You've managed to redeem Ron for his behaviour while camping.  Poor fella didn't know what he was doing, really.

Gah! No next chapter button!  I'm absolutely loving this!

I LOVE this Luna!!  She's amazing!!

~wishes for a Snape to make me shampoo~

I'll try again....'flu jab kicking in. So Draco shuts the lovely Luna up with a kiss and then disses her for her own protection and to convince his goons that he is NOT gay. Hermione thinks that Sev and Remus ARE gay...and I must admit in your AU I also have come to this conclusion and/or that Lupin is camper than the tent the Golden Trio are hiding out in. Ergo I AM Hermione and want...nay...demand to play with the lads. Aaaaand Well Beloved???? Is this a jump forward or backwards? Quaffie my brain hurts. Best wishes, a 'flu germ ridden Ali xxxxx. 

Oh, dear. well, at least Hermione let down Ron succinctly.  And I like the fact that Draco defended Luna (whom he calls Looney) to Crabbe and Goyle - even if he did call her a no one.  Remus' cabin is interesting to say the least, but now Hermione's thinking that Remus is gay - and so is Severus - or at least bi. So I anxiously await the next chapter to see exactly what she finds! 

I can just feel how mad Hermione is.  Ron's not very bright, jumping in the line of fire like that.  What an unexpected surprise for her there in the shower.  If only Remus had known of her discovery, he and Severus could have joined her right there in the shower and explained everything.  And by explained, I mean ... well, you know ;)I love your Luna.  She is going balls to the wall where these Slytherin men are concerned.  Good for her!

Really love this story, although I am a bit confused about what is going on at the moment, so is Hermione, so I am right along with her! Glad she is getting rid of ole sad sack (that would be Ron)!

Oh, that is definitely a mess.

Love that moment when Hermione has the epiphany that remus and Snape are NOT enemies! :)

I'm glad he likes Marmite because I do too and it would be a tad inconvenient when we were snogging etc etc.......But Quaffie.... no garlic or curry....OK? Still loving your Luna-tic by the way.......she is awesome and so kick-ass. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

I like "Uncle Phin"... and Luna is a lot of fun! I like how she keeps Draco wrong-footed.  But... Marmite?? Shudder!

Awww ... I love it when Severus and Remus are on friendly terms.  They just make a nice pair for some reason.You've done a great job showing how miserable things are in the camping world.  And in the end, I expected after the conversation between the two men, for it to be Snape who showed up on her doorstep, not Remus.  Well, I guess looking back, it doesn't definitively say that it is Remus, but that is just her assumption.  Maybe that is the real reason he didn't want to go.  He wouldn't be able to bear leaving her there when she pleaded with him.Can't wait to see what's up next!

Funny how even the gargoyle likes Neville and not the Carrows.Nice of Snape to pair up Draco and Luna on an assignment.And poor Justin ... will they never get his name right?  Too funny.Yikes on the ending.  Good thing I have another chapter available.

Well, that was unexpected.  Where's his wife?  But I do like that Remus and Severus are friends.

Really love this story so far, and I can't wait to learn what is going on between Hermione and Remus

OMG..omg - love this! You've got me all *excited* with the Remus & Hermione thingy (poor Tonks...), as well as your wonderful Luna & Draco energy going on - I just want one of them to jump on the other or something- hehe! I'm not usually moved to pity Ron, but you've got me quite feeling sorry for him - poor thing! Love Neville, and such a spunky, feisty Hermione - wonderful work!

Now then it's oft been said but not directly to me that I am sometimes a couple of chicken legs short in the picnic hamper AND that I see conspiracy theories everywhere AND tend to over analyse.......buuuuut is it possible that it is Severus who has Apparated beside Hermione and not Remus.? I don't think she has actually looked up at him yet. Ooooooh I know, I know....probably totally wrong. But Northerners (like my hubby) call me "lass"...and I'm a mere slip of one.....NOT! And Remus' scent could be on him from the Apparition....and his clothing was dark....and I'll stop now. Normal transmission will now continue as usual. Just loving this Quaffie and pay no mind to my havering. I adore the "lads'" bantering. It is the best in Fanficland. Going for some brekkie now. Night night. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx.

oooh, so that's what's up with Remus.  And him with a wife and baby on the way.  She needs a good distracting Snape.

And there's that handkerchief again! ;)

Something tells me what has transpired between Remus and Hermione was not preplanned.

Oh, my.

Honey....I'm hoooome! Had a great time around the Med etc etc and guess what? I've come back to two great chapters. But c'mon hen....nae buddy..... no' even Severus is allowed tae insult the tartan. He was right about the Festival though. I mean some muppets really did think they could get away with any crap and shite and call it "art" or "performance"......my arse. Anyway I digress as usual. Totally loving the interactions between the characters and you're making me appreciate Luna more. Is the delectable Mr Lupin joining the fray? I do hope so. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.   

Love the fighting between Luna and Draco.  Also liked Severus' gentleness with the owl.  Wonder whose it was?  And now what?

Love the dynamics of all the storylines going on, the digs at the Carrows, Neville flexing his muscles, Snape on the prowl, a flustered Draco, Luna & Draco's bubbling, simmering chemistry, the atmosphere of Edinburgh and - 'familiar animal scent' - dare I hope *waggling eyebrows* - a once-a-month, extra-hairy member of the Order?