La Chasseresse
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Hermione decides to leave Hogwarts behind and live in the wizarding world by her rules.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for La Chasseresse
I have to agree with HBAR, the only thing to make the pain of labour bearable is the end result. So knowing your baby will be whisked away without even seeing her must be unbearable. So terribly hard for Hermione right now. The end part when she hears Alice crying is just heartbreaking. Very realistically written, I look forward to the aftermath now.
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Thank you very much! There will be a lot of emotional scars deep inside Hermione for a long time.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
I think it was very important for them to spend this time together. It was healing beyond words wasnt it?
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Yes, it was definitely a step in the right direction :)Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Yes a little less pressure fo the first date please! Greasy fries are an excellent choice. 
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
I thought getting Hermione out of her "wardrobe shield" would be the best thing for them.Thanks!Livvy
Sorry I have been missing in action of late. Your story is still bookmarked. I will get caught up!Holy cats this was all sorts of emtional pain off the scales, for both of them I think. I cannot help but think it was good for Hermione. She has kept so much inside her. That isnt good. He knew he had to remain calm and diffuse the situation before she remembered she was a witch and blew him straight to hell. This is the problem with magical folk. Just because you can blow a vast for example to bits and then repairo it doesnt mean you should. It always stikes me how violent the magical world is.
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Yes! I remember in DH (the movie) where Harry wouldn't let Hermione have her wand when Ron came back. Egads! But, Hermione had a great deal of rage that she needed to get out and direct it at the person who deserved it.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Trust Luna to be insightful enough to understand how things will work out when Alice meets her father for the first time - she is a true Ravenclaw. Lovely chapter, I'm really enjoying this.
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Thank you, Luna will be the one who will keep her head about her when it all comes out.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Sorry I'm a bit late in on this, but better late than never, right? I'm almost speechless. This is such a fantastic first chapter. My jaw dropped several times. Brilliant, simply brilliant. I can't wait to read on.
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it!Thanks for reviewing,Livvy
Wow. I'm looking forward to when he puts it all together.
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Yes, it will be quite the awakening for him.Thanks!Livvy
Thank you for the update!You've handled this chapter so well. I'm surprised she didn't have any flashbacks during her "first time", but glad to see her find and assert her power over him. Well done!Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
Thank you! I think Part 2 will answer your concerns about "flashbacks" or any uncomfortableness. After all, all they've done was oral/frotting *snerk*. Nothing like that was a part of her violation. Full on penetration will be the big hurdle. So, I envisioned that Snape, being so conscientious, would want to "walk her through" some sexual pleasures to release some fears and tension so they can move to the next step.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Oh, here I was thinking she would be revealed! Then again, it would be too early in the game wouldn't it?The emotions were raw and raging in this chapter and I think you handled his almost loss of comfort in him no longer knowing who it was. When will the clues about Hermione in the strange clothes and her 'blossoming figure' in her final year add up? As well as her final words to him? I anticipate seeing how you manage to reveal Hermione as 'the girl in the burlap sack' to him!
Response from livvy6 (Author of La Chasseresse)
As a man, Snape will be somewhat obtuse, although, with a little help, he'll start putting pieces together. :)Thanks!Livvy