The Garden
Chapter 7 of 20
reader76Elizabeth and Severus spend some time together in the Malfoy gardens.
ReviewedAfternoon rounds were uneventful. The patients were still settling into their rooms. I introduced myself and Draco to those that didn't already know us. I did a quick exam, and we went over their schedules for potions and therapy. Then, we just spent a few minutes talking with each patient, trying to learn what their biggest concerns were for their recovery. Normally, I wasn't a chatty type of Healer, but this was a special situation.
By the time we were finished, I was fairly drained. I used the Floo to go back to my cottage. I washed up and then changed into a pair of khaki capri pants and a light blue blouse. I brushed my hair out quickly before helping myself to an apple and a glass of water. After a few minutes, I felt refreshed and ready to go check on Severus.
When I reached his door, I knocked softly. "It's Elizabeth."
"On my way," he called out. A moment later, the door opened. I was a bit shocked at the sight before me. He was dressed in a simple white button-down shirt, black pants, and black shoes. His hair was pulled back neatly at the nape of his neck. He looked more rested and relaxed than I'd seen him yet.
"You look rested, Severus. How are you feeling?"
"Better. Honestly, I think the idea of getting outside is quite appealing."
"Well, the air will be good for you. Honestly, it will probably be good for me as well."
"We should go this way. The garden off this sitting room is one of my favorites. Narcissa is quite proud of her gardens, and she puts a great deal of effort into keeping them up."
"That sounds fine. It will be nice to have a tour guide for the grounds." He led me out the doors into a vast and beautiful garden. We talked for a few minutes about the types of flowers, trees, even some discussion of the sculptures Narcissa had commissioned of Malfoy ancestors. Severus was pleasant, and he seemed to be genuinely enjoying himself, though he remained characteristically guarded.
We discussed Draco's first day and what our plans were for the rest of the week in balancing his time. The conversation then moved to the clinic itself.
"How are the other patients?"
"They are getting settled in to their new space. Therapy schedules start in the morning for those impacted. I have some research to do on some of the curses, as I don't have a clear treatment plan for most of the patients yet. Some of the curses and hexes are unfamiliar to both me and the other St. Mungo's Healers."
"May I make a suggestion?"
"Certainly, Severus, other ideas are welcome."
"Don't forget to use the resources at your fingertips. The Malfoy library is extensive, and there is a reference section on dark curses and potions that may contain items that St. Mungo's might not possess. I think even there are some materials that Voldemort himself added to the library. No doubt some of the nastier curses he knew or created were passed to some of his Death Eaters."
"That would be quite helpful. Do you think Lucius would allow me access to such materials?"
"That's a valid concern. However, even if he would rather not grant you access, surely he would allow Draco access. Or me, for that matter."
"Would you be willing to help consult on some of these cases?"
"Yes, though it will be harder without seeing the patients directly."
"Perhaps we could use a Pensieve? Do you know if the Malfoys have one?"
"They do, though some of the Death Eaters had pet curses. If Lucius and I were told who hexed the patients, we might be able to narrow down a list of possibilities; perhaps you and Draco could research from there."
Hope surged through me. His knowledge would be an amazing resource for helping the victims. "That would be so helpful. I was really concerned about some of these cases. I haven't been exposed to that much Dark magic, thankfully, except for this past year. This could really help us with a direction!" In my excitement, I grabbed his hand. "Thank you, Severus."
"Yes, well, Elizabeth, I have much to atone for; anything I can do to help, just let me know."
Realizing what I had done, I flushed bright red. "I'm sorry, I got excited." I couldn't help but notice, however, that I was the one that had pulled away.
"I can tell. Do try and show some decorum in the future, Elizabeth." I looked at him, mortified, until I noticed his smirking.
"Severus! I'm embarrassed enough. That wasn't nice."
He leaned in close and whispered, "I told you that I'm not a pleasant man, Elizabeth."
"I'm not sure I believe you. For all your bluster and snark, you aren't as unpleasant as you would have people believe. And I don't scare easily, Severus Snape." We were now standing nose to nose, eyes locked. My pulse quickened, and my breath felt constricted.
"Is that a challenge, Elizabeth?"
I have no idea what came over me. But this man provoked a reaction in me, both intellectual and physical, and at that moment, rational thought was not driving me.
"No, but this is." I leaned in and kissed him. The kiss was intended to be quick, but I underestimated my opponent. I started to pull away, but his hand slipped into my hair, and I found myself being held in place and kissed back soundly. I gasped slightly, and he deepened the kiss as I put my hands around his shoulders. A few moments passed as we explored each other. My eyes were starting to slip shut when he pulled away sharply.
"Damn." He turned his back to me.
"I'm sorry. I shouldn't have done that."
He turned back to face me. "Nor should I have lost control like that. But there's something else. Lady Malfoy just stepped out into the gardens as we were embracing."
"Oh, no, that's certainly not going to help with the rumors."
"No, it's not."
"I'm sorry."
"Stop apologizing. The kiss wasn't unpleasant. Nor was it unwelcome." He froze, realizing what he had said. He shook his head slightly and continued, "The meddling will be bothersome, but as you astutely pointed out before, it does not come from a bad place. I can handle the Malfoys."
"It was terribly unprofessional of me to do that."
"Elizabeth, this ... " he motioned between us as he spoke, "has been off the professional track from the beginning. I can't imagine myself bantering this way with any of my other past medical professionals as we have. You live here, the Malfoys have been posturing for days, even Kingsley was hinting."
"No!"
"Yes."
I laughed. "Well, you can add the house-elves to that list."
"What about the Weasleys?" He looked more concerned at that than anything so far.
"No, we're safe there. I may have let Fleur think that I was trying to impress Auror Robards with that dress the other night."
"Well, I'm sure he was impressed with your style, but it's unlikely in the way Fleur suspects. Auror Robards prefers wizards." We both laughed. It was a great feeling, as no doubt there had been very little true laughter for either of us in quite some time.
"So, what now?" I asked tentatively.
"Well, obviously, I'm attracted to you. It seems to be mutual." He paused for my reaction. I nodded shyly. "But this is awkward on many levels," he continued. "Truthfully, it's full of pitfalls for both of us. But I haven't felt genuinely drawn to someone in a very, very long time." He closed the distance between us again. "It's not something I intend to ignore."
I smiled. "I like that answer. I suppose the best approach then is just take things slowly to get to know one another, and be as discreet as we can when dealing with the Malfoys. Although, the Healer/patient thing still gives me pause."
"Elizabeth, I am really more your colleague than your patient. This whole arrangement is unconventional. Do not beat yourself up over some ... what was it you said before ... some ridiculous moral code. I assure you; no bounds have been overstepped, and I do not feel you have taken advantage of the situation." He raised an eyebrow at me on the phrase 'taken advantage of'. I blushed again.
"I must admit that part of my willingness to help you with the research on the patients was out of an interest in getting to know you better." He looked at me seriously. I found that once again, I could barely breathe.
"How very Slytherin of you, Severus."
"Yes, and it worked far more quickly than I could have hoped." He stepped in and kissed me again, this time slowly and deliberately. I felt my knees start to tremble. Feeling nervous, I backed out of his embrace. Looking up at him, I could see his black eyes were aflame.
"Slow, Severus. Really, I think it's better for both of us." My words sounded convincing, but I knew that I was trying to convince myself as much as anything.
"Elizabeth, I understand. But at the same time, we aren't teenagers. We aren't beholden to anyone. There's no need to feel guilty."
"It's not guilt, Severus. It's caution. Fear even. The last thing either of us need is to enter into something under extreme conditions and find ourselves hurt."
"Fair enough, I'm not an impulsive man, Elizabeth. Shall we head back to the house?"
I sighed. I was a bit worried about running into Narcissa just now. "I should go back to the cottage. I need to send Lucius an owl about the books and the Pensieve."
"I can speak with him if you like."
"Is that wise? Drawing more attention to us working together on this?"
"If Narcissa saw what I think she saw, I will have a lot more to explain than a Pensieve."
"This is going to be complicated."
"Yes, it is."
"Though, you are right. We're adults and can handle this."
"Is it acceptable that Draco work with me in the morning and you in the afternoon again?"
"Yes. I will go over all their charts after rounds and summarize what I can. Perhaps we can spend some time tomorrow afternoon developing a plan of attack for the research."
"My Healer insists I nap in the afternoons. Join me?"
"Severus ..."
"Yes, Elizabeth?"
"Draco and I will meet you after you have a chance to rest tomorrow."
"After that, you will let me show you the stables, and we shall talk, just the two of us. I'll have the elves prepare us a basket of sandwiches for dinner."
"That sounds nice." We had reached the house.
"Are you going to Floo back to the cottage?"
"No, I think I'll walk tonight. I'm not sure I can handle the speculative looks if we cross Narcissa's path."
"Very well, Elizabeth." He leaned in and kissed my cheek. "I shall see you tomorrow."
"Have a good evening, Severus."
And with that, he stepped into the house. I turned and started back toward the cottage, somewhat dazed. What had just happened? My mind was a whirlwind. I couldn't break through the feeling that this was a bad idea. It was too soon after his injury and the end of the war for him to be thinking straight. What if we were just thrown together and allowing this attraction to take over too quickly? What if it wasn't me he was interested in; what if I was just a soft place to fall?
This wouldn't do at all. I would not be one of those ridiculous swooning women. I needed to find some useful way to occupy my time this evening to take my mind off this. Then it hit me. I would prepare for tomorrow. I could go ahead and gather the needed information on how the patients were attacked and see if I could get names of the Death Eaters that cast the curse.
My first stop was Auror Robards. If he had taken an official statement from the patients, I might be able to get some of the information without bothering them this evening. I sat down at my desk, pulled out a quill, and jotted down a note.
Auror Robards,
Please grant me an interview regarding the information you have collected so far on the curses afflicting the patients; I believe it might assist me in treating them more effectively. In exchange, I can share any information about the type of curses that I am able to obtain through my research.
Healer Elizabeth Prewett
I sealed the envelope and called Orby to take the note to the owlery. Auror Robards wasn't at the Manor this evening, but he might have a shift in the next couple of days.
My next step was summarizing the chart information for Severus. I took the Floo to the hospital fireplace. I was surprised to find Draco seated in the lounge area; he was talking intently with Dean Thomas.
"I am truly sorry for everything that happened to you here, Dean."
"Draco, it is best we all try and move forward. Obviously, a lot of bad things happened. But, don't think I don't know who was slipping nutrient potions into the food that you brought down here. Ollivander wouldn't have survived without those."
"Ollivander suffered greatly."
"Yes, Draco, he did. But adding yourself to the list of casualties wouldn't have helped anyone. Learn from it and move on. You are still a Malfoy. You've still got resources at your disposal most of us can't even fathom. Use it for good.
"Anyway, Draco, are you always going to be this much of a bore? How about I show you a thing or two about Muggle video games in the other lounge?" I could tell Dean was trying to lighten the mood with a little competition. Draco took the bait.
"Really, Thomas? You think you can beat me at anything?" Draco stood and started to follow Dean as he wheeled from the room.
"Draco, can I have a moment?" I called. "Dean, I promise I'll only keep him a couple of minutes."
"That's fine, Healer Prewett. It takes a couple minutes to set up. Draco, prepare to be taught a thing or two."
Draco crossed to me. "Is everything okay, Elizabeth?"
"Oh, yes, it's fine. First of all, you know he's right." I motioned to Dean.
"Yes. Actually, what he said about using the Malfoy influence to help move forward is a good point."
"You'll have to sell that to your father."
"Oh, that will be easy. I'll just have to show him how it benefits us."
"You mean legally?"
"Partially, yes. But honestly, the company has always had very little dealing with the Muggle world. There are vast markets out there that are untouched. He could hire a few people like Dean, and there are no limits to what they could do together."
"Interesting idea, which reminds me Draco, we never did really talk about how your father took the idea of you not going into the business."
"Father's not ready to retire. He just informed me that I'll have to produce an heir that has his business inclinations to make up for 'abandoning him for my altruistic pursuits'." Draco had put on his best haughty air when quoting Lucius. I tried, quite miserably, not to giggle at the sight.
"Lord Malfoy is always thinking ahead, is he not?"
"Yes, he certainly is. By the way, why are you here, Elizabeth?"
"Oh, I've come to make copies of the intake charts. Severus and I were discussing the cases of unknown origin. He mentioned that he and your father might have some inside knowledge that could give us a direction in finding the proper treatment."
"Did he now?"
"Yes, and he also mentioned that the family library might have some useful books."
"Well, Father's personal elf maintains the library. So, if Father consents, I can probably get what we need."
"That would be helpful. Tomorrow afternoon, we'll do rounds, and afterwards, we will spend some time doing some brainstorming with Severus and see if we can come up with a direction."
"Which cases?"
"Edward and Rosalyn seem like good candidates. I have a feeling he might be able to help Professor Sinistra as well, but I don't think there's any rush on that. I want him healed before he undertakes any serious efforts like unlocking someone's memories. Edward's case is likely quite simple if we just knew what was used against him."
"What if we used Edward's memories from the moments before the attack? He might remember something that didn't seem significant to him at the time. You never know what clues we might find."
"That's not a bad idea. We'll keep that as an option. Well, go enjoy yourself with Dean. I think it would be good for both of you to get to know each other." Draco nodded, and I collected the paperwork that I needed and took the Floo back to my cottage.
Orby prepared me a light dinner while I sat down and went through the charts and transcribed the notes that I thought were important. While I was eating, an owl arrived from Molly. I called her via the Floo and confirmed that I was coming over on Sunday. As usual, Molly had a full house, so we didn't talk long. I returned to my work.
A couple hours later, one of the Malfoy owls appeared toting a book and a scroll. Attached was the following note.
Elizabeth,
Draco and I discussed our plan to research the curses together before dinner. He mentioned the reopening wound. There are a variety of curses that could cause this. This book contains a chapter on duplication curses. There are many. There are a few that work on a time-lapse basis. You may want to read over that chapter to help you understand these curses better if you are unfamiliar with them. There is some discussion of reversal, but this does not deal with the uses of the curse directly on people, but rather on objects.
I think I will need to see the wound while open to determine the cause of the curse. It would be even better if I could observe the process occurring (recorded via memory would be fine). If you have the opportunity to gather that information, it would be immensely helpful.
This is only one possibility, but I thought it might give you a direction to approach the problem. Let's discuss tomorrow.
Severus
P.S. Narcissa seemed especially cheerful at dinner, but the inquisition has not yet commenced.
I chuckled. It was good to see him keeping a sense of humor about this. It seemed it was his turn to be the level-headed one, and it was my turn to panic about the situation. Opening the book, I carefully reviewed the marked chapter, making significant notes as I went.
I sent Orby with another note to the Mediwitch onsite that if Mr. Macmillan's wound reopened during the night, I needed her to observe the event. We would take her memory of it in order to help determine the cause.
Tomorrow was going to be a long day with several therapy sessions and a lot of research scheduled. I only hoped it would be a productive day. And I couldn't help but hope for a repeat of those kisses from Severus.
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38 Reviews | 4.45/10 Average
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story and for creating one of the most interesting oc I have encountered in a long time. I particularly liked the insights in all these episodes of their lives you used to wrapp it all up in this final chapter and I do feel sad you only have such a few reviews. This story definitely deserves more.
A nice chapter--you are clearly someone who enjoys describing houses as much as I do! And I really enjoyed Elizabeth's very sage advice to Lucius about using his temporary lack of magic to hone his other strengths, as well as his oblivious reaction. One tiny bit of constructive (I hope) criticism: Lady Evelyn is not more informal than Lady Prince; in fact, it's actually a higher title. Lady Jane means you are the daughter of a duke, marques, earl, or baron. (Second sons only get to be Lord John if their fathers are dukes or marquesses; their older brothers usually get a lower family title as a courtesy.) Lady Doe means she has married into the aristocracy, unless she has married one a second son like Lord John, in which case she is Lady John. So Lady Evelyn would have been born and raised the daughter of a baron at the very least, and thus she outranks Lady Prince, who might have been a gum-snapping chorus girl who caught Lord Prince's eye. And everyone who is not a servant (they say "your lordship, your ladyship") would call her Lady Evelyn if that was her title, not just her friends.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Interesting. Thank you for reviewing. Evelyn is not of noble birth (she was a ward of the Malfoys but not related by blood). So, we'll have to assume either (a) the author didn't do her research, or b) the wizards have slightly different customs. LOL.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
Sorry--I was just trying to be helpful.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
No, it is helpful, thank you. I apologize if my response came off tersely. I was trying to be funny, but I think I missed the mark. In all honesty, I did have to go a bit AU and modify the customs to make the story fit (like why they didn't find another male relative when his grandfather died) but what you've described was an oversight on my part. Thank you for pointing it out, it does help to know the real-world structure. Sorry again if my previous response came out wrong. I wouldn't want to discourage people from helping me learn.
Really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your lovely review. The story is complete (there are quite a few more chapters), and the next chapter is in queue
oh, this story is so wonderful, hopefully Lucius will come to his senses if that is possible, well maybe he is just protective of Severus as Molly is of Elizabeth.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your review. Lucius is acting partially out of concern for his friend, but part of it is just ego. He's feeling weak, and he's trying to flex his muscles. Lucius is going to get worse before he gets better in this story.Molly doesn't have anything against Severus, but the idea of him and her baby sister is just weird to her. She just thinks they are both in over their heads and rushing things. Elizabeth is barely older than Bill, so Molly does tend to mother her a bit too much.
:) oh my....
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
They both needed a bit of distraction, it seems. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
what a lovely distraction. just a little something to clear thier heads eh? oh my...fans self
Several new people are enriching this narration with their own stories. You've woven them all together very well. Its good to know that Draco showed some spine even while they were hosting the Dark Lord. Severus is more relaxed than ever before. A romance will do him immensely good--even if he might deny needing it. It would now help to know how Elizabeth's love life looked back in the States. She's very reserved for a reason, I wager, and not all might be her professional relationship with Severus.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you for your kind review. Draco carries guilt over what happened during the war. We won't delve to far into that, but the friendship with Dean is a good way for him to atone and heal. Severus, being finally free, can consider things that were simply not possible for him before. He can let someone get close to him now, without fearing that it will endanger their lives.Elizabeth's romantic history is touched upon in Chapter 9. She is genuinely afraid that he's not really attracted to 'her', but rather to his savior. That and the Lily thing, combined with her own securities, and she's terribly afraid of eventual rejection.
this is a very good story, I love the way we follow several people and their problems, I love especially following Elisabeth and Severus' budding love
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. I tend to like ensemble pieces. Particularly with an OC, I think it helps develop the character while still giving the reader some of their familiar faces at the same time.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks! I appreciate you letting me know.
This is such a wonderful story. It's nice to see Severus with fresh eyes and I like the other stories about the other injured people and the development of Draco as well. You have a good hand in bringing all the storylines together and in fleshing out all your characters. And what I particularly like is the fact that despite the title it's much more developing as an equal relationship than one in which one is rescued by the other. Well done! You really deserve more reviews.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yes, Elizabeth may not seem to need any rescuing on the surface, but she's got some issues of her own that this experience (if not Severus directly) are helping her come to terms with. Draco as the 'little brother' figure is very good for her.
:) I really like how you're developing Elizabeth and through her Severus as a person we've not yet "met". keep up the good work
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks. Severus is able to reinvent himself a bit in this environment. And because she isn't weighed down by past experience with him, she's able to appreciate him without the confusion that the others witnessing him undoubtedly feel.
Ya know I've had astory in my head for a year now about Severus, a muggle library and Hermione's Cousin/Adopted Sister but every time i write it it comes out all funky andn not how I intended. I am eating this story up because its a similar theme. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter <3
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
The next two chapters are in the queue. It's complete. I may start publishing my next story alongside this one, but I'm still trying to wrestle the ending into place on that one.
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oooh I'm so excited, This looks to be a great start to a grand adventure.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
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Thanks!
oooo - you have a great "voice". please keep up the good work!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your review! I just posted the next chapter this morning, so it will be working its way through the queue.
And now it gets interesting! I wonder whom Elizabeth will have as patients? (I have my suspicions about one of them.) I might wonder why Elizabeth didn't play a role in healing Hermione and the others from Malfoy Manor, but I'm sure there's a good reason. This story has been very well and plausibly set up, and I look forward to its continuation.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
I think your suspicions might be right about one of them. :) There are a handful of other key patients.As for why she didn't show up at Shell Cottage, there is a reason, but it didn't make it into the story. It's yet another reason to dislike Aunt Muriel. Rather than notifying Molly and Arthur to contact Elizabeth, Bill contacted Muriel instead. She did not relay the message to Elizabeth in a timely manner. By the time Elizabeth was informed of the injuries, Fleur and Bill had the situation in hand.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The action picks up a bit in the next chapter.
Oh my. You have certainly laid the groundwork well and set us up for exciting/terrifying events to come - THE battle. I think we can all guess who one of her patients will be. Looking forward to how Elizabeth's side of the story plays out.It's interesting, isn't it, that most of us have an Aunt Muriel in our lives. Maybe not an actual relative, but someone close enough to have an influence on our lives. I like that you have Elizabeth coping with this relationship as you do. People like Aunt Muriel can really pull a person down, but only if that person allows it to happen.Enjoyed your chapter and looking forward to the next with great expectations.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your reivew. Muriel is fairly horrible, and I have not been kind to her in this story. I actually had more about her but ended up cutting her back because I know people are anxious for Severus to enter the story. Elizabeth is used to dealing with people who look at her a bit strangely, having grown up as a witch in a Muggle family. She was loved, but straddling the lines between the two worlds was a challenge and she developed a very interesting type of toughness from the experience. Elizabeth has many faults of her own, but she does not take responsibility for the faults of others.
Hi Elizabeth, so nice hearing about you! You've had quite a life, I must say! Kudos to your Mom for allowing you to stay connected at all! How is she? Now you return just when things are getting the worst imaginable? That's very brave indeed. I think you're safe assuming that Aunt Muriel hates the American part AND the spunky part. Let's at least assume it isn't the Muggle part. She might not agree to host the Order's hospital if that were the case. Good luck with her! I'm sure you'll get along well enough with most Weasleys (as long as you eat & sleep enough). What is your take of Fleur, though? Looking forward to hearing from you,
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
-- Thanks for the review!
You have me intrigued already. I like the first person telling of this story. Good start. Looking forward to the next installment.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Yeah! My first review. I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning here. The next chapter is in the queue. The story is basically complete, but I am working on giving it a final polish.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Excited to hear the next chapter is in queue. And also that the story is complete. I do read in-progress stories but it's nice to know this one has a conclusion. Do you have other stories? Is SS/OC your favorite pairing?
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
This is actually my first story. Elizabeth has been boucing around in my head for close to 3 years now. It just took me a while to put the story to paper.
Goodness, I liked this so much. Your narrator is such an engaging OC, with an interesting and plausible backstory (and a great name, lol). And it was great to read a happy ending for Snape with a partner who not only was close to him in age but also had a temperament that complemented his so well.
The transfer went very well, and Severus manages to be rather civil. Undoubtedly he will have lapses, and I'm looking foreard to Elizabeth's reaction.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Elizabeth is pretty good at keeping herself reigned in, which helps keep things from escalating.
nice movement through your chapter.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!
Well written, and easy to read, but I cannot quite believe this soft side of the Malfoys. Not yet--you might still convince me.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
It's okay, Lucius is still a bastard, I promise. His colors will show.Draco is pretty much broken, and Elizabeth and Severus are helping to rebuild him. Narcissa doesn't see Elizabeth as equal, but then again she doesn't really see Severus as an equal either, even though she does appreciate his assistance. She does want what's best for him (assuming it doesn't conflict with her family's needs), and she does legitimately see Elizabeth as good for him.
A wise move!Nice interaction between Minerva and Severus. yes, this is how I assume their relationship.I fear for Elizabeth's wellbeing after she silenced the man. One remark: I have heard from Muggle doctors (snort) that bloodloss always looks like far more than it actually is due to its intense colour and how it spreads. As a Healer Elizabeth woudl know of this effect, I think.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks for your comment. Minerva would definitely be struggling with her recent interactions with Severus after his true allegiance was revealed.Teehee, yeah, Elizabeth may pay for that later.As for the blood loss issue, Elizabeth's specialty isn't trauma, which is part of the reason she struggles with turning off her emotional response. Her specialty is rehab, which will become more relevant down the road.
Now here's the most believable way I've found so far how and why someone came to rescue Severus! You've woven this very well into canon. And yes, Severus is strong in whatever state one finds him!
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Thanks!
Response from reader76 (Author of To Rescue Her Prince)
Thanks!