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Fallen Sparrow
Hanagasume178 Reviews | 7.79/10 (178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 22 Favorites )
Considered pariah by Wizarding society, and spurned by those she had held most dear to her during her time of need, Hermione turns to Severus Snape to guide her through her struggle with the darkness and her desire for revenge.
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Fallen Sparrow
Not a bad beginning. I'll just have to see what the rest of the story brings. Post soon. ^_^
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
I will update as soon as the other stories/chapters I have in queue are through. Thanks!
Wow Brandy you sure got me speechless for a few minutes. I am glad that Harry and Snape knew she what she was under, I am surprised that Mad Eye didn't recongize him being an ex Auror and all. I can't wait to see how this story develops.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
I assume by the stars it was a good speechless :p Thank you and I hope it continues to interest you.
Response from Marty21 (Reviewer)
yes it was a very good speechless *grins*
Did Severus also recieve an award?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Lol, I can't even remember :p If I didn't write it in, we can just just assume he did :D
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Lol, I can't even remember :p If I didn't write it in, we can just just assume he did :D
Great story. Thank you!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Great ending. These two deserve a peaceful life. I hope Hermione is able to forget Dumbledore even exists. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing and posting. 5 stars!!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks, glad you enjoyed this story.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks, glad you enjoyed this story.
And so the happy ending begins ... yay! And even though we have left Dumbledore behind, I know he will get what he deserves. Hermione can wash her hands of him and sleep at night knowing she was the bigger person. But, life will come back to bite him in some way. And everyone wins. Nice ending.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks for all of the reviews and for following. Glad it was enjoyable.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks for all of the reviews and for following. Glad it was enjoyable.
What! No evil ending for Bumblebore? The man deserves some comeuppance! Come on! Just one more chapter! Please????? ^_^
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
I'm afraid not. I wrote this story almost 2 years ago now, and I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to do it justice now. Thanks for following!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
I'm afraid not. I wrote this story almost 2 years ago now, and I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to do it justice now. Thanks for following!
You have taken us on a wonderful ride. I like your Severus and Hermine very much. Thank you for such a great read!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for this story, Brandy. It has been a joy to follow as both Severus and Hermione fought their way through all manner of sad and difficult challenges.Here at the end I like the way you showed Hermione still fighting the darkness inside, and Severus offering his wisdom and support. Eventually she will be able to leave those dark thoughts behind, and the memory of Dumbledore's ruthless way of treating her will have less and less power to affect her life.I think the two of them will have a very happy life as husband and wife, and maybe even a few little Snapes to complete their family. Thank you again for sharing your gift for writing with us.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks for following, and for all of your lovely reviews. I am glad you haven't asked for a sequel - sometimes things are best left to the imagination (particularly when the author is too lazy to write a follow-up).
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks for following, and for all of your lovely reviews. I am glad you haven't asked for a sequel - sometimes things are best left to the imagination (particularly when the author is too lazy to write a follow-up).
I read this story a few years ago on FF.net, I believe, and I just had to reread it when you started posting it here. It's SUCH a good story! Thanks for sharing again!!!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks, glad you found it enjoyable, BOTH times.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks, glad you found it enjoyable, BOTH times.
very good. i really love this story and can't wait to read more. i actually thought harry was going to come crashing thru the door for being turned away.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Not this time. Thank!
I've been dipping in & out of this story for a long time &, like some of the other reviewers, am not sure if I've reviewed before - if not, then it's very remiss of me so I'm now rectifying it :-) In fact I don't think I've reviewed on many of your fics at all, despite reading most & being a big fan of yours. You write so incredibly well & make both Snape & Hermione very believable every time, whatever the situation. Now I'm really looking forward to keeping up with this particular fic & to seeing where it all goes :-)
this is a great fic, I don't remember if I reviewed before, but I love your story
Bad, bad author! No triple chocolate chewy biscuits for you! And yes, I have a recipe for triple chocolate chewy biscuits. (Best things for chasing off Dementor caused depression. We just don't give them to anyone under the age of 13.) ^_~
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Sorry, it had to be done. Fortunately for me, I dont eat chocolate :p Thanks for the review.
Response from MsTree (Reviewer)
*GASP* Blasphemy!!! How do you ward off the Dementor depression without medicinal chocolate? ^_~
your bad? Nope, your excellence!You even showed the kindness to let the couple finish their physical union AND exchange some pending emotional talk. Thanks for a wonderful chapter!I haven't reviewed before, I think. I was having some trouble with your Dark!Hermione here -- it isn't showing explicitly before she contemplates all those death scenarios. Maybe I missed some hints. The pair so gradually developing a relationship, that's expertly done. I also like Draco; he's definitely matured beyond being his father's son. It was about time, but some simply never do.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks for the review. As to the dark!Hermione, it was never supposed to be really explicit until that chapter, but there were some subtle hints of it in the lead-up to killing Greyback, and then in the chapters after that. It was never meant to be overt.
What a good cliffhanger it is too. This was sad yet hopeful chapter. Sad to hear about his mother and her parents and yet hopeful to hear Severus talk about the future and see their relationship continue. Looking forward to more.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Yep, more is already on the way in the queue. Thanks for the review.
There was a wide range of emotions in this chapter. Sweet, sad, pensive and worrisome. I have a feeling the next chapter's going to be something else entirely!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Perhaps, but then again, you may just find that you like the next chapter as well, but for a totally different reason. Thanks!
Oh man, homemade dinner from garden grown vegetables...and they leave it to ruin on the table?!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Lol - yes. This chapter is all about home-grown veges gone to waste. Thanks for the review.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Why yes, my libido has left. Went to join my muse in Madagascar.I'm sure you can tell...
Woo Hooooooo! Smut at last. Color me a happy fangirl. Does the sex help keep the darkness at bay for HErmione?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Lol. Does sex cure cancer? Thanks for the review.
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Thats a definate NO then. Gottcha.
When Severus said "get out" I thought he was kicking her out of his home, not just the room. I totally freaked!
It absolutely WAS to my satisfaction! Bravo - I'm off to read that again!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Hahah, not sure it was worth reading more than once, but thanks for the review.
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! Another chapter! And lemons, at that! Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! ^_^
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
More citrus on the way. Just a little. Thanks for reviewing.
it was nice they had some happynes in those glum times, hopefully they will have years to enjoy liofe and eachother
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
It's always nice to be able to find a connection with someone no matter the circumstances. Thanks for reviewing.
Yes, that was perfect. ;-) It's so nice that they came together not just out of need but because of understanding as well.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)
Thanks for the review. More in queue!