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Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory
ofankoma121 Reviews | 6.4/10 (121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
A decade after failing to rehabilitate her parents, Hermione returns home seeking assistance from an unlikely source. A tale of Pensieves and portraits, memory and the mind, forgiveness, hope, and love.
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I'm always glad to see an update of this story!! For Hermione's sake, I hope all goes well with her parents, but I do wonder if the Wilkins will really welcome having their original memories back? I think it would be very hard to integrate 10 missing years and regain any sense of trust in one's self, one's life, or one's family, if they all can be whisked away at one person's whim. Even when done with the best of intentions. In stories where Hermione restores her parents' memories, it seems to me she does it more for her sake than theirs.Seeing Draco as Little Lord Fauntleroy was priceless!And I'm looking forward to more of the mystery of the Sorting Hat!
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Thanks so much,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
! I'm glad to know you're enjoying this story, and I love reading your reactions. Oh, Hermione. Yes... she's stuck between a rock and a hard place with her parents' situation, much like she was when she was eighteen and making that decision the first time around. To me, it's striking how quickly Hermione abandons them in canon, spending her holidays at the Weasleys or Hogwarts. How much time did she actually spend with her folks after the age of eleven? Did she even write them? I'm not sure she knew them well enough to reverse the memory loss for their sake. You just know there are embarrassing childhood portraits of Draco lurking about... And the Sorting Hat mystery returns in Chapter Fourteen (someone else we will be entering Hogwarts).
I've only just discovered this story today and it really is one of the best stories I've read. What a HORRIBLE time for me to discover it, because I want *so badly* to see how the reunion with the Wilkinses goes (not well, I'm assuming...I do hope that their memories will be restored to them but I suspect it's going to be a long battle. You've set it up very well to be exacting and exhausting and demanding!)Also, loving the not-quite-overt sidestory of Severus (and maybe Draco?) working on the Longbottoms, but Hermione doesn't realise yet, does she?I DO want to know what they went potion hunting for. And Astoria is just wonderful!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much for your kind words,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
, and just for taking the time to leave a review. This is my first (and only) long story, and I'm delighted to hear that you're enjoying it. Hermione has a lot to learn about what Severus (and Draco) are up to with their research projects and ingredient hunts. And Astoria? I think our only glimpses of Purebloods in canon are pretty extreme, as you're either wealthy and horrible or poor with a heart of gold. Astoria is, for me, the best of the middle ground. I'll be chucking the next chapter into the queue in a few days, so it shouldn't be too long for you to find out what happens with Hermione's parents (queue dependent, of course). Thanks again!
"Presumably, the postman had chalked it up to some sort of user error and placed it in the neighbour's box instead. The residents of number eleven next door had thankfully chosen to leave the mysterious mail to a nonexistent address on their front steps, abandoning the letters to the elements of a London winter rather than their rubbish bin."Uh huh. And what do THEY know?---OH boy. Draco's in for it. Severus is going to verbally berate him within an inch of his life.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Poor foolish neighbours, not realising there's a whole house filled with people next to them. (As for Draco, yes, I think you're absolutely correct! Severus likely took him to task afterwards... It just happened off stage of the rest of this story.)
<blockquote>A look of bewilderment appeared on his face as his brow furrowed.</blockquote>*snrk* <blockquote>I've just mentioned hip hop to Severus Snape.</blockquote>Hahahahaha <blockquote>"Are you aware of your complete incomprehensibility?" he asked, snapping his book closed.</blockquote>BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *DIES*
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Hee! Thanks,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
!
"...his life would be simpler when she was gone." Perhaps, but much less interesting and much more lonely. I hope he doesn't push her away in pursuit of that simplicity.I love how her mind works with all the possibilities of how to use the Pensieve. But I also understand Severus' reaction to her ideas. Some people would love to get a glimps of a loved one, if only for a moment. Then their minds would have a picture to focus on when they thought of or spoke with that person. Others would have the same reaction as Severus. Torture. It would depend on the individual.Really neat chapter.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks very much,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Severus? Push people away? It's a good thing Hermione is stubborn. He's avoids risks when it comes to people at all costs, which I think explains his reaction here. Pensieves are intriguing, aren't they? I know Jo created them as a way to share a part of the story Harry wouldn't have access to otherwise, but the implications for a device that lets you move in and out of any event? Tremendous.
Very interesting story. It's very complex, like the characters.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I wonder why Severus thinks allowing sensory deprived people a chance to experience that sense for a moment is a bad thing? I'm like Hermione. I'd probably want them to be told something like "be sure and soak as much of it up as you can. You may never have this chance ever again." And he'd still think it's bad?
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I'm with you, although I think people would have different reactions to it. Severus tends to avoids risks and attachments where people are concerned, Hermione will be questioning his answer as well. She's terribly stubborn, you know. ;)
I'm so thrilled to see an update! I loved Severus' assessment of Australians. So many things I want to ask but my infant just woke up from her nap... I can't wait for the next update!!!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I tend to think Severus is a bit of a prude... ;)
Wonderful chapter - I love how Hermione gets caught up in ideas. So glad to see an update!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
She does get swept away, doesn't she? Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
*squeee!* A new chapter! Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! I love how you have Hermione's stream of consciousness just going on and on and on, extrapolating ideas almost out of thin air. It's so her! ^_^
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I'm delighted you're enjoying the story,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
! I do love Hermione at work... She's a force to be reckoned with. 'Hurricane Hermione', one might say? ;)
So happy to see a new chapter! The speculation on how pensieves operate is intriguing. Pity Sev didn't let hermione conintue about the brain's role in sexual response ;-)
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Hee hee... I tend to see Hermione as quite frank and Severus as a bit of a prude, so she may have terrified him had she continued! But she's a stubborn girl, and unlike Severus, she goes after what she wants. ;)
Thank you so much for the update, I loved it.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I'm glad you're enjoying it,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review. (The next update is in the queue!)
Loved the update. Neville should grow a spine and ask Hannah out before someone else beats him to it, though maybe a bit of old fashion jelousy will kick him into action? I love the peaceful scenes of Draco and Severus brewing, and I think I will hold on to the image of Draco feeding the peacocks warm milk:-))
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Ah! Poor Neville. I love him so much, but he's not exactly a sexually confident fellow, is he? Jealousy, you say? (Begins perusing later chapters to see if it would work...)I LOVE the albino peacocks at the Malfoys'... really, how ridiculous can you get?
I've just read everything you've posted of this story and I'm quite enjoying it. I love the tidbits of information you've woven in that one would expect to be canon (the inventor of Obliviate!), and Astoria and Hermione as friends is wonderful. Keep up the good work - this is wonderful.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much! I really like Astoria - all we've got in canon are terrible pure-blood aristocrats and lovely blood traitors, but Astoria is, in my mind, the best of all the well-bred aristocracy (and maybe the only person alive who happily deals with Draco and Narcissa and Severus and the world at large). On the Obliviate origins story, that one actually comes from JKR herself! When I started this, I thought I should double check what I knew from canon on all sorts of memory issues - the Sorting Hat, the Pensieves, et cetera - and I found a few other things that she made up in her extra writings.
lovely update. thanks for the "domestic" scenes with Ron and Neville and than again with Draco and Severus.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much! That makes me think of Samuel Johnson, who said that "to be happy at home is the end of all human endeavor." Hermione's building two little families of friends now that she's back in England.
Hermione, I think, has just crossed the line into being an unofficial member of the family!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
At least in Scorpius' eyes! (And, really, aren't those the most important ones?)
Shades of Hogwarts Potions class. *grin* I like that library, by the way. Is there any way I can get a library card for it? You know, if this were a perfect world, Hermione's work would help cure the Longbottoms. *grin* Excellent chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more. ^_^
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Potions class is much more pleasant for all involved when Neville's not threatening to explode a cauldron! Hmm... the Longbottoms' health problems being related to Hermione's work? Hmm...As for the Malfoy Manor library, it is (in essentials) my favourite manor home library - the one at the Biltmore Estate in the US. Dark wood, the perimeter balcony, the fireplace, the spiral stairs... it's gorgeous! I'm also quite partial to Severus' library, but it'll be a few chapters before we get to see it.And as for more, it'll be coming out much faster as soon as I'm knocked out of the drabble rounds - so... probably after this week! (They're all fantastic.) Now I'm off to read your latest chapter.
All these little conversational traps. Children don't have a clue. Lovely chapter, thanks!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
They don't, do they? I like the thought of the Malfoys reclaiming the most terrible space in their home with the innocent play of children. Thanks for a lovely review!
Oh, Scorp is so, so sweet. Also, really liking the interaction over the potions :)
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks! I have high hopes for Draco after DH. I think he's still got an ego the size of England to deal with, but I like to think he'd make really different choices with his own son. (There's much brewing to come!)
I can just see the nurturing side of Draco Malfoy as he pours out dishes of warm milk for the peacocks.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
The possession of albino peacocks ranks pretty high on the 'The Malfoys did WHAT?!?' List.
I love this story, one of the best I've read for a long time! The dialog is fantastic. I can't wait for the rest of it!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Oh, thank you very much, Arianna! I'm so glad to know you're enjoying this story. (It's my first one, so I'm still a bit nervous about how everything comes across.) I tend to work dialogue before anything else... it's my favourite stuff to write. As for the rest? The next chapter's in the queue!
He's hilarious.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
A Snape who's lived in (relative) peace for a decade? I think a bit would have to sneak by!
Another captivating chapter. Christmas at the Burrow sounded fantastic! I feel tired just reading about Hermione`s description of her hectic two weeks at work.Scorpius is so adorable! Hermione would make a nice Archibald, for sure. ;)Thank you and hope a new chapter is just around the next update.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I love holidays in general, Muggle or otherwise. All of our quirky traditions come out then, from food to songs to family habits.Thanks! I often wonder with the JKR's epilogue... about Neville and Draco (and Scorpius), most particularly. They're just flitting around the edges of it, but we never really see them... And yes, it's in the queue!
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"Indeed, Archibald?" *snort* What a funny idea! :o)
I really like this story. The interaction of all concerned is great, and I like the backstory you have given all of them.
Author's Response: He's giving her what she wants without giving her what she wants, right? He still won't call her 'Hermione.'
Thanks so much for reviewing! Yes, I tend to think the question 'What did the Slytherins do after the war?' is an interesting one to explore...
I think I prefer "Reginald". *grin* I love the fact that Snape feels loose enough to joke with Hermione and converse with a three year old. And I have to agree with Fleur. The school does need to find some other way of sorting students into their houses. ^_^
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
So... now for the swottiest response I will probably ever give: Reginald and Archibald are the names of two poets in a Gilbert & Sullivan operetta called Patience. It's Reginald who sings about asphodel in an aria of his, so I thought it only fitting that Severus (as a potions master) keep 'Reginald' for himself, passing 'Archie' over to Hermione.And the thought of Severus with a child he actually likes (but still doesn't know what to do with) amuses me to no end.