly," Severus sneered. "I vowed to protect his life from Death Eaters; I did not vow to protect his reputation from his own foolishness."
"In addition to worrying about the reputations of those keeping your secret, the goblins are inquiring as to why there has been no discussion of the settlement of your estate."
"So, you are saying that the time has come to reveal my whereabouts?"
"Not to the public at large, but to appropriate officials, I do think it is prudent."
"You know it will leak, don't you?"
"I'm aware that it is possible, even likely."
"Minister Shacklebolt, is it possible to hold off one more week? Severus will be much stronger after his next dose of the potion."
"How soon will it be ready?"
"Three to four days," Severus said.
"He'll need a few more days of convalescence before he sees anyone besides the small circle we've already discussed," I said definitively, putting on my most official Healer voice. "He's making good progress; I'd hate to see that impeded." Severus gave me a very subtle nod of thanks.
"Very well, I shall wait one week, and then I'll send an answer to Gringotts. Severus, I shall protect your privacy as much as I can. Frankly, there are very few people that can be allowed on the property, given the fact that the Malfoys are formally under house arrest."
"Thank you, Minister."
"Draco," I began, "we should go. We need to start our rounds soon. Minister, it was good to see you. Enjoy your visit, but do allow Severus his rest."
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38 Reviews | 4.45/10 Average
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story and for creating one of the most interesting oc I have encountered in a long time. I particularly liked the insights in all these episodes of their lives you used to wrapp it all up in this final chapter and I do feel sad you only have such a few reviews. This story definitely deserves more.
A nice chapter--you are clearly someone who enjoys describing houses as much as I do! And I really enjoyed Elizabeth's very sage advice to Lucius about using his temporary lack of magic to hone his other strengths, as well as his oblivious reaction. One tiny bit of constructive (I hope) criticism: Lady Evelyn is not more informal than Lady Prince; in fact, it's actually a higher title. Lady Jane means you are the daughter of a duke, marques, earl, or baron. (Second sons only get to be Lord John if their fathers are dukes or marquesses; their older brothers usually get a lower family title as a courtesy.) Lady Doe means she has married into the aristocracy, unless she has married one a second son like Lord John, in which case she is Lady John. So Lady Evelyn would have been born and raised the daughter of a baron at the very least, and thus she outranks Lady Prince, who might have been a gum-snapping chorus girl who caught Lord Prince's eye. And everyone who is not a servant (they say "your lordship, your ladyship") would call her Lady Evelyn if that was her title, not just her friends.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
oh, this story is so wonderful, hopefully Lucius will come to his senses if that is possible, well maybe he is just protective of Severus as Molly is of Elizabeth.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
:) oh my....
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Several new people are enriching this narration with their own stories. You've woven them all together very well. Its good to know that Draco showed some spine even while they were hosting the Dark Lord. Severus is more relaxed than ever before. A romance will do him immensely good--even if he might deny needing it. It would now help to know how Elizabeth's love life looked back in the States. She's very reserved for a reason, I wager, and not all might be her professional relationship with Severus.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
this is a very good story, I love the way we follow several people and their problems, I love especially following Elisabeth and Severus' budding love
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
This is such a wonderful story. It's nice to see Severus with fresh eyes and I like the other stories about the other injured people and the development of Draco as well. You have a good hand in bringing all the storylines together and in fleshing out all your characters. And what I particularly like is the fact that despite the title it's much more developing as an equal relationship than one in which one is rescued by the other. Well done! You really deserve more reviews.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
:) I really like how you're developing Elizabeth and through her Severus as a person we've not yet "met". keep up the good work
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Ya know I've had astory in my head for a year now about Severus, a muggle library and Hermione's Cousin/Adopted Sister but every time i write it it comes out all funky andn not how I intended. I am eating this story up because its a similar theme. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter <3
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
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oooh I'm so excited, This looks to be a great start to a grand adventure.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
oooo - you have a great "voice". please keep up the good work!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
And now it gets interesting! I wonder whom Elizabeth will have as patients? (I have my suspicions about one of them.) I might wonder why Elizabeth didn't play a role in healing Hermione and the others from Malfoy Manor, but I'm sure there's a good reason. This story has been very well and plausibly set up, and I look forward to its continuation.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Oh my. You have certainly laid the groundwork well and set us up for exciting/terrifying events to come - THE battle. I think we can all guess who one of her patients will be. Looking forward to how Elizabeth's side of the story plays out.It's interesting, isn't it, that most of us have an Aunt Muriel in our lives. Maybe not an actual relative, but someone close enough to have an influence on our lives. I like that you have Elizabeth coping with this relationship as you do. People like Aunt Muriel can really pull a person down, but only if that person allows it to happen.Enjoyed your chapter and looking forward to the next with great expectations.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Hi Elizabeth, so nice hearing about you! You've had quite a life, I must say! Kudos to your Mom for allowing you to stay connected at all! How is she? Now you return just when things are getting the worst imaginable? That's very brave indeed. I think you're safe assuming that Aunt Muriel hates the American part AND the spunky part. Let's at least assume it isn't the Muggle part. She might not agree to host the Order's hospital if that were the case. Good luck with her! I'm sure you'll get along well enough with most Weasleys (as long as you eat & sleep enough). What is your take of Fleur, though? Looking forward to hearing from you,
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
You have me intrigued already. I like the first person telling of this story. Good start. Looking forward to the next installment.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Goodness, I liked this so much. Your narrator is such an engaging OC, with an interesting and plausible backstory (and a great name, lol). And it was great to read a happy ending for Snape with a partner who not only was close to him in age but also had a temperament that complemented his so well.
The transfer went very well, and Severus manages to be rather civil. Undoubtedly he will have lapses, and I'm looking foreard to Elizabeth's reaction.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
nice movement through your chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Well written, and easy to read, but I cannot quite believe this soft side of the Malfoys. Not yet--you might still convince me.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
A wise move!Nice interaction between Minerva and Severus. yes, this is how I assume their relationship.I fear for Elizabeth's wellbeing after she silenced the man. One remark: I have heard from Muggle doctors (snort) that bloodloss always looks like far more than it actually is due to its intense colour and how it spreads. As a Healer Elizabeth woudl know of this effect, I think.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Now here's the most believable way I've found so far how and why someone came to rescue Severus! You've woven this very well into canon. And yes, Severus is strong in whatever state one finds him!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!