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Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory
ofankoma121 Reviews | 6.4/10 (121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
A decade after failing to rehabilitate her parents, Hermione returns home seeking assistance from an unlikely source. A tale of Pensieves and portraits, memory and the mind, forgiveness, hope, and love.
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Indeed, Archibald? Hee. I really liked that chapter.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks! (They're finally loosening up a bit!)
I love the banter with Teddy reporting on his first term at Hogwarts, so sweet. Severus with Scorpius is pretty cute too, I love the 'mutual lack of understanding' that still works well for them. Hermione's take on the cake story probably won her a point or two in Sev's books. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much for sharing your observations! Yes, I'm glad that Teddy's got a village of people looking out for him. I also rather enjoy the thought of Severus 'communicating,' so to speak, with a child he actually likes, and think it would be quite the sight to see! As for points? Oh, yes, she won them big time. (Not that he'll admit it... yet.)
Again a wonderful update, I love that Severus now has a new life with friends and what must be considered a family in the Malfoys, he sure deserves it. Scorpius and Teddy were wonderfully portraited, they were just the rigth "spice" to add to the story to give it more depth and make it even more entertaining to read.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Severus and the Malfoys are quite interesting to me... In the worst of times, when no one believed in him, Narcissa turned to him for help, honestly believing that he would be able and willing to help her child. I have to think he took some comfort in that. So, yes, I (happily!) give him a family, and I like to think that canon supports it, had JKR allowed him to survive the final battle. (And I'm glad you like the kids! I like them in their own right, but I also think you can tell a lot about people by how they interact with children.)
They're very slowly coming to some sort of understanding. And Hermione must have been secretly shocked to see Severus handling Scorpius (such alliteration! Ick!)I wonder why he agreed to meet her on his birthday? Is he just one of those types where his birthday's just another day to him?
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Finally, they're getting there... Ha! Yes, I do think she was soundly surprised to see Severus and Scorpius speaking sociably and sympathetically (albeit sans understanding). ;)As for his birthday, I think Astoria summed it up pretty well – he's not particularly comfortable as the centre of attention.
I *love* their banter! So witty and adorable -- and I love how Severus interacts with little Scorpius!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much! They're such verbal people, so it's quite the challenge to write their conversations! (I love watching people who are not naturally good with children interact with the kids in their lives. There are so many different ways to be awkward with a toddler, but this one seemed to suit Severus.)
Hermione had some good points, all of which were summed up by the answer, "The wizarding world is far too preoccupied with debts." Amen! I did notice too, that Snape employed his Slytherin sneakiness again, and turned the tables on the debt/repayment scheme by making Hermione think that it was her kindness instead of his debt, that was more affected by the repayment. There's a lot of Christmas hope, there too.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Yes, JKR spends a lot of time dwelling on debt and sacrificial love, doesn't she? And, yes, Severus is a clever fellow. ;) After the dismal pictures we had painted of Harry's childhood Christmases with the Dursleys, I think it's safe to say he would really, really love family holidays and ensure the best of them for his own kids.
Were you planning on haranguing me at every step of the process, verbally assaulting me and slowly eliminating my will to live?" Well that does sound just like Hogwarts doesnt it?
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Ha! Too true!
Boy, Hermione and Severus really went round and round about the gift/debt thing. It has been said that a true gift can only be given anonymously with no desire for anything in return. After listening to their conversation, I believe this is true. I'm sure if Snape could have given Hermione her lessons anonymously somehow, he would have done so. As much to be rid of her as anything else, considering how combative she is around him. She really needs to get control of herself where he is concerned.I am really enjoying this story.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
There's an awful lot of talk in the HP series as a whole on debts and obligations, and a great deal of it concerns Severus. Finally free from both his masters, I imagine he's done a lot of thinking on the subject. Hermione and Severus will rehash a good deal of this later on once they've learned to trust each other a bit more, but they're still pretty wary of one another now. As for Hermione being combative? Yes, I think you're right! She's under the impression that she's doing him a kindness, though, a mistake she's made before (cough, cough, S.P.E.W., cough).(I'm glad to hear you're enjoying this! I sometimes worry that a conversation like this between our pair will turn readers away, but it seems to me that Severus and Hermione - more than almost any other pair - need a meeting of minds and souls as well as bodies and lips.)
LOL. A nice crack at Dumbledore, for sure, and unfortunately, quite true as well. ;) I have to admit, though, that I am a bit perplexed by the explanations about life debts and such. Would definitely be interested to know where that will lead to later. The way you have set up the story really makes me anticipate the development of the relationship between HGSS. Thank you and looking forward to more, and hopefully, soon!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Ha - 'Dark Lord'? Yes! As to life debts, it's always struck me as odd just HOW MUCH emphasis is put on it in the series and how poorly explained it is. One thing's certain, though - Dumbledore and Voldemort say a lot about the subject, but most of it doesn't line up with what we know actually happened! Hermione and Severus will have a thorough hashing out of this at a later date, but for now, this is about where their level of trust with one another stops the conversation. They're getting there... slowly, but surely!
Response from tenoh27 (Reviewer)
Thanks for the message. I gave the genre category another look and noticed that romance is not a part of it. While not a must - as long as the story is great - I am wondering whether this story will include a romance between HGSS. (No matter, anticipating more).
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Ah, my apologies! I think I probably got a bit lazy on all the genre markings and I missed marking 'romance' on two of the chapters. Really, I think it's fair to say this covers a bit of everything - I'm always tempted to mark about six or seven genres - but a SS/HG romance is most definitely one of them. (This story is as long-winded as I am, so we're in it for the long haul, just as Hermione and Severus are! And as well-suited as I think they are, they've got a hefty history between them that needs sorting out first.)
I bet she'll be able to accomplish a lot in that time.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Will she ever!
At some point, it isn't idealism or even ignorance, but a deliberate withholding of evidence by the wizarding world, especially on things like debts. Makes you understand why things rarely change. Well done.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Oh, absolutely! What Dumbledore tells Harry about debts - and about Snape's life debt to James in particular - is very, very different from what we know from Snape's memories in the Pensieve with Dumbledore. Severus and Hermione'll revisit this topic in much greater depth later on... they can really only go so far on this subject now. When they trust each other a bit more, they'll have it out.
"Because I did survive decades under the thumb of a Dark Lord," he assured her with a growing smirk, "and worked for Voldemort as well, so—" Cute! Severus has a rather developed sense of humor. ^_^
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
You laugh or you'll cry, right? I think Severus has an arsenal of distancing tools at his disposal - humour among them.
Response from MsTree (Reviewer)
It's also a telling reference to Bumblebore! ^_^
"Because I did survive decades under the thumb of a Dark Lord," he assured her with a growing smirk, "and worked for Voldemort as well, so—" Bwahaha!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
He calls 'em as he sees 'em!
A wonderful update as usual. I am getting so hooked on this story that everything has to stay on hold while I read the next update:-))
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Oh, you're so kind,
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
. Thanks! This makes my day!
Love the more illuminating talk about Houses and their finer qualities (or lack thereof). Neville, and even Hermione, would have made fine Hufflepuffs. If there is someone well suited for all Houses, Hermione would be it. Being a Dr/Healer suits Hermione as well as the option of being an advocate. Thank you for another beautiful chapter.
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks for another beautiful review! Yes, the house talk is often reduced to its simplest terms (bravery, intelligence, hard work, cunning), but it's so much more than that! Each house also has its vices, but they're ignored in the books - except for Hufflepuff and Slytherin, again, who we're told are 'not particularly bright or special' and 'the only place where evil wizards emerge from.' And when it all comes down to it, why isn't there someone at Hogwarts telling the kids that they're individuals, free to make their own choices and be their own people? They're eleven! You tell them that being in a certain house makes them act a certain way, and most will fulfill those expectations. [Stepping down off of soapbox now.]
Wow, when I read what the Hat said about Slytherin and Hufflepuff, I felt like chugging a rotten apple at it too. Now that you mention about the real canon Hat, you are quite right about its biases as well. I think Hufflepuff is a very fine House, and it`s definitely true that the House is too often looked down upon. Slytherin is also much maligned in some cases. This story is shaping up to be a very fine story and I am really happy to know that it`s completed. Now on to the rest. Thank you!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a message - I love hearing people's reactions to things! Yes, the really sad thing about the Hat's song here is that it's only a step or two further than the songs we heard it sing in canon. (Or the remarks people made about Hufflepuff and Slytherin in canon!) Gryffindor and Ravenclaw escape unscathed, and there's a definite explanation as to why. (It'll just take us some time to get there!)
OMG, Snape doesn't know! How will he react??!!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I think she forgot who she was dealing with when she revealed all to Draco. He's been raised in Slytherin; he knows how to play his cards close to his chest. Oh, Severus'll react, all right - next chapter!
What a fascinating and wonderfully done chapter, looking forward to more! Thank you!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thanks so much! I do adore Narcissa...
Well, it's good that Cissy opened her big mouth, then, isn't it?
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
I adooooore Narcissa. (Particularly after DH.) Draco as well, but I just feel like there are a thousand interesting untold stories in her.
Lovely writing,plotting, & characterization! Can't wait for the update!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Thank you so much! They're such fabulous characters to play around with. (The next two chapters are already in the queue, but it's over 60 in line now, I think. The admins here are rock stars.)
Such revelations. I do wonder what Narcissa is up to... And what was that with Draco?
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Uff. Yep, there's definitely a story with Draco. It'll all come to light eventually!
What a brilliant chapter. Here we finally see the glimpse of a grown woman who use her brigth mind for serious research. I feel there is a story to why Draco only do research? I hope you will tell us? Not to mention what he was trying to get Severus to observe, my curious mind needs to know:-))
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Hermione's a smart girl! I think whatever she does and wherever she does it (magic or Muggle), she's coming at it from a unique perspective and will be able to see things other people miss.Poor Draco... I'm afraid there's a story there. Hermione'll learn what in due time!(In case I haven't said this lately, thanks so much for leaving your reflections on things. It's fascinating to see the reactions of a thoughtful reader!)
Well that was a very illuminating dinner for all involved then wasnt it? I do enjoy Narcissa steam rolling over her guests. Tee heePS: are you going to tell us what happened when Draco had actual patients? I sense there is a story there
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
Narcissa's a formidable woman!(Draco's patients? Yes, I will. There's definitely a story there, poor fellow.)
Perhaps Hermione's work will garner some respect with Narcissa, perhaps not since it's Muggle work. Perhaps Hermione's plight will gain some sympathy from Narcissa because of the length of trials, perhaps not since they're Muggles.Oooh, Purebloods. One never knows how to handle them!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
No kidding! Dinner with Narcissa would have me quaking in my boots. (Although Hermione does fare fairly well with one pureblood - Astoria.)
I havent made up my mind if I think its a good thing Hermione is staying with the Potters or not. I can go either way. I am however very pleased that Prof Snape has assigned his new student home work though!
Response from ofankoma (Author of Ars memoriae, or The Art of Memory)
She's only agreed to stay with the Potter clan... for now. As for Severus, he's bided his time long enough!