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Fallen Sparrow

1: Chapter 1: Fall From Grace

2: Chapter 2: Touched by Darkness

3: Chapter 3: Waiting in Shadows

4: Chapter 4: A Slippery Slope

5: Chapter 5: The Damaged Soul

6: Chapter 6: Train of Thought

7: Chapter 7: Great Expectations

8: Chapter 8: Spiralling Downwards

9: Chapter 9: Pensieve Memories

10: Chapter 10: Trials & Error

11: Chapter 11: A War of Words

12: Chapter 12: On Retribution Road

13: Chapter 13: Mind Mapping

14: Chapter 14: A Dangerous Mindset

15: Chapter 15: Street Reconnaissance

16: Chapter 16: Bloody Violence

17: Chapter 17: Auld Lang Syne

18: Chapter 18: The Winter Tempest

19: Chapter 19: A New Year's Eve

20: Chapter 20: Sins of the Father

21: Chapter 21: Grim Old Discussions

22: Chapter 22: Den of Iniquity

23: Chapter 23: Waiting in the Wings

24: Chapter 24: Worst Nightmare

25: Chapter 25: An Eloquent Silence

26: Chapter 26: Conflict Resolution

27: Chapter 27: Eye of the Storm

28: Chapter 28: Manifestation of Chaos

29: Chapter 29: In the Line of Fire – Part One

30: Chapter 30: In the Line of Fire – Part Two

31: Chapter 31: Waiting Games

32: Chapter 32: Survival of the Fittest

33: Chapter 33: A Master Manipulator

34: Chapter 34: A Time of Peace

Fallen Sparrow

Hanagasume

178 Reviews   |   178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 22 Favorites )

Drama Romance Alternate Universe Friendship Potions Under Duress 75,909 Words 34 Chapters Complete
Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Albus Dumbledore Draco Malfoy Fenrir Greyback Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Arthur Weasley Other Canon Witch/Wizard Bellatrix Lestrange Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

Considered pariah by Wizarding society, and spurned by those she had held most dear to her during her time of need, Hermione turns to Severus Snape to guide her through her struggle with the darkness and her desire for revenge.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fall From Grace

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Touched by Darkness

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Waiting in Shadows

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Slippery Slope

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Damaged Soul

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Train of Thought

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Great Expectations

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Spiralling Downwards

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Pensieve Memories

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Trials & Error

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: A War of Words

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: On Retribution Road

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Mind Mapping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Dangerous Mindset

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Street Reconnaissance

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bloody Violence

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Auld Lang Syne

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Winter Tempest

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A New Year's Eve

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Sins of the Father

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Grim Old Discussions

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Den of Iniquity

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Waiting in the Wings

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Worst Nightmare

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: An Eloquent Silence

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Conflict Resolution

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Eye of the Storm

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Manifestation of Chaos

Chapter 29: Chapter 29: In the Line of Fire – Part One

Chapter 30: Chapter 30: In the Line of Fire – Part Two

Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Waiting Games

Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Survival of the Fittest

Chapter 33: Chapter 33: A Master Manipulator

Chapter 34: Chapter 34: A Time of Peace


About Hanagasume

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Hanagasume

Member Since 2008  |  31 Stories  |  Favorited by 246  |  119 Reviews Written  |  1,704 Review Responses

I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion. 


I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR. 


I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.


SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!

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Reviews for Fallen Sparrow

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10/10

MollysSister

Im not feeling confident that Albus will behave himself and keep control of the Order meeting while Hermione is there.

10/10

MollysSister

Hellllo Hermioine sitting naked on the toliet with Snape in the room. And hellllooo Draco. I hope he doesnt die over the holidays. Thats such a bummer.

10/10

magicalpresence

Very sweet.  And I LOVE that Draco likes Luna.  I'm very worried for him! *small voice* please don't kill Draco....

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Lol, well I promise he wont die in the next chapter... further than that, I will not say. Thanks for the review. 

10/10

magicalpresence

Wonderful! Can't wait to see what happens next.  Severus and Hermione make an excellent team - and Draco was a brilliant twist - I wonder what will happen now.. This is an excellent story, and I am now thoroughly hooked!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks for the reviews. I'm glad you are enjoying this. The next chapter should be up some time soon-ish. 

10/10

magicalpresence

Interesting! I'm liking the start of this story :)

10/10

magicalpresence

Ugh! Obviously we have a very mean Dumbledore in this story.  I am really enjoying this fic so far - it's very different, which I really like.

10/10

magicalpresence

Aw, sweet!! :)

10/10

snagerlover50309

This one was actually really sweet I like how the relationship is coming along!

10/10

downtherabbithole

The best part of this chapter was the author's note :)

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Lol, thanks :p

10/10

MollysSister

The very thought of Severus reading me MY favorite books is giving me goose bumps! oh my!

0/10

karlamanatee

Fantastic. Great twists. Accurage usage of "to". Cheers,-Kat

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks for reviewing! 

0/10

PHONELADY

very good thanks

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks for the review. 

10/10

MsTree

Dumbledore promising his minions would behave? He certainly didn't make a wizard's oath to that effect, now did he? Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks, the next chapter will be up soon! 

10/10

HBAR

Regardless of how she is officiially treated, there is bound to be unbelieveable tension at this meeting.  I do hope they can behave.  Or maybe I'd rather see fireworks.  I guess it doesn't matter what I want :)Poor Draco.  It may be nice to have one more outcast in the household.  Or it may put a damper on the burgeoning relationship bewteen Severus and Hermione.  I guess if he gets in the way, Severus can just drug him up a bit and it will be as if he isn't even there :)

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks for the review. Next chapter up soon. 

0/10

Severus49

That was a very sweet and touching chapter, despite of the trauma Draco's been through. I hope he doesn't have any long lasting effects from the beating.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks, I hope the following chapters are equally touching :) 

10/10

braye27

Draco was beaten by his own father?  I never saw that coming!  I'm glad Luna will be watching over him while Severus and Hermione are away.I wonder what kind of reception Hermione will really receive at Grimmauld Place?  How awkward will the situation be?  Whatever happens, I have no doubt that Severus will see to it that anyone who dares to be deprecating towards her will live to regret it.Looking forward to finding out all the details on how the potion is to be delivered to Voldemort!  *claps hands*Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh, thanks Beth. I hope the next chapters live up to your expectations. 

10/10

keske

ohnoes! what happens next!? ~tips sideways, trying to find out~ can i have a crack at him when she's done? oplzoplzoplz!

10/10

esmelle

Dumbledore is really horrible in this story. I like what a great support sverus is being for Hermione. Looking forward to the trial and hoping it goes smoothly.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks :) I agree that Dumbledore is awful, but he really just has to be, you know? :p

9/10

MsTree

Interesting. I wonder what kind of negative spin the Wizengamot and Bumblebore can put on those memories. ^_^

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Heh, thanks for reviewing.

9/10

Bettina

This makes me wonder what Dumbledore really knows about the paths to Darkness--seems far less than he thinks he does. He's all but pushing her that way. Or then he wants it that way for some reason. BRRRR.Now where to go? Will Snape even let her decide freely? Doesn't he understand well what's happening and wants to keep her at reach? MadEye is so full of himself, and all, really ALL Weasleys are following him--sickening.You've cooked up a great take of the war. Do provide us with more, please!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Thanks, and I will be sure to provide you with more and keep you guessing all the while :)

10/10

braye27

OMG!  I wondered if it would come to this.  I guess I can understand why Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall would wonder if she could be trusted with Order business.  If the Dark forces had Imperiused her once before, perhaps they would try to do it again, and that might lead to the defeat of the Order.  The only thing I can think of right now is that perhaps Snape will let her stay at Spinners End, or maybe she could stay with Luna.  What a mess she has on her hands.  Something needs to break her way soon.  Thanks for this update!  I like it a lot.Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Ahhhh, but you shall soon see exactly what happens to our dear heroine :D Not giving anything away here lol. Thanks!

0/10

liviconnor

Hey, so Hermione's taking her time going all Dark!Hermione on us, but that's fine.  Heck, I wouldn't even mind if she never went dark- your take on this war and the Order is interesting enough for someone uninvested in Hermione's evil or goodness to enjoy anyways.  McGonagall and Dumbledore came off as a little too callous here, but Hermione?  Spot on.  The last line especially worked.  Hermione operating without a plan?  Something is definitely wrong with her.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

The entire reason for writing the story is so that she actually goes dark. It was part of a challenge and that was a requirement. There is a reason that I am portraying Dumbledore and McGonagall so callously, and you will understand why later in the story. Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

bellus_extraneus

I love how supportive Luna and Snape are towards her. Very sweet! Kudos!

10/10

bellus_extraneus

Oooooo cool wand. I like where this is going. She's turning into the girl version of Snape! Hah!

10/10

braye27

This is an interesting development.  Not working for the Order will open up avenues for her to take her vengeance that she otherwise might not have had... I just wonder where these dark emotions will take her?  I hope her close relationships with Snape and Luna will give her an anchor for her better angels to hang onto while she does what she has to do.  I'm looking forward to where you take our Miss Granger (and Snape and Luna).Well done, Angela!Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Fallen Sparrow)

Indeed, there is much that she needs to accomplish, and being a part of the Order would prevent this. Thanks for sticking around to read :)

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