One would almost think that she is a suspect, except for her own scar. Snape's got a mystery to deal with.

I really enjoy this, please go on with it.

Nice beginning, although I hate to think our poor Severus was stuck in Azkaban with Dementors for all that time.

Okay, I took the bait and now I must suffer the wait for another chapter.  Sigh.  I am looking forward to more.  Great intro, my mind is intrigued, and I want to know more.Stef =o)

Very intriguing! I'm eagerly waiting for an update.bylby

lol what about my sausage in your mouth?  :D  j/k  looks good so far.  cant wait for more.

*stomps foot*I should know better than to read just ONE chapter of yours, really, I should. *grumbles*Loved the start of this and am looking forward to more!

Excellent, intriguing start - nice to see it published here.

Very interesting beginning. I must assume that Hermione has the disfigured face. Perhaps a victim of one of the new hexes the Minister spoke of? How sad. Perhaps Snape can help her recover.

great start.looking forward to follow this adventure

damn, that was horrifically close. whw! poor crooks too. is he OK?? oh boy.

whoa. her nightmare shed more light on the mystery of her vicious attack & subs. scarring. wondrng abt tht.

hmmm, his soap sounds verrry sexxy. and lmao at the invisible wanking.

hope snape can wangle a pass to brasil from shacklebolt. ol crooks is NOT a revolting crtr. snapey needs to ease up. (i hrt cats).

super cool!! so refreshing for her to have her own space out of britain, where she can conveniently escape the teeth-grinding nagging of 'teh boyz' & weasel-mama. and she & snape wr born to be partners-in-crime, imnsho.

lmao! spain keeps getting better and better. wilbur & charlottes web is md of Win.

two of the keenest wzdng minds of their generation=brilliance & excitement. again reinforces the rightness of the ship for me. loving it! and also dig philtrist.

Dang, tht was some powerful potion!  And I loved Hermione's musings on ancient languages.  Glad she'd done that research or we'd have a dead, or butt-less Snape.

Gotta love the quick-witted Hermione and her original healing spell.  Speaking of originals, Snape seems to have more than an academic interest in her creations.  But does he have more than a partnership interest in the brilliant, feisty young witch?  "You know, Granger," he said, "if we're taking it in turns, you are overdue to get your kit off."  I've been waiting chapter upon chapter for some of that action.    Thoroughly enjoying your updates.

Brilliant chapter! All that potions lore and evrerything was just marvellous. And Snape as the nearly fainting heroine! *giggle* - priceless.

Author's Response: Yes--I want lightheaded!Snape wearing nothing but a crocheted travel rug in MY study!

He seemed to enjoy getting his gear off way too much once he was healed. ;)

Well, that was a bit scary for a second but it lead to good things....like Hermione finally noticing Snape's got a penis (probably a great one too!) Oh and his suggestion that it's her turn to take her clothes off is just too good! Can't wait to read more!

OH good greif she saved him almost had half her face eaten off all at the same time. No wonder she wants Harry to see the scar and remember how she got it. Not that she sees Harry now that she is living in Spain. Might want to rethink that Hermione. I bet Snape is conflicted as hell now. HEh.

Snape gave her that scar? WHAT?
PLease tell me more about HErmione and Harry's fight. I am all curious.

That's what they always give the fainting heroine in novels. I like how their banter is not deferential at all. She says whats on his mind and he is poking around being all sly and spy like. ((giggles))