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Fallen Sparrow

1: Chapter 1: Fall From Grace

2: Chapter 2: Touched by Darkness

3: Chapter 3: Waiting in Shadows

4: Chapter 4: A Slippery Slope

5: Chapter 5: The Damaged Soul

6: Chapter 6: Train of Thought

7: Chapter 7: Great Expectations

8: Chapter 8: Spiralling Downwards

9: Chapter 9: Pensieve Memories

10: Chapter 10: Trials & Error

11: Chapter 11: A War of Words

12: Chapter 12: On Retribution Road

13: Chapter 13: Mind Mapping

14: Chapter 14: A Dangerous Mindset

15: Chapter 15: Street Reconnaissance

16: Chapter 16: Bloody Violence

17: Chapter 17: Auld Lang Syne

18: Chapter 18: The Winter Tempest

19: Chapter 19: A New Year's Eve

20: Chapter 20: Sins of the Father

21: Chapter 21: Grim Old Discussions

22: Chapter 22: Den of Iniquity

23: Chapter 23: Waiting in the Wings

24: Chapter 24: Worst Nightmare

25: Chapter 25: An Eloquent Silence

26: Chapter 26: Conflict Resolution

27: Chapter 27: Eye of the Storm

28: Chapter 28: Manifestation of Chaos

29: Chapter 29: In the Line of Fire – Part One

30: Chapter 30: In the Line of Fire – Part Two

31: Chapter 31: Waiting Games

32: Chapter 32: Survival of the Fittest

33: Chapter 33: A Master Manipulator

34: Chapter 34: A Time of Peace

Fallen Sparrow

Hanagasume

178 Reviews   |   178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 22 Favorites )

Drama Romance Alternate Universe Friendship Potions Under Duress 75,909 Words 34 Chapters Complete
Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Albus Dumbledore Draco Malfoy Fenrir Greyback Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Arthur Weasley Other Canon Witch/Wizard Bellatrix Lestrange Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

Considered pariah by Wizarding society, and spurned by those she had held most dear to her during her time of need, Hermione turns to Severus Snape to guide her through her struggle with the darkness and her desire for revenge.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fall From Grace

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Touched by Darkness

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Waiting in Shadows

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Slippery Slope

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Damaged Soul

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Train of Thought

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Great Expectations

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Spiralling Downwards

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Pensieve Memories

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Trials & Error

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: A War of Words

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: On Retribution Road

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Mind Mapping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Dangerous Mindset

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Street Reconnaissance

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bloody Violence

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Auld Lang Syne

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Winter Tempest

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A New Year's Eve

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Sins of the Father

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Grim Old Discussions

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Den of Iniquity

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Waiting in the Wings

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Worst Nightmare

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: An Eloquent Silence

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Conflict Resolution

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Eye of the Storm

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Manifestation of Chaos

Chapter 29: Chapter 29: In the Line of Fire – Part One

Chapter 30: Chapter 30: In the Line of Fire – Part Two

Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Waiting Games

Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Survival of the Fittest

Chapter 33: Chapter 33: A Master Manipulator

Chapter 34: Chapter 34: A Time of Peace


About Hanagasume

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Hanagasume

Member Since 2008  |  31 Stories  |  Favorited by 246  |  119 Reviews Written  |  1,704 Review Responses

I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion. 


I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR. 


I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.


SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!

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Reviews for Fallen Sparrow

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10/10

HBAR

I am glad that Severus didn't argue with Draco and Luna about taking shifts.  It won't do him any good to waste away at her bedside.I had half expected Harry and Ginny to pitch a fit about being turned away.I love that he is making nice, quiet, domestic plans for the two of them.  It shows that he hasn't given up hope.  I don't expect that she will care that he planned their future while she was away.Nice chapter, if a bit sad.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks for the review.

10/10

braye27

Playing that sort of waiting game is exhausting.  It was a good thing that Draco and Luna came to Hermione's room.  I think Severus needed those few moments to talk...  I hope Hermione will soon wake up.  If anything happens to her...Great chapter, m'dear.Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks Beth. Hermione and Severus have good friends :)

8/10

snagerlover50309

so I'm a little confused love the story don't get me wrong but is she a teacher now? or an aid or just staying at the school?

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Just staying at the school - you kind of have to keep reading to find out more.

Response from snagerlover50309 (Reviewer)

Well here I go on to the next chapter then!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

I approve of this motion!

10/10

snagerlover50309

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heheh, thanks! 

10/10

MsTree

Essential to the plot or not, it is still an excellent chapter, albeit an emotional one. ^_^

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

There needed to be a glimpse of emotion :p Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

Severus49

Great battle scene! A lot of emotion and drama and the love between Severus and Hermione came across wonderfully.  Glad the nasty batard's dead!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh thanks for the review!

10/10

MsTree

And once again, you evil thing you, you leave us with a cliff-hanger! Oooooh! *grin* Well, at least the story's being updated again, so I really can't complain now, can I? Well, yes I can. ^_^

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh, but you'll note that there are fewer waits between chapters these days. I am trying to get the story out as fast as possible. Thanks!

10/10

braye27

Great battle scene!  And I could follow all the action without getting lost.  Go you!What curse was it that hit Hermione?  And who cast it?  Did Voldemort have time to get in a quick Sectumsempra before he died?Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heheh, thanks Beth. But hey, as to the who's and what's - that is a tale for another chapter. My lips are sealed.

10/10

HBAR

I go back and forth between loving dark Hermione, and cringing about her.  I think as long as Snape is there with her, she is under control so it is okay.I can't believe that Lucius was responsible for Snape's mother's death.  Well, yes, I can believe it, but no wonder he wanted to be the one to finish him off.I do hope both Draco and Hermione are okay *gulp*

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

All will be well - it's just you'll have to wait to see what happens. Thanks!

10/10

Dungeon_Butterfly

I love this story!! Can't wait to read more!!

10/10

HBAR

I have no problem with the AK being sent towards Lucius, if that is what happened, but I hope it was Snape, or Hermione, or anyone other than Draco, really.  He may wish his father dead, but he shouldn't have to be the one to do it.I thought Hermione showed a lot of restraint with Moody.  More than he deserved, at any rate.The battle seems to be going well, but there is still time.  I do hope this tale has at least some semblance of a happy ending.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh, well the next chapter will be along soon, so I guess you wont have to wait too long for the end to come :) Thanks for reviewing. 

0/10

StarryEyedNoOne

Ohhh... Hermione so threw that lol.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh, yep. Thanks for reviewing. 

0/10

esmelle

I cant wait for more! Great battle scene. It seems appropriate for Hermione to be the one to get rid of Bellatrix. Like the tender moments between Hermione and Severus as well. Great job.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

I actually wish I had written Neville disposing of her instead. It would have been fitting. Thanks for reviewing! 

10/10

MsTree

*phhhhbt* You Blue Meanie! Leaving us hanging like this. It'd better not be too long, if you take my meaning. *wink wink nudge nudge* ^_^

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Sorry to leave you hanging, but the next chapter is already in queue - shouldn't be too long. Thanks for reviewing. 

10/10

braye27

‘Avada Kedavra!’  Who cast the Killing Curse?  Toward whom was it cast?  There are any number of players on both sides who could have fallen... or no one.  My first reaction was to think that Hermione may have cast it against Lucius.  Then I thought it might have been Severus against Lucius.  Then I considered if it might have been Draco casting it against his own father.  Could dumbledore have cast the curse?  Then I realized that we don't yet know if anyone had actually been hit by the curse.  I can't wait for the next chapter to post.  Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Lol, well I am sorry that you have to wait, but it just happened. Thanks for reviewing. Hopefully it will be on the way soon! 

10/10

magicalpresence

Squueeeeeeeeee He loves her!  Yaaay - but also OH NOOO for the battle.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh, thanks for reviewing. 

10/10

mimmom

wow!

10/10

MsTree

And the battle is joined. 3:1 odds, eh? Not bad. Not bad at all. ^_^

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Not the worst odds. Thanks for reviewing. 

10/10

braye27

This is it!  I don't know whether to be glad or sad that Lucius knows that Severus and Hermione are together!  A big part of me wishes that none of the Death Eaters knew that they were at the Minsitry, but he definitely betrayed a sense of shock when he saw her.Whatever happens, It means so much that they were able have that glorious moment together and were able to declare their love for each other.  Thanks for the well written angst!Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks for the reviews. I don't really know how I feel about this fic now that it is coming towards the end, but whatever happens, I hope it is enjoyable :D 

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

I've absolutely enjoyed reading it.  The premise is one I've never read before, so good for you!

10/10

braye27

I felt so many different emotions as I read this chapter.  I'm very glad that Severus and Hermione have had the chance to talk and share their feelings and their pasts. 

I hadn't expected the Dark Lord to move so quickly, but thank goodess Draco was able to let Severus know that a Ministry take-over was about to happen. 

Thanks for another illuminating chapter!  Now I'm off to read the next one.

Beth

10/10

mimmom

excellent.  wow, amazing.

0/10

Severus49

Ooh I love drama, and declarations of love too!

0/10

Severus49

Ooh I love drama, and declarations of love too!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

I hope it wasn't too sappy and forced. I hate it when the love declarations seem like they were just put in there for the sake of it. Thanks! 

10/10

HBAR

I can't decide whether to be nervous or excited for the battle to come.  I was worried in the beginning, when no one else was in sight, that this was a way for Dumbledore to get rid of these two, and there wasn't really going to be back up from the order etc.  That would be ugly, don't do something like that!I did love the final moment between Severus and Hermione.  It was the right amount of sweet without being over the top.  I hope their last words were for nothing, and they both come out on the other side okay. *is nervous*

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks, good to know it wasn't too forced. Next chapter is already in queue.

10/10

Snapeizzle

i just read this whole story today and it is wonderful!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it so far! 

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