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Redemption
phoenix160 Reviews | 7.05/10 (160 Ratings, 0 Likes, 109 Favorites )
Lucius Malfoy has finally realized the Dark Lord has been spinning nothing but lies. Unfortunately, it took him losing his family to realize this. Now, he is trying to atone for his sins. Will anyone trust him? Will anyone help him regain his place in society? He has a plan. Set after HBP. Rating is for later chapters. Additionally, there are two chapters that have some torture, but nothing overly graphic. Nominated for Feb 2006 Multifaceted Awards in Best Dramatic and Best Het (Adult) Fics
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phoenix
Member Since 2006 | 54 Stories | Favorited by 136 | 1,108 Reviews Written | 1,209 Review Responses
I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for Redemption
Oh that was a brilliant ending.And Snape lives yipeeeeeeeeeeee! Sorry! I love Snape! I loved this story!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thank you so very much, Bella. I had a lot of fun wirting this story. As for Snape living, I don't know that I could ever bring myself to kill him off as he's my favorite characters. :)
On a side note, I'll likely respond to your other reviews over the next couple of days to get them off my "Unanswered reviews" list, just thought I'd warn you. :)
Phoenix I am so sorry but I have to leave at this for the time being and congratulations on the award.I love this fic and can't wait to read more!I know from experience that Lucius, Hermione and Snape are very secretive muses, you never know what they are going to do next do you!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Secretive muses is right. This story did not end at all like I had planned. It grew to more than twice the planned length and went along a completely unexpected path. That said, I really enjoyed the journey of seeing where my muese would lead me next. LOL
o yes I wonder but I think we already know, and er! Why she likes Ron is a mystery to me!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
You know, that was one of the things that JKR did that always made me wonder. I just can't see someone like Hermione putting up with someone like Ron. It's like pairing Tonks and Remus, I never saw that one as plausible. Anyway, I remedied that one. LOL
Oh boy am I enjoying the arguments inner arguments. And yes Luscious may have chosen the good side but you can never lose the Slytherin about him can you!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Weren't the inner arguments a hoot? Once I started down that road, I really had a hard time stopping. I figure it's very plausible for someone like her to have an emotional and logical side that are in disconnect. And I'm glad you enjoyed the Slythering side of Lucius. I thought it came out all throughout the story. :)
I was going to review a few chapters on but I can't wait... oh you are evil... that daydream had me going I can tell you!I am looking forward to the rest... incidentally this happens to be one of my favourite ships to!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
LOL I got another one. LOL I had so much fun with that daydream. I was first going to have it be real, but it was way to early in the story for them to get together. That was so much more evil and Slytherin on my part. :)
After having gotten into, this is my favorite ship of canon characters. I have always preferred the characters and ships that aren't mainstream, though liking Severus puts me in the adult majority it seems. LOL
Now, that is action! And you know exactly where to leave it, too. I love cliffhangers. What better way to keep your readers in suspense. I am updating my bookmark now and hopefully I can pick this up later tonight.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thank you so very much. This story in particular really helped me perfect the cliffhangar I hope that you will enjoy the stretch to the finish. There is an awful lot that happens in the last few chapters.
Another excellent chapter. The plot is developing nicely, and I am left wanting more and wondering what is going to happen next. (Good thing I still have a couple more chapters to read!)
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thank you kindly. Yup, you do have several more chapters. You picked a good time to read as you don't have to suffer through all the evil cliffhangers if you can keep your eyes open. :) I think I finished posting the story here. Now I have to check as I can't remember.
I don't know if I reviewed this chapter yet. Too lazy to check, and anyway, another review is always good. As always, I get a little behind in my reading. I decided to reread this chapter, which was good because I don't think I had finished it. You really have a knack of keeping the reader's interest. Every chapter is packed with action (for lack of a better word right now) , especially this one. I am enjoying this story immensely ... and now I must go on to the next chapter.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
No worries on being too lazy to check. This is quite the epic story. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and I hope you don't find the story too addictive and have it keep you too long. Pretty amazing for a story that started out as fluffy romance, huh?
What can I say other than what a wonderful story? I have just spent hours sitting at my computer on Easter Sunday reading it from start to finish. Lucius and Hermione are one of my favourite pairings and one couple who receive little attention from writers. Fantastic job, well done and thank you for writing and posting it.~KC
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thank you very much, KC. You are right, it's an underappreciated pairing, one that I am glad you thought I did justice to. I'm glad to have given you something productive to do on Easter Sunday.
I will be posting a new LM/HG fic in the near future, hopefully starting sometime this week. It will be a sequel to "To Regain Glory".
I've really enjoyed the directions your story has taken, whether they were to plan or not. Thanks for writing it.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks, jessa. It really has been a fun story to write. I like how it has come out, despite the twists and turns. :)
just got through 4 chapters, and really looking forward to the rest. Love a bit of Lucy!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
. I hope you have had time to read some more and that you continue to enjoy it.
I'll act odd around your Lucius any day! This just keeps getting better. I can't wait for your next update!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks, Jen. Glad you are enjoying it. I really like how Lucius came out in this one. Of course, I like trying to depict the characters slightly different each time I write a new story with them. :)
You are the Mistress of Cliffhangers.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks, nss. This story really led me to perfecting the cliffhanger. I like that morphing smiley, too.
Wow. "Super" baby, "Super" emotional. I sure hope Hermione calms down enough to eventually listen to Lucius. I find myself feeling sorry for him, even though his motives aren't that great.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
I'm glad you feel sorry for Lucius. That means I'm writing him well that people identify with him even though, as you said, his motives aren't that great. :) As for Hermione, I guess you've seen that already.
I apologize greatly for falling behind in reviewing. I love this story and am so glad you are sharing it with all of us. The plot thickens so much more with each chapter and I find myself hanging on the edge of my seat. I look forward to your update.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
I'm glad you are enjoying it. As for falling behind, all of us have life that goes in spurts, as evidenced by the sporadic nature of my updates. LOL And the fact that I am woefully behind in all my reading as well. There are so many good stories out there to read. :)
Make mine Slytherin! I believe your Lucius and Severus. Remus is a wolfy prince w/a heart of gold. *still reading*
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks, ylang. I like to see the softer side of the Slytherins. Not just the gruff exteriors. And Remus, well, I just have a soft spot for him. :)
"my guiding star" *swoon* he's quite the romantic and very articulate.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks. He can be quite smooth when he wants to. He knows that Hermione would be the type that believes in love and he will do what it takes to get her to fall in love with him. Seems like he's winning you over.
add me to the Anti-Ron Brigade. No Weasel for our Miss Granger!!! Absurd. The only thing they have in common, besides being in the same House is their friendship w/Harry. I rest my case.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Welcome to the Anti-Ron Brigade Always glad to have another member on board. You have found my reason for finding this ship completely unbelievable. They have nothing in common.
I hope that the ARB will be happy in the end.
rushed but JUICY. Hmm.... I really like your Lucius--*thinking very naughty thoughts* but am surprised at his unwillingness to do a threesome w/Snape. *smirks* what a HOTT idea!! My main ship is Hermione/Snape, but sometimes I need a little variety. As long as Hermione is shipped w/an exciting, sexy older guy (within reason, NOT AD for example! *squick*) all is GOOD.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
I'm glad you enjoy my Lucius. As for the threesome with Severus, he's a very selfish person and wouldn't want to share Hermione. I agree she should be paired with an older wizard (and that AD is too older LOL). I'm glad you are enjoying this variety. If you haven't checked it out, I would recommend "To Regain Glory", and entirely different take on the LM/HG ship that will soon be having part 2 of the trilogy released.
AAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?I am so addicted to this! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE OR YOU WILL BE RESPONSIBLE FOR THE LOSS OF MY SANITY!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
See? This is exactly the sort of scream my evil plot bunnies like. Don't worry, the next installment should be up in a couple of days, RL permitting. I am about to begin the last chapter and a half of the story. Of course, that's still 12 chapters away, so you will have plenty to keep you entertained.
Maybe I should add a disclaimer that I'm not responsible for any loss of sanity.
You're addicted to the screams? *ahem* Noooooo! You evil author! How could you let us, your readers, hang by our fingertips from that nasty, craggy cliff... awaiting what? To be saved or to fall to our deaths? *dramatic inhale, then cough and choke* Okay, histrionics over. Perhaps if I ask nicely for more?
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
nss, thanks, glad you enjoy it and thanks for feeding the scream addiction.
Look for the next chapter Wednesday. As long as I don't travel and RL allows, I want to do a new chapter every 2-3 days. That should get everyone nicely to the end while allowing people to remain caught up.
Only a Slytherin could pull off helping yet not letting anyone know how involved he is. Now, *cracks whip* next chapter, please. ;)
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Yea, ma'am, new chapter coming your way. I'm in the process of giving it a final run through for those pesky little minor errors.
Lucius is very slick, isn't he? Of course, when the other shoe drops...
What a horrible spell! It makes me shudder to think of something like that. I am enjoying the dynamic between Remus and Lucius. Although, Remus knows something is up between Lucius and Hermione. I look forward to your next update.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Jen, I was horrified when the plot bunnies unleashed this whole plot thread on me, but it is war, and this really shows how truly reprehensible the Dark Lord and his followers are. I'm glad you like the Remus/Lucius dynamic. If ever there were two people in need of a good friend, it's the two of them. Now, the question is, will that friendship last or will Lucius return to his old ways, only having used Remus. I know, I can be horrible. Update will be coming very soon.
Oh no! What a horrific spell! I noticed that there are some similaritie between this spell and Eddings books regarding demons who copulated with women.
A great chapter again even it was
Remus is a clever fellow and luckily levelheaded that he didn't hex Lucius.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
You know, it's been years (close to a decade) since I read the Eddings book. I wonder if my subconscious remembered? It is a horrible spell though. I was feeling particularly or at least the evil plot bunnies were. Glad you enjoyed the evilness.I think Lucius will definitely be thankful to have level-headed Remus around.The next chatper should be up soon.
Wow, what a wonderful story...I just finished reading it through and it is one of the best LM/HG story I have read. Love the dynamics between Hermione and Lucius, and now with Hermione under that horrible spell.
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)
. I think you picked a good place to pick this one up. You are about halfway through the story. I have it almost completed. :)
I'm glad you are enjoying the LM/HG pairing. I've really fallen in love with the potential that pairing has.