Accusations and Explanations
Chapter 10 of 20
reader76Lucius is displeased with the new relationship. Severus and Elizabeth visit the Burrow.
ReviewedWhen I woke the next morning, I was the only one in my bed. I reached out for Severus, but he wasn't there. I sat up, clutching the sheet to my chest, trying to focus my eyes in the dim early morning light. I was pleased to see that he hadn't disappeared, but I wasn't thrilled to find him dressed and putting on his shoes.
"Good morning, Elizabeth. I'm sorry if I woke you."
"I had hoped you would wake me in a different way." I waggled my eyebrows at him and let the sheet fall from my breasts.
"Woman, you are wicked. I'm trying to get back to the Manor house before they notice I didn't spend the night there."
"Severus, they will know soon enough."
He smiled shyly at me. "I know, but there's a difference between knowing and coming face to face with the evidence. Lucius' wards will alert him when I enter the house, but I'd rather not have Draco arrive for morning rounds to find my bed hasn't been slept in."
"Yes, I suppose I understand your point."
"At least have breakfast with me," I said with a pout. "Orby can have something simple ready in just a few minutes."
Severus looked at the clock on the wall. "That sounds nice. It's only six. Draco probably won't come around until around eight."
"Excellent." I could already hear Orby rattling around in the kitchen. It was amazing how responsive the elves were to their names being spoken.
"Severus, I was thinking about something you mentioned last night." I stood up from the bed and threw a dressing gown on.
"Yes."
"You should contact your grandmother. If she was trying to make amends with your mother, she would probably appreciate hearing from you."
"I've thought about it a lot over the years. Recently, it would have been dangerous for her, but now that things have changed, perhaps I should. It's a good thought. Let me consider it a bit more."
"What about everything else, Severus? Are you going to take Lucius and Narcissa up on their idea to move you to another property?"
"Trying to get rid of me already?" Severus teased. I blushed.
"Of course not, Severus." I grabbed his hand. "I know you are teasing, but please don't think that. We could still see each other regardless of where you choose to live."
"And I wouldn't have to sneak back into the Manor in the morning," he said as he winked at me.
"I didn't think of that," I replied. "Though really, I'm not sure what the media could do to you here. The only people who have access to the grounds outside the family right now are the Aurors, Minister Shacklebolt, me, and a handful of hospital employees. Though, once the plea deals are signed, some of that will change."
"Narcissa was right, Elizabeth. There's no need for me to leave. This is the best place for me as long as the Malfoys don't feel I'm intruding. With our work with the hospital, Draco's training, you," he looked down sheepishly, "everything that I need is right here on the grounds." I felt my cheeks go warm again.
"And there's another thing, Severus, which you might not have thought about. Lucius is going to be experiencing a tough transition soon as well. Having a friend here that understands and can help him discreetly might be good for him as well."
Orby popped in. "Miss Elizabeth and Professor Snape, breakfast is ready. Would you like to eat in the kitchen, or should I bring trays to you?"
"We'll come to the kitchen." I smiled at Orby. "Thank you."
We went into the kitchen and enjoyed the breakfast Orby had prepared. Orby had left a vial of Invigoration Draught next to Severus' juice. He winked at me and asked if I was trying to tell him something, which earned him another blush from me. We finished breakfast, planning the day together and talking. It was surprisingly natural sharing my breakfast table with him.
He had decided that he would offer the Lovegoods an interview. He wanted to get it over with as quickly as possible. I offered to send owls to Minister Shacklebolt and Harry to have the meeting arranged.
The antivenin was due to be finished the following morning, which was a Saturday. Severus would take the potion and rest to make sure he responded well. Sunday, I was due to spend the day at Molly's home. Harry and Luna would both be there as well. Since a good portion of the Weasley family already knew of Severus' survival, we decided that it would be a good first outing for Severus, assuming Molly and Arthur were agreeable. That would save Miss Lovegood from having to visit the Manor if she was uncomfortable.
Today would be spent on therapy and research, much like the plan was for yesterday.
As Severus was about to leave, my Floo burned green.
Narcissa's face appeared in the flames. "Elizabeth, I am sorry to trouble you so early, but Lucius went to speak to Severus this morning, and he was absent. Did he say anything to you last night about planning to get out and about early this morning? He was so upset last night. We are concerned for him."
Severus stepped forward. "Narcissa, I am quite well this morning. Elizabeth and I were just having breakfast, and I will be returning to the Manor shortly. If it is convenient for Lord Malfoy, I will meet him in his study in one hour."
Narcissa flushed. "Thank you Severus. I will let Lucius know. I am sorry to disturb you both." Once the call was broken, the two of us looked at each other and burst into gales of laughter.
"We should have thought of that," I said between giggles. "They may have been genuinely worried."
"I doubt it. Well, Narcissa may have been, but odds are good Lucius knows exactly where I am. These old magical estates are keyed to the magic of their master. Very little happens without the knowledge of the current Lord Malfoy." I paled. Severus chuckled. "What I mean, Elizabeth, is that I'm sure he knew when you Apparated us here."
"So how will that work when Lucius has his magic bound?"
"It will probably be transferred to Draco for the duration of Lucius' punishment. If there were no heir, it might go to Narcissa, but since she's not a Malfoy by blood, I do not honestly know."
He stepped forward and kissed me. "I should go. I will see you this afternoon in the library."
"Have a good day, Severus," I hugged him and opened the door for him. He walked up the path towards the main house. I closed the door and went to shower and prepare for the day.
An hour later, I was ready to go and had sent owls to Harry, Molly, and Minister Shacklebolt.
I flooed to the hospital wing and checked in with the Mediwizard on duty. Edward's wound had opened up during the night, and both he and the Mediwizard had gotten a good view of the event. I gathered vials and showed Edward how to remove the memory and save it for examination later. The Mediwizard had already prepared his vial for examination.
Next, I visited Lavender. I was pleased to see that Narcissa had already sent up a few books with some cosmetology charms that Lavender had been reading through diligently. They were scheduled to have tea this afternoon. I was even more pleased to see that she had requested a sketchbook much like Dean's, and she had been drawing the day before.
"What is this Lavender?"
"Oh," she smiled. "I was playing around with some dress designs yesterday. Nothing too exciting, but it passes the time."
"That's wonderful, Lavender. Perhaps you could show them to Lady Malfoy."
"Oh, I couldn't possibly. She's so refined; my work would seem common and childish."
"Well, Lavender, do whatever feels best. I brought this for you. St. Mungo's sent it out yesterday. It is a special healing paste that they have been using for some patients there. They thought it might help. It was developed by Muggles for dog bites, but the Potions masters at St. Mungo's added some magical ingredients to amp it up a bit. Use it on just your legs first. And start with a small area today. If you don't have a reaction, you can start applying it to your legs in a couple days, and we'll see if it helps."
She smiled. "Thank you for everything Healer Prewett."
The rest of rounds went smoothly. The therapy sessions were tough as expected, but all three of my patients showed a fierce determination. As I was finishing up with Jessica, Boppy popped in.
"Lord Malfoy would like to meet with you in his study, Healer Prewett. And Auror Robards is waiting for you in the lounge."
"Thank you, Boppy. Tell Lord Malfoy that I will be there in just a few minutes. Please take Miss Wood back to her room. I shall go speak with Auror Robards."
Auror Robards rose as I entered the lounge. "I understand that you are gathering information about the attacks to help with your treatment plans," he said. "Here are the reports we've collected on the incidents regarding your patients. I had to scrub a couple of them, because they are still pending investigations. But most of them were hexed by Death Eaters that fell during the battle. Miss Wood's attacker is still at large, as is Mr. Thomas'."
"Well, for my purposes, both of those patients have injuries that I can treat without further information. This should be quite helpful for the others. Is it acceptable that I share this information with Lord Malfoy and my other colleague?"
Auror Robards smiled. "Yes, ma'am. The confidential information was removed. Don't share this with the press or the public at large, but with the residents here, it is acceptable to share the information. Now, if you will excuse me, if you have no other questions, I need to return to my post."
"Thank you, Auror Robards. I am due to meet with Lord Malfoy." I stepped into my office and placed the report on my desk.
"His study is on my way; shall I walk you there?"
"That would be nice, thank you." We walked down the halls of Malfoy Manor to Lucius' study. Auror Robards nodded and departed without a word.
"Well, well, well, what do we have here?" Lucius said silkily, standing as I entered. He looked like a cat preparing to pounce.
"Auror Robards was kind enough to walk me from the hospital wing on his way back to his post."
"Indeed. It seems you are just the belle of the ball, Healer Prewett."
Lucius' tone shocked me. "You wished to see me, Lord Malfoy?"
"You have not contacted me about the contract I sent you to serve as Draco's tutor? Did you have any questions or concerns?"
"Nothing major. I completed my review of it yesterday morning. I apologize for not returning it to you. After your news of yesterday afternoon, the day slipped away from me."
"And the night too, it seems." Lucius smiled, but it was not a pleasant smile.
"I shall have it sent to you this afternoon, Lord Malfoy, if that is satisfactory." I stood and started to go. "Now, if there is nothing else, I shall excuse myself."
"Oh, but Healer Prewett, there is something else."
"Yes, sir?" I hoped that my tone did not reveal the nervousness that I felt.
"I understand that you and Severus have begun a personal relationship. I trust you remember our conversation the other day about toying with his emotions."
"Lucius, cut the intimidation tactics. Severus and I are both adults. Whether or not we choose to spend time together privately is not your business."
"Oh, but it is. If someone is using my dear friend, it is my business."
"Lucius, I don't know what you are talking about. Severus and I have similar interests and share a mutual attraction. End of story."
"And the fact that he's the sole heir to an estate that can only be rivaled by four or five other families in Wizarding England has nothing to do with your 'mutual attraction'. You expect me to believe that the idea of becoming Lady Prince has no bearing on your esteem for Severus." He sneered at my words.
"No, in fact, I have very little knowledge of Severus' family. The limited information I have, I only learned last night."
"The night you chose to take him to your bed? What a coincidence."
"Lord Malfoy, I will be leaving now. I won't stand here and let you call me a whore."
"Such language is not necessary, Elizabeth. Just watch yourself, my dear; you do not want me as an enemy."
"Lucius, I don't want anyone as an enemy. But don't flatter yourself into thinking you have any power over me. Good day, sir." I stood up and started to leave the room. He blocked my exit.
"You may have him fooled for now, Miss Prewett," Lucius spat my name at me. "But I am not fooled. Whatever you are playing at, you will regret it."
I drew my wand. "Lucius, move now."
"You don't have the nerve."
"I don't have the nerve to do what, Lucius? I may not believe in violence, Lucius, but I will protect myself, and my wand is not being tracked. You better hope that I choose to Stun you if I feel threatened. A well placed message to the Aurors would do a lot more damage to your tenuous little situation here. Now, let me pass."
Lucius stepped back and gave a bow, obviously mocking me. I didn't care. I needed to get the hell out of there. I rushed down the hallway, nearly running over Draco as I rounded the corner approaching the hospital.
"Elizabeth! What is the matter?"
"Nothing, Draco, please, don't start."
"Elizabeth, I don't believe you. Something has happened. Has someone hurt you?" He looked alarmed.
I looked up at Draco, trying to hide my panic. "Draco, I'll be fine. I just had an uncomfortable conversation."
"You had an unpleasant conversation with whom? I know it wasn't Severus, because I was just with him in the lab. Oh, Merlin, what did Father do?"
I pulled Draco into my office and closed the door. "It seems he doubts my intentions with regards to Severus."
"Father can be an old fool sometimes. What on earth does he think you are after?"
"The Prince fortune," I huffed, rolling my eyes.
"I didn't think you even knew about that."
"I didn't, not until your father accused me of prostituting myself in hopes of an advantageous marriage. What year is it, anyway? I mean, Severus told me yesterday that his grandfather was wealthy, but who knows what that means to anyone?"
"And it's pretty obvious that your interest in Severus began before yesterday. Merlin, did Father not see what happened yesterday when he broke down in the parlor? Elizabeth, I'm sorry."
"Thank you, Draco. That means a great deal."
"Try to ignore Father. He's lost much of his influence, and he's trying to exert what power he can in his own home."
"It's not acceptable behavior, Draco."
"I know." He suddenly looked panicked. "You aren't going to leave, are you? I really do need your help preparing for my N.E.W.T.s."
"No. I don't scare that easily." What a lie. I was terrified. "I do intend to strike the part of the contract that requires me to live here. If the situation becomes too uncomfortable, we'll have to come up with another place to tutor you. I'm sure Minerva would let us work in an unused classroom at Hogwarts."
"What about the hospital?"
"Don't get ahead of yourself, Draco. I'm not leaving over this. I just don't want to box myself in."
"That seems reasonable. And if Father doesn't consent to the revised contract, I can send you one. I have access to enough of the family funds now to hire my own tutor."
I smiled. Draco's support did mean a lot to me. "I shall see you in a couple of hours. I would prefer to work in my office here, rather than in your father's library. Could you have the books we need moved down to the hospital offices?"
"Elizabeth, that isn't going to work," Draco began hesitantly.
"Why?"
"Severus can't come down here."
"You are right, of course." I sighed. "Well, what about the cottage? I'll have Orby enlarge my office there to make it large enough for three people. What about the Pensieve?"
"If you owl Minister Shacklebolt and tell him you need one, I'm sure he'll loan you one from the Ministry. I shall collect the books and let Severus know that we are meeting in the cottage."
"Very well, I shall contact the Ministry. Thank you again. And, Draco, please don't tell Severus. If it needs to be explained to him, it should come from me."
"I understand."
I collected the vials containing the memories and Auror Robards reports, along with the charts I needed. I returned to the cottage feeling a bit deflated. I had owls from Molly and Harry waiting for me. I decided to request the Pensieve from St. Mungo's instead of Minister Shacklebolt. He really didn't need to know anything about the issue with Lucius. As furious as I was with Lucius about his behavior, I didn't want to hurt Draco or Narcissa.
As I ate my lunch, I looked over the letters from Molly and Harry. Molly's owl invited me to come out to the house for dinner that night. She wanted to better understand the plan for Sunday. She invited Severus as well, which I found curious. I wasn't sure how he would feel about that. She was quick to point out that it would only be her and Arthur for dinner tonight. Harry, Ginny, Ron and Hermione were going into London on a date. Charlie was staying in London with George, helping him with the shop for a few weeks. Percy was back at his flat in London as well, and Bill and Fleur were back at Shell Cottage.
I Floo called her and told her that I would attend, but I did not know about Severus yet.
"Elizabeth, dear. Harry informed us that you and Severus have formed a friendship. We think it's lovely. He could certainly use a friend from the sound of it."
"I shall invite him Molly, but you know him."
"Well, if he's coming on Sunday when everyone is here, dear, he's going to have to face us soon enough."
"True, Molly. Like I said, I shall invite him."
Harry's owl confirmed that he had spoken to Luna; she would be there on Sunday. He expressed his surprise that Severus was willing to come to the Weasley home when everyone was there.
I spent the next hour looking over the contract again. I revised the residence section, stating that I would live on the grounds if mutually agreeable to both parties, but that could be revised by either party at any time. I signed my version of the contract, closed it, and placed it in the drawer.
I then called Orby, and we enlarged my office. A second desk was added, along with a small table and chairs.
Severus arrived shortly after I finished. He announced that Draco was collecting the books and would Floo in a few minutes. I smiled, and he kissed me hello, but then he became serious.
"What are we doing at the cottage, Elizabeth? Why did you change from the library?"
I groaned, "Severus Snape, you are too smart for your own good."
"Elizabeth, do not try and ply me with flattery. What is going on?"
"Lucius and I had a bit of a run in this morning. I decided to stay out of his way for the time being."
"What happened?"
"He does not seem to believe my intentions with you are sincere."
"Explain." His body tensed.
"He basically accused me of prostituting myself to get at your fortune."
He groaned. "I'm sorry, Elizabeth. That was completely out of line." He wrapped his arms around me. "Elizabeth," he said gently, "I believe your intentions are sincere."
"I know; I just haven't ever been accused of being a gold-digger before."
"If he does it again, tell him if you were really after money, you would have gone after Draco." He was obviously trying to break the tension. I laughed.
"Now why didn't I think of that? Can you imagine his face if I'd said that?"
"Well, I think Lucius might have ended up in Azkaban had you challenged him like that, so it's better that you didn't," we both laughed again, "Seriously, though, are you okay?"
"Yes. It was just a rude comment, and I'm a big girl. But you know he scares me a little bit, and he's obviously trying to intimidate me."
Severus' eyes narrowed. "He does not intimidate me. And if he ever even comes close to threatening you again, we're both leaving. You got that?"
"Severus, he's your oldest friend."
"Oldest friend or not, that's no way to treat a houseguest. I won't have him treat someone I care about like that."
The Floo glowed green, and Draco stepped through. I turned my back and stepped into the kitchen to compose myself. Severus seemed to understand and distracted Draco with the books. A few moments later, the Floo glowed green again, and a St. Mungo's messenger stepped through with the Pensieve. Draco signed for the delivery and helped Severus set it up. I pulled the vials with the memories in them from my robes and handed them to Severus. As Severus poured the first into the basin, I opened Robards' notes and began reading.
Severus dove into the Pensieve. I read through the notes on Edward, not seeing anything I thought we could use, but marking a few things for Severus to review. On the other patients, there were some names of the assailants, so I thought those notes might be more valuable.
Draco had picked up one of the reference books and was cross referencing it with one of the patient's charts. He seemed to be deep in thought, so I didn't disturb him.
When Severus emerged from the Pensieve, he took a moment to collect himself. "I recognize the curse. But it's very complicated to reverse. It will be more difficult than I originally thought. I don't think it's a good idea for you to try this one Elizabeth. It will take someone highly skilled in the Dark Arts or possibly a curse breaker. I could probably do it, but I'd need backup."
"I could probably get Bill to assist you," I offered. "Are you willing to do this?"
"Yes. I'd prefer we wait until after Monday. I'll need to be at full strength."
"That seems reasonable. We'll probably have to talk to the patients about you pretty soon anyway."
"It will require two potions, both fairly simple. Draco can brew them in advance. You and Draco can observe, as it might be good for you both professionally to know how this is done, even if you don't ever undergo the training to do it yourself."
"Should we just talk to Bill on Sunday together?"
"Yes. I need to explain to him what this entails before he commits. It isn't easy."
"Oh, that reminds me. Molly invited us both to dinner this evening. I think she and Arthur want to see you before Sunday."
"Me, or us?" He looked cautious.
"Severus, we can handle that however you wish. I'm not going to lie to my sister, but we can downplay 'us' as much as you want to. I get that this is weird for you."
Draco cleared his throat and said, "I'm in the room here, you two."
"Draco, you're an adult now, act like it," Severus barked.
"Just don't act sentimental in front of me, Professor. I might die of shock."
"Don't tempt me, Draco. Elizabeth, I can go with you to dinner. It's probably best that I don't have dinner with Lucius tonight." Draco and I both stiffened at the threat in Severus' voice.
"Thank you." I scribbled a note to Molly, and Orby took it to the owlery.
"Draco, what are you reading?"
"I'm hoping that this might help Rosalyn. May I see Robards' report for her?" I handed it over to him.
"There's pretty good information in there for her," I pointed out. "There's even a name, Augustus Rockwood."
Severus bristled visibly. "What are her symptoms?"
"Paralysis of the arm," Draco offered. "I'm looking at the more complex freezing charms right now."
"That's probably a good path. Was it her wand arm?"
"No, it's her left."
"It sounds like he missed. Did the diagnostic charms reveal any nerve damage?"
"No, she can feel it when someone touches her arm; she just can't move it."
"That's what a freezing charm would do, if applied to the muscles, not the skin and not the nerves. And the muscles are intact; they are simply stuck, loosely speaking."
"Do you think a counter-curse is possible?"
"It's possible, but I'm not sure anyone would know it, except another Death Eater, and I'm not familiar with this one."
"Severus, I can hear your hesitation. What aren't you saying?"
"Lucius would know. He and Rockwood were always experimenting. Nothing either of you want to know about, I assure you, but if Rockwood created it, Lucius probably understands it." Draco looked like he was going to be sick.
"So, Draco may need to take point on this one," I sighed.
"Elizabeth, are you okay with that?" Draco looked concerned.
"You and Severus will have to get the information. If he resists, I'll get Minister Shacklebolt to apply some pressure. I'm sure that the terms of Lucius' probation say something about 'cooperating with authorities when requested'. After we know what we are dealing with, then we can decide on my level of involvement."
"I don't want you pushed to the side." Draco looked sympathetic.
"This isn't about me. It's about helping that girl."
Severus reached over and patted my shoulder. "Keep digging, Draco, the more you know going into these conversations with your father, the better." Draco nodded at Severus' words.
The three of us kept working for the next two hours. Severus was coming up blank on Miss Davies, so I decided to talk to St. Mungo's about the Muggle options there. We felt that Legilimens was our best option for Professor Sinistra, but we needed to wait until Severus was stronger. He had some ideas of some Potions modifications that might help Lavender, so he and Draco were going to experiment with that next week also.
All in all, it was a fairly productive afternoon. Draco and Severus left at 5:30. Severus let me know that he would Floo back at 6:15, and we would head to Molly and Arthur's. Draco ducked outside as Severus gave me a quick hug and a kiss before leaving.
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When we stepped out of the Floo, the Burrow was quieter than usual. Severus was dressed casually again, wearing a dark green shirt and black pants. I was in a dark gray wrap dress. Arthur entered the room. He greeted us with a warm smile and crossed the room to give me a hug. He shook Severus' hand, and then turned to the both of us.
"I'm glad you both could make it tonight. We thought it would be easier to talk with just Molly and me here. Severus, Lizzie, we will try not to overwhelm you with questions, but there is much to discuss."
Severus looked at me sideways at the use of my childhood nickname. His lip twitched into a half-smile.
"I must say, Severus," Arthur continued, "you look quite well. I think it took me much longer after my run-in with that snake to be up and about. You look younger than you have in years."
"Well, Arthur, a significant stressor has been removed from my life," he said wryly, "thanks to Mr. Potter."
"Indeed."
"I am sorry for the loss of your son. And I am sorry for my role in any of your family's pain."
Arthur's kind eyes turned thoughtful and sad. "Thank you for that, Severus. And I am sorry for misunderstanding you. There is much healing remaining."
Severus nodded his acknowledgment.
Molly entered the room. "Lizzie, Severus, I'm so glad you could make it." I smiled sadly. Molly's greeting was warm and kind, but it lacked her usual liveliness.
"Thank you for inviting us," Severus said politely. "I am sorry for your loss, Molly."
"Thank you." She nodded, blinking back tears. She took a moment and collected herself. "You look healthy, Severus. Lizzie, you've done a good job healing him up. Now, I just have to feed him." Molly turned and headed back to her kitchen. I smiled, Arthur chuckled, and Severus looked mildly worried.
"Well, Severus, clearly all is forgiven if she's worrying about getting you properly fed," Arthur said with amusement.
"Indeed," Severus said. You could tell he found Molly's mothering foreign.
"I'm going to see if Molly needs any help," I said to Severus.
"Certainly," he said. "I'll be fine." To my surprise, he leaned over and kissed my cheek. I returned the gesture and headed to the kitchen. Arthur's face betrayed no reaction. His usual expression of kind indifference remained in place.
As I reached the kitchen, Molly was bustling as usual. "Molly, is there anything I can do to help you?"
Molly turned and smiled. "Could you help with the salad?" I crossed over to the kitchen and began working. Molly picked up her wand and cast a spell I did not recognize.
"Okay, Lizzie, what is going on with you and Severus? Now, don't look at me like that, I know you're a grown woman; I'm not going to lecture you; I just want to know what to expect here."
"Severus and I have been thrown together these last few weeks. Our relationship is very new and we don't know where it is headed, but we have grown close. And yes, this is a romantic attachment."
Molly looked like she had been hit by a Confundus charm. "Lizzie Prewett!" she whispered urgently. "Are you telling me you are in love with Severus Snape?"
"Molly! I'm telling you no such thing," I whispered back, shocked that she would jump so far ahead. "It's far too early for such talk. I care for him, but it's too soon to know exactly what that means. I simply didn't want you to be shocked if you saw evidence that our friendship has a romantic element to it."
"Severus showing affection would shock anyone," Molly breathed. "Lizzie, he's just so distant. Are you sure this is something you want to pursue?"
"Molly, I think he may be different than he was before the attack. With me, he's been fairly open and quite warm, at least warm enough for me. You know I'm more reserved with my emotions than you are."
"That is true. And he is a good man, deep down. Well, good luck to you, dear. You both deserve some happiness in your lives. I must say I thought Harry must have been imagining things when he reported to us at dinner last night that you seemed affectionate." Molly was saying the right things, but there was something questioning in her face. I had a feeling this wasn't over.
"Yesterday was trying for Severus. He needed my support." Molly raised her eyebrow at the cryptic response. I sighed, "Molly, you know how private he is. The story of his survival breaking will create a sensation. He's worried. It got to him yesterday. He broke down in front of the Malfoys and Harry. Narcissa had the good sense to clear everyone out of there and let me talk to him without a crowd. Apparently, there's some piranha of a reporter that everyone is afraid will drag him through the mud."
"Skeeter," Molly hissed and stabbed the roast.
I nodded. "That's why he's giving an interview with this Miss Lovegood and her father. I understand they publish another paper."
"Luna and her father are neighbors of ours. She is a classmate of Ginny's."
I gulped. "She's seventeen?"
"Yes." Molly didn't seem to understand my shock at the girl's age. "They are quirky people, but they are also honest and fair. And during the war, The Quibbler became the only independent paper. Xenophilius was forced to stop reporting when Luna was abducted." I gasped at Molly's words, but she continued, "Luna was rescued by Ron and Harry, along with Dean Thomas, a wandmaker, and an elf."
"She was held at Malfoy Manor as a prisoner."
"Yes, and she was badly treated. Not by the Malfoys themselves, according to her, but the other Death Eaters were less restrained. Ollivander nearly died."
"Miss Lovegood's experience at the Manor is the reason that Severus and Harry thought that holding the interview here would be better. I didn't understand the details, but it makes sense now."
"That does seem reasonable."
Molly and I had finished setting the table. She motioned for me to go get Arthur and Severus. When I walked into the kitchen to retrieve them, both men gave me warm smiles and followed me into the kitchen.
We all sat down and started passing around the dishes. "Molly, this looks lovely," I commented.
"As always," Arthur looked at his wife.
"Thank you for the invitation, it smells delightful." Severus nodded to Molly politely.
"It's probably a little different than the elf-prepared meals at the Manor," Molly's tone was sheepish and a tad defensive.
"I assure you, it is a welcome change of pace."
Molly beamed. I smiled. Severus seemed to know a thing or two about flattery after all.
Arthur took the opportunity to get down to business. "Lizzie, Severus, if you don't mind sharing with us, what exactly happened in the shack during the battle? At first we heard from Ron that you had died, and then Harry told the story of how you'd been with the Order all along, and the next thing I know, Kingsley is pulling us aside, telling us that Severus is alive and Lizzie is going to Malfoy Manor to treat him and some others. It was all rather confusing, to be honest."
I retold the story of how I had followed Ron to the shack and witnessed the attack on Severus. I recounted those horrifying hours trying to revive him. Severus explained that he'd been carrying the potion for weeks, and he told them how I had entered his mind and learned of the antivenin. I explained how Minister Shacklebolt and Professor McGonagall had come up with the idea to use Malfoy Manor as the hospital for some of the cases that needed to be kept out of the limelight.
"So that's why Kingsley came and got you that day." Arthur nodded his understanding.
"Yes. I've been working with both St. Mungo's and Hogwarts to get the other patients transferred to the Manor. They only arrived a few days ago."
"Severus, you seem to be doing remarkably well, considering the severity of the attack."
"Well, Elizabeth is very good at what she does. The next dose of the antivenin should be ready in the morning. Hopefully that will restore my energy levels and eliminate my need for the other potions I've been taking. If all goes as planned, I should be back to full health in another two weeks. The scarring is permanent, but it's a small price to pay for finally being free." He looked at me and squeezed my hand under the table. Arthur smiled. Molly still looked hesitant.
Arthur ventured to ask, "Do you know what you plan to do after this is all behind you? Will you go back to Hogwarts and teach?"
"Definitely not. Teaching wasn't my strong suit, at least not at that age level. The apprenticeship with Draco is something different. Depending on how that goes, I might consider teaching on a one on one basis like that in the future. Also, in the years between the wars, I completed some research and development of new potions, and I found that gratifying. I have a few patents and potions that I've sold to companies over the years. We'll see how this endeavor goes with the hospital. Consulting on difficult cases or doing some of their more complex brewing might be something I'd be interested in dabbling in also."
Molly stepped in. "What about you, Lizzie? Are you staying in England?" I looked at Molly, surprise evident on my face.
"For the time being, I'll be working with the hospital and tutoring Draco. As the patients are released, I may pick up some shifts at St. Mungo's. I have a couple interesting offers for when Draco is finished with his exams. There are all within the U.K., but they are spread out in terms of location and field of practice.
"What about family, Severus?"
Severus choked on his dinner. "Molly!" Arthur and I exclaimed simultaneously. What was she doing? I reached over and patted Severus on the back. He took a drink of water and composed himself.
"Honestly, Molly, I haven't given it much thought. I didn't really expect to survive this war, and I've been a bit distracted with trying to heal for the past few weeks." The level of sarcasm in his voice escalated with each word.
Molly was not satisfied with this answer. "Well, Severus, if you two are embarking on a relationship, you need to be on the same page long term."
"Molly," I breathed dangerously, "this is a private conversation that Severus and I will have when it is appropriate for us to do so. Please cease with your meddling."
"Well, Lizzie, you aren't getting any younger."
Severus' eyes narrowed. I was growing agitated as well.
"Molly, stop, that will be enough." Arthur looked at his wife sternly. His words calmed both Severus and me. Arthur didn't step in often, but when he did it was usually effective.
"I'm sorry, Lizzie, Severus. I'm just worried about you, both of you. Frankly, you have just been thrown together and this is all just so fast."
"What happened to, 'we think it's lovely'?"
"A friendship is lovely, but a romantic attachment is a lot more complex."
Severus cut in. His voice was firm, but not harsh. "Molly, we both appreciate the complexity of the situation. Your concern is understood, but we are both adults. This relationship is based on mutual respect. Elizabeth's well-being is paramount to me, and I know the feeling is mutual. Neither of us is going to do anything to hurt the other."
Arthur smiled. "Thank you Severus. I'm afraid Molly is a bit overprotective of her babies."
Severus' answer seemed to have finally satisfied Molly. "Just be careful, both of you."
Arthur cut in, trying to change the subject. "How are the other patients doing?"
I smiled, relieved for the new topic. "Reasonably well, or at least I hope so. I can't talk about the details, but we are using a blend of Muggle techniques, help from St. Mungo's experts, along with some assistance from Severus and Lucius, given their history with some of the assailants."
"Is it true that Draco is your assistant?"
"He is my trainee, so yes; he is helping, as is Severus."
"How is that working?"
"Draco is a bright boy. He is eager to learn. But anyway, how are your children?"
"Well, Bill is back with Gringotts, and Fleur is working at the Ministry for now. Charlie, Ron and Ginny are helping George with the shop for now. Charlie is heading back to Romania in a month. Ron is going to start Auror training soon, and Ginny will head back to Hogwarts when it reopens."
"It sounds like everyone is moving forward as well as possible."
"Yes," Arthur said solemnly, "that's what Fred would have wanted."
"Where is Teddy Lupin?"
"Teddy is with his grandmother, Andromeda Tonks."
Severus cut in, "How is she?" I looked over at Severus. "Andromeda was a seventh year at Hogwarts when I was a first year. She was very kind to me."
"Andromeda is doing as well as can be expected. She is struggling with the loss of her daughter so soon after losing Ted. I think the baby is helping her cope."
"Does she have other family?" I inquired.
"Actually, she is Narcissa's older sister," Arthur stated simply.
"They have not spoken since her marriage," Molly sniped. "Ted was not acceptable."
Severus stepped in, mildly annoyed. "What happened with her family was very unfortunate. I know Narcissa regrets it, though she doesn't speak of it. Their parents were fanatics, and Bellatrix obviously was completely insane. Narcissa did what was expected of her, but Andi had to go her own way." He smiled sadly. "Ted was good to her; I'm just sorry she's alone now."
"I wonder if Narcissa has ever considered contacting her now," I mused.
"I don't know," Severus said. "It might still cause issues with Lucius." I rolled my eyes.
Severus patted my leg gently under the table. "I know. I know." Arthur and Molly look puzzled.
"I'm fond of Narcissa, Molly. I hate to see her miss out on knowing her sister because of her husband's views. If she doesn't wish to reconcile, or if Andromeda doesn't, that's one thing, but it should be their choice."
Arthur chuckled, "You always were the independent one, Lizzie. The nickname suits you."
Severus looked confused. I laughed. "Mother is an Austen nut. Father started calling me Lizzie when I was about five."
"Lizzie, as in Lizzie Bennet?" He laughed. "I'd say that fits pretty well." I blushed.
We had just about finished dinner by that time. It was decided that we would come out to the Burrow mid-afternoon; Severus would meet with the Lovegoods before the rest of the clan descended for dinner. Percy, Charlie and George still needed to be informed about Severus' survival. Arthur said he would Floo to their homes on Sunday morning and talk to them then. He didn't want to increase the chance of a leak before the story broke. At the same time, he also didn't want them to walk into the living room to that kind of a shock. Harry had already informed Ron and Ginny, and Arthur had told Bill.
We talked a few more minutes about the Ministry and the Order of the Phoenix meetings since the battle. Then we said our goodbyes; Severus and I took the Floo back to the cottage. I walked out of the Floo and sat down on the couch and groaned.
"Oh, now, Elizabeth, it wasn't all that bad. We survived, didn't we?" He sat down next to me and started gently rubbing my shoulder.
I turned to face him. "Yes, and thank you for helping me keep my cool."
"She means well, Elizabeth. This is just a big change for them. For years, I've been the stony professor, overly tough on her children. Then, a year ago, I became a traitor in their eyes. To find out that was all an act, it's a major shift in thinking. My job for years has been to deceive people. It makes them hesitant to trust me."
"I suppose that's especially true for people who see things as absolutes, which has always been Molly's way."
"Yes, that is definitely true. But, let's not dwell on that any longer. I need to go to the lab and check on the potion for tomorrow. If you'd like, you are welcome to come with me, or else I can come back here when I am finished."
"That's fine; you are welcome to stay here with me tonight if you like."
He leaned in and kissed me. What started as a simple goodbye kiss quickly grew heated as our tongues danced together. I climbed onto his lap, never breaking the kiss. He untied my dress and hurriedly pushed it off my shoulders. The kiss broke, and we stared at each other, panting. He ran his hands along my sides, and I relished the feeling of his hands on my bare skin. It wasn't enough contact; I couldn't get close enough. My hands were on his belt, unfastening it as quickly as I could. My bra was disposed of then, and he started rubbing his hands in small circles around my breasts. I finally succeeded in getting his belt and pants open, and I slid down his body until I was on my knees in front of him, and I pushed his legs apart. His eyes grew wide as he realized my intent.
"Is that what you want?" he asked sincerely. I looked up at him, my eyes undoubtedly filled with lust.
"I want to make you lose control, Severus. I want to give you pleasure right now."
He grabbed his wand, and in a moment, we were both naked. I slid my hands and my mouth over him, slowly at first, teasing. He was making the most fantastically wicked noises. I kept the pace slow, but increased the pressure and took him a bit deeper. He threaded his hands through my hair and pulled me further down as I started to speed up. I was watching him through the curtain of hair falling across his lap. His head was thrown back, his eyes closed, his grip tightening in my hair. My hands were running up and down his thighs as I took as much of him as I could in my mouth. He was lifting his hips and pulling me down, and he was practically growling at this point. My body was responding to the feel of him and the noises he was making. His hands clenched in my hair even tighter, and I began to moan with him. When he found his release, I rode it out, sliding my hands up his bare chest. I slid off of him, and he pulled me up his body and pulled me close.
"That was amazing, my dear. Now it is my turn to make you writhe and scream." He laid me on my back, leaned over and kissed me passionately. He was holding my hands, and he slid his fingers up my arms slowly, past my elbows, rubbing tiny circles on my skin as he slid up to my shoulders and together to my neck. His touch ghosted down past my collarbone, and his lips left mine, sliding down my neck as his hands trailed lower. He took a breast in each hand and kneaded gently with his palms, his fingers playing tenderly with my nipples. His lips and tongue played at my neck, making me moan and squirm. He chuckled as one of his hands left my breasts and trailed down my stomach. He looked at me lustfully, bringing his mouth back to my ear.
"It made me crazy today to be so near you and not be able to touch you." I moaned as his hand found its destination. "So soft, so beautiful, you are amazing to touch." He nipped at my earlobe as a long finger found my heated body. "You're so eager, my darling. Do you want more?" I gasped. Another digit worked its way inside. He began to move, and I couldn't help myself; I moved against him. He continued playing with my earlobe, whispering how good my body felt, and asking me if I wanted him to speed up. He rubbed his free hand across one nipple, then the other, as he worked me into an absolute frenzy. I could see that he was growing excited, and I knew he was enjoying this nearly as much as I was.
I couldn't speak. My head was spinning; I could feel my release building. He hit the perfect speed and pressure, finding the spot that made me go crazy. My body shattered under his touch, and I called out his name several times as I rode out the intense pleasure. He moved his hand to my stomach, then to my sides, and finally captured my hands above my head and locked his fingers with mine.
"You're perfect," he whispered. "I'm almost afraid you aren't real."
"I'm not perfect," I protested. "And I am real. And I'm thrilled you are in my life."
His lips found mine again, and soon we were kissing passionately once again. I couldn't even tell you the moment he entered me, as the melding of our bodies and minds was so smooth, it was one fluid motion. We moved together for a long time, neither fast nor slow, just enjoying the feeling and the moment, enjoying the slow build of pleasure. We touched and kissed, alternating between looking into each other's eyes and closing them to just feel one another. Eventually, the heat built, and the pace picked up, until we climaxed again, together this time.
"You're amazing," I whispered to him. We curled up together on the sofa, content in each other's arms for several minutes. I was starting to feel my eyelids growing heavy when he nuzzled against me.
"I really do have to go check on that potion. It should be ready in just a few hours." He kissed me on the forehead and stood up.
"Are you able to come back, or does the potion need your attention?"
"I'd like to come back." He had pulled his boxers on and stepped into his trousers.
"I'd like that, too."
"I'll pick up a few things from my room while I'm at the house."
"Feel free to bring some extras." I smiled shyly.
"I'll do that. I like the sound of that." He finished buttoning his pants, pulled his shirt on, and started buttoning it.
"Tomorrow is Saturday, so I'll check in with the clinic in the morning, but I don't have anything planed."
"I may be a bit run down tomorrow. The potion takes a while to kick in, and I won't be able to take any other potions. Even tonight, with the Invigoration Draught, I've been feeling a bit tired."
"You could have fooled me." I grinned.
"Well, you give me incredible incentive to find the energy, Elizabeth."
"I'm teasing you. We'll have a lazy day tomorrow."
"Sounds divine, I'll be back in just a few minutes."
Severus returned a few minutes later to find me showered, dressed in a nightgown, and reading an owl that had just arrived from Minerva. He paused to squeeze my shoulder and kiss the top of my head before going into the bedroom to deposit his bag.
"Everything okay?" he inquired, nodding toward the parchment in my hands.
"Yes, it's from Minerva. She is curious about your progress, but she didn't know if you would welcome an owl from her directly. She also has provided some information regarding the dates and times of Draco's N.E.W.T.s. I'm not sure she's been notified of his change in legal status. This implies that the testing will happen here at the Manor."
"Well, depending on when they are, that might make sense. Mr. Thomas, Miss Brown and Mr. Boot are also Draco's age. If they wish to take their N.E.W.T.s as well, perhaps they could be tutored here. Not necessarily by you and me, depending on the subject, but it is a possibility. Mr. Thomas missed his seventh year, so he might need more tutoring than the others."
"What about Jessica and Edward?"
"Miss Wood graduated two years ago and Mr. Macmillan graduated last year. I should send Minerva a letter. I never did congratulate her on her position as Headmistress." He stifled a yawn.
"I think I'm ready to turn in, Severus. Was everything good with the potion?"
"Yes, Draco had already performed the last step, so it should be ready by morning. I'm pretty tired myself. I'll be out in a moment." He turned and headed towards the bathroom. I finished reading Minerva's owl and went to get a glass of water.
When I got to the bedroom, Severus had already crawled beneath the covers. I climbed in beside him, snuggling into his side. He leaned over and gave me a quick, chaste kiss, tucking my hair behind my ear as he did so.
I extinguished the lamps and draped my arm across his chest, gently sliding my fingers across his skin. "I could get used to this," I whispered to the dark.
"You had better, my dear. Because I don't have any intent of letting you escape."
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38 Reviews | 4.45/10 Average
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story and for creating one of the most interesting oc I have encountered in a long time. I particularly liked the insights in all these episodes of their lives you used to wrapp it all up in this final chapter and I do feel sad you only have such a few reviews. This story definitely deserves more.
A nice chapter--you are clearly someone who enjoys describing houses as much as I do! And I really enjoyed Elizabeth's very sage advice to Lucius about using his temporary lack of magic to hone his other strengths, as well as his oblivious reaction. One tiny bit of constructive (I hope) criticism: Lady Evelyn is not more informal than Lady Prince; in fact, it's actually a higher title. Lady Jane means you are the daughter of a duke, marques, earl, or baron. (Second sons only get to be Lord John if their fathers are dukes or marquesses; their older brothers usually get a lower family title as a courtesy.) Lady Doe means she has married into the aristocracy, unless she has married one a second son like Lord John, in which case she is Lady John. So Lady Evelyn would have been born and raised the daughter of a baron at the very least, and thus she outranks Lady Prince, who might have been a gum-snapping chorus girl who caught Lord Prince's eye. And everyone who is not a servant (they say "your lordship, your ladyship") would call her Lady Evelyn if that was her title, not just her friends.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
oh, this story is so wonderful, hopefully Lucius will come to his senses if that is possible, well maybe he is just protective of Severus as Molly is of Elizabeth.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
:) oh my....
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Several new people are enriching this narration with their own stories. You've woven them all together very well. Its good to know that Draco showed some spine even while they were hosting the Dark Lord. Severus is more relaxed than ever before. A romance will do him immensely good--even if he might deny needing it. It would now help to know how Elizabeth's love life looked back in the States. She's very reserved for a reason, I wager, and not all might be her professional relationship with Severus.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
this is a very good story, I love the way we follow several people and their problems, I love especially following Elisabeth and Severus' budding love
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
This is such a wonderful story. It's nice to see Severus with fresh eyes and I like the other stories about the other injured people and the development of Draco as well. You have a good hand in bringing all the storylines together and in fleshing out all your characters. And what I particularly like is the fact that despite the title it's much more developing as an equal relationship than one in which one is rescued by the other. Well done! You really deserve more reviews.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
:) I really like how you're developing Elizabeth and through her Severus as a person we've not yet "met". keep up the good work
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Ya know I've had astory in my head for a year now about Severus, a muggle library and Hermione's Cousin/Adopted Sister but every time i write it it comes out all funky andn not how I intended. I am eating this story up because its a similar theme. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter <3
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
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oooh I'm so excited, This looks to be a great start to a grand adventure.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
oooo - you have a great "voice". please keep up the good work!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
And now it gets interesting! I wonder whom Elizabeth will have as patients? (I have my suspicions about one of them.) I might wonder why Elizabeth didn't play a role in healing Hermione and the others from Malfoy Manor, but I'm sure there's a good reason. This story has been very well and plausibly set up, and I look forward to its continuation.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Oh my. You have certainly laid the groundwork well and set us up for exciting/terrifying events to come - THE battle. I think we can all guess who one of her patients will be. Looking forward to how Elizabeth's side of the story plays out.It's interesting, isn't it, that most of us have an Aunt Muriel in our lives. Maybe not an actual relative, but someone close enough to have an influence on our lives. I like that you have Elizabeth coping with this relationship as you do. People like Aunt Muriel can really pull a person down, but only if that person allows it to happen.Enjoyed your chapter and looking forward to the next with great expectations.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Hi Elizabeth, so nice hearing about you! You've had quite a life, I must say! Kudos to your Mom for allowing you to stay connected at all! How is she? Now you return just when things are getting the worst imaginable? That's very brave indeed. I think you're safe assuming that Aunt Muriel hates the American part AND the spunky part. Let's at least assume it isn't the Muggle part. She might not agree to host the Order's hospital if that were the case. Good luck with her! I'm sure you'll get along well enough with most Weasleys (as long as you eat & sleep enough). What is your take of Fleur, though? Looking forward to hearing from you,
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
You have me intrigued already. I like the first person telling of this story. Good start. Looking forward to the next installment.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Goodness, I liked this so much. Your narrator is such an engaging OC, with an interesting and plausible backstory (and a great name, lol). And it was great to read a happy ending for Snape with a partner who not only was close to him in age but also had a temperament that complemented his so well.
The transfer went very well, and Severus manages to be rather civil. Undoubtedly he will have lapses, and I'm looking foreard to Elizabeth's reaction.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
nice movement through your chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Well written, and easy to read, but I cannot quite believe this soft side of the Malfoys. Not yet--you might still convince me.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
A wise move!Nice interaction between Minerva and Severus. yes, this is how I assume their relationship.I fear for Elizabeth's wellbeing after she silenced the man. One remark: I have heard from Muggle doctors (snort) that bloodloss always looks like far more than it actually is due to its intense colour and how it spreads. As a Healer Elizabeth woudl know of this effect, I think.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Now here's the most believable way I've found so far how and why someone came to rescue Severus! You've woven this very well into canon. And yes, Severus is strong in whatever state one finds him!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!