New Chapter for Redemption
Redemption
phoenix160 Reviews | 7.05/10 (160 Ratings, 0 Likes, 109 Favorites )
Lucius Malfoy has finally realized the Dark Lord has been spinning nothing but lies. Unfortunately, it took him losing his family to realize this. Now, he is trying to atone for his sins. Will anyone trust him? Will anyone help him regain his place in society? He has a plan. Set after HBP. Rating is for later chapters. Additionally, there are two chapters that have some torture, but nothing overly graphic. Nominated for Feb 2006 Multifaceted Awards in Best Dramatic and Best Het (Adult) Fics
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Member Since 2006 | 54 Stories | Favorited by 136 | 1,108 Reviews Written | 1,209 Review Responses
I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for Redemption
It's a pity that Harry and Ron are so full of themselves that they ignored good advice. However, it is typical of them.
Aww...wonderful ending, wonderful story, wonderful everything. You're an amazing writer! I loved this story SO much. It was beautifully written and had all the elements a story needs: a little drama, romance, mystery, and some action. Again fantastic job!~Jen
Poor Lucius...he can never seem to win--attack Aurors, get sent back to prison; not attack and he and Hermione may have died--lose/lose all around. Anyway, I hope Hermione can handle the strain of the task ahead. Great job on the chapter!~Jen
Another wonderful, but sad chapter. I wish they didn't have to kill their daughter, but I understand why they have to. I feel really sorry for them though.~Jen
Evil, evil cliffie, but fortunately the next chapter has been posted so I don't need to wait for it...YES! Anyway, great job with this chapter!~Jen
I really liked this chapter. A bit more romance than we've seen in awhile and I like it when Lucius can't control himself around Hermione...it's rather amusing. Great job.~Jen
Interesting, very interesting; the mystery in this story just keeps getting better and better! Great job!~Jen
Another wonderful chapter! I know I say that for practically every chapter, but it's very true. This story is quite mysterious yet romantic and dramatic at the same time...a beautiful mix.~Jen
Oh, great! Lucius can't do magic...what does this mean? Hmmm...I've got nothing! Unless maybe the baby is somehow draining the magic out of her parents? It's a stretch, but I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out. Anyway, wonderful chapter (like you write anything less).~Jen
Aww...she chose to help Lucius; I hope Harry didn't actually die though. Can't wait to see how this ends! One more chapter to read! ~Jen
And the fighting begins...alright, action time!! I liked how you had them discussing the wedding a little in this chapter though, it was a nice romantic tie-in.~Jen
Oh no, the baby!! I hope everything will work out. I'm betting Severus took Lucius. Can't wait!~Jen
Poor, poor Lucius! And I'm kind of mad at Hermione, I mean I understand her reasons for being angry, but he's done so much to prove himself and they all shun him right away. I'm glad at least Remus is being decent. Wonderful chapter though.~Jen
Another wonderful chapter!! I know I say this practically every review, but you're an awesome writer! I absolutely love what you've done with this story! I can't wait to read about what happens to Lucius...so I best get a move on!~Jen
Great chapter! I hope Lucius is able to help Hermione! Wonderful job so far...LOVE IT!!~Jen
Oh my gosh!! I never would have guessed that twist! Wonderful job! Can't wait to see everyone's reaction. ~Jen
Oh my! The Death Eaters have Hermione!! Looks like Lucius might be starting to act more like he ACTUALLY loves Hermione than pretending it's an act. Can't wait to read what happens.~Jen
I am glad Lucius and Hermione got their happily ever after! I thought Wulfric was honoring Remus not Dumbles. Ha! I forgot that was a middle name. Thanks
Wonderful, fantastic, amazing!!! I love, love, LOVE this story! Great job!!~Jen
Again, wonderful chapter! I love your writing. Every chapter just keeps getting better and better.~Jen
Again, wonderful chapter! I love your writing. Every chapter just keeps getting better and better.~Jen
Again, wonderful chapter! I love your writing. Every chapter just keeps getting better and better.~Jen
Interesting...this story just keeps getting better and better! Great job! I hope that Lucius isn't going to give Snape something too bad. ~Jen
I havent a clue how this is all going to be sorted out in so few chapters! I adore a good mystery
WAs it Snape who grabbed his arm?