The Healer at Hogwarts
Chapter 3 of 20
reader76Orby takes Elizabeth to Hogwarts. She and Poppy attend to the wounded in the hospital wing. When Elizabeth hears tragic news, she makes a snap decision that will have major consequences.
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I jumped to my feet. "Orby, get some supplies. We need to bring supplies." With a snap of his finger, Orby shrunk half the contents of my clinic into a small bag and picked it up. He immediately grabbed my hand and Apparated us with a pop.
We landed in some sort of pub. Orby dashed up the stairs with me right behind him. An old man with a long grey beard stood in front of a portrait of a young girl. He looked very somber. The girl in the portrait motioned and the old man turned.
"Who are you?" The old man barked. He looked me up and down; it seemed I was familiar to him, but he couldn't figure out why.
"Elizabeth Prewett. I'm a Healer. I've been told I'll be needed here tonight."
"Prewett? Nonsense. The Prewetts were all killed in the last war. Except Molly, but she's a Weasley now." The wand at his side twitched. He clearly didn't know if I was friend or foe.
"Charles was my father. Molly is my sister. My mother and I escaped the night Father was murdered. My brothers saved us."
He seemed to consider my words. "Are you telling me you're the wee one?" I nodded. "I thought they killed you and your mother as well."
"That was the idea." I was getting irritated. "We fled the country. Only a handful knew we escaped. But, moving forward, why does this elf think there's a battle brewing? Do you have any idea why he brought me to your pub?"
"The battle is at Hogwarts. There's a passageway behind this portrait. Most members of the Order of the Phoenix are through there. Your sister, her husband, and most of their children are fighting."
"Thank you. Orby, you don't have to go." I was cut off by an indignant house-elf. He stomped his feet and glared up at me with huge eyes.
"Orby is coming with Miss Elizabeth! Orby will help just like in the clinic at home! Orby will protect Miss Elizabeth if needed."
"I believe you will Orby." I scratched his ears. "Well, shall we?" The portrait swung open, and I climbed into the dark passageway and started to make my way through it. Orby was right behind me the whole way. We walked for what seemed like miles down the dark passageway until we finally reached a flight of stairs and a door.
As I opened the door, the sight on the other side of me was amazing. We must have been inside the castle. A cluttered room full of colorful banners and hammocks was in front of us. It appeared to be empty at first sight.
"Aunt Lizzie?" A voice called out to me.
"Ginny? Ginny! What are you doing here?"
"I came to help! But Mum and Dad won't let me leave this room," she huffed. "Everyone is out there! Our whole family! How can I just stay here? Let me come with you!" She looked exasperated, and tears threatened to fall from her brown eyes.
I sighed and hugged her. "I'm here to help tend to the wounded Ginny. I'm not a fighter."
"But I can help," she pleaded. "I'll take you to the hospital wing."
"Ginny, no. If they want you here, here you stay. Orby, do you know the castle?"
"Yes, Miss Elizabeth. Orby can take you to the hospital wing."
"Ginny, stay here. Please." I squeezed her hand, trying to comfort her. Poor girl, her whole life was out there in that battle. Orby tugged at my other hand, and soon we were running through the corridors. It was nearly midnight, and I knew it was to be a long night.
We found Madam Pomfrey in the hospital wing, trying to ready things as much as possible.
"Poppy, what can I do?"
"Oh, thank Merlin for another set of hands. We're going to be needed tonight. Here, these are short distance Portkeys." She handed me what looked like necklaces.
"The teachers always have these to bring students to me quickly in an emergency. We'll need these to transport the wounded. It will be safer for us and for them."
"Orby will bring your patients to you, Miss Elizabeth. Orby will go to the kitchen and get a few house-elves. We will spread out and use the necklaces to bring back the injured."
"Great idea, Orby." Poppy smiled at the little elf. He popped away. "Elizabeth, how do we handle the Death Eaters?"
"Bind their magic for safety and treat their wounds. Sedate or stun if needed."
"Elizabeth, I've never worked under conditions like this."
"I haven't either, Poppy. We've just got to do the best we can." And almost right on cue, the clamoring outside grew louder. The battle had begun. Poppy and I continued preparing bandages in silence for a few moments longer. Then, one of the cots began to shimmer, and a young girl appeared on the cot. She wasn't badly injured, but she had a gash on her arm and forehead. Poppy and I went to work as quickly as we could.
We work feverishly as the cots started to glow. The elves would appear and collect the necklaces, and then they would disappear again. There was a mix of injuries, magical and non-magical, simple to serious, and, of course, some we couldn't save. Both Poppy and I were struggling to contain our emotions. Orby had returned after he found several helpers to bring the wounded. He was tending to Poppy and I as much as he was helping the patients.
Then he grabbed my hand. "Miss Elizabeth, Mrs. Molly, she needs you. I am sorry to tell you. One of the tall silly boys, he is out there. He did not make it."
I was dumbstruck. What could Orby mean? The meaning of his words struck me like an anvil. "One of the twins?" Orby's eyes told me I had guessed right. I ran from the infirmary. I had no idea what I was doing. Looking back, it was very stupid of me. My duty was to the wounded. But, if one of the boys was gone, if it was too late, well, I had to get to my sister. I just had to. Orby was on my heels as I ran; he had no idea where I was going. Neither did I.
As I approached the entrance hall, I heard a young girl shriek, "No!" She cast a Stunning Spell that threw some creature across the room; the creature had attacked someone. As I got a better look, I shuddered in horror. The victim was another young girl; she was badly injured.
I knelt before her and tended to her. She was so young. Damn it. Evil will not win here. Orby had grabbed my bag from the table as we left the infirmary; he handed me the Dittany and some Blood-Replenishing Potion. We worked together for several minutes trying to repair the damage. After several minutes, she was stable. She would live. She would be badly scarred, probably physically and mentally, but she would live.
I smiled to Orby and patted him between the ears. "Good work, Orby, you have done well. Please take her to Poppy. I must help my sister."
"Orby will be back. Miss Elizabeth will need more supplies if she is out here."
I wiped my hands on my robes, then pulled them off and discarded them; for a moment, I just stood there in my Muggle jeans and blouse. The roar of the battle continued all around me. The night felt unnaturally cold. The chill was damp and depressing, and I was suddenly cloaked in despair. Screams echoed outside the doors. It was so cold. I nearly collapsed against the wall, barely noticing as three students ran past me.
"Boys, come on!" a little blonde witch called out.
"Seamus, hurry! Harry needs us!" a boy yelled.
"Now!" the other boy screamed as they all raised their wands.
"EXPECTO PATRONUM!" the three yelled together.
The sight was amazing. The three young people had come to the rescue of their fellow students. Silvery light filled the air, and then three beautiful animals flew over the second group of students. The cold eased slightly, and then they all stood strong, protecting one another. The three animals became six as the three beleaguered students joined their friends in casting the charm. Witnessing such valor in those so young, I became filled with hope. The light would triumph.
I realized who I was watching. It was my youngest nephew Ron and his two friends who had been rescued by the little blonde and the other two boys. He turned to shake the hand of the wiry boy; suddenly, a giant roared and began swinging a huge club.
The students broke in different directions, and I tore after my nephew and his friends. Molly may have lost one of her boys tonight; I'd be damned if I let this one run off and get killed.
They ran into the night, dodging the giants and the bolts of light. I ran behind them, trying to keep up. They were running with a crazed urgency; I couldn't maintain the pace. As we got away from the fighting, the dark enveloped us and it became difficult to see them. I thought I was going to lose them in the night, but I had to keep going. They eventually paused in front of an old tree which seemed to be trying to strike them. I could see Ron raise his wand; then the tree stilled. The three young people dropped to the ground, and they disappeared beneath the roots of the tree.
When I approached the tree, I saw where they had disappeared. There was a small passageway beneath the roots.
"Orby," I whispered into the night. Something told me I needed to follow them, but crawling through the passageway seemed foolish.
"Yes, Miss Elizabeth," Orby answered as his appeared by my side.
"My nephew and his friends disappeared under that tree. Do you know where it goes?"
"Oh, Miss Elizabeth doesn't want to go there. That takes you to the haunted place. It is a dark place." He shook slightly with fear.
"Orby, I need to protect those kids. I have to do this."
Orby relented. "Okay, Miss Elizabeth. Orby will take you. But we will go another way. We also need to be invisible." I nodded, casting a Disillusionment Charm on myself. Orby did something similar. He took my hand, and we Apparated to the edge of some trees.
I could see the shack a short distance away. We crept towards it slowly. As we walked, I spotted a man with shoulder length black hair approaching from the other direction. Orby and I froze. The man was clutching his left arm and wearing Death Eater robes. His pace quickened, and soon he opened the door and slid inside. This was trouble. I began inching towards the door again. Orby clung to my arm, clearly trying to stop me.
"Bad men in there, Miss Elizabeth," he whispered urgently. But I would not be deterred. The man in black had left the door ajar, and I slid through it into the corner. Two men were talking. Well, one man was talking to one creature that looked like he might have been a man at one point. This must be the monster Voldemort.
I continued to look around. Were these the only two here? Where were the children? Looking around, I stifled a gasp when I saw a huge snake in some sort of magical field. Never had I seen such a thing. I wondered if this was the creature that nearly killed Arthur two years ago.
The man on his knees in front of the monster intrigued me. He appeared to be groveling, but he was guarded. He must be a servant of Voldemort, a Death Eater by his clothing; in fact, Voldemort was talking about how valuable the man had been. Oh, heavens, Voldemort was using the past tense. This man was in terrible danger. He seemed to know it, from the look on his face, but still, he remained so guarded. What was he hiding?
I watched in horror as Voldemort pointed his wand. He aimed not at the man before him, but at the snake's magical cage, which surrounded the man called Severus.
The man fought in vain to free himself, but the snake was too strong. Severus fell to the ground. A sickening pool of blood was forming on the ground near him.
Voldemort said something I couldn't understand; the shock I felt at the sight was so great. He summoned the snake, still in its cage, and stalked from the room.
I was rifling in my bag as quickly as I could for supplies when another small blast sounded. To my shock, Ron and his two friends emerged from their hiding place. They had also witnessed the horror that had just occurred.
The boy called Harry rushed to the man, and some shuffling occurred between the three young people and the dying man. Voldemort's voice called out, sickening in its offer of truce; then he taunted and manipulated the boy.
The girl headed back to the tunnel, followed by the other two. Resolved to follow them, I headed over towards the tunnel. As I moved, I cancelled the Disillusionment Charm on myself. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw the slightest movement from the collapsed man.
"Merlin! He's still alive! Orby! Quickly!"
I placed my hand on the man's neck. He had lost so much blood. Orby thrust the Dittany into my hand, and I applied it to the wound. It knit back together painfully slowly. If he was still with us, I could heal this wound. If I had enough Blood-Replenishing potion, he stood a chance, but what of the poison?
His pulse was frightfully weak, but it was still there. Orby seemed to be reading my thoughts and began to pour the Blood-Replenishing Potion down the man's throat as I worked to close the wound. I held my wand in one hand as healing spells flew from my lips. Over and over again, I kept uttering the spells to help the skin regenerate.
"Miss Elizabeth, we need more potions! Orby will be right back!"
"Orby, he's been poisoned! I don't know what to do about the venom."
"Miss Elizabeth will figure something out. The potions will give you more time!" Orby popped away.
The snake, the snake, I needed to know more about that snake. Was it possible the victim knew something about the snake? It was a long shot, but it was the only reasonable idea I had. I had to speak to him. But clearly, he was in no position to speak. I had to enter his mind.
"Legilimens," I whispered softly, trying to enter as gently as possible.
"Who, who's there?" Oh, good, he's still in here.
"A friend, I want to help you."
The connection was weak. I needed to get a better look into his eyes. My hair brushed across his face as I leaned across him. To my shock, his fingers reached for the ends of my hair. He touched it reverently, almost like a lover's caress.
"Lily, are you here to fetch me?"
I had no idea who Lily was, but if he would 'talk' to her, it might be best not to correct him.
"Severus, I want to help you. You've been attacked by a snake. I'm sure it's poisonous, but I don't know enough about it to help you."
"Lily, I tried to protect him. I tried. But he must face the Dark Lord tonight. I don't know what will happen. Lily, I'm sorry; I did all I could. Dumbledore says he must die. He says it's for the greater good. I'm sorry my Lily."
"Shhh, Severus. I know. You did well." Who was Lily? Who was he trying to protect? Why was he trying to protect anyone from Voldemort? This man was a Death Eater.
"Harry is a strong boy. He gets that from you. You can tell James that. All he got from James was a tendency for trouble and messy hair."
Harry? He was protecting Harry? Ron's friend Harry? Was it possible this man was on the side of the Order?
"Blue? Eyes, your eyes should be green. Why are your eyes blue? Lily?"
Oh, no. The game was up. "Shhh, I'm sorry to deceive you. I'm not Lily. My name is Elizabeth. I won't hurt you. Please, stay calm. I'm a Healer. What do you know about the snake?"
"Pocket ..."
"What?"
"Pocket!" How a man yells in his mind I don't know, but I got the message. He wanted me to look in his pocket. I unbuttoned his coat. In the inside pocket, there was a vial.
"Is this antivenin?"
"Obviously." I uncorked the vial as I exited his mind. I poured the contents down his throat, massaging his still badly damaged neck. To my relief, he responded slightly, swallowing on his own.
Orby appeared next to me again with more Blood-Replenishing Potion and bandages. We administered the potion and wrapped the wound. We worked and worked for hours on end. The man was still unconscious, but his pulse was stronger. His color was also slightly better.
The Dittany had helped as had the charms and spells, but this wound was horrific. If this man survived, he would have a long road ahead of him.
"Miss Elizabeth, are you okay?"
"I'm very tired. I had to enter his mind."
"Miss Elizabeth must sleep; let Orby take you and the dark man to the hospital wing."
"No, Orby. This man is a Death Eater, and Voldemort himself tried to kill him. He must be kept out of sight."
"Miss Elizabeth should go then. Orby will watch him. He is stable."
"No, Orby. I will stay here."
"Then Orby stays with you," he said firmly. And with that, he conjured a sleeping bag and pillow. I relented and fell asleep almost instantly on the floor of the shack.
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38 Reviews | 4.45/10 Average
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story and for creating one of the most interesting oc I have encountered in a long time. I particularly liked the insights in all these episodes of their lives you used to wrapp it all up in this final chapter and I do feel sad you only have such a few reviews. This story definitely deserves more.
A nice chapter--you are clearly someone who enjoys describing houses as much as I do! And I really enjoyed Elizabeth's very sage advice to Lucius about using his temporary lack of magic to hone his other strengths, as well as his oblivious reaction. One tiny bit of constructive (I hope) criticism: Lady Evelyn is not more informal than Lady Prince; in fact, it's actually a higher title. Lady Jane means you are the daughter of a duke, marques, earl, or baron. (Second sons only get to be Lord John if their fathers are dukes or marquesses; their older brothers usually get a lower family title as a courtesy.) Lady Doe means she has married into the aristocracy, unless she has married one a second son like Lord John, in which case she is Lady John. So Lady Evelyn would have been born and raised the daughter of a baron at the very least, and thus she outranks Lady Prince, who might have been a gum-snapping chorus girl who caught Lord Prince's eye. And everyone who is not a servant (they say "your lordship, your ladyship") would call her Lady Evelyn if that was her title, not just her friends.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
oh, this story is so wonderful, hopefully Lucius will come to his senses if that is possible, well maybe he is just protective of Severus as Molly is of Elizabeth.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
:) oh my....
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Several new people are enriching this narration with their own stories. You've woven them all together very well. Its good to know that Draco showed some spine even while they were hosting the Dark Lord. Severus is more relaxed than ever before. A romance will do him immensely good--even if he might deny needing it. It would now help to know how Elizabeth's love life looked back in the States. She's very reserved for a reason, I wager, and not all might be her professional relationship with Severus.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
this is a very good story, I love the way we follow several people and their problems, I love especially following Elisabeth and Severus' budding love
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
This is such a wonderful story. It's nice to see Severus with fresh eyes and I like the other stories about the other injured people and the development of Draco as well. You have a good hand in bringing all the storylines together and in fleshing out all your characters. And what I particularly like is the fact that despite the title it's much more developing as an equal relationship than one in which one is rescued by the other. Well done! You really deserve more reviews.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
:) I really like how you're developing Elizabeth and through her Severus as a person we've not yet "met". keep up the good work
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Ya know I've had astory in my head for a year now about Severus, a muggle library and Hermione's Cousin/Adopted Sister but every time i write it it comes out all funky andn not how I intended. I am eating this story up because its a similar theme. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter <3
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
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oooh I'm so excited, This looks to be a great start to a grand adventure.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
oooo - you have a great "voice". please keep up the good work!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
And now it gets interesting! I wonder whom Elizabeth will have as patients? (I have my suspicions about one of them.) I might wonder why Elizabeth didn't play a role in healing Hermione and the others from Malfoy Manor, but I'm sure there's a good reason. This story has been very well and plausibly set up, and I look forward to its continuation.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Oh my. You have certainly laid the groundwork well and set us up for exciting/terrifying events to come - THE battle. I think we can all guess who one of her patients will be. Looking forward to how Elizabeth's side of the story plays out.It's interesting, isn't it, that most of us have an Aunt Muriel in our lives. Maybe not an actual relative, but someone close enough to have an influence on our lives. I like that you have Elizabeth coping with this relationship as you do. People like Aunt Muriel can really pull a person down, but only if that person allows it to happen.Enjoyed your chapter and looking forward to the next with great expectations.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Hi Elizabeth, so nice hearing about you! You've had quite a life, I must say! Kudos to your Mom for allowing you to stay connected at all! How is she? Now you return just when things are getting the worst imaginable? That's very brave indeed. I think you're safe assuming that Aunt Muriel hates the American part AND the spunky part. Let's at least assume it isn't the Muggle part. She might not agree to host the Order's hospital if that were the case. Good luck with her! I'm sure you'll get along well enough with most Weasleys (as long as you eat & sleep enough). What is your take of Fleur, though? Looking forward to hearing from you,
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
You have me intrigued already. I like the first person telling of this story. Good start. Looking forward to the next installment.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Goodness, I liked this so much. Your narrator is such an engaging OC, with an interesting and plausible backstory (and a great name, lol). And it was great to read a happy ending for Snape with a partner who not only was close to him in age but also had a temperament that complemented his so well.
The transfer went very well, and Severus manages to be rather civil. Undoubtedly he will have lapses, and I'm looking foreard to Elizabeth's reaction.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
nice movement through your chapter.
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Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Well written, and easy to read, but I cannot quite believe this soft side of the Malfoys. Not yet--you might still convince me.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
A wise move!Nice interaction between Minerva and Severus. yes, this is how I assume their relationship.I fear for Elizabeth's wellbeing after she silenced the man. One remark: I have heard from Muggle doctors (snort) that bloodloss always looks like far more than it actually is due to its intense colour and how it spreads. As a Healer Elizabeth woudl know of this effect, I think.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Now here's the most believable way I've found so far how and why someone came to rescue Severus! You've woven this very well into canon. And yes, Severus is strong in whatever state one finds him!
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Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!